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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello friends one more time maine kuch likha hai aap sabke liye ...

kyu darna tufaano se hamesha
kyu ghabraana mushkilo se aur rehna paresha
zindagi to khuda ka diya anmol tohafa hai
har pal khushi se jiyo yahi zindagi ka falasafa hai
auro ko khushi dene me hi khushiya paane ka asali raaz hai
dusro ki taklif ko mehsus karana hi insaaniyat ka ehsaas hai
dil aur dosti khubsurat hoti hai
dil dhadkan aur dosti dhadkan ko zindagi deti hai
ehsaaso ko ek nayi awaaz deti hai
dil ke andhere me umeed ki kiran bhar deti hai
pyaar ka saagar aur motiyo ki chamak deti hai
mehkata gulshan aur jeene ki vajah deti hai
dard me sahara, zindagi ko kinara deti hai
saflata ki chamak aankho me bhari hoti hai
asmaan ko chune ki chahat dil me dabi hoti hai
par chalate chalate raaho me badal jata hai nazariya kabhi
ful bhi lagane lagate hai kaanto ki chubhan kabhi
bichadane lagate hai hamsafar manzil paane ki chahat me kabhi
isliye apani zameen ko kabhi bhulana nahi
safalta ke ahnkar me kisi ke dil ko dukhana nahi
safalata ke maayne tabhi pure hote hai
jab manzil ke pahuchne par apane saath hote hai
saanso ki sargam , chamakati shabnam hota hai
bundo ki cham cham , sitaro ki mahfil hota hai
pyaas me saawan , dil ki dhadkan hota hai
hamsafar ka sachha pyaar khuda ki ebaadat hota hai
thanks all

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Posted: 13 years ago
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@Archu...Really beautiful and so heart touching lines you have penned down..👏

You write so well and love this one..so true..

kyu darna tufaano se hamesha
kyu ghabraana mushkilo se aur rehna paresha
zindagi to khuda ka diya anmol tohafa hai
har pal khushi se jiyo yahi zindagi ka falasafa hai
auro ko khushi dene me hi khushiya paane ka asali raaz hai
dusro ki taklif ko mehsus karana hi insaaniyat ka ehsaas hai..


Great job.👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: saveeta24

@Archu...Really beautiful and so heart touching lines you have penned down..👏


You write so well and love this one..so true..

<font color="#cc33ff"><font color="#990066"></font><font color="#cc0099">kyu darna tufaano se hamesha</font></font>
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<font color="#cc0099"> kyu ghabraana mushkilo se aur rehna paresha</font>
<font color="#cc0099"> zindagi to khuda ka diya anmol tohafa hai</font>
<font color="#cc0099"> har pal khushi se jiyo yahi zindagi ka falasafa hai</font>
<font color="#cc0099"> auro ko khushi dene me hi khushiya paane ka asali raaz hai</font>
<font color="#990066"> </font><font color="#cc0099">dusro ki taklif ko mehsus karana hi insaaniyat ka ehsaas hai..</font>


<font color="#cc0099">Great job.👍🏼</font>
<strong>

thank u very much ...glad u like it...u know mujhe achanak laga ki kuch likhana chahiye to bas mai jab PC par baithi and apane aap shayari banati gayi at a time...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Archu I read it super slow
:)
Great job as alway

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good job Archu👏
Every word written was so meaningful. Thanks a lot for sharing it with us
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Posted: 13 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: cocojatti92

Archu I read it super slow

:)
Great job as alway

thanks a lottt...thanks for read it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#7

Originally posted by: lakshmi42

Good job Archu👏

Every word written was so meaningful. Thanks a lot for sharing it with us

thank u lakshmi...achha laga ki tumhe pasand aaya...sab tum sabke liye hi to hai...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice as always! just one suggestion, in the last one, everything should be 'hoti' instead of 'hota' as its 'mehfil hoti hai', 'dhakan hoti hai' etc

love the golden rose and butterfly!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: hiri_piri

very nice as always! just one suggestion, in the last one, everything should be 'hoti' instead of 'hota' as its 'mehfil hoti hai', 'dhakan hoti hai' etc


love the golden rose and butterfly!

thanks thank u for suggestion...next time se dhyan rakhungi...ya thats my fav too...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW Beautiful Wordings Dear.

Loved it , you are very talented.

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