MG FF-VIVAH - Thread 6 - Page 16

Originally posted by: Cyberlife

Part 40:

New morning, new beginning, Aasha ki nayi kiran'' renewed energy and hope' it brought the beautiful Cat Stevens number "Morning has Broken'" to my mind.

Balle! Balle! Balle! In the current Olympic spirit, I have reserved my ringside seat to watch the delicious romance of this awesome couple unfold slowly, slowly, slowly with all the delicacy and deftness that your writing will undoubtedly craft! None of the slam, bam, here is the negligee maam routine for me or for Maaneet. It has to be a rich, extended, memorable mating dance for this unbelievable couple. Reading your update will be like watching "makkaane ki kheer" being cooked in a solar cooker ' slow but incredibly sweet at the end!

Although you did not give a real precap, there were enough hints that you dropped in your responses to messages from your fans that made me die and go up to la la land!!!! Your following comments have notched up my expectation and anticipation to stratospheric levels.

- dono taraf aag barabar ki lagi hai...time for Maan to payback Geet for all her cheeky and naughty moments with his own charm and wit...along with interest.

- thoda wait karo...phir holding hands, moonlight., bike ride etc etc...

- going by Geet's track record for how long she will be able to maintain this distance

- ab dekhte hain kitne din Maan sleeps on the bed with unwashed sheet

- are he is inspired by Geet...did she listen to him when he said no holi...no coffee...no swimming...no site visit...nahi na...toh woh kyon sunega!! WOW! And WOW!

Loved the way Geet restored calm and a sense of hope amongst her dejected parents and her "gada dhari Bheem" of a brother at the breakfast table.

Maan slipping under the duvet of their bed to breathe in her smell and essence - -that was THE MOST romantic, achingly non-contact update in your episode.

Eagerly waiting to read "Maan's first steps towards wooing his darling wifey"! Maan Babu -- this is your BIG CHANCE to prove your real mettle and show whether you are truly deserving of a wife like Geet. Geet ka sachi Meet banana itna aasan kaaam nahi hai; woh ser hain to aap sava ser banke dikhao.

Ritzy: yes, in one of my weaker moments, I did ask for a Maha episode once you reached 400 "likes" but didn't say that you shouldn't give one before you reached that 400 milestone or give us more frequent ones. Uuf! Itni bechaini hai ki by the time I start, it is almost over and the mind keeps drumming away' hai rabba! Kab next update ayega'.

Originally posted by: mystique_girl

Hi,

I really like this story for going the way it should be going.

That Geet asked for more time and she's afraid of getting hurt is natural and the right thing to do. I like your story specially because its so realistic.Any one of us would have done the same.

However, if I was in Geet's shoes I would still not be convinced with Maan's words. So many positive words all of a sudden is unexpected that too coming from a person who hardly took any steps towards her before.

I would expect you to handle this part of the story with care. It needs to be convincing enough.And I am sure you'll do a great job.😃

Originally posted by: reachsky2011

WAITING...😍

Originally posted by: ritzy09

Thanks dear. You are right that it is hard to believe him and that is why she is in dillema. But at the same time, he has been quite cordial with her (b'day, beofre going on trip) and also she herself is in love with him.

So there would not be too much staying away but definately Maan has to start expressing his emotions, convince her and win her trust.

Let me know if in next few chapters you feel it is going too fast. I will try my best to balance both the things - love she feels and her insecurities

Thank you friends for your lovely comments and analysis.

VERY IMPORTANT: Please add ritzypm as buddy to gets PMs for this FF

Chapter 41

Bheegi palkon se churaa loonga nami
Rehne doonga na kahin koi kami
tumhara daman bheegna nadoonga
Ab kabhi tumko na rone doonga

Uljhane gham ki parchhaayi
De do mujhe apni tanhaayi

Mushkile apni majboori
De do mujhe saari benoori

Tere honthon pe saja doonga hasi
Teri raahon mein bichha doonga khushi

pichle ghamon ke upar

pyar ka malham laga doonga
--Maan

By Anu (Hermoso)

He walked downstairs to see his family having breakfast. Vicky was throwing tantrums asking Meera where his Tayiji was and Meera was pacifying him.

"Kaha na Vicky ki Tayiji apni mom ke ghar gayi hain. Now finish your milk and get ready for school."

[I told you Vicky that Tayiji is at her mom's place. Now finish your milk and get ready for school.]

"Lekin Tayiji wahan kyon gayi hain…she did not play with me yesterday also."

[But why has Tayiji gone there… she did not play with me yesterday also.]

Meera sighed –"Vicky please beta. Jaise app apni mumma ko love karte hain woh bhi unhein miss karti hai na."

[Vicky please son. Like you love your mumma, she also misses her.]

Vicky just made some faces as he was unconvinced but finally finished his milk and went to get ready.

Maan sat down silently and picked up a toast. Daadima spoke with an impassive face as he buttered it.

"I am sorry Maan. Galti humari hai jo humne aap pe shaadi ke liye zor diya tha. Humne aap ke saath saath Geet ki zindagi bhi…"

[I am sorry Maan. It is my mistake that I forced you to marry. I spoiled Geet's life also along with yours.]

She looked away slightly

"Khair, whatever happened…happened. I am sorry for slapping you and aaj sham ko hum Geet aur unke parivaar walon se bhi maafi mang lenge. Waise toh a sorry is not enough but I don't know what more I can do at this point."

[Nevertheless, whatever happened…happened. I am sorry for slapping you and today evening I will also apologize to Geet and her family. I know that sorry is not enough but I don't know what more I can do at this point.]

Maan kept the toast down as he saw his grandmother struggling to keep her tears inside.

"Aapko sorry maangne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai Daadima. Galti meine ki hai, use sudharunga bhi mein. Waise bhi I went to Handa Haveli yesterday. I…I met Geet."

[There is no need for you to apologize Daadima. I am the one who has done the mistake and I am the one who will correct it too. Moreover, I went to Handa Haveli yesterday. I…I met Geet.]

Daadima and Dev-Meera looked at him.

Maan continued as he buttered his toast – "I apologized and asked her to come back home. Woh kuch din apne parents ke saath rehna chahti hai"

[I apologized and asked her to come back home. She wants to stay with her parents for few days. ]

He finally looked Daadima in the eye – "Lekin I promise ki mein aapki bahu ko ghar le aaunga."

[But I promise that I will bring your daughter-in-law back at home.]

Tears welled up in Daadima's eyes – "Aap sach keh rahe hain? Kal jo hua uske baad…"

[Are you telling truth? Even after what happened yesterday…]

Maan got up and bent in front of Daadima. He wiped away her tears. Keeping his head in her lap he answered "I know that I have hurt you and Geet a lot. I can not go back and change what happened just after our marriage. But I did a bigger mistake by not expressing myself correctly.

Kabhi kaha hi nahi maine use se ki mein kya mehsoos karta hoon uske liye. Woh toh chodo, I never even shared what "Hope" as a painting mean to me. It means a symbol of our relationship.

If I had expressed, toh yeh sab hota hi nahi.

Sab kuch andar rakhne ki aadat si ho gayi hai Daadima. But I promise, I will try to change and get the old Maan back.

Maine toh aapse bhi kabhi nahi kaha ki what you mean to me. You are my world Daadima and I am sorry ki meine aapka itna dil dukhaya. Mummy papa ke jaane ke baad, aap mere sab kuch ho. Please aap mujhse naraaz mat ho Daadima. Aapne mujhe maaraa, woh aapka haq tha. But please maan jaayiye Daadima. Aapki marzi ke bina toh mein ek kadam bhi nahi badh paoonga."

[I know that I have hurt you and Geet a lot. I can not go back and change what happened just after our marriage. But I did a bigger mistake by not expressing myself correctly.

I never told her what I feel for her. Leave that, I never even shared what "Hope" as a painting mean to me. It means a symbol of our relationship.

If I had expressed, all this would have not happened.

I have got used to keep everything inside Daadima. But I promise, I will try to change and get the old Maan back.

I didn't even tell you what you mean to me. You are my world Daadima and I am sorry that I hurt you so much. You are my everything, after Mom-Dad left. Please don't be angry at me Daadima. You hit me that was your right. But please now accept me Daadima. Without your help, I can't even walk one step.]

Daadima sobbed and ruffled his hair lovingly. Meera and Dev cried as well seeing Maan express his feelings just like old days. Daadima motioned to them and they all cuddled together.

Daadima held Maan's face – "Hum humesha aapke saath hain beta. Jaayiye aur humare ghar ki ronak ko waapas le aayiye. And I am sure aap unhe mana lenge."

[I am always there with you son. Go and get the light of our house back. And I am sure that you will succeed in making her agree.]

Maan smiled when his phone rang.

He straightened himself and took the call – "Haan Adi bolo"

[Yes Adi, tell me]

…..

"Toh thik hai, set up my meeting with Arjun today."

[Ok then, setup my meeting with Arjun today.]

….

"I don't care Adi. You and Sasha can manage those meetings. I can't wait for two weeks for Mr. Singhania to come back to India. Talk to his secretary and get me a slot today. Just move around my other appointments."

Daadima looked at Maan with a surprise.

"Arjun Singhania…itne dinon ke baad aapko Arjun se aisa kya kaam hai."

[Arjun Singhania…after such a long time, what work do you have from him?]

Maan smirked – "Arjun bought "Hope" from Geet. I need to get it back but please don't mention to Geet. It is a surprise for her."

Just then Vicky came out all ready.

Maan picked him up – "Are baba…itna sad face kyon banaya hai aapne. Aap bhi apni tayiji ko miss kar rahe ho…chalo aaj hum aapko school chod dete hain and tomorrow we will go to meet her."

[Oh dear…why do you have such a long face? You are also missing your Tayiji…come I will drop you to school today and tomorrow we will go to meet her.]

"Are nahi Bhai…aap ko late hoga"

[No need bro…you will get late.]

"Koi nahi Meera…So what say champ."

[It's ok Meera… So what say champ.]

Vicky finally brightened up and hi-fied with his bade papa as Maan left home with Vicky in his arms.

………

Geet reached her gallery. She felt a heated gaze on her as she walked towards it from her car. She stopped and turned around scanning the road. She was shocked to see Maan leaning on the bonnet of his car. She automatically started walking towards him wondering what he was doing there. Maan also straightened and walked towards her.

"Maan aap yahan?"

[Maan, you here?]

Maan just smiled a little "Good Morning Geet!!!"

Geet was taken aback by his calm greeting. "Huh…yes off course good morning lekin aap yahan"

[Huh…yes off course good morning but you here?]

"Kyon, tumne hi toh kaha tha ki we can meet"

[Why, you only told that we can meet.]

Geet sighed not understanding his replies.

"Maan aap yahan kya kar rahe hain. And moreover you must be late for your office."

[Maan what are you doing here? And moreover you must be late for your office.]

"Geet, I came here to wish you good morning. Kya hai na maine notice kiya hai ki unless my day start with you, it doesn't go well and unless I see you before I sleep, I can't sleep. Believe me London was torturous for me. Tumhaari aadat si ho gayi hai mujhe.

Dekho ab tumne mujhe itna sweetly good morning bola hai toh mera din acha hi jayega. Waise bhi I had an important meeting…you see."

[Geet, I came here to wish you good morning. You know I have noticed that unless my day start with you, it doesn't go well and unless I see you before I sleep, I can't sleep. Believe me London was torturous for me. I have got used to you.

See, now how sweetly you wished me good morning, so my day will go well. Moreover I had an important meeting today…you know.]

Geet was flummoxed by his answer will be an understatement. She could not make head and tail of his answer and before she could think further, Maan held her hand and kissed it lightly. "Have a good day…ab dekh kya rahi ho…gallery nahi jaana. You are late aur mujhe bhi late kar rahi ho…bye"

[Have a good day…now what are you looking at…don't you have to go to gallery. You are late and you will make me also late…bye]

Geet automatically answered "ok bye" and walked back to the gallery as she saw Maan getting in his car and driving away.

Whole day she kept on thinking about Maan's behavior. She could not believe it as Maan never expressed his feelings before.

"What was he trying to do? Woh mujhe manane ki koshish kar rahe they ya yeh bataane ki that he is indeed seriously thinking about this relationship."

[What was he trying to do? Was he trying to melt me or tying to tell me that he is indeed seriously thinking about this relationship.]

Advertently a smile adorned her face and she blushed a little thinking about his peck on her hand. She caressed it slightly as she thought about his words "Tumhaari aadat si ho gayi hai mujhe"

Whole day she was lost in her dream world as a small hope and burst of happiness made place in her heart.

In the evening, she reached home and even her family was surprised seeing her calm and collected and not that sad.