Shadows of Desires- An Interlude to Shades of Grey

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irene

@rennie

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#81

loved how u wrote abt arnav's thoughts...too good...

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Arathy-V

@Arathy-V

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#82

oops im sorry..i added my comment to this chapter in Shades of Grey..hope u guys dont mind😉

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udaymanyata07

@udaymanyata07

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#83

👏👏thnaks...well done...👏👏

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bushrayou

@bushrayou

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#84

AMAZING! seriously blown away.

Every emotion and feeling that passed through him is described perfectly.

I hope their thoughts join together and they come out somewhere in the middle... together!

his...

hers...

theirs... ?

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tina_1234

@tina_1234

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#85

awesomeness redefined ...loved it sooo much

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Honkytonk

@Honkytonk

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#86

Have no words to describe how amazing this was to read...truely, beautifully written...so meant to be!!!! At last tech true soulmates meet as they should!!!

Thanks for PM

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johnangad

@johnangad

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#87

blushing again!!!arnav better make no typical morning after mistake!

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nimra21

@nimra21

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#88

Big hug to both of you for writing this! I didn't say it my comment on Chapter 19 but I did feel that Arnav's POV was lacking. And I would have been satisfied by a single paragraph but you gave us a long OS. Thank you! :D

As to the update, WOW! Loved it. Please don't make both of them regret it. Please? :P

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Dneha

@Dneha

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#89

woww.. liked it better from Arnav's POV... though u gave away the future track a little at the end.. but never know.. you two are clever girls and wicked writers... please let them get straight with each other...