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Posted: 12 years ago
aww that was so cute and adorable part
Mayank and Nupur were so cute
loved them
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Posted: 12 years ago
Adorable and cute part
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago

Amazing update Maria

Beautifully written
please continue soon,,,
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Mindblowing update
Mayur are adorable
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful update Maria..:) luv is going 2 blossom n bind these 2 lonely souls... 😳 Continue soon...thnx 4 d pm...:)
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Writer Note

Thank u sooo much everyone for such an overwhelming response and beautiful comments🤗means a lot to me...
plz keep reading it😳
Maria...remember me in ur prayers🤗

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Destined Love

"I don't know who is he? I don't know about him anything except his name and today I'd submitted my life to him, I've given him permission to hold my hand and take me wherever he want'."

She blinked her tears and looked herself in the mirror, everything was in this room was a stranger to her, just a few hours ago she was in her home, Not Home for me it was a house where I used to live. she thought hysterically and closed her eyes,Memories of his father on today,her wedding day flashed through Nupur's mind.he'd grin on his face all the time ,even at that time when he'd given her hand to Mayank,it seemed it didn't matter to him if she was going to leave that house .a lump formed in her throat with the flood of fresh tears and she wiped them off roughly with her palm and gave a glance to the wall clock,it was now 12;30,he still didn't come in the room.he must be busy with guests.She assumed.it was the good chance for her to get freed from this heavy bridal dress,she raised her hand and pulled her bag and grabbed out a night dress,she had kept few dresses in the small bag as her other dresses were packed in suitcase and she was too tired to unpacked them and stuffed them into her cupboard.

Mayank clicked the knob and gasping air he composed himself before entering the room,he never felt hesitant to enter into this room but today he was feeling because now he'd companion to share a room with him,His wife,having someone in life who will share his everything,his sorrows,his happiness..it was strange feeling that was warming him all over.

He smiled inwardly and stepped inside the room.she turned towards the door and let out a gasp of uneasiness seeing him, lounging just inside the doorway, his arms crossed over his chest while his eyes were fixed on her,Angry with herself for letting him see her uneasiness due to his intense glancing, she put her chin up, "you can come in its your room too" she drawled teasingly,Instead of looking surprised at her teasing remark, he looked slightly disappointed, "actually I am surprised to see you in this nightdress,I'd expected to see you in bridal dress"

It wasn't complained but yeah she'd sensed hurt in his voice and she felt guilty, "actually that dress was too heavy and i'."

"It's okay Mrs."Feeling the guilt in her voice he suppressed smile and Nupur shot him a long glance since they met,Leaning in the doorway, His shoulders were wide, his chest deep, and his shirtsleeves were rolled up, displaying darkly tanned, very muscular forearms, with charming smile he was looking handsome and Mayank was quick to notice the admiration in her eyes for him,a smile touched his lips.
"Its seems my wife has found me handsome"he chuckled stepping close to her and her dark-deep eyes shot up in nervousness coming out of her trance of thoughts, "in your dreams"covering up her nervousness she spoke in a low tone and Mayank smile leaning his face closed to her, "Really"his voice came out like soft,silky whisper and stared hard at her,she lifted her gaze at him , her heart leaping into her throat and she moved her lashes finding his face close to her, "umm I am feeling sleepy,good night"

She whirled around towards the bed but he caught her arm in an amazingly strong grip and hauled her back, a crooked grin on his face.her heart skipped in countless time and she gasped air Mayank threw his arms around her shoulders gently pulling her into a hug, "it's so Harsh Mrs,let me see my bride's face for some time" He bowed his head forward, Their brows touched. Their eyes met, reflecting strange,new feelings. "If you've seen my face enough can I go now"she moved her eyes breaking the contact and gasped for air and tried to shift his weight.

"There is something for you"he gave her intense look and she met with his eyes, "what??"she asked anxiously, "just a second" and he pulled out a small velvet box from his pocket, "here it is"he spoke softly and opened it,it was a ring,a diamond ring,he held her hand and slipped it onto her finger.

"It's beautiful"she exclaimed and smiled. "How do you know I like diamond jewelry?"She looked bewildered and stared back at his face but then feeling his intense gaze she moved back her eyes composing herself to not to get affected by his those intense gaze,he felt urged to gather her in his tight hold and kiss her until there was no space left between them but then he reminded his promise to himself he'll give her time to accept him,he leaned forward and lifting her chin he made her look at him, "I would love to see this smile always on my wife's lips"

She just could stare back in those eyes which were showing immense care,concern and something More'her heart thud at this thought and she tried to turn her face when he cradled her shocked face between his two hands, drawing her closer to him, and his voice dropped to a whisper, "Do you know how beautiful you are?" he said hoarsely, and this time blush spreads on her cheeks and her corners of lips curled into a shy smile but then she slapped those silly emotions composing herself, "Thanks for your compliments and gift..can I sleep now?"she tried to pull herself away from his grip when he tightened the hold around her waist and stared in her eyes.

"Just thanks"

Her cheeks flushed realizing the meaning of his words and second thing she remembered he pulled her head close she closed her eyes in anticipation and dropping great urge to capture her lips Mayank placed his lips on her cheek giving her long kiss and then moved away, "good night Mrs"

Saying this he moved towards the bed leaving a smile on her lips.

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here is update,i hope you'll like it😳
Edited by Maria. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
aww... cute update mari!

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me 1st 2day!
Edited by -SupriyaluvsMN- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
aww. that was so cute and sweet..
Mayank will surely made her fall in love with him..
their moments were so cute and awsome.
i just loved it..
Mayank understands her feelings and even given her space..
I am sure somewhere in heart.. Nupur too had another emotions for mayank apart from teasing
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aww that was amazing and cute part
Mayur moments were sooo cute
loved them
do continue soon

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