||Too late to apologize||KR SS#2 Updated pms later

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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG its my second thread...😆 Thx to my Jaanemans..❤️ for cmplting frst thread..😳 waise dont spam ab too much cux I dont wanna open 3rd thread for dis SS..😆 nae to FF bana padega ...
Okay so I dedicated dis SS to Aisha cux it was her bday..and today she is back..😃 Im soo happiee.. okay whatever..and umm uhh enjoy reading..😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 7
( Im skipping three legged race I knw I told dat im gonna write it but it dint turned out gud so I decided to skip three legged race..sry..)
Kria: mujhe jaana hai race mai..!
Geet: ek baar bola na nahi jaogi to bas..
Kria: but..
Khushi: Kria tumhe meri kasam ur not goin..!
Kria: FINE..!
Vishaka: Lets go back Kria humai packing karni hai kal ke liye..
Kria:theek hai chalo..
Dey both left..
**********
Location: Hotel
Taani was angry wid Rey..
Taani: Maine jab aapse bola tha mujhe race karni hai aapne kyu nahi ki..?
Rey: taani mai thak gaya tha..
Taani: Mujhe kuch nahi sunna..
Swayam: cum on taani ek race hi to thi..
Taani: yea bhai ek race hi to thi wo bhi nahi karsakte the mere liye rey..?😡
Rey went near her and hugged her from back 🤢
Rey: babiee kal hum poore tym saath rahenge na..( )
Taani: jaayi rey yahan se..
Rey nibbled her hairs..( mujhe hi pata hai kitni mushkil se likha ye.. 😭 )
Taani: rey kya kar raho ho aap..?
Rey: Romance.. ( romance my foot 😡 )
Taani: chodo rey koi dekh lega..
Rey: dekhne do I dont care..
Taani: REY..!
Rey:accha pehle maaf karo..
Taani: kardia maaf ab chodo..
he left her she blushed..he kissed her cheeks and left frm der..
Taani: I hope rey sirf mera hi hojaye hamesha ke liye..
( Taa-rey SS nahi hai yahin raho)
*********************
Next day..
All d gals were at Kria's house..
Aruhi:im soo excited me and Arjun ek saath trip mai WOW..
Khushi: excited to mai bhi hun u knw wat Sam ne mujhe ek saare gift ki hai and he told ki usse mai pack karlu cux wo mujhe saare mai dekhna chahta hai..
Geet: aww how romantic..
Vishaka: romantic my foot bas yahin khoye raho tum sab..Kria tooth brush rakha..?
Kria: yup..
Pia: oye kria tum itni down kyu ho..?
Kria: nae guys kuch nahi bas aise hi dard ho raha tha knee mai..
Geet: aww dun wry theek hojayega
Smrithi:ab tum sab ko jaana nahi hai kya..? jaldi niklo..!
Kria: bye ma..
Smriti: bye and hun be careful ..!
Vishaka: aunty mai hu na..
Dey all bid bye to smriti and left..
on d other side louians reached d stop..
Sharon: sab kuch rakhdia na..?
Simmi: yup shar all done..
Sharon: god ye garmi upar se rain uff..
Swayam: I love rains..
Taani: but bhaai I hate dem paani keechad ..
Rey: I also dun lyk rains har jagah macchar..
Neha: But neha loving rains..
Kirti arrives der..
Kirti: gud morning guys..
All: Gud morning mam..
Kirti: sab kahan rehgaye..?
swayam: Mam humai to nae pata hum direct hotel se yahan aaye hai..
Kirti: ohh, ye log kabhi tym pe nahi pohuch sakte..well aap log den bus mai ao aajayenge sab..
Rey:okay mam..
dey were gonaa enter d bus suddenly shubhankar came singing
Shubhankar: aaj mausam hai bada suhaana la la
Kirti shots him a look..
Shubhankar: waah subha subha pari ka chehra..
Louians gigles..
Kirti: Mr. Shubhankar ..aap bus mai jaaye..
Shubhankar: okay mam..
Lawriance arrived gigling
Kria: Gud morning mam..
Kirti: gud morning
Pia: mam aaj kitna accha mausam hai na..wow
Kirti: haan wo to hai but aap aajke din bhi late ho..
Geet: sry mam wo last moment packing..
Kirti: koi baat nahi *smiles* ab jao sab bheto jaake..
dey all enter d bus but den dey frown cux dey din get der fav places..kria went and took a window seat Karan went and sat beside her..
Kria: yahan kyu aaye ho tum..!
Karan: kyu tumhara naam likha hai idhar..?
Kria: nahi but mai pehle yaahan aayi thi na..!
Karan: accha arey haan tum to bohut moti ho 2 seats logi fit hone ke liye..
Kria: shutup samjhe jab dekho patar patar..
Karan smiles and turns to oder side he saw rey staring dem..
Karan:hi
rey: *no response*
Karan: HI REy..!
Rey: ohh hi karan..
Karan: wasup dude..?
Rey: huh..?
Karan: I said WASUP DUDE..?
Rey: oh just sitting here..:P
Karan gives him a fake smile , puts his headphones and murmers idiot..
Rey was trying his best to see kria but Karan covered her..He noticed dat rey is trying to see her he slowly took kria's hand and caressed it..Kria was admiring d beauty out side so she dint realised sumone caught her hand..Rey's eyes were on his hand ( jaise rose day ke din tha when swayam was holding kria..:P )Taani notice rey was staring dem ..
Taani: Rey..
Rey: kya hua..
Taani: aap mujhse baat kyu nahi kar rahe..>
Rey: kya baat karu taani...? aisa karo tum so jao subah jaldi uth gae thi na..
Taani: fine..
she rested her head on his shoulder..evry one was quite sum of dem were busy in der romace sum was sleeping ... after sumtyms dey stopped near a dhabba..dey all went outside onli kria was left she was talkin wid her mom..Rey was also inside d bus but he din noticed dat kria is der..
Kria: haan maa mai kahin akele nahi jaungi..! theek hai bye mom bas hogaya ab...*disconnects d call* jab dekho kria ye na karo kria wo na karo uff..
Kria moved from her seat but her leg twisted and she fall upoun rey on the seat next to her..both were shocked to see eachother..
Kria: aap..yahan kya kar rae ho..
Rey:..
he was lost in her..
Kria: REY..!
Rey: Kria kya hua..
Kria: kuch nahi meri help karo uthne mai..
Rey: help karna zaroori hai..*murmers*
Kria: kuch bola aapne..?
Rey: nahi w8 ..
he hold her hand thightly and helps her to get up..
Kria:thx..
Rey: no prob..
Kria leaves frm der wid tears in her eyes..
*outside*
Vishaka: Kya mausam hai na guys..
Khushi: haan agar barish hojaye to kya baat..!
Aruhi: dekho guys kria bhi aagayi..
Kria:hey guys..
Arjun: Kria ye lo garam chai..
Kria: thx..
Vishal: kitna bore ho raha hai bus mai yaar..
Maan: ye louians itne boring hai mujhe nahi pata tha..
on d other side..
Sharon: kria kitni badal gae hai na..
Swayam: haan aur Vishaka bhi..
Taani: rey aap bohut close nahi jaa rahe uske..?
Rey: wht do u mean taani..?
Sharon: cant u stay away frm her itna hurt hone ke baad bhi usse stare kar rahe ho..
Rey: dekho mujhe uss mai koi intrest nahi hai samjhe tum log..and mai usse nahi dekh raha thA..
Taani: wo to dikh raha tha rey..!
Rey: god taani cumon im not intrested in her kitni baar bolu agar koi intrest hota to ek saal pehle aise nahi usse jaane deta..!
Neha: y talking u are about her again dekho kitna smiling she wid her new frnds Vishaka ko bhi lagae ye..
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Precap: ...XXX
Sry for late update bohut saari khaania hogayi mat poocho..!
Edited by Abshu_Arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congo for new thread
Update it soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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CONGRATS FOR THE NEW THREAD ...ab toh update karo ...plzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats 4 New Thread 😃
Plzz Update Soon Plzz 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congo for d new thread🥳

Awesome update!!!:):)

Loved it very much except dat taani rey part!!!!!

Waiting for d next part!!!:):)
Edited by kaba3003 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats for the new thread abshu
plz now update yaar
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats aabshu for ur new thread.

Keep rocking.


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congo Abshu for the new thread..⭐️

Im waiting for the 3rd thread..😉😆

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Congrats for second thread ...
N update soon 😊.

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