PM fanfic.1st LOve is not easy to 4get..

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey .. i read lots of fanfic... n i liked them all very much.... i feel like writing one myself😊 just to check if i am a good writter 😆lol<<

>> so here it goes... its after the rape case..

>> mukti is now bak to the way she was... she doesnt want to look bak at her past.. n wants to 4get every thing...😭

>> as 4 prem << he doesnt know wt he's doing.. every time he thinks is about mukti ........ mukti reject his proposal.. so he is sad😭 and really angry😡 at the same time...

so it begins wid....:;

mukti: prem plz wake up ... its 8 am and u need to go to work..

prem: basanti plz let me sleep.. 5 minss more..

mukti: ohh.. she goes get a glass of water ..and pour it on prem..

prem: MUKTI<<(finally he woke up.. and was sad that it waz just a dream..n nothing more..<<

he got up.. had breakfast ..and get ready to go to office.. it was raining and prem went to close the window.. suddenly he sees mukti... she was looking for some files...

Prem to himself....: why do i care about her.. why do i feel sad.. she rejected me.. n insult me infront of everyone.. now she will regret.. for rejecting me.. and i swear to god i will not leave her😡 he hav a evil smile on his face..

Prerna : prem ..you're being late 4 office .

prem: o ya.. C u mother india<<

just then mukti enters.. .. .

prerna: mukti.. are'nt u late 4 office..??

mukti: yes but choti ma .. i need to talk to u

prerna: kya howa

mukti: last night i gave u some files.. i need it back.. plz

prerna: o ya.. wait a sec ..i will be right back..

prem was leaving when prerna calls him and said .. u r going to dah office arent u?

prem: ya

prerna: take mukti along wid u its raining heavily.

prem looks at mukti . mukti looks at prem. . uncomfortablely

mukti..: choti ma.. i can go by myself. dont worry.

prerna : no .. u and prem r going to dah same office.. u will go wid prem thats final

mukti: lekin

prerna: lekin vikin kuch nahin..just go arent u late 4 dah office.

prem: shall we go >> miss basanti

mukti have no other choice left.. so she goes wid him.

in dah car.. there was a silence.. prem waz thinking about how mukti rejected him.. and he got fustrated .. and drives faster. as he can .. mukti was a little bit afarid but didnt said anything.. they reached dah office.. and went to their own cabins.

prem was passing by ..when he sees mukti working in her cabin..he goes inside.

Prem: aa hem

mukti looks at prem ..and just ignores him..

Prem faustrated ....n leaves..

IN the evening :

PREM at the club drinking .. n thinking

BAJAJ HOUSE ;

KASAK: mukti .. get ready we're going out tonight.. at the club..

mukti: why.. wts so special..

kasak: mera ek dost hai.. main ussay milna ja rahi hoon.. and i want u to go wid me plzzz

mukti: i dont wanna go kasak.. i hav lots of work to do.. WHY dont u take sneha.

KASAK: sneha doesnt wants to go.. PLZ now u r goin wid me.. kam toh tum bbad main bhe kar sakti hoon.. hai na .. u r coming na..

mukti; lekin

KASAK: thx mukti .. get ready.. now

mukti gets ready.. ( mukti n kasak leaves) mukti and kasak r in dah same club.. as prem.

MUkti: where is ur friend..

kasak: woh dekho.. uska naam nakul (kisna frm kyunki)hai.. bahot aacha hai.. we were friends when i was out of india..

nakul: hey kasak.. wts up.

KASAK: nakul yeh mere dost mukti aur mukti this is nakul..

nakul: nice meeting u

MUKTI: same here.

THesse three were chatting ....n laughing..

Prem sees mukti.. and again drinks..he was totally drunk....he sees mukti going outside to the beach so he follows her...😳

TO be continue..

that was tough.. wt do u guys .. think.. do u think i am a gud writer..😳

i know its not that interesting...(i am not gud at writing ). but this is my 1st time.. .. u know

tell me if u like it... i hope i can continue..😳 n hope u guys like my fanfic..

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Posted: 19 years ago
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gr8 ...continue soon....👏👏

Edited by FrEnDs8 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ooohhh another fanfic if u want me to put this on the first page of the prem post do paste the link over there and ill update the first page 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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GOoDy gOOd...!! hEhEhEHe...!!
EXceLLeNT..!! AwESum....!!
ConT SoON sWEeTIe...!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 , wow, yaar dat was awesome!count sun 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow its gr8 pls continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow its nice and interesting 😉 plz cont soon 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ye thats gud plz continue 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow rly gd yaar count soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thx 4 all dah support.. 😉 i will continue.soon 😃 i didnt thought u guys will like it soo much... 😊 plz wait.. for the next part.

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