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BIN TERE KYA HAI JEENA
"If U Love Sum One Xpress It Before Its Too Lait"




CHARACTER SKETCH:

KHURANAS ONE OF THE MOST REPUTED, rich n respectful business FAMILY of DELHI


KHURANA MENSION

MAAN SINGH KHURANA: ( WOULD BE Dr.)

19 Year old reserved person with a tough exterior and displays strength of character. He appears to be arrogant and intimidating but has a soft heart .Got a scholarship in ALUMNI MEDICAL COLLEGE , 1 of the top ranked medical college of U.S. An intelligent, adorable, handsome angry young man .




MAAN son of ARJUN S KHURANA one of the business tycoons n owner of KHURANA CONSTRUCTIONS & PRIYA KHURANA principal in st.josephs college of graduation in DELHI. Maan youngest son of Khurana family is one of the brilliant students who besides getting selected in AIIMS due to his hardwork got the scholarship at one of the top ranked medical colleges of U.S .Pursuing education in U.S was beyond his expectation not because he was doubtful about his capability but have never dreamed dat his fate has sumthng unexpected treasure for him''

Maan is craze of his parents not only them but he is luved by his uncle too, as he is the only boy (waaris) of KHURANA empire .To fulfill the dreams of his parents n to get to their expectations is GOAL of his life'''



ARJUN AND PRIYA KHURANA




SAVITRI devi: Maan's Grandmother and eldest member of khurana family . A social worker always in a service of helping needy people but love her grand children very much & Maan being the star of her eye (ankh ka tara) is her LAADLA& he too admires and love her.



SIMRAN KHURANA: 23 years old , sweet girl, but well disciplined, obedient n eldest child of Khurana family who is doctor in CITY HOSPITAL of DELHI. Caring daughter and loving sister guards her siblings in absence of her parents. (in future she'l play cupid btw MAANEET).




ANWESHA KHURANA: 18 years old , She is the youngest daughter of Khurana family and dearest to Maan sweet ,naughty girl pursuing Bachelors in Business Adminstration , little natorious n kamchoor who jus w

who jus wana get educated in a best simple and easiest way dnt want to fry her brains like her parents and other siblings do.





JAY KHANDELWAL: 19 year old & Maan's best friend.

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AGARWAL'S ONE OF THE FAMOUS N RICH BUSINESS FAMILIES OF DELHI

< AGARWAL MENSION>




ARNAB AND MADHU AGARWAL: They are loving and caring parents. They have four children 3 sons and one daughter. Arnab is owner of Agarwal industries and Madhu an adorable, angry & busy housewife and strict mother who keeps everyone tact. She is the scariest person of the family who never gives any sort of relief to her children as she doesn't want her sons to be spoiled brads.

GEET AGARWAL

18 years old, young daughter of AGARWALS with very strong values in life ventures out in this bad world for her boy of dreams. A very homely girl yet strong in her own way, fights every wrong that comes her way intelligently and at the same just could not stand any injustice. Besides these, she loves to do anything for her family and friends. She looks promising unawares of what destiny has in hold of her. The rest needs to be seen to know her courage to fight the obstacles that come her away to catch hold of her life that would soon go haywire..She is a high school girl who wants to live her life in own way .Her likes are different and unique in terms of studies she is brilliant and intelligent and keen lover of SPACE SCIENCE but her Dad has different plan for her ,as he want her to be one of the server of MANKIND ya i.e. DOCTOR (prince jab doc hoga princess kahan kuch aur ho sakti hai). She is luvd by evry one as she is the only girl in the family.



RAHUL AGARWAL: 23 years old. Geet's elder brother pursuing M.B.A from LONDON UNIVERSITY and soon gona join his fathers' business.He is very shy, sweet, and obedient 'loving & caring son & brother.



KABIR AGARWAL:18 years old .Geet and Rahul are non identical twins, he too is a high school student loves his parents and siblings very much.



ROHAN AGARWAL:16 Year old and youngest of all.10th class student and very naughty.



RIDHIMA SHARMA: 18 years old and GEET'S best friend.jo GEET karay gi RIDDHI b wahi karegi.There food doesn't digest without eachothr.


MORE CHARCTERS WILL BE INTRODUCED LATER IF REQUIRED.

So it was big character sketch of my small FF.Guyz I know m not good in story writing like u all but u knw na "PRACTICE MAKES A WOMEN PERFECT" loll so I tried a bit, hope so u all enjoyed & w 'l further suprt me inordr to take this lineup to its destiny'''''''..& guys u know dat I don't know much about India & its places so I have randomly used sum terms like CITY HOSP & ST. JOSEPHS ,..


I know u may feel sum difrence in ages but the fact is in US we apply For MBBS at age of !9 n i dont know wat is age bar in INDIA

SO GUYZ I HAV TRIED MY BEST HOPE SOP U LUKED N PLZZ DO LEAVE UR CMNTS N PLZ LET ME KNOW HW U FOUND THE CONCEPT SO PLZ M WAITNG N DO HIT THE LIKE BUTTON >>>WILL UPDATE SOON DEPNDNG ON UR RESPONSE

AND WHO ALL WANT PMz PLEASE SEND ME BUDDY REQUEST

I'LL NOT BE ABLE TO PM OTHERWISE


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Nice CS !! 😃 !!

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very interesting and vast CS...

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Nice prologue... Interesting to find MSK and Geet as Doctors...

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Bin Tere Kya Hai Jeena


PART 1:



Story starts when MAAN is 19 years of age and has recently passed his secondary school education and appeared in common entrance test at AIIMS has got selected but in a sudden attempt he applied for the same practice in U.S whose result is still awaiting.

On other side Geet is a secondary school student &2 years younger than Maan.(hope so age confusion is clear to all)

Here story begins………….



KHURANA MENSION

Morning 8.00 a.m dining table ..

Dadi is moving towards dining table wher priya is making breakfast arrangements, ,

Dadi..Gud morning betay kya baat hai subah kay 8 bajgaye aur abi tak sab so rahay hai aur Arjun kahan hai ,unhay office nai jana kya.

Priya: Maa in bachon nai mujhe buhat pareshan kar diya Sunday ko dair say kya sotay hai in ko tou har din holiday hi lagta hai aur yae abi tak jog say lotay hi nai.

Dadi :Maan kahan hai who be so rahay hai kya

Priya: Humaray ghar mai wahi ek tou punctual hai who bus xrcise karkay fresh honay gayae hai atay hi hongay.Maa mai abi ayi ek baar inko phir uthanay jati houn, , ,

Dadi: haan beta yae theek rahay ga ,mai tab tak arjun ka wait karti houn,sab milkar breakfast karange, ,




Priya:ji maa, , mai abi ayi

Priya leaves to awake her two sleeping beauties, , meanwhile Arjun also returns from jog, ,

Arjun: gud morning Maa

Dadi: agaye beta , , aj itna lait kyun huwa

ASK( arjun):aisay hi maawoh park mai purana frnd milgaya tha, , waisay baki sab kahan hai

Dadi : bas atay hi hongay priya bulanay gayi hai , ,aap be jakar fresh hojayie phir mil kr nashta karenge, ,




ASK: ok maa,, mai abi aya.

Priya enters in simran's room to wake her but luckily she is already awake and brushing her hair

Priya : chalo acha hai aap ready ho, come fast for breakfast otherwise u'l get lait, ,

Simran : yaa mom ,bus do mints aur m cumng.

Priya is leaving room when simran calls her back

Simran : maa ani nay breakfast kiya

Priya : aap ko lagta hai kya,who maharani tou so rahi hai bus aap jaldi say nichay aiyae , ,dadi wait kar rahi hai

Anni's room, , , , ,sleeping Anni is disturbed by ringing alarm and she is trying to stop it with closed eyes




Anni ufff yae alarm kitna disturb karta hai , ,subah subah hi brain ka omlet banadiya. . . .oh shit its 8.30am m getting lait (she gets up from bed and is running towards washroom). . . .in washroom while facing towards mirror . . . .anni murmrng to her self , , ,aaj tou phir punishment milaygi chal anni aaj shower kay badlay khali face doukar kaam chala .

Priya entered Anni's room and is puzzled to see she is already awake and having shower (jisko who face doukar sastay mai nipta rahi hai)

Priya : anni ,anni beta jaldi ready hojaw you r getting lait

Anni : aap jayiae mom mai abi ayae, , ,, priya: ok beta jaldi ayaea

AGARWAL HOUSE:



An innocent girl with bubbly pink cheeks ,curly hair is calmly sleeping on bed with a seriene luk

ARNAB AGARWAL ENTERS THE ROOM, ,and sits besides geet and strts rubbing his fingers in her long brownish curly hair

A.A :Geet betay ,geet

Geet : hmm (while placing her head on his dad's lap)


Slight smile appears on her face

A.A :Geet saday ath hogaye apko school nai jana hai , , , ya subah subah apni hitler maa say daant khani hai



Geet while stretching her arms kya 8.30 hogaye, , , babaji bacha lena (while turning her head towards ceiling)


A.A (while pulng geet's cheek): haan babaji meri sleeping beauty ko bacha lengay HITLER MAA say, , ,both of them giggled and AA leaves room while Geet enters washroom for having shower.

Dining table………..Madhu setting plates and kabir n Arnab r heading towards table for breakfast, , ,



Kabir: gud mrning maa



Madhu, , ,gud mrning beta, , , ,yae rohan aur geet kahan rahgaye kitnay careless hogaye hai , ,zara be parwa nai hai ki school jana hai lait hogaya haan unko kya padi hai aaj kal kay bachay padayi krkay jaisay Maa Baap pai koi ehsan kar rahay hou , , ,yae sab apkay laad pyar ka asar hai



Arnab:kya yaar Madhu yae bashan ab purana hogaya kuch naya add karo (both kabir n arnab gigleswhile madhu is giving them angry glare) who dono aa rahay hai

Geet is all set for school



Geet(while assembling buks in her bag):oh babaji rohan , , who to abi so raha hoga

She leaves room fastly & is running towards rohans room, , , ,f9ly enters his room

Geet: thank god tum tayar ho warna aaj subah subah hi jutay khane padtae chal aja, , ,


Rohan: ruko didi mere glasses nai mil rahay , , sab jagah dounda



Geet: acha apne ser pay dounda (he has lukd for his glasses evrywhr , ,bt they r rsting on his head). . .both of thm giggled and left the room and are cuming downstairs for breakfast



Geet and rohan while taking their seats Gud Mrning . . . . kabir n arnab replied bck but madhu is angry so she didn't bthr to rply instead interrupted by sayng,, , ,

Madhu: ek nazar clock par b dalni chahiyae na

Rohan & geet bowed their head downwards

Arnab : oho Madhu tum phir shuru hogayi



Madhu : aap chup kariyae who toh aaj mai inko breakfast dai rai houn agr kal say phir lait huway I promise bina breakfast kay jana padega



Arnab murmurs Hitler toh chala gaya par is female hitler ko yahan chod gaya , , , ,madhu pases an angry glare to him



All are done with breakfast & strted running towards their car, , ,while geet is waitin for her friend RIIDHIMA



Madhu: geet beta mujhay lagta hai RIIDHIMA ko anay mai lait hoga, , ,aap driver kay sath jayiae mai usay bata doun gi

Geet: ok mom(she kisses her mom n leaves),,,,,,,,,,,,,Madhu :bye beta,,,,,,,,,,,

Geet :bye:mom



Khurana mension(ab shuru hoti hai inki nautanki)



Arjun Dadi ,Priya started having their breakfast when sweetheart Maan'sseriene Voice echo's Gud mrning everyone, , ,he cums towards table and aftr giving side hug n smallpeck on her mom n dadi"s forehead takes his seat besides dadi n priya starts serving him his rukha sukha continental gas phoos lol



Meanwhile simran n anni too cums n grabs sum toast in hurry n leaves as they r lait,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Dadi: aray beta aram say to khalo (but gals r no way to listen)

Arjun after sumtime interrupts

Arjun: maan beta aap kay admission ki formalities puri hogayi

Maan: no dad it will take some time

Arjun: chalo acha hai , , ,jab tak formalities puri hongi u r free ,,so than I want u to hav a round of KHURANA CONSTRUCTIONS , , ,IS DAT OK WITH u



MSK…SURE DAD aap chaliyae mai akelay ata houn.

Everyone leaves foe their respective wrk

Priya:Nakul yae table saaf kar do

Priya too gets her files n is heading towards hall

Priya:Maa mai be college chalti houn , , aaj imprtnt meeting hai

Dadi; theek hai beta aap jayae mai b kuch dair baad Padma(dadi's frnd)kay yahan ja rahi houn aur anay maid air hojayegi.

Priya takes savitridevi's blessings n leaves,,,,,,,,,,,bye maa

Dadi,,,,,,,,,bye beta

PRECAP: MSK'S NTRY IN OFICE AND GUD NEWS

SO GUYZ HERE IS ALL DRAMA OF 2 FAMILIES PLZZ GUYZ FORGVE FOR MSTAKES N U HV TO BARE THS DRAMA UNTIL MSK'S DPRTURE FOR U.S

SO TELL ME GUYZ DO U WANT MSK TO NTER K.C IN FORMAL OR QADUAL AVTAR…….BFRE CHOSNG FORMAL REMEMBR HE IS ONLY 19 YEARS OF AGE

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Bin Tere Kya Hai Jeena

Part 2:

KHURANA CONSTRUCTIONS

Arjun while sitting in his cabin calls his ARCHITECT Sasha & his accountant VINOD

Sasha is a proudy girl who as per her companions wear 2inch dresses to cover her 4 inch body lol

Sasha & Vinod enters the cabin as per the order of their boss

Arjun: Sasha , , ,my son will be arriving here any moment& I want you to introduce him to each and every member of our company and VINOD be sure that u'l let him know about each and every working section, no single corner of any department should be left, ,, ,got it, , , ,u may leave



BOTH OF THEM :yes sir



Both sasha and vinod leaves his cabin



MSK is driving his Jeep towards K.C , wearing white shirt, blue jeans and black Gog's .He entered K.C where his father's guards assisted him towards elevator which finally took him to the first floor of K.C.He started walking out as soon the doors of elevator opened he is completely luking lavishing enough to kill anyone .When he steped to working area everyone immediately got up frm their respective seats and scanned him up to down as if they saw sum wonder ,girls stood up with their mouths open when he took off his glasse's.Msk was feeling awkward and Vinod was only person whom he knew .




MSK facing towards Vinod to avoid evryones gaze ,can u plz show me the way towards dad,s cabin(as it was his first visit to K.C after period of 6yrs n K.C had undergone drastic changes thrgh dat period)

Vinod: yes sir,plz come ths way



As MSK was man of aticates rplied please uncle u r my elder don't call me sir

Vinod was impressed to see that ths yung doud was nt amng richi spoild brad

One of the gal: wowww kya attitude hai

Other gal whose eyes were still bulged inside out :oh my my he is DHAK DHAK



FIRST GAL : Wats his name,iska naam iskay hot look ki tarah HOT HOT hoga

SASHA:I my self don't know




One of the gals: Agar yae roz aisay hi office ayega humaray tou waray nyaray hojaenge

Sasha: yae sirf yahan ka round lainay kai liyae aya hai ,tell me mai theek lag rahi houn na ,aftr all m going to assist him



Other girl: apna tou pata nai but agar Mr. Hotty roz office ayega ek baat tout ay hai Delhi kay designers ki tou nikal padi



2nd gal :kya matlab

Other gal:matlab yae SASHAin par doray dalnay kay liyae apni puri salary luta degi,ab tou yae char ft ki height par daid ft kay kapdey pahnegi

Both giggled

Vinod and Msk entered Arjun's cabin

MK hi DAD

Arjun: here u r son come let me introduce u to everyone



BOTH ARJUN ,MSK FOLOWD BY VINOD WALKD TOWARDS WORKING AREA

ARJUN: XCUSE ME

Everyone stood up but Arjun's words were not audible to them as they were busy in drooling over their DHAK DHAK



Arjun :meet my only son MAAN SINGH KHURANA,who is gona be ur future BOSS,so I want him to knw abt our small family.



MSK was taken back as his DAD'S words (he is gona b ur future boss) were ringing in his ears, , ,not able to believe his senses ,he waz amazingly lukng towards his dad bt didn't said anything

One of the gals: mujhe nai patatha ki humare FAT FAT BOSS KA HOT HOT BETA HAI

MSK:explored whole K.C and met all the members

After spending whole day in office MSK std to leave when Jai ringed him


MSK: Hello jai



JAI: maan kahan hai tou ,kab say tujhe call kar rahan hou

MSK: sorry yaar dad kay saTH OFICE MAY BUSY THA

Jai:tou aur office acha chal jaldi aa mai tera wait kar rahan houn , ,baki bate mil kar karenge

MSK: m cuming

Arjun Too left K.C as ther were no imprtnt meetings so he rushd towards home

KHURANA MENSION

Door bell rings and it is courier wala

Priya receives courier and begns to check the papers inside it a big reluctant smile covered her face

Arjun reaches home places his bag on study and after having shower he moves towards entertainment room.

Meanwhile nakul came ther to give him a glass of juice

Priya: Arjun ka bag tou yahan hai but wher is he n whn did he cum ,nakul say pouchti houn,,,,,,,,,,,,,nakul arjun kahan hai

Nakul: mam who E.room mai hai

Priya comes ther and talks to arjun in xited tone holding papers in her hand, , ,aap yahan hai aur mai apko bahar dound rahi thi



Arjun : kya baat hai aapka chehra aaj bada khila hai


Priya : newz hi aisi hai ki aap khushi say nachay gae

Arjun who was playin video game placd remote on table and is luking towards priya

Arjun: aisa kya huwa ,n yae kaun say papers hai

Priya : guess wat MAAN ko U.S may scholarship mili hai and he has got opportunity to practice for medicine ther e



Arjun got up wit a great shock and amazingly holds prioya's arm's,,,,,,,,,,watt,,,,,,,,,,,I I I don't believe,,,,,,,,,,, tum sach kah rahi hou merey MAAN ka selection U.S mai huwa ,,,,,,,,,,,, he is jumping with joy as if he got some hidden treasure,,,,,,,,,,, MAAN ko pata hai

Priya: nai abi tou courier aya


Arjun: let me call my son

MAAN WAS WAITING FOR JAI AT THEIR USUAL SPOT WHN HIS DAD RINGED HIM

Maan: ya dad

ARJUN: MAAN MAAN MAAN



MAAN : kya baat hai dad sab theek hai na

ARJUN : tumnay mujhe aaj itni khushi di hai ki mai asman mai bina pankh kay ud raha houn

MAAN : innocently , , mainey aisa kya kar diya dad

ARJUN: beta aap ka U.S may selection hpogaya hai and u are the only one who has got full scholarship

MAAN: WATTT he had a big smile on his face

ARJUN :YA BETA JALDI GHAR AWWW I WANT TO CELEBRATE NOW …

MAAN : OK DAD

BTHH HUNGD THE PHONE



Priya: while patng Arjun"s chest………….itna be mat udiyae agar gir gaye tou najane kitne beguna SHAHEED hojayenge and started laughing

MSK was happy but his smile suddenly faided while memrising his dad's wrds (gona be ur future BOSS)….

JAI was standing besides MAAN when he was tking on phn

JAI : WAT WAS UNCLE SAYING

Msk SHARED WHOLE MATTER WITH HIM AND JAI HUGD HIM WITH JOY but suddenly his eyes got filled with tears



MSK: kya huwa jai teri ankhon mai ansoun

JAI: bas kuch nai aisay hi

MSK: kya aisay hi boul na kya huwa,dekh tujay rota dekh mai be ro doun ga

JAI (while avidng MK's gaze lukng towards sum dstnt place):Maan hum dono kay rastay alag hogaye. . phlay tou hope tha ki tujhe weekends par dekhon ga ,ab tou who b nai hoga , , , wiped his tears and faced MK



MSK: PAGAL HAI akhir lout kay tou yahi ana hai aur waisay be mai kahi nai jar aha

JAI:wat

…PRECAP: KHURANA FAMILIES DINNER

GEET'S TRICK

MK AND ANNIS MASTI

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So here was double dhama MSK'S ENTRY N GUD NEWZ hope so u njoyed there is much more to cum fr that have patience…………………… 1 of ur ques dono families mai itne bachay is liyae hai ther is special event asociatd with all of thm wch u will cum across in cuming parts………………………

T THANX FOR UR CMNTS N PLZ FORGVE FOR MSTAKES

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