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twilight1995

@twilight1995

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#441

love the story story cant wait till the next update!!:)

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Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#442

Hey i came across with ur ss and just loved it.it is admireable,loveable.
The way it is written is amazing.plz can u pm me whn u update it?
And ss late and 'fire and fire' too.
Please

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umama shahid

@umamashahid

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#443

wow...tat was so good..nd yes a bit long too...i really enjjoyed it...loved nani and anjali..nd ofcoarse the stupid reasoning of arhi...continue soon

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Maya

@What_the

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#444

Whoa!! What a great story...what a talented pair of sisters!

Quoting:

"Wait and watch. Arre Khushi bitya. Come here. Will you do a favor for me?"

"Ji Naniji"

"Will you please go to the last room up the stairs and… and… get a thaal of flowers from the poolside?" DEVYANI! You can do better than this…

"You want me…me to go? Why?" asked Khushi hesitatingly.

"Yes because… because all the helpers here are…are hydrophobic, they don't like to visit the pool area" Devyani! What the….

"O…k…Ok. But why did you keep a thaal of flowers at the pool area?" asked Khushi curiosity getting the better of her.

"Bec…because of space constraints. There isn't enough space in this house" D.E.V.Y.A.N.I!

Ooohhh god!This was just too funny... I laughed so hard i woke up my husband...

Loved this story...

Cheers!

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ducky_anne

@ducky_anne

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#445

I can't wait for the next part! Your sister is really good! :)

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Daspayel

@Daspayel

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#446

Thnx for p.m.
Sorry for being late
was out of station :(

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#447

Removed.

No, I do not have a blog.

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 12 years ago

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smarty94

@smarty94

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#448

res.

*EDIT*

woOw ma'am ur writing is well *uMMm* AWESOME👏 i love ur sister's (aalsi patta's) writing ALOT, bt i'm intrigued by urs toO.😃

who said u can't write funny stuff😕? the update was somewhat funny fr me😆 LAVANYA's nervous-ness and then her instant excuse, left me lol'ing mahnn🤣 going to ask abt LAKSHMI😆 then ARNAV following her through out (half) the party and glaring and killing people with his looks😆

funny how his family is becoming predictable and her irritation with them😳 and the end was hilarious😆 he getting all jealous and frustrated abt his JEEJAJI being so close to her and not him😆 the guy is definately *THE TOUGHEST NUT* and well she is no less, lyk LAVANYA said, they both are in love bt wont agree to it, knuckle-heads really😆

btw ma'am i'd lyk to say it again, u writing is AWESOME!😉 take care and continue soOn and EID MUBARAK TO U AND UR FAMILY😃

Edited by smarty94 - 12 years ago

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riafna

@riafna

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#449

Eid Mubarak Rasagula
I am on first page on your first post.Like your SS very much.Like today's update very much.La excuse is superb just spotted Laxmi...😆 that's so cute.What's the connection between La and Shyam?La loves ASR???????????or La and Shyam are siblings or something else...Oh no I hate cliffhanger situations...Please please update soon.Suspense is killing me.

You are a wonderful writer .Waiting for your more and more works

Thanks for PM Zehra

Edited by afnariaz - 12 years ago