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when will u update? update soon na
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Net not working properly dear!!! promise will update as soon as it gets okay!!! sorry...
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Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi

Ruchs, me back.

Gosh, poore update mey Maan ki halat dekhne layak thi. Geet is so nave. Vicky toh pakka gaya. I totally loved the cadbury silk and popcorn scene, good one. I am still laughing. Interval tak yeh haal hai toh aage kya hoga. Overall, blast.

Do cont soon and do PM me.


He he!! Thank you sweets!! Love you!!😳
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UPDATING TONIGHT!!!😳
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YippiE!!!!!!!!! Waiting di😃
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UPDATING dears!!

Though a normal size one, sorry its not a looong one today!!!
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Thank you so much guys for such lovely comments and sooo many likes!! Me very very happy!!!😃

Thanks for bearing with me as me delayed a lot!! Sorry!!😭

Me clarifying a few things dears, Geet has always grown in a very protected environment first under Maan and then under Vicky, and hence she is still not aware of many worldly things, in fact even me didn't know the meaning of Po*n until a few months back!! he he!!😆

Secondly, Geet never said that she didn't know there is such a picture, she just asked why it had such a strange name, me guess its a normal reaction...😳

And lastly me has not seen Dirty Picture yet so sorry for any mistakes!! He HE!!😆

After this update, no killing allowed... Okie???


PART - 48


Poor Maan was at a complete loss of words!! He badly wanted to laugh and cry at the same time- Laugh, as he had never heard such weird logic relating Popcorn, chocolate and of course Po*n; and cry at his stupid decision of protecting his little wife's innocence... She was too nave and innocent for her own good!!!

"Bataiye na???" Geet urged, as she knew the movie would soon start once again…

"Umm… uhhh wo…. Geet actually it… that thing means… umm…"

Maan was desperately trying to form a sentence, he didn't want to lie to her and he was unable to tell the truth also… He was stuck in a super embarrassing situation!!! But when he saw Geet looking at him with her doe like innocent eyes curiously and inquisitively, he took a deep breath and finally blurted out…

"Uhh Po*n means like umm ya.. its like F*cking but capturing it on a camera so that other people can see it!!!"

Maan took a deep breath and looked at Geet to gauge her reaction knowing well that his little wify would give an out of the world reaction now and he didn't want to miss it!!!

Maan's words had barely sunk in Geet's mind when her eyes turned as big as saucers and she blushed crimson red!!! She couldn't believe that after all these years; she was once again caught in this situation!!

"Chhee… Aisa kaise ho sakta hai??? Its so gross!!!" She said making faces, still unable to believe…

"Abb ismein ganda kya hai Geet??? Tumhe yaad hai kuchh saal pehle tumne mujhe kya kaha thha???" Maan asked smirking…

She still remembered the day when she said "I f*ck you…" to Maan… She just hid her face in the crook of his neck thoroughly embarrassed making Maan chuckle…

"Wo to tab mujhe uska matlab pata nahi thha na…" She explained herself meekly…

"Ohh right but abb toh tumhe uska practical experience bhi hai na and the proof lies right here…" Maan said keeping a hand on her tummy gently while Geet merely blushed further. Maan could feel the heat emitting from her cheeks on his neck and teased her further…

"Waise??? Now you don't want to??"

"Nahi main wo… main toh yeh keh rahi thhi ki woo… uhh koi camera par… woh…"


Geet desperately tried to make Maan understand still hiding herself…

"Kya hua Jaan??? Tumhe matlab samajh mein nahi aaya to kya main aur detail mein like practically we could you know…" Maan teased her further thoroughly enjoying himself, after a long time today he was finally witnessing his little wify's super innocent antics and he was loving it!!!

That was it; the next second Geet looked at him totally mortified and pushed him away getting off his lap!!!

"Arrey Jaan kya hua… Main to bas mazaak kar raha thha… Wo dekho movie start bhi ho gayi… Look…"

Maan changed the topic seeing that poor Geet was super duper embarrassed… But when Maan turned his head from the screen to where Geet was standing he saw no one was there, he chuckled knowing well that once again his Jaan had escaped…

"Kya faayda Jaan, aana to tumhe mere paas hi padega na ghar par!!" He smirked…

But unknown to him, his little wify had her own plans; she was still very much present in the mall and was watching his reaction hiding behind the door cursing her stupidity!!!

"Uff Geet tub hi na kitni jhalli hai… Kar di na phir se gadbad!! Abb Maan to mere maze le kar hi chhodnege parr uss sey pehley mujhe kuchh karna hoga ki unka attention kahi aur divert ho jaaye…."

Geet was busy thinking when all of a sudden someone kept a hand on her shoulder, she frowned thinking Maan caught her and turned making a baby face…

"Maan main…"

Words stuck in her mouth and she froze seeing the person in front of her she was just about to shout but before that someone held her mouth, and she was dragged to the backside fire exit of the mall, she kept on struggling and finally when the hold on her mouth loosened up a bit, she bit the person's hand and ran away shouting with all her might…

"MAAANNN…."

Maan was just about to enter the lift when he heard Geet's blood curdling scream making him stupefied, as soon as he turned, a figure came crashing in his arms and hugging him with all it's might…

It was none other than Geet who was by now shaking and literally washing his shirt with her tears….

"M.. Maan wo waha…"

Geet pointed towards the stairs when Maan too noticed the person standing there smirking at him…

"Kaise ho Mr. Maan Singh Khurana???"

"BRIJ…" Maan uttered getting furious…

Though he was a little taken aback to see him there but not shocked as he never believed that the leech could die so easily… But at the same time he was worried for Geet's safety, he still remembered what happened when Geet was in hospital fighting for her and their babies' life…

PAST

Maan picked up his phone and once again all colour drained from his face…

"WHATTT!!!!!"

Maan was completely stunned… His anger rose to an all time high as he gritted his teeth…

"Fine… Good work and do keep me informed…"

He disconnected the call and looked at his family… He closed his eyes to keep his temper in check reminding himself that this was not some client meeting or supplier, this was his family… he took a deep breath and finally asked-

"Pari kahan hai???"

Everyone looked at one another hearing Maan's calm voice knowing well that behind this calmness a volcano was ready to erupt anytime, just that they were a little confused that why was he so angry???

"Maan bete, Pari ki tabiyat theek nahi hai na to wo ghar par hi hai…" Dadima replied…

"Ya RIGHT and may I ask ki uske saath ghar par kaun hai???"

Everyone realized their folly immediately; they were so worried about Geet that it completely slipped from their mind that someone must stay back with Pari…

"Pari theek to hai na???" Naina asked her son getting scared for her daughter's safety…

"NAHI… SHE IS NOT OKAY IN FACT SHE WENT MISSING RIGHT AFTER ALL OF US LEFT…."

PRECAP

More Into The PAST!!!!

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PREV- PART 47 NEXT -PART 49

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Hope no one is going to kill me dears!! Fingers crossed!!!😳

Me Also me wanted to ask did you like the TWISTTT!!😆

You can find all my work at my blog too- Ruchi's DEN!!!!

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Edited by ruchs - 12 years ago

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