kabhie to hoga - episode 1!!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey guys as promised I am here with my first episode of KABHI TO HOGA. This is a bi-weekly show. It will be updates every Tuesday and Friday.

For the character sketches…follow this link:
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/left-right-left/373822/my-first-lrl-fanfic-kabhie-to-hoga

Episode 1

Shekhawat mansion

Scene 1

(the shekhwat mansion is located in the beautiful city of Darjeeling. We start with the butler/driver/cook of the house yudi-o taking bed-tea for the owner of the house and shekhwat empire- sujal shekhwat)

Sujal's bedroom: sujal is still sleeping

Yudi-o (cheerfully): good morning sir!

Sujal (sleepily): hmmm….good morning

Yudi-o: aap ke uthne ka aur chai ka waqt ho gaya hai sir

Sujal: kya time ho raha hai

Yudi-o: exactly 6 am…theek wahi samay jis samay main aapko roj uthata hoon sir

Sujal gets up and takes his tea

Sujal: main nahane jaa raha hoon…mere kapde; mera naashta aur briefcase ready rakhna

Sujal leaves and yudi says to himself: ye sir bhi na…pichle 7 saalon se main roj issi tarah unhe utha ta hoon aur wo roj mujhe yahi lecture dete hain

Scene 2

Breakfast table:

(at the breakfast table rishi and alekh are waiting for sujal to come down. They are already dressed. Alekh is sipping something from his cup)

Rishi: coffee aur chai to ab tak serve hui nahi…to aap kya pee rahe hain?

Alekh: meri dawai (medicine)

Rishi (taking the cup from his hand and smelling it): sheee! Alekh! Subah-subah….come on yaar…agar bhaiya ko pata chal gaya ki tu subah ke 6.30 rum pee raha hai to tujhe mar dalenge!

Alekh: tu bhaiya se itna darta kyun hai?

Rishi: darta nahi…unki izzat karta hoon

Alekh: izzat to main bhi karta hoon lekin tu to chuha(mouse) ban jaata hai

Just then sujal enters

Sujal: kaun chuha ban gaya alekh?

Alekh (hiding the cup and obviously scared): bhaiya…koi nahi…wo hum Tom and Jerry discuss kar rahe the.

Rishi (smiles to himself): good morning bhaiya…waise aaj aap minute late hain

Sujal (checking his watch): nahi rishi…sujal shekhawat kabhi late nahi hota…tumhari ghadi minute late chal rahi hogi…(looking around) amar kahan hain?

Yudi-o(entering the room with breakfast): wahi jahan roj hote hain…so rahe hain.

Sujal: ye ladka bhi na…pata nahi kab bada hoga…alekh usse chota hai phir bhi 10 times zyada responsible hai

(they all finish their breakfast)

Sujal: rishi get ready fast…tum mere saat office jaa rahe ho

Rishi: really bhaiya!!! Aapne kaha tha ki 2-3 weeks aur training leni padegi

Sujal: haan kaha tha per tum ready ho…aur alekh hum raaste main tumhe college drop kardenge

Scene 3

Walia mansion

(walia mansion is also located in Darjeeling but on the opposite end of the city that is far away from the shekhawat house. This rivalry between the 2 families has gone back to the days when their parents were alive and is now continued by their sons)

We see footsteps coming down the staircase. Its slowly revealed that its jai walia. He is all dressed up in a suit and ready to do some business

Jai (talking on the phone): what do you mean you cant do it!!! This is not what I am paying you for….jab maine tumhe hire kiya tha to yahi shart(bet) rakhi thi ki tumhe jitney paise chahiye mil jaayenge lekin mujhe sujal shekhawat ke saare business details chahiye…tum kisi kaam nahi ho…aur tumhara woh source?...pakda gaya?...sab tumhare jaise useless hain…shut up. I will deal with you later.

We see naina coming down the stairs also dressed up in a business outfit.

Naina: kya hua bhaiya? Mujhe pata tha ye gupta kisi kaam nahi hai. Agar hume shekhwats ko harana hai to kisi andar ke aadmi ki madat(help) chahiye hogi.

Jai: naina…tum ye sab mujhpar chod do aur humare naye project ki tayyari karo. Ye contract humare haat se nahi jaana chahiye…pichli baar to who shekhwat jeet gaya tha lekin is baar main ye nahi hone doonga.

Naina: don't worry bhaiya…ye contract hume hi milega…I will make sure of that.

Jai: accha pooja tayyar hui ki nahi? Ye ladki bhi na

Naina: bhaiya aap to usse jante hai…usse ek ghanta aur lagega…aur haan usse pooja mat bulaya ki jiye…kaat(bite) ne ko daurti(run) hai

Jai: to kya bulaaoon?

Naina(screaming): POOOH!!!

The end

Okay guys…next installment on Tuesday…but if you guys really like it…put in a lot of replies and I will make it Monday 😉

Edited by shrutibali - 19 years ago

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Posted: 19 years ago
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tooo gooddddddddddddddd..i liked it very very very very muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh....... 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 very intresting Shruti.I'll wait for next installment 😃

Shruti Bunty Chobey ka bhi character daal dena . he is funny 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rajeev Ki Heer

👏 very intresting Shruti.I'll wait for next installment 😃

Shruti Bunty Chobey ka bhi character daal dena . he is funny 😆

yaar heeru daal deti lekin i already have a butler/cook/driver😆 bechare yudi-o ka kya hoga???

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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 Commendable work di 👏 👏 👏
Monday kya hum to kahte hain aaj he next part bhej do 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: shrutibali

yaar heeru daal deti lekin i already have a butler/cook/driver😆 bechare yudi-o ka kya hoga???

haan yeh bhi theek hai.bechara yudi-o 😆😆.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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....it is jst superb story/fan fic....

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man u r damnnnnn.....gud write

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keep it up....n plzzz continuin

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ok....will wait 4 ur weekerd....means thursday ...friday ka😉

👏 👏 👏

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Posted: 19 years ago
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itz just 2gud 👏

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plz.....update da nxt episode soonnnnn...........❤️

Edited by koolkat - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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THATS 2 GUD YAR...' 😊
SUPERB 👏

WHEN UR GOING 2 UPDATE THE NEXT EPISODE... PLEZZ UPDATE IT SOON
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 very good! keep it up!!

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