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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SanRaj.RaYa

Awesome awesome awesome



Thanks Anjali!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry for late reply...😳
I read Ur FF n👏 I loved it <3👏
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Pinky.Raya

Sorry for late reply...😳

I read Ur FF n👏 I loved it <3👏
👏😃Love it graphics



Thank u Vaishu...
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Posted: 11 years ago
luved it...
plz plz continue soon...
eagerly waitin for ur next update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
everything has messed up .
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome... Superbbb... Loved it...
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Originally posted by: asheema_sharma

luved it...

plz plz continue soon...
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Thabk u asheema... Will update the next in sometime...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: 123fiza1

everything has messed up .



Don't u worry.. all will be sorted in the next two updates...
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Posted: 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

PART 6



Priya , sat there crying badly..she said to herself yeh sach nahi ho sakta it is a dream!!!! No this cant be true!! Kya karu!!! Jo meine suna kya wo!!!!! Priya sat there crying!!!! She said "god!!! Kya ho raha hain!!! Yeh mere saath kyun ho raha hain!! Agar unko door hi rakhna that oh phir se milwaya kyun!!!Nahi I cant tolerate it more!!! No !!! I was his and will be his !! mein aur kisi ke jaban se mere liye yeh sab..she put her hands on her ears and said 'nahi sunna bhi paap hain mere liye !!!! priya tune kaise sun liya yeh sab kuch bataya kyun nahi muje ram ko haan ram ko batana padega!!!! I have to tell him!! Nahi toh wo agar mujhe galat samajh baithe toh!!! Nahi muje bata padega!! I dnt want to loose him again!!! Mere liye nahi par peehu k liye!!! I have….her phone rang!!!! She said to herself "ram!!!!...and  she ran to pick the phone but she found an unknown number she thought may be ram is calling from another number she said "hello!!!"

The reply that came made her surprised!!!!

"di app kaha rehte ho!! Hua kya hain!! Jiju itna tensed kyun hain!!'

Priya "kaun!!!"

Dee mein Ayesha !!

Priya "Ayesha!!!!!! Tu!!!"

Ayesha "di meine app ko dekha tha premier mein jiju ne muje app se milne bulaya tha!! Par jab ayi idhar!! Jiju kuch bol nahi rehe hain…he was just holding a photo of him and a baby!! Wait dee is that yours..and..oh my god!! Dee app kaha ho dee I want to meet you!!!"

Priya "Ayesha apne jiju ko phone de plz!!!"

Ayesha "hmm sure and gave the phone to ram!!!'

Ram's attention broke as Ayesha said "jiju dee app se baat karna chahti hain!!"

Ram took the phone nd said "hmm bolo!!"

Priya cried …..

Ram "rajat aya tha!!!"

Priya didn't stop crying!!!

Ram " Ayesha tu jara !!! Ayesha left nodding!!!

Ram "priya darling calm down!!!! Plz !!! mein janta hoon rajat mereko!!! Mein kuch bata nahi paya ..kal milte hain!!! Coffee shop mein sirf hum dono !!! ho payega!!"

Priya controlled herself and said "hmm peehu school mein rehti hain ..12.30 ko chutti hota hain uska !! use pehle!!!"

Ram "theek hain 10 baje mil payogi!!"

Priya "haan …. Ram ….( ram felt tht a smooth breeze just touched him coz that "ram" is saying a lot!!!) muje daar lag raha hain!! Aur Ayesha ..use app ne….

Ram " priya mein ne kaha naa tumhe bahut kuch change ho chukka hain!! Bahut kuch!!! Ayesha agar nahi hoti toh mein kabhi tumhe begunnah sabit nahi kar pata !!! uske badle meine job hi kiya uske liye…. Priya zindagi padi hain yeh sab baatein karne ke liye..abhi so jao… peehu so gayi toh!!!"

Priya looked at sleeping peehu and said 'haan mr.kapoor"

Ram "phir mr.kapoor ram hain mera naam priya !!!"

Priya "kal milte hain…"

Ram "ek aur baat priya !!! kisi ko bata na nahi!!! Ok!!"

Priya "hmm ok !!!"

Ram disconnected the phone and called Ayesha in!!!!

Ayesha : kya baat hain jiju app idhar aise aur waha dee ro rahii hain!! Kya hua hain !!!!

Ram "kuch nahi Ayesha .. thodi problem hain mein aur teri dee sort out kar lenge!!!!

Ayesha "ok !! but jiju may I tell u something!!!"

Ram "haan bol"

Ayesha "jiju saumya bahut koshish .. means  usne bahut koshish kiya tha ki ghar ki jo kami hain use mita paye!!! But nahi hua!!! App dee ko wapis le chalo jiju!!! Kisiko jharuraat hain unki aur yeh kya meri …. Jiju!!! Pointing to peehu in the photo!!!

Ram "haan peehu humari beti!!!"

Ayesha "jiju mujhe bhi milna hain dee se !!! un se mafi mangni hain!! Mein ne unke saath uss din…ram stopped her and said "pagal …. Jo ho gaya wo ho gaya !!! but abhi we have to look forward no!!! tu agar na hoti toh!!! Aur teri dee kabhi bhi tujse naraz nahi reh sakti!!!! Jaa so jaa.. kal milwa dunga tujse use aur peehu se bhi!!

Ayesha stood up smiling!!! And then her smile faded!!! And she said "jiju peehu muje masi bulayegi!!!'

Ram " haan toh"

Ayesha "yak!!! Doesn't suit wd my image!!!"

Ram 'image ki bacchi!! Jah jake so jaa!!!!!"

 

Priya sat by peehu and started thinking!!! " kya karu rajat sir ko batana padega!! Par kya kapoor khandan muje wapis legi kya peehu ko wo log… she closed her eyes and sat there….

Back in hotel… ram changed his suit and sat on the bed thinking about priya!!!! He smiled as he remembered " itni jaldi app ki peecha chod ne nahi wali hoon!!"

His smile fainted… suddenly… he thought "tumne aissa kaise kiya meri beti ko mujse door !! kaise priya !! ek baar bhi dil nahi roya tumhara!! Mein tumhe mere saath le toh jayunga!!! Par maaf nahi kar payunga!!"

 

Back in priya's place!!!

Priya thinking of ram!!!  She smiled remembering her sweet times wd ram!!! She stopped smiling as she remembered the day when she saw ram mourning in front of her pic!!! She said in mind "ram pyar toh app se bahut karti hoon aur kisi ko meri taraf dekhne bhi naa doo mein!!! Par app niharika ji ki death akhoon ke samne hote huye dekha phir bhi maan nahi paye the aur app ne mujhe dekha hi nahi aur maan liya I m dead!!! Aur app ne meri…. Nahi ram iske liye mein app ko maaf nahi kar sakti!!! Humari beti hume jor ke rakhe gi ram!!! Par apna payar mein app pe nahi jatayungi!!!

 

Both of them are having super ego wd themselves and both of them are not ready to forgive each other…………..

 they are pinning to get together but not to forgive each other!!!!!

 

Both of them had sleepless night!!!!

Morning 6'o clock!!!!

Peehu woke up and found priya standing by the window!!!!

Peehu "mamma good morning!!!"

Priya turned and said "good morning beta!!!"

Peehu "app kab jagh gayi !!!"

Priya "thodi der pehle appso rehe the bahut deep sleep mein isi liye nahi jagaya !!!!"

Peehu " mamma app tension mein kyun ho !!"

Priya said to herself " priya bata de bacchi ko ke …" priya said "beta ready ho jao school jana hain naa…. Aur I have a surprise for you after you come back from school!!!"

Peehu "pata hain!! Kya surprise!!!"

Priya "kya !!! pata hain"

Peehu "rehne do!!! Nahi toh app ki excitement less ho jayegi!!!"

Priya "what!!! Mein tumhe surprise dungi aur meri excitement kam ho jayegi!! Peehu ..bahut badi ho gayi hain app!!!"

Peehu "wo toh hoon app pe jo gayi hoon!!! Smart mamma"

Priya kneeled down to her and said " beta app mere pe nahi apne papa pe gaye ho!!!"

Peehu "golu uncle pe!! Naa!!"

Priya "nahi beta unhe uncle nahi bologe tum!!! Wo tumhare papa hain!!"

Peehu "kal apne jhoot kyun bola!!"

Priya she rounded her eyes and said "wo kya….. hain….naa…. mein app ke  …..papa se gussa thi!!!!"

Peehu "abb gussa nahi ho!!!"

Priya made a childish face and said "haan abhi bhi hoon!! Itnnniii der jo laga di meri peehu ke pass ane ke liye!!!"

Peehu smiled and said 'ready ho jau mamma nahi toh school ke liye late ho jayungi!!" priya nodded…. Priya felt light after telling the truth to peehu!!!

She said "priya tu bhi ready ho jaa!!!!"

She was about to get ready!!!! Her phone rang!!!

Priya looked at the screen and said "rajat sir!!!"

Priya took the call " heloo!!!!!"

Rajat " good morning!!! Toh app aa rahi hain naa!!"

Priya "nahi I have some work to do!!!"

Rajat "but u promise me…"

Priya "sorry I have never promised you!!!"

Rajat 'ok ok but I insist plz come!!!"

Priya "sorry sir aaj peehu ke school mein……. Function hain…… matlab wo participate kar rahi hain function mein uska stage rehearsal hain toh udhar jana hain kab lautungi pata nahi!! So sorry sir mere liye meri beti sab kuch hain!!!"

Rajat 'ok ok u carry on mein kal milta hoon..promise !!!1"

Priya "sorry sir I cant promise!!"

Rajat "I insist… priya "

Priya stayed silent for some moment and then she said "ok sir promise!!!" and she said in her mind "ram bacha lo mujhe yaar iss dewane se!!!" and made a crying face!!!

Rajat "ok then meet u 2morrow!!!" and disconnected!!

Peehu got ready ..and came out and said "mamma app ready nahi ho chalo late ho rehe hain!!!"

Priya "haan haan abhi!! Again her phone rang!!!

Peehu "uff app jao mein dekhti hoon!!!"

Priya "theek hain dadi amma!!" and she left to get ready!!!

Peehu read "R….A….M….RAM"

Peehu received the phone and said "hello ram uncle !!!"

Ram "hello darling!!! Good morning!!!!"

Peehu 'app kaun ho golu ..uncle!!! naa"

Ram smiled and said "haaan golu uncle!!!!'

Peehu "pata hain papa mamma…ram said in between "kya kaha app ne beta"

Peehu 'pata hain..papa..mamma!!"

Ram "phir se bol beta papa!!"

Peehu "papa !!"

Ram hold his phone close to his heart and felt that all the sorrows are vanished !!!!

He said "beta app ki mamma ne bataya!!!"

Peehu 'haan !!!"

Ram "toh app ki mamma hain kaha!!"

Peehu "ready hone gaya hain late latif!! Kitni indiscipline hain papa kya batayun and made a face!!

Ram busted into laugh!!! And said "app ki humesha hi indiscipline hain!!!'

Priya "accha toh app milte naa milte hi beti ko yeh sab!!!!"

Ram stood up and said "are priya tum!! Mein toh peehu se !!!"

Peehu standing there by priya with her hands on her mouth!!!

Priya looked at peehu and said " haan wo toh dikh raha tha muje !!! app milo phir app baap beti ko bolti hoon mein kitni disciplined hoon!!!! Boliye kyun phone kiya tha!!!"

Ram 'wo tym pe ..nahi madam app agar 5-10 min late bhi ho jayenge toh theek hain!!"

Priya 'kya!!! App!!"

Ram 'ok 30 minute bhi!!!chalega!!!"

Priya "ufff muje kya samaj te hain app.. mein kya  hoon!!! Uff… yaad hain muje aur app se pehle dekhna aa jayungi!!' and disconnected the phone!!

Ram smiled as he kept the phone!!!  He said "tum nahi badli priya !!!"