FF- Sacrifices for loveParts 1-5

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey guys, Im new. I already wrote a fanfic but it wasnt good. SO this is my second attempt and im making it different. Its about sacrifices and sorrow but i promise that it will be a good ending. So please bear with it and tell me whether i should stop or continue.

PI- Cont- aug11/ Jigyasa grins and is happy that now she owns the walia house and the business. Everybody is having fun at the party. Bani is a little disturbed of being at the house after all that happend. She goes into the living room and sits at the window [ it has a built in seat] She remebers their consumation night. Then she remebers her childhood memories with her mother. Bani gets the phone to make a call to seema but then she hears jiggs and roshni on the phone.

Jigyasa- Haan roshni, now all the walia industries are in ranveer and my name. Jai will have to marry you to get money to take care of that darling witch wife of his and his illegitmate child. Now for sure he will divorce bani. A tear falls from bani's eyes and she puts down the phone. She goes back to the party and bani was in a shock.

Ranveer comes in and everyone is happy to see him. After that he walks to bani.

B- Ranveer have you no shame? You joined hands with your mother and roshni. I cant believe you are mr. walia's blood, you tricked him and transferred all the papers in your mothers name. By doing this jai will marry roshni just to get money. You are the most lowest man i've ever met in my life. Ranveer grins at bani. They both go back to the party. Bani is upset and tears fall from her eyes.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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heyyy...sounds interesting šŸ‘ plz do continue šŸ˜›
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then?????????????? omgggg don't leave us hanging.. then wat happens..that was gr888 šŸ‘
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its great!!! plz continue soon!!!!
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awesome.....please conrinue soon 😊
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wow šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘ plzzzzzzzzz contu............
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and then?... come on, continue soon plz!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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that was excellent. how on earth can u say that is not good? 😔 plzzz cont! you can't leave us hanging there. plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz post the next part soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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That was a gr8 start!!
Plz continue soon yaar, u can't leave us hanging there.

Luv Taz
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Posted: 19 years ago
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part2] Tears fall from bani's eyes. Ranveer tells everyone that he has an announcement. He brings bani to the centre of the party. Everyone is quiet and is waiting for the announcement.

Ranveer- Batao bani mami, tell everyone the secret that you just found out. Tell everyone. More tears fall from bani's eyes. Jai, Aditya and Massi are shocked to see bani crying. Bani then talks.

Bani- The walia group of industries no longer belong to jai walia, it now belongs to jigyasa and ranveer walia. They tricked you jai into signing papers that were meant to transfer your property into their name. Therefore, this house is no longer yours but jigyasa and ranveer's house. And also.... Bani is about to say something when roshni puts her hand over bani's mouth. And throws bani out the house. Jai was numb and was in such a shock that he didnt even run after bani.

Jai walks up to ranveer and gives him a good walia slap. He then walks up to jigyasa and gives her the hardest slap he ever could.

Jai- I never could imagine that my own blood would ever decieve me like this. All that hard work i achieved is all gone down the drain to you and your illegitmate child. I kept this secret from my best friend for 25 years. Aditya, Ranveer is not your child he is your best friend along time ago vedants son. You only have 2 kids with jigyasa and that is anu and saahil.

Aditya_ I also have a confession to make. Me and jigyasa are even. The reason why i always stood up for bani is because bani is my daughter and i love her. I only have three kids that i love and that is Bani, Anu and Saahil. EVERYONE IS IN SHOCK! { ITS CONFESSION NIGHT} šŸ˜†

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