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Posted: 13 years ago

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Sunshine80

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Posted: 13 years ago

Priya...aisa lag raha hain arse ke baad yaha aayi hoon😳

Title...starting with Billy Joel..crooner...collages...gal perfecto for the imperfect date
yes you are one of the easy audience who becomes happy easily indeed😳.
Loved your take. 👏

I found a love I had lost
It was gone for too long
Hear no evil in all directions
Execution of bitterness
Message received loud and clear

Don't change for you
Don't change a thing for me

Bhale Bhale new writer...bhelcome bhelcome😳

Iss show mein director ya writer change hone ka koi matlab nahi..matlab hain to bas itna ki mein ASR ko humesha humesha😉

Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance of characters to actual persons, living or dead, in the show is purely coincidental.😉
The Author holds exclusive rights to this work. Unauthorized duplication is prohibited.😆

Khushi first time tried to be sophisticated wife or mangetar 😕 for ASR in her own clumsy way😉
Starting with wrong date of reservation to trying to open up Champagne bottle... she indeed tried her best😆
I also closed my eyes on visuals...but did anyone noticed how ASR looked Khushi top to bottom at the door😆

I was ROFL when she got up and pulled out chair for him🤣
Only Khushi can be talli even thinking what she drank was wine🤣
"Tumhe Arnav Singh Raizaada ban ne ki koi jaroorat nahi hain".."I love you the way you are.."...what else...these are the best dialogues for me in episode...rest all can be ignored😳
He was amused and loved the way Khushi was trying her best to make him happy y being ASR. He never made fun of her rather was beside her. How adorable and gentle man can a person be.
Khushi is Khushi whatsoever...trying hard..understood he is doing all for her and she needs to do something.
Arhi are made for each other
Jo banda sorry bolne ke liye itne baar practice kiya...didn't even felt iota of hesitation to say sorry to some guy whose spects broken because of gr8 KKGSR...aur hum ye maan le aap badal nahi gaye ho. He is doing it because he completely loved her..no hesitation whatsoever..perfect and true lover. And KKG you are still in starting phase gal😉
But Barun baba aap beech mein kaha se aagaye ...aapke saarein daanth bahar rakh khe trying to imitate Khoosi😡...aaj kal bhool jaate ho ki tum ASR ho BS nahi...daanth andar rakho😡

Anjali what was that...why is your heart in your mouth when Snake said Arhi is here unless you also know that what you are doing is wrong
Anjali...you used to be big sis who always guided ASR to right path. You made him think that what he is doing wrong towards Khushi? What happened?
Anjali...your chotey who was always straight forward and honest to you. Told you everything about Shyam and yet if you feel there is MU...go and talk to him...sneaking out with slimey snake is not accepable..why are you betraying your loving bro?? when he knows what will go on him??
I understand your so loving hubby had put tint glass on your face..but didn't ur soul told u to go n talk to ur bro and sort it out. If you still think ur chotey is wrong..u can go off with ur hubby leaving RM.
Look at audacity of snake...taking money from ASR and giving a present to nanhi pari...Anjali please start thinking...this is what we expected from you.

Ab Snakewaa ke baarein mein jitna bole utna kam hain
RM mein kahi se bhi kabhi guss na koi inse seekhe...woh bhi sab angles mein CC camera lagaake

Mere Ko, Samajh Sako To
Samjho Dilbar Jaani
Jitna Bhi Tum Samjhoge Utni Hogi Hairani
Anji ki credit card churaake RM me lagaaye cameras
Kabhi meetha baate karke naagin dance karoon humesha
mein to kaamenay hoon humesha, mein to kaamenay hoon humesha

ASR...my apt is more secured than your mansion...are u telling me u r a business tycoon..come on buddy buck up😳

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--Nishita--

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Posted: 13 years ago

Lovely crooner Priya...what a song! Love this Billy Joel song. It has such a feel good touch to it...just like the episode yesterday. I loved it...a breezy light hearted episode with comedy and romance of the Raizadas.

Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada was taking her husband out on a date...one of the most imperfect dates but it worked big time for Arnav😳. What I noticed was how far these two have come in their relationship...like you said Priya, both of them respect each other's individualism. There is utmost respect in their hearts. Both know that they love each other, have accepted each other with all the flaws yet when they let each other know that time and again, it becomes special. I agree, we dont need intense passion all the time...just give us ordinary situations from life and it is enough to leave a smile on the viewers face. Khushi had accepted Arnav the way he was...akhdoo, stubborn, arrogant with a heart of gold. Not once did she ask him to change nor did she try to change him...she loves him the way he is. Similarly, Arnav loves Khushi the way she is...she isnt perfect, he knows that and that is what he loves the most. He went around with La, a girl from his strata, a girl who so easily blended into his world but did it impress Arnav?

It started with Khushi reserving a table for the wrong day😆😆 and then charming her way to get a table. She hit all the right notes to impress the waiter. Called him an achche insaan and spoke about his hometown. This hometown trick always works (speaking from personal experience😆😆). As Khushi was working towards getting the table, Mr Raizada stood looking amused but not surprised. He knew his jhalli wife was capable of doing anything...there was a sense of pride as he looked at her😃. If he wanted, he could have easily got a table but Khushi wanted to do it her way and he let her have her say. Once they got the table, what followed was a laughter marathon...everything that could go wrong for Khushi, it did😆😆. She placed the order...then quickly verified if it was shakahari😆, tried copying him by placing the napkin. She was honest to let him know that she didnt like the food (loved the face she made😆). He added some salt and spiced it up but she didnt want him doing another thing for her (his list was getting longer you see😆)

The cutest part is the way she says what the...jab hum baat kar rahe hai tho dont you dare🤣🤣. It took me back to all those scenes where he threatened her the same way...only difference is when he says it, it scares the hell out of Khushi but this time, Arnav looked on with amusement...tum yeh kya karne ki koshish kar rahi ho?😆😆 Bang comes the answer...Arnav Singh Raizada banne ki koshish😊. Agar aap mandir aa sakte hai, roka kar sakte hain tho hum bhi ASR banke dating kar sakte hai😆. What followed was the best dialogue in the episode for me. I love you the way you are Khushi...tumhe badalne ki koi zaroorat nahi😳😳. Their relationship will survive the test of time because what they feel for each other is unconditional love. No conditions, no expectations...just pure selfless love. They have accepted each other the way they are and they will stand together to fight the battle in the coming days.😳

I wasnt pissed when Mr and Mrs Jha appeared onscreen. What a contrast to our lovebirds. Both of them shameless, spineless. Anjali keeps disappointing me day after day...neither does she have guts to face her brother nor does she have the spine to stand by her husband. She was just 2 seconds away from ducking under the table😲. which wife would tolerate her husband hiding under the table?😲 If he has the guts and if he thinks he is right (I am assuming he would have told that to Anjali) then what is the need to hide😲. Both of them looked ridiculous😆😆 Chori pakdi jaati to her secret dates will come to the end😆.

I agree, Daljeet has a stock of 3 expressions...I always thought she was a good actor but yesterday, once again she failed to deliver. Anjali proved that she isnt bothered about chotte's wedding. It was the mehendi ceremony for his wedding but all she was bothered was her pati, her own world. Would she be happy if she saw Shyaam dressed as an electrician? Maybe she would😆😆

Other thoughts:

1. While the black suit was better than the other costumes worn off late, I would have preferred a black sari with open hair. Bitua would have fallen flat😳. vaise, I loved the way he checked her out...he would have had great plans cooking in his mind😳

2. Why didnt they show Arnav dropping Khushi back home? Romantic kiss na sahi ek goodbye kiss to milti. Bohot ramanchi karte hai baba😭

3. Mr Roy's assistant turned florist turned Mohan, the driver was also dining in the same restaurant🤣🤣

4. Loved the way NK was moving to show the worker how he wanted Jalwa🤣. Loved this small scene with the three guys...there was a sense of positivity. Two brothers running around ensuring everything is done on time while the groom sat on his laptop tak taking away😆😆

5. Can somebody on earth please ask Barun to trim his hair at least...no need of a short haircut. At least a trim so that his hair doesnt come over his collar. Vinti sunlo bhagwaanji

6. Barun and Sanaya were on a roll...I also noticed Arnav turning into Barun but I loved it. She is the only person whom he jokes around with...let him have his share of fun. Moreover, it served the purpose...she smiled😛. We know the coming days are not going to be happy for him, so let him enjoy while the sun shines

7. Khushi in her sexy choli but in an all ladies function...lets see what Arnav does to spend time with his wife

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Posted: 13 years ago

Priya: I love billy joel! and that title is just perfect!...I know I sound repetitive but loved your take...a perfect concoction of celebration of love , analysis of the nuances of the storyline and gentle pointers about the faults in execution. just lovely!

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1st date of the Raizadas: Comedy of errors

"He's not perfect. You aren't either, and the two of you will never be perfect. But if he can make you laugh at least once, causes you to think twice, and if he admits to being human and making mistakes, hold onto him and give him the most you can. He isn't going to quote poetry, he's not thinking about you every moment, but he will give you a part of him that he knows you could break. Don't hurt him, don't change him, and don't expect for more than he can give. Don't analyze. Smile when he makes you happy, yell when he makes you mad, and miss him when he's not there. Love hard when there is love to be had. Because perfect guys don't exist, but there's always one guy that is perfect for you."
-Bob Marley

A breezy little feel-good episode, a welcome change after the disquiet in the latter part of last week. An episode of apparent comedy with a strong undertone of love, understanding and acceptance between an odd couple who stand on the opposite ends of the human personality spectrum but share the similar depth of love for the other. Micro-moments of love of an imperfectly perfect couple.

Khushi wanted to give a return gift to Arnav for his selfless gesture of going through all the rituals of remarriage for her sake. She wanted to blend in his world of upscale elegance. So she dressed sophisticated in his favorite shade of black, made a reservation at his favorite Italian restaurant. And when she arrives, her husband is visibly enchanted by his gorgeous wife. Perfect start of their first date as a couple.

And then everything goes downhill.

What follows is a series of everything wrong . The husband just sits back and indulges in Mrs Jhalli Singh Raizada's mishaps. When she orders the wrong food(wrong for her taste, he reminds her), he adds the seasoning to make it perfect. Maybe an indication of how their life together is gong to be. He pulls her leg by pretending to make her drink wine for his sake. And then, as ASR puts it, the 'dhamaka' of popping the bubbly a la Khushi happens. An unflustered hubby apologizes to the victim and seeing her distraught goes over to her, and placates her by acting just like her which brings a smile to her face. When she accuses him of making fun of her, he reminds her humorously that she doesn't need any help as she's pretty self-reliant in that role: main tumhara mazak kahan uda sakta hoon tum kisi aurko mauka hi kahan dete ho?

Arnav during the course of their date understood what this date was about and took every mishap in stride and showed no embarrassment due to her quirkiness.He let her run the show in her unique style, watching her smooth talk the waiter to get them a table, letting her pull his chair to sit, letting her scold him in his style for interrupting. Till she gets upset. On seeing her chagrin at 'failing' to give him a perfect ASR-style date, he tells her the ultimate truth about his love for her :"I love you the way you are Khushi ..tumhe badal neki koi zaroorat nahin hai"

A couple who accepts each other for better or worse and in between ..just about perfect the way they are to each other.

Barun and Sanaya were at par in their comedic timing as the odd couple with Barun stealing the show for me in the bit where Arnav acts out Khushi's exasperation mimicking khushi's signature hand movements. Background music was the other main player...especially LOVED the crescendo bg score when Khushi was trying the kaala-khatta 'wine'!

Wont spoil my good mood talking about the other sneaky hiding-under-the-table dating couple!🤢 Daiya ho is back saach-mooch!

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Posted: 13 years ago

The title reminded me of another dialogue from the movie..

Koi pyaar kare, toh tumse kare,
Tum jaise ho, waise kare,
Koi tumhe badal ke pyaar kare,
Toh woh pyaar nahin, woh sauda kare...
Aur sahiba, Pyaar mein sauda nahin hota hai.

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UltimateBarun

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Posted: 13 years ago

I will res here as well😉

UI am soo sorry I reserved a spot but couldnt update!!!

The thing is I expected more from the date and it was not upto it,, not tht I hated it,,I am confused,,but reading ur crooner made me feel good priya,,as usual!

luv u all positive people! 🤗

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amisuv

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Posted: 13 years ago

Priya, thanks fr this fabulous Crooner with Billy Joel conveying the message beautifully 👏 👏

What a reminder of Barabara Cartland romance, took me back to my school days..

A decent start to the week.. Welcome to Mr.Jaitesh as the new story writer. Ab Mr.Dhokla ko naya bakra mil gaya hai, halaal karne ke liye 😉

I know Priya, it is very hard indeed to ignore that messy visual but the actor has his own choices in life so we have to come to terms with reality, I guess 😳

Mrs.& Mr.ASR on their first date... The clumsy Khushi trying her level best to portray herself as the sophisticated wife much to the amusement of the doting husband.

The dialogues were superb & had the desired impact.

" Tumhe Arnav Singh Raizada ban ne ki zaroorat nahi hai "

" I love you the way you are "

Now thats my ASR, no pretense no hang-ups.

The only glitch fr me was Arnav mimicking Khushi. Was more of Barun than Arnav 😆

My Mr.Perfect looking dashing as ever in that black & blue combo

Well, if " Purple Orchid " is Mr.ASR's Fav restaurant, then why was he not recognised by the staff there?? Just not done 😡

Haan one more thing. Why wasnt the waiter shocked when he saw a sindoor & mangalsutra clad Khushi saying that she had brought her mangetar on a date 😲 Aur yeh Mohan wahaan kya kar raha tha 😕

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bs_deeps

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Posted: 13 years ago

For some very wierd reason I didnt enjoy the episode much..

Below are few scenes which I loved..

His expressions when he heard Khushi's payal sound and him staring at her Khushi getting there on a wrong day. Must b bcoz of all her enthu to surprise and please him
His "only my girl can do this" expression when she was trying to get the work done by talking to waiter
She pulling chair for him was so very cute..
Half plate..really? this girl is unique..
"I love the way you are"..For a person who struggled to complete the sentance "farak padtha kain..kyunki", He came a long way in this one year. A person who always told her "Galti bi aukat dekh ke karni chahiye", he doesnt want her to change..for anything..What else is required for anyone than being loved for what you are.. Few days back she told him she doesnt want to change him and today was his turn..these two imperfect people are so perfect for each other..
When he was pulling her leg by saying "whats the need for someone else to make fun of you, when you can do it yourself"..
How can I miss her nautanki after she thought she drank wine..

What I could not enjoy

Dadi supporting Anjali is a big no..We all know that she believes Shyam..why not stand by him directly..why support Anjali's secret meeting..when you are not at fault, why hide n seek. If Shyam is doing that, its different bcoz he knows he is wrong. But I just cant understand these two ladies
Shyam and anjali acting all lovey-dovey...grrr... 😡
ASR's imitation..naaahhh..I didnt like it..I didnt like the way BS moved hands while saying those dialogues..and his dialogue delivery was too quick..From ASR's character point of view I dont have any issues as we know that he has a naughty side to him..It very very rare tht I dont enjoy a BS scene and this is one of them
Abrupt end to the date like most of thier romantic scenes in recent past..Missed SUV..
Whats the point in having security when snake can sneak into RM so easily..when they spefically shown electricians I was so waiting for them to catch the cameras and when ASR is going to show his shatir dimag once again? Is he going to think about the camrea equipment purchase or not? Or he will start taking actions only after he will realise his
sister's secret meetings with snake?
and I dont like when a scene ends on anyones face other than ASR / Khushi..😉

Ending up editing again n again as the format is getting messed up..

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beena nadkarni

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Posted: 13 years ago

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😕Priya sweetheart 🤗 love Billy Joel perfect 👏

pic credit: Shallu 🤗

That's what love can Do

By:Anju

Falling in love is difficult,

But once in pit of love-

It's difficult to come back.

Love is a feeling,

Which is undefineable,

Love makes you feel on the top,

Yes! on top of the world,

It creates a feeling,

None else than you are Beautiful,

None else than you are Adorable,

None else than you are Loveable.

It creates a Desire,

Desire to be with your Love,

Irrespective of time and place.

Desire to be in his arms,

Desire to share your life,

Your sorrows, Your joys.

What ever be the reason-

Love gives you a great feeling;

which once experienced;

Which ones felt,

Will make you crave for it again and again!

But, love can make us do anything-

For 'LOVE' is a great 'FEELING'.

Love can make you tell a lie,

Love can make you cross the hurdles against creulities of the world.

But, those in Love

Are sure to face all this-

For'

Once in Love-

Is love forever.

For-

Love is a great feeling;

Yes-

Love is a 'GREAT FEELING'.

Dialogue of the day

I will never ask you to do anything you don't want to, you don't have to become Arnav Singh Raizada . I love you the way you are Khushi, you don't need to change. Loved ASR for saying this but then had no doubts he would. When the man loves no conditions attached ''''''''.

A light feel good episode to start the week. Not a typical mushy date, then when you have two people who are poles apart trying to be one how adorable .The CV's again reminded us why they are the best Jodi with the execution of the date. Absolutely loved the way Arnav checked Khushi out on her arrival at the restaurant . I liked Arnav imitating Khushi it was not ASR but Barun in one of his SBS segments ( Director Sab zara dhayan dijiye please)

Was not happy to see Anjali becoming an expert liar and Dadi supporting her. Dadi , why do you have to be rude when talking to Arnav urhhh. Anjali not even feeling guilty of lying not liking this, how all this lying is going to bite you two can't wait for that day.

What was the doorman with a turban doing in an Italian restaurant.😕

Mohanji aap driver ki duty karke restaurant mei guest bungaye .😆

Khushi you drank kala khatta so why were you acting drunk?😕

If Purple Orchid is ASR's favorite restaurant why no one recognized our man.😡

Yes, agree Priya the direction and screenplay was much tighter , with new writer on

the team hope he brings something fresh to the table.

Edited by beena14 - 13 years ago