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Posted: 12 years ago

read it one go

indeed say

its too good...

awsome parts

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Posted: 12 years ago
part 11
nice part...
so Maan is possessive of Geet...
past, oh ho Daadima bhi na...
shes such a planner...
but Geet didnt feel anything for Maan...
and Maan knows the details of Geet...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Teaser is amazing.

Agar aisa teaser hai toh update
Kaisa hoga???

I m wondering wats going in Maan's
Devil mind..

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Posted: 12 years ago
AWESOME UPDATE DEAR WAITING FOR NEXT
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Past




Geet ran happily to him and pocked his back...desperately...panting...

He switched off his treadmill and turned irritated...to see who the hell disturbed him at this hour...


He was so irritated...it's his daily rutine...work out for 30 min...and till then no one is allowed to disturb him...not even daadima...so he was eager to blast that person...who had the audasity to disturb him at this hour...


He turned behind at got a shock of his life...


...a young girl...in a white suit...panting...scared...and very very beautiful...her beautiful eyes showed desperation and helplessness...


...Thats all the Maan singh Kurrana's brilliant brain gathered...


he was blank...his brain was blank...he looked at her with an unknown expression...his eyes were fixed on her face...for how long...he had no idea...


Geet saw he turned...he was angry...and his facial expression showed that he was planning to shout at her...she got afraid and backed away a step...but he didnt say anything...his face showed an emotion...which she didnt recognise...


...anger?

...worry?...

admiration...?

...Then What...????!!!

getting curious to know his expression's name...geet suddenly realised...

the man was HANDSOME..


...and not just ''Handsome''...she had never seen such handsome man ever in her tiny life...!!!


Her legs got weak...feeling his gaze on her face...she thought her knees could not carry her weight anymore...she felt weak and timid in front of him...in front of his gaze...


...weak...WEAK!!!!...DAADIMA...Oh..God..!!


Suddenly geet snapped from her state and went a few step forward...He was still looking at her...curiously...now thinking...what is a girl doing in his gym...in the middle of the night...with him...all alone...?is he hallucinating...



Geet grabbed his hand and pulled him down from the treadmill...he looked at her amusingly...this girl is real...but what is she doing here...??


Geet pulled him forward...gesturing him to come with her...and here geet was feeling guilty...helpless...cause he didnt know sign language and here is no pen and paper to write down the situation...


Geet looked around,,, helplessly to find a pen...she ran to the cabinet to look for a pen...and maan's eye fell on her back

''...Oh! God...Damn...!''his brain screamed

Her dupatta was hanging on her shoulder...she forgot about her dress...so she wasn't consious about it...her white marble like smooth back was teasing his senses...

Luckily...geet found a pen...she hurriedly ran back at him...she wrote on her palm...and showed it to him...

''Daadima sick...glucometer in hall room...come with me plz...''

Maan suddenly snapped from his thoughts...his brain started to work then...this girl...kahin ye GEET to nehi...the mute girl...!!

Seeing him quiet...geet got more and more impaitient...she took his palm and wrote ...

''plz...i'm lost...daadima ke paas le chaliye...''

Maan read this and said in a cold voice...'' Follow me...''

Geet followed him...the large corridor was full dark now...geet now realised...this place is is huge...and is scary...she was scared of dark...so she came close to maan and followed him...and here maan was thinking deeply...

This girl...this is geet...but she is so...so what...anyone can be beautiful...what's so special about that...but...she doesn't look evil...

He looked back at her...and eyed her full form...beautiful...but why she is not looking sexy?...if anyone wears this dress she would definitely look sexy...she is looking...looking...

...Cute...damn...!

Maan stopped...geet didnt see that...so she bumped into his back...maan turned to her...

'' R u geet...?''

Geet nodded.

''so u'r the girl...who's mouth is permanently sealed...''


Geet looked at him with her big cute doe shaped eyes...no one has said something like that to her...she looked down nodding her head..feeling hurt ...

''Glucometer is always in daadima's washroom...there's the door...go straight...if u think wearing this dress u can seduce me in gym then u have failed...badly...cause it didnt affect me carnally...''


Geet then realised about her dress...she hurriedly covered her body with her dupatta...and started to leave..



''...khubsurat ho...''

he couldn't help but stop her...for one last time...


She froze...she dared not looking at him again.

Maan walked towards her wiping his wet body with a towel...he stood just in front of her...his head lowered and tilted a little to see her full face which was downcasted..


her head was leveled to his chest...and the sight was not at all helping her to controll her rapid heart beats...in fact it was making the beats faster...she never experienced such encounter...


''dusre larki ki tarha parler jaane ki zaroorat nehi hain tume...''


Her face turned red to hear his open complement...but her blush was short lived as his next word made her head shot up at him...and tears to flow...


''...aur tub bhi tum iss time aur face ko utilize kartiho...rich,old...millioniers ko patane ke liye...hai na...? ''



geets eyes became moist...yes she was an orphan...but never in her life she has been treated like this...she looked at him...


Maan saw her face clearly now...her eyes were teary and her lips had a little pout to controll her cry...in short...mesmerising...lovely..

Maan eyed her for a whole minute...then in a snap controlled himself.

''just 18 ho...isnt it a little odd to droll over someone with 11 years of age difference...?''

Geet whole face turned beet red...she was cought red handed...and she was gilty...she turned her head down...being sorry...and little humiliated.

Maan walked round her...looking at her figure...her hight...her hair...her complection...then stopped standing in front of her...

''...its true that u r beautiful...but u don't have the quality to attract men for acute primitive urges...so,u r no match for me...''saying this he went away...but he turned his head one last time before going again for his unfinished work out...

She was standing with a cute confused face...she didnt get the last line...'acute primitive urges' means...?


Maan understood by seeing her facial expression that she didnt get what he ment...he smiled a little...'' idiot '' muttered and then walked away.



Meanwhile.




Daadima called Nakul as soon as geet left...
''haan...lights off kardi na...tumhe pata hai na...ki just stairs aur gym ki raste ki lights rehni chahiye...?''

''Haan daadima...it is done...''

''Then jaab geet gym mein enter karegi taab tum saab raste ki lights off kardena...ok?...only then ur free to go...''

''Geet ma'm gym ke paas hi hai...she is entering the gym...theek hai to mein lights off karke nikal jaati hoon...namaste daadima...''Nakul said and cut the line.

Smiling at her victory...daadima slept off happily...



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Maan came back...but he was confused at something...she was looking so beautiful...so y he was'nt aroused...he should be...hai na...he didnt have any carnal thought...insted...she is cute...thats all his brain can think of her right now...

It's was her innocence which stops anyone to think such dirty things about her...her face...it attacts people to admire her...her one smile...it makes people fall on there knees happily...

... not able to concentrate...he went to his study...switched on the laptop...and opened her pic...and..



...and...?



...He got blown away...geet in a saari...in a temple...a vail on her head and giving meals to poor people...

He just kept looking at her pic...just then his phone rang...he lostly recieved...'' Hello...'

''hi...baby...sam here...i just wanted to know that ki wo bitch...''

He cut the call straight away and and switched off the phone...he turned off the laptop feeling irritated...and helpless..


'' I cant give in to ur plan that easily...geet...i have to know more about u...so beware...''






Edited by Temporary99 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update.. so Maan is flat over her from the first site itself but he is controlling.. ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 12
nice part...
hes such a sadu...
poor Geet baby...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
poor geet
dont know dadis plan
but fall 4 maan at first sight..
n maan ..he is frying her with words..
wat s he upto...😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsem update maan lost in geet but insulting her



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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb one...
Maan was so rude...
but mann s affected a lot..

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