Shadows of Desires- An Interlude to Shades of Grey

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zyanah

@zyanah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

no coud'nt have been better just perfect!

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207shikha

@207shikha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

m speechless...!

why do you both have to kill me each time by your brilliant writing skills..?

gosh man m still hyperventilating.!! it was sooo HAWT.!! totally arnav's POV.! adored it.!

his each actions, emotions and thoughts were so beautifully written. i mean you both really did justice with his character here. and then there were these lines which were made me go crazy...for example, the mention of khushi as "HIS" in each statement where he desired for her or wanted her was enough to make me warm. *blush* then there was a phrase something like - "...his universe revolves around his khushi...his sole point.!" *sigh* it killed me..! and then there was an optimisim ! that it can be the start of their many more firsts to come...what a wonderful end.! seriously, one can really HOPE... so in love with your baby.! 😳

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essess

@essess

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

Read it. Loved it , Want MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

But ur writing his point of view made one thing clear that he too has deep feeling s and he too was shocked at the fact that he was wrong bout Khushi and NK,, ... Iknow its not a big thing but its throws a more softer positive light on him( at least for me) and also his acknowledging of the feelings he has been having for Khushi for a long time also was sooo sweet !

Just muttering ... I love them in this story so anything will do Bit this softness really made him a bit better for me!

And let Khushi also be happy with what has happened!

Hope Anjali also finds her happiness.

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shonagudia

@shonagudia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

Congratulation the two of you on winning the FF of the week.. I think you deserve to be the one 👏
Coming to this update , it's beautiful. finally Arnav admitted what he felt for Khusi all along. Though he started on a wrong assumption about NK n Khusi but i just couldn't move away the emotions you shown in this piece of writing.. It's mind blowing and terrific. 😳

You both rock gals... 🤗

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Stapleton

@Stapleton

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

simply superb...

thanks 4 d pmm

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sakthi25

@sakthi25

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

I dont know how to express it.
well your work amuses us.
you make us live throough each of your words.

I am literally struckup in Arnav and Kushi world, my mind wandering around as how would they react next..

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#77

Omg...that was amazing!!!!!!!
I was waiting for arnav's pov...and this was brilliant!!!!!

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shree99

@shree99

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Posted: 13 years ago

#78

thanks guys soo much..
this was missing .. I had felt that too...
boyoboyboyoboy...awesome ladies
how the heck do you manage to outdo urselves all the time

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Ovi_Tanni

@Ovi_Tanni

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Posted: 13 years ago

#79

Omggg it was too hawtt n passionate...m happy arnav din't back or felt guilty...hope this love making gonna happen more n they ll confess their feelings :)