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hi guys...thought to update whatever I mange to write in the short period of time I have...I wud try to write as much as possible & present in front of u...hope u like the new piece of work I have written....long time didn't write anything....plz bear wit me!!


This story moves little back & forth....telling u earlier cauz it may lead to confusion!!

Watch out When Reading...WARNING!!


Part of the OS

That was the end of their relationship; Arjun accepted he has fallen for Heer and wanted to have nothing with Arohi anymore. He broke up their relationship; Arohi was shattered, heartbroken, deceived and proved a failure in love. Feeling of loath grew in her regarding going aboard. She lost her trust and herself. Time helped Arohi pass through the shell, but not the pain that haunts her in every moment of life. Today she is one of the best Architects in India; her focus is only her career now. Arohi pursued what she aimed for; she is the same girl who used to see dream of a beautiful life with her man...with him. Arohi thought her life was only for him when today she knows it's her life. She is going to live it for her own.



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ok dears didn't expect so much responses even bfr I update the OS...thank u Vibha sweetheart for ur surprise (PMs)...even i got it lol...so the OS is going to finish within one part n it is completed...

I read ur lovely comments n predictions...really loved them...trust me all of ur point of views r going to take a turn of 360 degree...
well Warning cauz this OS is a disturbing one...hope u accept the truth!!


n if anyone is wondering then I'm confirming...I'll finish JL, Rabba, n Saapna bfr my deadline comes to an end...


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Ankahee

Every individual has a story, some of them we know and some we don't. When it comes to love stories people tend to fascinated by the limitation of novels, movies, etc. Does anyone give this a thought; what's the interpretation behind these stories or what make them stories in the first place?? Many at times we can easily relate to the characters through our visualization. Perchance those folks are ordinary human beings like us who survived the tales in real. Stories that happened in past become history, at present new flowers bloom...putting an assumption in our head "ah these lovers". Don't we make such mental notes often?? Then what about the ones around us, the love between two people develops so intensely, but never transpires in front of us. We fail to comprehend quite such things leaving us in questioning "is there even something call true love??" The answer is hidden beneath the question; the thought of a four letters' word lead to the conclusion every heart feels something; true the purpose possibly may not be the same....only depth remains. Neither love is definable; vibrations of a heart go on infinitely, this unexplained love only varies in form.

Arohi Ahluwalia and Arjun Singhania; they are two personas with a common story. A love story that was untold to us, to them. They weren't silent lovers; neither were they separated by any conspiracy. Perhaps a partner becomes unsuccessful to reciprocate the same feeling or give up on the relationship. That's not the case here; Arjun and Arohi were in love truly, madly, deeply.....continues. If so, what's their story??....weird it's their story yet Ankahee si to them. What happened that she is still Arohi Ahluwalia not Singhania. Days, months, and years are flying.....why not she has him beside her in the race of life?? Every coin has two sides, so do the life (shades and happiness). Let's turn the pages backward to find out this Ankahee Love Story.....

Somewhere in Shimla two lovers were in a heated argument "Arjun you promised me ki shaadi ke baad we're not leaving India" Arjun who was packing his bag for tomorrow's flight "Arohi I know I did but right now things are different" "nothing is different, your perspective changed only" Arjun stopped midway of his packing; facing her he held her by the shoulders and pulled her to him; lovingly he tried to explain her "Arohi try to understand Rashi is pregnant and she can't take care of the business by herself, Rajveer already has his own business to take care of, they both need to be extra careful now with the baby and in the future as well, I can't ruin the best moments of my sisters' life" "I know Arjun, even I care about her as much as you do, I'm just saying why not you shift your business in India, you are taking care of your other companies in India, then why not the rest??" Arjun let go of her "for God's sake Arohi, do you think these empires are some kind of sand castles that whenever I want would break them and make new ones" "ok I get that, phir bhi why it's necessary to move out of India" Arjun exasperatedly "cauz Rashi needs to focus on her personal life than professional and as long as she is handling the business it's not possible. I don't want any complication in her married life, so I'm going to take the things in my own hand and Chachu would take care of the business in India" "but Arjun??" He raised his hand "baas Arohi no more discussion, Rashi is my responsibility after Mom and dad, I love her a lot and would do the best for her"

Arohi angrily "Arjun think practically, did you even bother to consult Rashi or Rajveer about this?? No right?? So you listen now, I'm not going anywhere from this place, you go wherever you want, I'll wait for your mind to change" saying she gave him her back. Arjun with disbelief "toh tum reh logi mere bina??" Agar mein na lauta toh, agar waqt hi mera saath na de toh??" made Arohi opened her eyes widely, she was shock and confused, but more than anything she was scared....fear of losing him made her sweat. Arohi turned to Arjun; without looking in his eyes she ran to him, she didn't have the courage to face him with her horrified and tearful eyes. Arjun engulfed her with the same anxiety; her face was hidden in his chest, her silent tears soon turned into loud sob. Arjun tightened the grip on her "baby please maat ro, I'm sorry, dekho I know how much you love this country...specially this place Shimla lekin mera majboori bhi toh samjho na" Arohi clenched the back of his shirt in firm fists almost digging her nails, with hiccups she said "nehi mujhe yehi rehna hai tumhare saath aur tum kehi nehi jaoge kaal, mein tumhe kahi nehi jane dungi"

Arjun didn't broke the hug, with difficulty he brought her face up holding on to the chin "you trust me na" Arohi with tears "khud se bhi zayda" He smiled "toh hum hamesha saath rahenge, mein tumhari Arjun hoon, saya banke rahunga tumhare saath" saying he kissed her forehead. Arohi innocently "promise" "humari pyaar ki kasam" He kissed her lightly on the lips, correlating their forehead he said "only fifteen days, Canada se wapas aate hi mein tumhe hamesha ke liye apna bana lunga, forever my Arohi.....Mrs. Singhania. Arohi just blushed on the thought "they are going to be married soon" and she hugged him again. The rest of the evening they spent in his balcony; Arjun encircling his arms around her stomach, Arohi's one hand resting on the grille having Arjun's on top while their right hands intertwined together. Their romantic moment passed with bliss watching rainfall in each other's warmth.

Arjun has left India one week passed, but no communication with Arohi. She went to meet Rudra cauz he must have some idea of Arjun's whereabouts; unfortunately he was out of town and phone unreachable. Arohi tried contacting Rashi also, only to fail miserably. After two weeks Arohi received Arjun's call; instead of asking for forgiveness he got into a fight with her. Time processed where Arjun's behavior kept changing. He wouldn't call her everyday or wouldn't bother to say something nice to her. He even ignored when she called him. A month passed, he kept pushing the dates one after another telling her he would come back soon. One day Arohi called "Arjun" "who's speaking??" a girl answered. "This is Arjun's number right??" Arohi asked to make sure. "yeah, who are you??" the girl asked. Arohi's eyes welled up immediately; some other girl was asking her "who is she to Arjun??" Arohi felt suffocated; she disconnected the call without further conversation. Arjun called her back the next day. Arohi asked him straightforward "who was the girl" Arjun casually replied "she was my friend Heer; uske yaha party thi toh mein ruk gaya thoda late taak baas. Tum ye saab kyun pooch rahi ho??" Arohi mockingly "some random girl asked me what relationship I share with you aur tum bolte ho mein kyun pooch rahi hoon??" saying she let out a sarcastic laugh. "Arohi look she isn't just some random girl, she is my friend ok, you could have just talk to her nicely, usne bola mujhe tumne rudely call disconnect kardiya tha" Arohi couldn't believe his tone "oh really apne uss friend ke liye bura lag raha hai paar mujhe bura lage toh tumhe kya?? Hai na Arjun??" "Whatever Arohi" he said with least interest. Whenever Arohi would talk to Arjun, she would feel a detachment sort; eventually this feeling only intensified.

Another month passed like that, things went out of control. By then, Arohi received picture messages of Arjun with another girl; Arjun justified himself saying the text wasn't for her and there is nothing between Heer and him. Arohi couldn't see Heer's face, but clearly saw Arjun was holding her hand in a motion to slip ring on her ring finger. That was the end of their relationship; Arjun accepted he has fallen for Heer and wanted to have nothing with Arohi anymore. He broke up their relationship; Arohi was shattered, heartbroken, deceived and proved a failure in love. Feeling of loath grew in her regarding going aboard. She lost her trust and herself. Time helped Arohi pass through the shell, but not the pain that haunts her in every moment of life. Today she is one of the best Architects in India; her focus is only her career now. Arohi pursued what she aimed for; she is the same girl who used to see dream of a beautiful life with her man...with him. Arohi thought her life was only for him when today she knows it's her life. She is going to live it for her own. Did Arohi really lost in love??

Kash Arohi knew she didn't lose in love, but she lost her love. The person with whom she talked those two months wasn't her Arjun; she has been deceived by her dear ones. How could it be Arjun?? When he; her love is no more in this world. Yes he left this world forever. The day his flight took off, Arjun was hit by a car in front of the airport. It was a severe accident; left Arjun counting the last breathing of his life. He had only one wish "he wanted to see her one last time". In the ICU, Arjun had very less time in his hand. He forced himself to speak which was impossible through lack of oxygen; removing the oxygen mask in his feeble voice breathlessly "Rashi promise me you are not going to tell Arohi about my death ever" Rashi looked at him with dazed and teary eyes "Bhai??" "Rashi please promise me, mere paas waqt nehi hai" Rashi shook her head in no. "Rashi please my last wish" "nehi Bhai mein Bhabhi se chupa nehi paungi" Arjun took deep breaths, with difficulty "Rashi wo jee nehi payegi, maar jayegi wo, mujhpe ye ehsaan karde, mere pyaar ka raksha karna hai tujhe" "paar Bhai??" Arjun was near his last breathing "haan Bhai mein saab karungi" and with that Arjun smiled as he visualized her angelic face in front of his eyes. Arjun took his last breath while his big brown eyes were still open with a hint of smile in the corner of his lips.

Rajveer informed Rudra and Arohi's parents about Arjun. He begged them to control their emotions in front of Arohi and not to let her know the truth. Before receiving the news Arohi was restless. She told her mom (Amrit) "she felt as if someone very close to her was in trouble or in agony. Arohi also confined in her that she didn't feel good about Arjun's departure" Amrit assured Arohi he would be fine and after getting off the plane would call her immediately for sure. Arohi was highly disturbed, so Amrit made her sleep somehow. At midnight Amrit and Sudhir received the deadly news; they kept their promise. Arohi didn't even get a hint from them, Amrit often wept at the middle of night and Sudhir would watch his daughter helplessly. Arohi seemed lifeless those two weeks; finally Rashi had to do what Arjun's wish was. Prem and Heer Juneja; both are Arjun's school friend. They also reside in Canada; Prem has a special quality "he can imitate anyone's voice easily". What else Rashi and Rajveer made him talk to Arohi as Arjun. Prem denied at first; only for the sake of his friend's last wish he agreed. Heer also joined her husband in the plan to fight off the situation. Those pictures were also taken during Prem and Heer's engagement for fun. Arohi always has a doubt the person she is talking to isn't her Arjun. Still when hundred things go wrong, people tend to get diverted. Arohi also became a prey in the hand of destiny. Arohi's parents knew their daughter, so they never asked her about marriage and till now Arohi doesn't know about Ankahee Baate of her own Love Story. Her side of truth is surfaced by so much illusion that she is million miles far away from the reality.

Arjun stoop low in Arohi's eyes so he could keep her above high. He killed their love to protect his love. He broke her dream, but he is the one who brought new hopes in her life. He couldn't provide the happiness he wished for her; at least his soul would be happy to see her alive. What if he lost his life, he would always live through her. Her heart always called him with love, no matter what feeling.....still he remains in her heart as hatred. Arjun would have been her support in every foot step; though fate twisted their path. She is strong to live her life alone and again he is the reason. They couldn't live their lives with each other, but they are going to fulfill their journey together. He would remain her lucky star always showering her with all the happiness he could brought to her dull life. Love to hatred...does she really hate him, is there no feeling has left in her heart?? Whenever Arohi feels lonely she would go near the window and watch the shining stars blissfully. The thought that always cross her mind "hum hamesha saath rahenge, mein tumhari Arjun hoon, saya banke rahunga tumhare saath, humari pyaar ki kasam" Arohi would always close her eyes as she remembers these lines; letting herself lose in the sensation of that very special someone.....

Humein Pyaar Tumse, Wafa Yaar Tumse

Nata Ek Duje Se, Dile Izhar Tumse

Chahat Nehi Tum, Ibadat Ho Meri

Raha Nehi Tum, Manzil Ho Meri

Ajnabi Nehi Tum, Humsafar Meri

Meri Sasoon Ki, Haar Ehsaas Tumse

Na Jaane Kaise, Rishta Jur Gaya Gham Se

Kismat Ki Khel Dekho, Aab Hum Dur Tumse

Kaante Chubte Hai, Jab Tum Gujarti Ho Dard Se

Bewafa Nehi Hum, Phir Kyun Ho Khafa Humse

Maut Kya Cheez Hai, Karegi Mujhe Dur Tumse

Hum Saya Hoon Teri, Paoge Kareeb Dil Ke

Aye Yaar Meri, Humein Pyaar Tumse

Aye Dildar Meri, Hai Toh Baas Pyaar Tumse!!

[Arjun's POV....His Untold Haale Dil to Arohi (Ankahee)]


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Edited by Angel.KMH.AK - 13 years ago
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do u guys want the update now...or shud I edit later cauz I need help with the pm...

ok going to update later then!!

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if u can edit now
i will help out with pms
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Originally posted by: ...vibha...

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if u can edit now
i will help out with pms



ah I wish u came a while ago...I really need to go now...pakka ll try to edit soon!! u can help me then also!!
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Originally posted by: Angel.KMH.AK



ah I wish u came a while ago...I really need to go now...pakka ll try to edit soon!! u can help me then also!!


tab coll mein thi😕
k will help u later😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome part shona
toh kya prem bhi hai issme?
how could arjun do like that😡 par lagta hai he had a reason to do this
waiting to see how he will try to win arohi's trust again😍
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How did i miss this?! Thanks Vibha <3

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OMG! Loved it! Totally! Finally an OS where i admire Arohi as much as i admire Kritz! I would love to kknow more!! So do we have Prem here? I wish Heer leaves Arjun for Prem! Then Arjun will know what Arohi went through!!
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Originally posted by: -vrshn-

How did i miss this?! Thanks Vibha <3


no need dear😳
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Omg u started anothr os?? N arjun fallen fr heer?? Oye unhe kise prem ko dedo na ;)

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