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Posted: 13 years ago
it was awesomest part
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
that was superb update dear
loved it
plz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
nyc update maria
jst <3ed it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
cont soon
i want to see how the stubborn Nupur gets speechless and Shy in front of Our Mayank
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Posted: 12 years ago
So nice part..
Please continue Soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Writer Note

Thank u sooo much everyone for such an overwhelming response and beautiful comments🤗means a lot to me...
plz keep reading it😳
Maria...remember me in ur prayers🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Destined Love

"Destiny plays with our life but sometimes it gives us the thing that we never think or expected to get'Love & a Companion"

"Thanks for proving me wrong"After a long pin drop silence Mayank broke continuation of it with his soft voice , "oh!!really.well I didn't know I've proven you wrong but glad to hear it" She chuckled and Mayank's eyes narrowed, but despite his suspicion that Nupur was pulling his leg, he forced himself to remain silent and gave her keen stare. "Don't you want to know how did you prove me wrong?" he said, his voice turning soft husky giving a quick glance to her captivating face and then again turned to look straight,she gulped of air as reacting at his act and gave him glace with the corners of her eyes he was looking serious, Mayank swung his head and gave her a quick glance keeping his eyes on the way, "honestly speaking,I didn't expect you to come at my request but you came and have proven me wrong and it's the first time when I am feeling glad to get defeat"

She lifted up her eyes at him and felt sincerity,honesty in his words,in those few meetings and phone talks she'd been understood the one thing about him he was a good person and lonely like her.she gasped air and shrugged those thoughts, "Nothing knew,you must be thought like others that I am a rude,heartless, proudy girl who just thinks about herself"

"Not at All''."he cut her in desperation and turned his face to look at her taking a small pause.

"It's hard to trust on a stranger and I know I am still stranger for you,I thought maybe you'll not feel comfortable to come with but you've proven me wrong showing your trust and I am really glad to see it"

He again took small pause and stared into her eyes "Thank you"

She stared at him, taken aback. She couldn't remember the last time she had heard those words. And hearing them from Him felt strangely good. It was pleasant. Was that color tinting her cheeks? But before he could be sure,she turned her face in other side.she knew she'd nothing to reply,her voice seemed stuck in her throat and words had been lost somewhere and a tinge of happiness engulfs her heart realizing there was someone around her who didn't think about her like the others. He searched his brain for a reason to talk to her. He just didn't want the moment to end but on the other hand he didn't want to force himself on her,their relationship needed time,she needed time to accept him and he was ready to give her time.he dropped the idea to break the silence and turned to keep his eyes on the way.

"You were telling you've no one in your life'what about your parents?"

Her slow voice brought him out of his trance and he spun his head to look at her who was waiting for his reply, "I am an orphan" Nupur saw the pain that flashed across Mayank's eyes at the mention of his parents, and his tone softened with shared sorrow.she gulped for air realizing unintentionally she'd hit the wrong place.she felt herself less of words for a moment to say something to him that could remove the pain from his face..

"I was an eight years child when My father had died and after few months of his death my mother too left me"

"Sorry..I didn't'mean'to hurt you" Her tone softened and Mayank stared back in those eyes which were showing guilt and he felt great urge to hold her in his arms and pour out his heart but he hit his desire and jerked them off from his mind. "You've right to know about me"

She gasped for air to hear his husky and soft voice and she stared back at him,who'd been given her right on him,something strange feelings penetrated in her heart as she felt sincerity,honesty in those deep eyes and she could feel warmth of her cheeks due to blush,she nervously moved away her face in other side leaving the smile on his lips.

The next half journey went into silence but she could feel his intense eyes on her fluttering her heart.

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"If your companion is with you,every moment of life becomes the memorable moment"

Mayank thought with a half smile on his lips and gave a glance to his captivating beauty who was from the half an hour trying to select her wedding dress and he was silently watching her cute,irritating expression and was enjoying the beautiful moments of his life.

"Ma'am please check this Green one,I hope you'll like it" the shopkeeper spread another dress in front of her and she again gave look to all the ten dresses in different colors spreading on the table in front of her but she couldn't decide..

He shook his head and stepped close to her who was so engrossed in selecting her wedding dress that even had been forgetting his presence..

"Mrs.May I help you"

Her heart fluttered and her breath stuck in her throat as his husky, low whisper hit with her ear drums and his warm breath touched the flesh of her earlobe, she gasped for air trying to stable her racing beat. He was so close. The heady scent of him swarmed her senses, making her heart tick hard and fast. "Ermm..Thanks but I'll choose myself" she stammered realizing her presence near her,he titled his head and stared at her face for a moment and without giving her a chance to think what was coming on her way,he stretched his arm and grabbed the Red dress,he swung towards her and she gasped at the feel of his body close to her and lifted her gaze at him who was standing a foot away distance from her looking at her face,Mayank wrapped the Red Duppatta around her shoulders and lifted her chin with his finger,she nervously stared into his eyes, trying to get a clue what he was doing.he suppressed smile looking at her nervous movement of her long dark eyelashes. "Mrs. You're looking breathtaking in this color, it's perfect for my bride"

Her cheeks flushed and some strange feelings knocked the door of her heart,a smile touched her lips and she nervously moved away her eyes.

He smiled and felt urged to gather his captivating beauty in his arms and gave her long passionate kiss but then thinking he'd taken the decision for few minutes back he'll give her space to accept their relationship. he moved away a bit and gave her glace from the corners of his eyes who was trying hard to hide her nervousness under her soft facial expressions and the thing that made his heart filled with great happiness when she gave orders to pack the same dress he'd selected for her.

pt 10...pg 67 ******************

here is next update,i hope you'll like it😳

Edited by Maria. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
me first yay!!!


Aww beautiful update mari !!! loved it

their short convo silent glances 😳
Mayank is already in love with her the way his heart urges him to hold her n kiss her
Two lonely souls will find true companionship in each other 😃
nicely written dear

continue soon

Edited by Prada_176 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
aww that was so
sweet part...

loved it ..
great..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww...That was sooo Beautiful.
i loved it lodsss
Awesome update SIS...
Beautifully written.
loved it to d coreee
loved it lodsss
felt bad for Mayank but m happy that they are going really well..
n the wedding dress part was utterly adorable i loved that...
waiting eagerly got their wedding...
loved it lodsss
u know SIS...i alwaysss confused this ff with "DI" lolzzz n after reading some lines i rmmbr ke ohhh it is not that one...🤣😳
loved it lodsss
love u lodsss SIS...🤗🤗🤗

ps: plzzz SIS update "FM" plzzz n han "LnH" too

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