Res.. wil unres soon.. for now here are my reactions..
😆 😳 👏 😎 🤗
and this one for rafi..🤗
unres..
Was this OS really this funny and interesting when i read it for the first time?!!😆 if yes then i wonder what kept me away from un-reserving all this while!!🤔 Oh i know..YOU!!😈
I totally hold u responsible for coming up with amazing OSs one after the other n taking my mind off Allergic love!! N dats really unfair cos this one here is no less than the rest. Infact, in some aspects its a notch higher than the rest!!Cos if u ask me this was one concept that best exploited to ur wit and sense of humour!! Rafi always knows what shes doing!!😳 So anyway this spot here has undoubtedly waited the longest for my feedback n hopefully after this it will forgive both of us!!😛
Swayam's point of views are a rare treat n more so when he is sharper and wittier than the swayam we know him to be. He is always shown so simple n humble on the show that i never imagined his thoughts can be this entertaining!! Adorned with a crisp and hard-hitting sense of humour the flow of his thoughts and his take on the various happenings made a very interesting read!! Infact this os here does full justice to ur own sense of humour!!! wait i think i hv already mentioned that 🤔!!
Anyway, his thoughts are usually sharon centric but the way Cleopatra has intruded them time and again in this os deserves a lot of appreciation!! ! His various descriptions of the cat and the monstrous streak in her was fun to read and his exaggeration alert was bong on!!😎
Even though u made him wittier than he usually is, the brief paragraphs which describe his love for sharon and the usual effects of her presence in his life keeps the essence of his character intact!! In particular i love the beginning of the second part, the flashback, where he wakes up to realise that he is in love with her still.. Being in love with sharon is what he remembers doing since time immemorial n yet his mind n heart are always aware of the fact as if jointly testifying that they can never love her enough!!😳
In short brilliant work with Swayam's pov!! This is by far the most entertaining plot i hv come across. so much so that i never really felt sorry for Swayam!! And i loved the ending where sharon uses cleopatra as her guard n confesses her love for swayam!! dat part was so very endearing!!😳
Also i hv never spared much thought on cats prior to this os n it was a fulfilling first experience!!😃
This OS also reminds me of a very unique and strange aspect of ur writing.. the way u make unpleasant stuff so very pleasant to read😳!! now this is really beyond me!! Be it drowning(a single moment), motion sickness(if u cud see me now) or something as bizzare as an allergic reaction, why does it happen i love the way u describe them??!!😕 And the minute detailing in all these descriptions mks me wonder if u hv hd all these experiences.. If yes u hv my sympathies! if not then i hv no words strong enough to praise the creative genius in u!!
Thanks for this amazing os!! I'l come bk to it whenever i need a good laugh!!🤗
P.S. i usually quote my favourite bits but this is a long os n there r too many to quote n i think i hv already gone overboard with the length of the comment!!😳
Edited by lyfisbeautiful - 13 years ago
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