swaron ss:Witout u its hard~to survive❤️ch 12,pg57

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TANHA_H

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Posted: 13 years ago

#401

😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

neetha awsum update!!!

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ananya randhawa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#402

bang on di!

loved it to the core..

their dilemma was very well depicted...

the love,the passion came out bright. swayam's state of mind,his confusion and sharon's disgust for not being able to stay away from him was so good.

loved the fact that simmi came in for sharon's and swayam's savior and helped swayam choose the right. also,the envy swayam and aggressive sharon was really nice...waiting for the next part eagerly..

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tanuka

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Posted: 13 years ago

#403

Amazing update neetha !!

beautifully written 👏

i loved how swayam was trying his level best to stay away from sharon but couldnt stop himeself from helping her with her stucked zip.😉

simmi is such a sweetheart to make swayam understand that evrybody deserves a second chance .😃

it was nice to see jealous swayam .😊

the last part was HAWT ... and proved that they both cannot resist each other 😳

will be waiting for the next part , update soon...

thanks for the pm.

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tashu20

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Posted: 13 years ago

#404

wonderful update...loved it...!!!!😊

finally swayam realized his love for sharon..😳

plz update it soon...!!!

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AmRiTa_S

@AmRiTa_S

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Posted: 13 years ago

#405

Neetha lovely update and u updated after such a long time...u better start updating this thoda jaldi now. 😛

Well Swayam and Sharon's pain was very well described by you and love how both of them can't control each other from coming close.

Jealous Swayam was super cute 😉 and i love simmi...personally i miss watching Sam with Sneha aka Simmi with Sharon. I prefer watching Simmi more with Sharon than Rinni which is not happening on show lately so this kinda gave me what i was missing.

Simmi is such a sweet heart and her conversation with Swayam about life giving second chances was very well penned down. Swayam finally realized his love for Sharon but wonder y did he left the room after kissing her. Thank you fr the PM...update soon.

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neetha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#406

CHAPTER 12

sharon sat wit her knees touching her chest..a soft smile curved her lips..the

kiss was beautiful ths time coz he did nt regret abt the kiss,the way he did last

time..she decided to call him..but for her ashtonishmenet he dint receive her

call..she tried again n again but he dint receieve her call..sharon was worried n

negetive thoughts wer filling the spaces in her brains..tears rolled down her

cheeks..every tear drop was a sign of fear..fear of loosing swayam again..

it was 4:00 n the beach luked serene..the waves wer high..the moon high up ther

very gorgeous as usual..swayam was sittin there wit his legs streched wide lukin

deep into the sea...the cold breeze hit his face n he closed his eyes..a while

later he cud feel a hand on his hand..the touch was known to him..the feel was

old..the person whom he loved the most in his life..the gal who is his first

love..he opened his eyes n saw neetha..his first love..a smile curved on his

lips..she luked so perfectly like a angel dressed in white salwar..he cud see the

aura around her..n that seemed magical..the angel smiled n spoke in her calm

sweet voice

neetha:kaise ho swayam??

swayam:until few hours main teek nahi tha..lekin ab teek hu..

neetha:main janthi hu tum sharon ke wajah se teek ho na..??

swayam:haan..kyun tum mujhe chodkar chali gayi neetha?

neetha:tumhe chodkar jaana mujhe manzoor nahi tha swayam.lekin shayad bhagwaan ne

mere naseeb main tumhe nahi likha tha..tum sharon ke liye bane ho swayam..

tears rolled down his cheeks n he slept on her lap..dugging his face n holdin her

waist by his arms n started sobbing..

neetha:tum hamesha kehthe ho na swayam..ki life is a jouney..life kiske liye nahi

rukhthi aur kisike wajah se life ruk bhi nahi sakthi..toh fir kyun tum abhi bhi

apne past main jee rahe ho..aage bado swayam..live love again..feel love

again..tumhe pyaar ki zaroorat hai..aur woh tumhe sirf sharon de sakthi hai..move

on swayam..main nahi keh rahi ki tum mujhe bhool jao..but love can happen

twice..n u r lucky ki tumhare life main pyaar ne fir se dasthak di hai..usse mat

khona..

swayam luked at neetha..she moved her ahnd over his face..n he closed her

eyes..after a while he felt the rough sand on his nape..he opened his eyes to

find no one around him..he sat quickly n luked around..then he saw his love

walkin towards the sea..she walked awy from him n finally the sea had swallowed

her...wit her walkin away his heart realised the fact that sharon n he wer meant

to be..neetha was his first love who made him realise the feel of love but sharon

is the one who taught him the meaning of love..two diffrent souls but yet so

similar he felt..neetha was gone forever never to return but sharon was here

waiting for his love..waitin to make him feel wat is love..swayam stood ther n

witnessed the sunrise..the sun today brought a new hope n new love in his

life..love wic is born to stay wit him forever..he walked away from there..

it was 6:00 now n all Indigo employees wer ready to leave the place n get back to

mumbai..he reached the resort n knocked on sharon's room..no reply in return..n

the door was already opened..he entered n saw sharon just stepped out from the

bathroom n she was in her bathrobe..a naughty smirk n a mischevious glint in his

eyes..

swayam:sharon..

sharon:huh??tum???(she covered her hands on her chest)

swayam:hey daro mat..main kuch nahi karne wala..(smilin)

sharon:(she turned facing him her back)tum yaha kya kar rahe ho?

swayam:(stepping forward)tumse kuch baat karna tha..

sharon:mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karna..

swayam:(again stepping forward)u sure??

sharon:(she cud feel his hot breadth on her neck...)main alondon jaa rahi hu..

swayam:(shocked)huh???(he turned her to face him)why??achanak se??

sharon:(she threw his hand away)haan i gt an offer..so main waha jaa rahi hu..

swayam:toh tickets ready hai??

sharon:haan..here it is..

swayam grabbed the tickets from her hand

swayam:tum kahi nahi jaa rahi..got it??

sharon:oh pls..tum hote kaun ho??n giv back ma tickets..

swayam was tall enough n upar se he held his hand up in the air..poor tiny sharon

tried hard to reach his hand..she kept jumpin...but all her try went in vain..she

kicked him tight wit her elbow on his tummy..swayam 'ouch' n he lost his

balance..pulled her hand n they both fell on the bed..sharon top of

swayam..swayam smirked..

swayam:ajeeb hai kal raat se pata nahi kyun hum bed par gir rahe hai..

sharon:(blushed)tickets do..

swayam:main nahi de raha..

sharon pouted n stood n walked towars the bathroom to lock herself in coz she

cudn't handle the heat anymore..swayam ran towards sharon n dint let her lock the

door n after a long battle he won it n was now in the bathroom with her..sharon

gave him a death glare n swayam chuckled...

sharon:(angry)prob kya hai huh..tumhari..tum chahthe kya ho mujhse??wat the hell

do u want???

swayam:u..

sharon:wat??tumne abhi kya kaha??

swayam stepped towards her..

swayam:maine kaha..i want u..

sharon:tum aage mat aao..stand ther..

swayam:kyun darr lag raha hai??

sharon:main kisi se nahi darthi..

swayam:(steppin dangeroulsy towards her)toh itna kaamp kyun rahi ho..

he reached her n before she cud spk in her defence his hold on her waist ran down

a shiver in her spine..she gulped n closed her eyes..he gazed at her eyes n her

lips.

swayam:london nahi ja rahi tum..

sharon:kyun nahi jaungi..?(still closin her eyes)

swayam:coz main tumhare bager nahi jee saktha..

sharon:(surprised n opened her eyes)sachhi??

swayam:mucchi..

sharon:then kal raat chale kyun gaye the achanak se??(her face turned pale)

swayam:mere dil ko yeh samjhane ke liye ki abhi yeh sirf tumse pyaar kartha

hai..aur tumhare alawa kisi aur ke saat kabhi future main nahi soch saktha..

sharon:k..then kaho na..(she turned pink now)

swayam:kya kahu??(winked at her)

sharon:nothin..(se escaped from his hold)

swayam pulled sharon by her waist n now they wer under the shower..they wer

absolutely drenched..the water droplets travelled thru her hair to her lips..her

lips angelic than it ever luked..his hawtness had no match..

sharon:yeh kya hai??

swayam:tumhe iski zaroorat thi na isiliye..

sharon:matlab??

swayam:haan tum bedrrom se isilye bhaagi thi na..kyunki tumhe wahan bohut garmi

lag rahi thi??(smirk)

sharon:wa..wat??no..

swayam:tum mujhse jhoot nahi bol sakthi Ms.sharon Raiprakash

sharon turned tomato red now..swayam whispered in her ear..

swayam:i love u..ab tum bolo

sharon:i hate u..(smirk)

swayam:huh??(he tightened his hold)ab bolo..

sharon:(closin her eyes)i still hate u...

swayam neared her lips n licked her lower lips..

swayam:abhi bhi u hate me??

sharon:haan..

swayam again licked her lips n slowly started kissin he bare shoulder..her hands

ran over his hair n she whispered 'i love u'

swayam smirked n said 'love u back' n kissed her lips as passionately as

possible..she kissed him in return wit the same passion..they broke apart fr some

air..

swayam:waise london chalogi??

sharon:huh??tum nahi chahthe the na main waha jau..

swayam:no chalthe hai waise bhi tumhare honewale MIL n FIl wahi hai..(started

laughin)

sharon:(blushed hard)haan chalthe hai..

swayam:hmm..k..ab..

again he pressed his lips on hers n kissed her in the wildest way possible..

sharon:ab chale bahar..

swayam:naa..

sharon:shut up n chalo,..

after an hour simmi came to sharon's room..

simmi:sharon wer r u??

swayam:knock nahi kar sakthi kya??

simmi:woah..tum yaha kya kar rahe ho???(raisin her eyebrows)

swayam:wohi kar raha hu jo mujhe karna chahiye...

simmi:aahhaa..naughty boy..wat do u mean??

sharon came out of the bathroom wearin a jeans short n a tee..

simmi:hey sharon..kya chal raha hai(teasin)

sharon luked down n again blushed..swayam stood next to sharon holding her by her

waist..

swayam:jo tum chathi thi wohi..

simmi:u mean..u guys are a couple nw..o.m.g

she just pounced on sharon n hugged her tightly..simmi pulled swayam also n they

three hugged each other in happiness..

My thought:"Frienship n Love always teaches us to live n Love.Life journey is a

mixed packet of pain,love,fear,need,jealousy,possesiveness n so on.But Love n

Friendship makes us realise that "Without u its hard to survive"

~~~~CHAPTER 12 END~~~~

m done wit ma ss guys..thanx a lot fr all ur appreciation n love..well last

update main shishir,rutu,sudha n amu had asked y did swayam leave her just like

that?well that was necessary coz i wanted swayam to reallise his feelings fr

sharon completetly rather than letting it be just physical attraction..hope i hav

justified..hit the like button guys n do comment..plss it means a lot..

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=81m1uehEGWw[/YOUTUBE]

Thank U

**neethu**

k lots of questions arising abt wat is MIL n FIL???😆

MIL=Mother-in-law😆

FIL=Father-in-law😆

Edited by neetha - 13 years ago

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samrutha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#407

Me first 😃

Awesome update yaar.👏

Felt like u Rushed up little nah😆 but yet it was Mindblowing yaar..☺️

Didnt expect this ss will end soon lik this

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swayamsharon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#408

hey amazing neethu!!!
i loved it, neetha's aura realizing swayam about sharon love❤️👍🏼...
swayam's part was really beautifully written!!!
luked swaron part in room & bathroom too😳!!
loved the end & yr thought, itz really hard to survive without love & friendship!!!

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Phantasm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#409

RES

UNRES

The start was beautiful with Sharon thinking about their moment and she was happy more because he didn't regret about the kiss. But again she got worried when he didn't receive her call.

And as you justified about why he walked out in the previous update, makes sense he cant resist his feelings for her at the same time he is yet to come out from his previous love. Neetha(not you😆) entered in his thought and made him realise what Sharon means in his life. Nicely described that Sharon taught him the meaning of love. And then our naughty Swayam is back telling her why they always fall on the bed.😆 And Simmi the true hero in your SS was so happy hearing that her best friends are together.😳

PS: Yeh MIL FIL kya hai?

And the SS ended why so soon ? continue karna or else come up with another one, real soon. Please😳

Edited by Rutu - 13 years ago

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Snowey

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Posted: 13 years ago

#410

RES

This is one of my fav SS with one of the most unique story i read in IF. I am going to miss this one and will sure be coming back to read this all at once. 😳

You have done ample justice to Swayam's character as a laid back photographer with different perception towards life. As the story progressed we get to know his jovial side and his way of living life to the fullest, but later we are surprised to know the pain he'd been through and what contributes to his way of life.

Sharon comes forward as a head strong fashion model with a longing for love. The pain in her for missing her parents. The loneliness in her added to the attitude she holds and how all the fame and money in the world couldn't make her happy. You always remained so true to her character throughout, showing what great hold you had on your story from the very start.

Now coming to Simi - i just loved her in your SS. one needs to be blessed to have a friend like her. Her easiness across Sharon and Swayam and how she contributes to the story ahead and to a relationship for Swayam and Sharon in future, nicely done.

Coming to the update, you are right and i understand why Swayam would have left the previous night. He had to clear few things from his past to start a clear future along Sharon. It sure was not the physical attraction but a heart felt bonding they shared. Love has its unique way of making you realize what it is that your heart truly desires, i saw that happen in form of an angel, his first love.

Sharon's happiness and then the pain and fear taking over just as immediately was shown perfecto. And then comes the part where the temperature raised to a very hot level 😳 Swayam and Sharon under the shower and then the kiss 😳 what i liked was how this time the kiss had no inhibitions from the past taunting. The final confession very cutely done. Then comes the dear friend Simi - her happiness knowing they are together was beautifully shown and could be felt by us readers. The hug the trio share left me with a very happy and warm felling.

Neetha - you have no idea how much this SS is going to be missed. I am so looking forward to your new FF that you are coming up with.

Love

Sudha

Edited by Sudha-SK - 13 years ago