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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update!!!
Loved every bit of it dear.
Why is ranvir so hell bent on telling abhya parents.
Anyways update soon ok
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Posted: 13 years ago
@ Rmuk
as i wrote in one of my earlier posts that ranbir just needs abhya's parents as a reason not to kill her...kyuki agar unhe sab pata hoga to ranbir ko apne aap ko control karne k vaja mil jayegi...plus ranbir is not from this new generation ...so this also changes his mentality...!!! well you'll know more of it in my next posts...!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
@temptation okk thanks for explaining, I got it, waiting for next part ok.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update.. But plz let ranbir knw about abhya secret.. As he tld his secrts 2 abhya,he has da rite 2 knw d truth...
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Posted: 13 years ago
😊cool update and mujhe abhya and ranbir dono ki convertation padh kar hansi aa rahi thi actully ranbir ek vampire ho kar bhi ek teenage guy ki terha behaave kar raha hai.
wo bilkul bhi abhay jaisa nahi hai and i like this warna abhay ke mood swing se to mera mood kharab ho jata tha poor pia but happy for abhya.😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
all part r awesome...
plz pm me whn u will update..
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Posted: 13 years ago
welcome Marwa.A.W to my posts...PKYEK 2...will definately pm u...


and @ tanvipareek ya i personally love ranbir's character...!!!
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will update as soon as possible...i am not getting time to write...pakka 3-4 dino i will update...and a very interesting update is lying up...i am sure you all are going to love it...
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EPISODE 26


HEY GUYS ITS A REQUEST OR RATHER A SUGGESTION WHEN YOU READ THIS EPISODE THEN PLAY THE SONG ABHI ABHI' FROM THE MOVIE JISM 2...BECAUSE I WROTE WHILE LISTENING TO THAT SONG...SO TO GIVE THE PROPER FEEL PLEASE DO LISTEN TO THE SONG OR ANY OTHER ROMANTIC SONG YOU LIKE AND ONCE IT FINISHES PLAY IT ONCE AGAIN TRUST ME YOU WILL ENJOY IT 10 TIMES MORE...THIS EPISODE IS WRITTEN IN SUCH A WAY...FOR YOUR CONVENIENCE I AM GIVING THE LINK AS WELL BELOW-

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NARRATIVE IS ABHYA...

I was like really exited for today...time bahut mushkil se kat raha tha...bahut mushkil se 10 baje hai...but abhi bhi ek ghanta bacha hai...ek taraf darr bhi lag raha tha kyuki ranbir ne kaha tha that he will show the where actually vampires belong...i was idealy sitting on my bed for around 1 hour now...kabhi idhar se udhar ghum rahi thi...i also decided my clothes...which were my new dark blue jeans and a floral print top and kyuki aaj thodi thand bhi thi so i also took out a brown leather jacket...and today i decided to wear shoes ...pata nahi man kar raha tha...but somehow i got to thought jahan maine decide kiya bas bahut ho gaya ...humara relation mai koi jhoot nahi hoga...mujhe batana hi hoga ranbir ko mera sach...fir chahe uske baad mujhe voh akela chod de...i'll have to face this...aur shayd ranbir iss sach k accept kar hi le...kyuki 3 saal baad toh mai theekho jaongi...i hope voh samjhe...i looked at the clock it was 10:45 ...oh no...mai late na ho jao ab...i quickly changed my pajamas...got out ,waved a bye to my mom...though i told ranbir i will tell my parents...but no not so soon...ranbir sorry...i will lie you today...i just told her ki mai dehradun ghoomne ka rahi hoon...my royal blue audi was glowing in the day...though the sunlight was minimal but still it shined...i reached to that turning point at exact 10:55...i opened my passenger door...so that ranbir could get easily in...i was waiting ...it was 11 now...i was stating infront of the road...thinking about the way he will take me...i suddenly felt some air on my face and hair...and i slowly looked on my left side...oh gosh ranbir was already sitting there...

"you scared me..."

"did i ...really" i made a obvious face...then i noticed he was also wearing a leather brown jacket...and inside was a white t-shirt...he also carried a black shawl...got it the sunlight burn vampires so as a precaution he have got it...i wish the sunlight does not harm me...

"okay got it.. sorry" he spoke and i laughed and started to look outside the window...

he spoke again "hey we look the same" i turned to him...and over acted that as if i did'nt got...and looked to my jacket...

"yeah...wait let me take this out..."

"no...please don't ...i love being matched with you" i smiled

"okay so ready for the place..."

"ummm...ready"

"so start driving then...i'll tell you the directions...first straight..." i started driving...

"atleast tell me ranbir how does the place you are taking me looks like..."

"come on abhya i am sure you can wait...it's not that big surprise..."

"oh really!!!"

"yeah" he made a confused face..."what do you expect it to be...and take left"

"mmm...a dark place...like a den or may be a coffin"

he began to laugh out loud...very loud...he was never so loud before..."what??" i asked

"left again...and you are wrong its not even close..."

"no den??"

"not at all"

"not even a coffin!"

"a big no...its not your actual cartoon or films type..."

i began to laugh on my imagination then...

"right from here..."

"then i am really looking forward to it..."

"i hope it meets your expectation" my fear got a bit less...thank god it wasn't any of the dark scary places...

"take left again...its near by now..." i nodded...

after 5 minutes he spoke..."abhya stop there beside that board" why stop ...have we reached or is there a problem...

"what happened??"

"i am sure would not mind trekking dehradun's hills..."

"no I won't but...hills ranbir...thoda"

He cut me

"don't worry abhya'tumhe girne nahi dunga mai'"

"nahi ranbir...well leave it...lets go..." I parked the car...and we both got out...i looked at the scenic beauty it was just awesome...the trees were shining bright...pleasant weather that too being with ranbir...was all I need...lovely...ranbir moved on the starting of hill about 8 steps ahead...

"abhya lets go" he offered his hand to me...i slowly gave my right hand to him...and with a little pressure he got me up ...we started walking now...between the trees...

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NARRATIVE IS RANBIR

Her hand was soft and her foot steps were so carefully kept...i wanted to pick her up and run...but that would be exposure totally...i don't want her to get scared because of my speed..we were now walking for about 10 minutes...i didn't left her hand even once...

We were about half way...in the middle of trees..

"getting bored?" I asked her because now her expressions changed...

"no not really...i am loving all these new things...these different insects...beautiful leaves...huge trunks...in short I have never been to any place like this earlier...it's all really new to me...so that's why I am a bit silent just to concentrate on all this well...so that I never forget this moment spent with you..." she smiled to me...and I smiled her back...

I don't know this girl is driving me crazy...I by every moment start loving her even more...it gets deep with every second I spend with her...now I feel I am totally incomplete without her...suddenly I got in the conversation that I had with mini in the morning..


#### (flashback)

"oh wow bhai...tu aaj finnaly abhya ko kahin akele lekar jar aha hai...if you wouldn't have planned this ,then I was about to make it...good you made it...nahi toh you are well aware of my plans..."and she laughed

"ofcourse I do know your weird plans...lucky I made before you" I raised my eyebrows...then mini became to think something , I couldn't resist and I started to read her mind and mini was thinking the weird thing which I couldn't even think for a second...

"stop it here mini please..."

"what ...you are reading my mind..."

"yeah...so stop it...how can you even think that...abhya is .." she cut me

"wait wait ...maine iss mai galat kya socha..."

"mini..." I glared her with my most wide open eyes...

"ranbir what's wrong in kissing her.."

"no mini you can't just think like that...it's not possible..not even in your thought..."

"hey...tell me one thing...don't you love each other"

"we do...but that doesn't" she cut me

"so whats wrong in that"

"whats not mini..."

"you are still in those 1980's where kissing was like a sin.."

"no mini...it's not that...how can I kiss a human...abhya is delicate...i cannot harm her..plus her smell...what if I harm her.."

"oh come on bro...you are not this..you can do that...i am sure you can control your ache and of course the pressure...when you can love her...toh usse bada kya hoga...i am sure she will not get harmed at all..."

"no mini...please ...nothing will happen like this...i will not kiss her..never..."

"how lame is that ranbir...see "she stopped because karan came from the door...

"hey love...let me explain..."and he sat beside me... "so ranbir see it's like how can you even think of loving her if there's no physical attachment...trust me that will only improve your relation...try it once ..atleast once..you will not harm her..i know that..."

"nahi karan...mai agar aapne aap ko rok nahi paaya toh abhya will die..."

"you will ranbir...trust me tumhara control badega...just believe me and try atleast once..." I nodded...but I knew mai aisa kuch nahi kar paonga...but agar haan nahi bola toh yeh mera sar kha jaenge...

####(flashback ends)

"have we reached...?" my eyes directly went towards her delicate lips... , she spoke again "ranbir..are you fine" oh hell what was I doing ..she will get scared ..control ranbir...

"oh yeah ...were are close ...5 minutes..."

"okay lets go then" we started walking again...oh hell man ...i was thinking to kiss her...no man ranbir tu aisa kuch nahi karega...controlyour emotions...shayad I want to kiss her...but I cannot...this mini...she is the reason for all this weird thinking..i got away from this thought by looking on the way...

We have reached yes...just a left turn and abhya will be in a special place...

"abhya take left from here..."

After about 2 minutes I spoke "abhya we have reached" and we both stoped...the place I thought for was a place which was unique of course...the trees here were in exact circle...as if they are some decoration for this place in the jungle..

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THE NARRATIVE IS ABHYA

I started to move round and round looking through the whole place , it was just so natural...the trees were equally shaped...so lush green...the sunlight was reaching only at the top of trees...the scene was fantastic...the most amazing part was there no bush no other tree in between the belt of those round trees...the grass was so green and dry ,looked like as if someone's taking care of this...that's surely nature..and its wonders.the breeze was so good...my hair were flowing with it...i closed my eyes and waved my hands upward...feeling the breeze...and i liked the noise of moving leaves...

ranbir spoke from behind "how is it?"

i turned to him "i am glad i came ...an amazing place this is..."

he smiled "yeh hi hum vampires ki asli jagah...jungle..."

"i love this place...yeh kitni sundar jagah hai"

"abhya jitni ye sundar jagah hai yeh utni hi daravani hai tumhare liye..."

"nahi ranbir don't start again ,tum se har related cheez mere liye sundar hai"

"tumhe samjhana mushkil hai...chalo lets sit...you would be tired" nahi ranbir you are wrong with that...mai nahi thaki...kash tumhe bata paati kyu...we started moving to sit ...he sat...and I sat beside him...

We began to stare each other...because of the wind my hair fell on my face...i was about to put it back my ear but before that ranbir's hand came towards my face...and he put that strand back to my ear...i couldn't resist my blush...voh aapne aap hi mere chehre pe aa gaya...

"abhya tumne apne mom dad ko bataya mere bare mai" oho fir se nahi ranbir...i didn't spoke , he spoke again "bolo na abhya"

"I did not"

"why abhya...you should have" he looked at the ground..

"ranbir...please understand me as well...mai dad ko nahi bata sakti..abhi..kabhi na kabhi toh bataongi...tum please aise mat bolo.." his left hand was facing my body...i held my right hand over his hand..

"abhya tum mujhe bhi toh samjho...aaj mai tumhe yahan akele lekar aaya hoon...kisi ko nahi pata...mujhe ek reason chahiye tha apne aap ko control karne ke liye..."

"nahi ranbir...i know you can...tum mujhe nuksan kaise pahuchaoge...ranbir don't you love me" I held his left hand up from my right hand and supported it by my left hand...now he kept his right hand on the left side of my face..i felt good with his touch..

"no abhya...aisa nahi hai...i cannot live without you..and you know that well..but still mai galti se bhi galti nahi karna chahta..its just that"

"bas ranbir tumhare paas reason hai...you cannot live without me neither can I ...and this is enough...and trust me mai dad ko jald hi batane wali hoon" I smiled to him and he nodded ...now he brought his face closer to mine...his lips were very close to my eyes...i suddenly got an urge to kiss him...but no abhya ranbir will not like it...control...he then suddenly shifted the right side of my hair totally back...now my right side neck was bare I could feel the breeze..he brought his face there and his his left hand was on the left side of my face as before.. I could very much feel his cold breath on my side neck...what was he doing ...!! I closed my eyes ...was he biting me or what...he then took a long breath in ..and released..he then took another breath in..i didn't have the courage to open my eyes till now...next moment I realized there was a sudden zap of breeze around me..i opened my eyes ranbir was gone..my eyes went wide in shock...ranbir mujhe akela chod ke chala gaya ...but kyu aur kahan...maine kuch galat toh nahi kiya hai..fir ranbir kahan chala gaya..i shouted while rising up "Ranbir...ranbir...kaha ho ranbir...please come back" I looked by moving in a circle ...i couldn't see or hear him...nahi ranbir...where are you?? I suddenly heard the voice of a falling tree from far ..a human could have not heard that well..what was that...was that ranbir or someone else...or is ranbir fighting to someone...no..suddenly some figure started running very fast round and round with the trees...that was ranbir..his brown jacket was visible..

I souted again "ranbir...kya hua..."

he shouted back "abhya go back ...i cannot kill you please..jao'it's difficult top control..please go away from my life...i cannot bear you..jao yahan se bhag jao...mai aur tum sath nahi ho sakte...kabhi nahi...kabhi nahi" and he went in the deep jungle before I could speak..i got through his words again...he wanted to leave me...why ranbir...i cannot leave you..tumhe achanak kya ho gaya hai... i began to cry from within...but what is this cannot even cry properly...tears are not coming from my eyes...is that one more vampire effect...helpless on what ranbir said I began to shout badly...i also began to run around the trees..and one new thing now..i run faster than before..i ignored this and ran with my maximum strength ..how can say like this..i began to shout again...and now I stoped... infront of a tree..i was breathing badly now...i shouted again and this time I patted a tree with both my hands...and it fell..i was in more shock now..i am helpless...i patted one more tree..it also fell down.. and I shouted "ranbir I love you please don't go ..come back..." then I ran in the centre and went on my knees... though tears were not coming I began to cry with my voice and kept my hand on my face...i was in a pathetic situation..then suddenly two hands holds my shoulder... I faced the person it was ranbir.. "ranbir" I got up and hugged him tightly.. "don't go...ranbir ...please don't go...mai tumhare bina nahi reh sakti" he hugged me back

"abhya tum theek ho...thank god...tumhe kuch hua nahi ..agar tumhe kuch hota toh mai apne aap ko kabhi maaf nahi kar sakta tha..i heard trees falling here..but I think that was some natural event.."

"please don't leave me ranbir..."

"I am sorry abhya..i love you too...kabhi nahi chodunga tumhe..mujhe maaf kardo..control nahi kar paya tumhari smell ko..i am sorry abhya maine tumhe darra diya I shouldn't have done that...i should'nt have ran from here..damn mera control kahan gaya abhya I don't know.." I cut him.

"it's okay ranbir...but promise me you won't ever do that again..bhale mujhe mar dena but mujhse dur mat jaana kabhi bhi.."

"I won't ever" he kissed my forehead..."sorry for scaring you"

"nahi ranbir mai darri nahi..bus shock lag gaya mujhe... I thought you will never return"

he parted from our hug "oh come on that was very much visible on your face" I made an angry face "okay kaha na sorry...mai control karne ki poori koshish karunga...aur kabhi aisi situation ayi to pehle hi bata dunga" I hugged him back...thank god ranbir didn't got to know ki voh trees maine giraye the...pheww!! ranbir ki bahaon mai I felt so relaxed..and then I parted away...
now he held his both hands behind my cheek ,on my jaw line basically..wait was he kissing me or this is something else again..i mean if he kissing me I can also not stop now I think..ish was so right...but ufff guessing what ranbir is doing is very difficult..he bend his face down close to my face..our lips were just an inch away..i closed my eyes...then suddenly clouds began making noise and it began to rain suddenly and I opened my eyes...he went away.. and he mumbled to himself "even nature does not wants" then he went to pick his black shawl "abhya lets leave I don't want you to get wet and then ill.." he covered me with the thick black shawl.. "abhya would you mind if I pick you and run" ..before I could say anything he lifted me.. "close your eyes...you might feel puckish other wise" I immediately closed my eyes..the rain began heavily by this time..and then I could feel the breeze , hard this time..i closed my eyes very hard in fear that I could get hurt "abhya daro mat girne nahi dunga tumhe" I did'nt replied...the shawl fell down from my upper body..now I was feeling the big-big water drops on my face and body..the next moment I realized he droped me down..i was still shaking with the running flow
"abhya keys" I was not in my senses...he himself took from my pocket..and the next moment when I opened my eyes I was sitting on the back seat of my car and ranbir was beside me..with the water bottle...

"feeling fine?"he asked me

"yeah...but I am wet" I touched my hair "eee...they are too wet.."

"that is the reason we are sitting back...taki hum dry ho sake..aur uske baad we'll go in front and go home..it's 2 right now"

"just 2...come on you can afford more time...no I won't go so early"

"acha okay..but atleast you need to dry yourself otherwise you will get ill" i began to look outside the window of the car thinking that how to tell ranbir about my secret..come on abhya tujhe batana hi hoga...before it gets late tu bol de abhi issi waqt isse better time nahi milega tujhe..ya toh ranbir will leave you or will accept you..agar aage aisa hua hua to shayad tu mar jaegi and abhi sirf depression mai jaegi...tu ranbir ko dhoka kaise de sakti hai..kabhi bna kabhi he will get to know it...tu vaise bhi zada time nahi chupa paegi...say it right now..bas decided I will say him now...here only..i turned to him..he was staring me in his most loving expression... "ranbir..mujhe tumse kuch..." he kept his finger on my lips ..now he kept his both hands on my jaw line like before..i became numb..was he kissing me...i don't know how to kiss...i have never...i wish kuch galat na ho...he began to turn and bend his face close to mine...i closed my eyes..now he moved my face closer to his..i could feel his breath on my lips very well...i think we were just a centimeter away...the next moment I could feel his lips on my upper lips..i did not showed any movement...it felt as if he was experimenting something...then I kept my hands on his chest...and then tried to suck his lower lip..i suppose kuch aisa hi karna hoga...i moved myself over him..but he didn't moved..was something wrong...i ignored and tried to kiss him more...i was about to hold his nape and he suddenly parted away..but did not removed his hands...i opened my eyes...now he was looking at my lips..and spoke "did I hurt you abhya"

Hurt how was that possible...i was enjoying this moment like nothing before.. "no.."I answered in a confused state and he started smiling as if he has achieved something..i got back a bit and bit my lower lip and asked him "why were you asking that" this time his smile was wide with his perfect shaped teeth.." nothing.." and now he moved his hands to my back and hugged me..i was still confused and then he kissed my forehead

"abhya I love you..you don't know how I feel I right now...everybody feels I was coward to even kiss you but I have proved them wrong"

"matlab" I couldn't understand till now...

"abhya I was damn scared to kiss you...mujhe darr tha kahin mai tumhe hurt na kar doon..i mean you are just a human..mujhe apni feelings bahut control karni padi..but I did it..without harming you ...i never knew I was capable of kissing you , a human...you won't understand where I stand in front of me now...this felt wonderful..i don't know bout you...but for me it make wonders abhya.."

I parted from his hug "what do you mean that I don't know...of course it is an overall different feeling first loving you and now kissing you...as for a vampire is as for a human ranbir.." though I wasn't a complete human..but closer

"no abhya...vampire's emotion are far more stronger than any human emotion"

"I cannot believe this..."

"then time can only make you believe abhya"

"I would love to see that then...but one thing is sure I love you more that you"

"what you still believe that abhya...come on stop kidding.."

"I am not"I replied

"nothing can be done of you" I smiled to him.. "chalo abhya I think we have dried enough..now lets go back..it's 3 now.."

"but this is not enough for me...i want more" now he bent his face towards mine

"you want more of it" I moved my neck back..

"no I mean..not this but ...time with you" he laughed out loudly ..and then he pecked on my nose "I'll try abhya...filal let's atleast leave for your home..."

Then we got out of the car inorder to be there on the first seat..the rain almost subsided..i reached the driver's seat...i was opening the door..ranbir hold my hand "abhya..let me drive..."

"no my condition!! you forgot"

"you want more time right" how blackmailer he was...

"fine.." I started moving to the passenger seat...he tightened the grip on my hand "what " he stretched me towards him...and I almost crashed on him..he then pushed my hair backwards falling on my hair..i bent my head downwards and smiled...of course who wouldn't shy away from a guy like ranbir...

"abhya ...has anyone ever told you...that how beautiful you are"

I just nodded a no while looking down... "okay then ...toh mai bata deta hoon.."he raised my face through my chin "abhya tum sach mai iss poori duniya ki sabse sundar ladki ho.."

"come on...yeh baat tumhare muh se achi nahi lagti..you are ...just perfect...tumhare aage har ladki feeki hai...uske liye chahe koi kitna acha lage...no one can beat your beauty...the vampire beauty..is amazing" he just smiled away..now it started raining again..

"uff run abhya...before we need to get dry again..." I ran sat to the passenger's seat...he was already in..and I smiled to him..we started driving...i was whole way thinking about the way I will say my truth today..Or tomorrow ...he even didn't spoke much may be giving me space...we reached the point where I met him today..

"abhya you better leave now..we would go like this another day...you need food to sustain ...and I too need it to not to kill you"

"but ..."he cut me "no but..you are leaving that's it..you need to rest as well..you have done a lot of trekking today "

"but promise we will go another day like this"

"done promise..now bye .."before he was about to get out ..i called him

"ranbir ruko"

"hmm.."he faced me, i held my hands on his shoulders and moved forward to his cheek and kissed his right cheek.. "bye.."

He smiled and kissed my left cheek after holding my hair..

"take care..see you soon" hogi soon ranbir ke liye kal ki subah mere liye toh bahut dur hai..i don't know kal tak ka wait kaise karungi...

i quickly drove to the home..ate the lunch not because of hunger but because do not want to see mom worried...and went to the room...totally in deep thoughts of all what happened to me...i today only realised how deeply i was in love with ranbir...i was on the verge of a heart attack...and ofcourse today was our first ...kiss...i hope ish doesn't ask anything about that otherwise how would i hide my blush...and also i developed few new things about my effects ...it's getting bad everyday...i will have to tell ranbir about all this soon before he doubts me...


hey guys this one is really really long post...it took me a whole week to write it...so please feel pleased with my efforts...i am sure you will like the sweet and dramatic moments between ranbir and abhya...SO PLEASE DO COMMENT YOUR VIEWS...!!!


Edited by temptations - 13 years ago
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awesome update i liked it 😳

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