All Yours - Arya FF - NOTE - pg 87 - Page 26

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tellyme

will update this tomorrow dear...

today trying to give IL - hope i am able too


wow... i will wait for that today... me loving the way the story is going...
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Posted: 13 years ago
i love the way story is progressing
and i know u would do a great job ahead
luv u and ur ffs
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 7

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Yash was not able to comprehend why he felt so different when he had just touched her' and how she had shivered just by his mere touch'

He wanted to give his mind some peace. He was not supposed to think about any girl this way, it was wrong. He was going to get married to Arpita. He thought of talking to Arpita.

In Arpita's home

Her Mom: "Are Yash Beta, come in."

"Aunty, I hope I did not disturb you all"

"What you are talking beta, If the incident with that girl not happened that day today we all would have already been part of one family' but we still are a family son"

It was clear, her disappointment about marriage getting cancelled.

Yash sat down

"I don't know why Arpita gets so emotional.. ek school kee friend hee to thi' I mean I understand what happened with her and it was unfortunate for any girl' per apnee shadi rukwa di' tum bhi uskee baat kahan taal sakte ho"

Yash gave a fake smile. What will he tell her that, it is that girl who is all over his mind these days' he just hoped he too treated her like just some other girl but it was not happening.

He then along with Arpita are sitting on the house lawn.. so many questions surrounding him

He placed his hand on the top of Arpita's and suddenly something which was on his mind slipped his tongue

"How does this feel"

"What? "

Arpita got confused and Yash himself got confused as why he asked such question. But now that he had asked he wanted to go ahead.

"My hand on yours" "What kind of question is this yashuu. It's always nice to be with you"

Yash though for a while, how to form the question? He needed to clear his mind and only Arpita could help him.

"No, I mean in different way"

"What different way. Everything is same between us so what will be different"

"Actully Arpi I want to ask, about a different sensation to you when I touch you' I mean compared to someone's else's touch"

"Yashuu what are you talking. We are not supposed to talk this way. We will me married in few days and this is not our culture to talk these things before marriage"

"For a moment Arpi, forget about our tradition, culture' it's between us, so let talk about us beyond these bonding"

She placed her palm on his fore head but all he was busy analyzing was how it felt' it felt good and caring but the jitter that Aarti had given him in just one touch was still lingering on his heart.

"Are you Ok yashu' why are you talking these?"

"Arpi, lets talk about the passion which we hold for each other beyond marriage' something magical"

Arpita gets angry, nothing he is talking getting into her head' why is he so desperate, she thinks

"Yashuu, I don't like talking these kind of talks, you are insulting our relation and whatever you are talking is just in books and movies"

"Arpi try to understand"

"No you go from here. What will mom and dad think if they know we are talking like this? For god shake they trust you"

"But I am talking about US only why will they know"

But before he could say anything Arpita left from there.

Yash left without any answer. Then he kept thinking, "I think my thoughts are only going wayward or else Arpi would not have been this angry."

"But she is supposed to understand me, I was asking some question, to whom will I ask if not Arpi. Why is she not reading my inner turmoil? Why did she not read thru my eyes that something is going behind me'"

But Arpita was thinking "I don't know why Yashu was talking like this' these things never came between us then why today."

"I must have not been so rude with him. Our happening marriage got postponed and how much he must have planned for it and thus he was asking such question"

But in private, the thought that she will be Yash's shaked her from within but she is not supposed to think that way before marriage.. She was not a cheap girl, she was from cultured family' her feeling were strong for yash but controlled.

Even Yash had stong feeling for Arpita but now it felt that it was controlled.

After seeing Aarti in that condition and then touching her and then her divine response to his just one touch has taught him a new feeling, a feeling that was not under any control, under any bondage or tradition'

It was just uncontrolled heart behaviour

Nerxt: Meeting at central playground.

Sorry for delay everyone. I know, if I write at this speed you will even forget the story but I was busy.

Girls, I am planning to get Yash and Arpita get married. Please post you view before I start writing next update.

Part 8

Thanks

-Anu

Edited by tellyme - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow.

wow. I was taken aback by Yash's question. really taken aback. It was so spontaneous.. so real.

everything of his inner turmoil, his unrest, his unresolved pull towards aarti, everything was this question.



a very sensitive update . really liked it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow this was a really good update... Yash in a turmoil. I don't mind a marriage update..it will be nice to see how he handles it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
aahhh...
i loved the update...
Poor Yash has no idea whts happening to him n d only person whu he thought wud undrstnd him finds his tok uncultured...
poor guy...

waitin to read more...
aaahh... i dnt mind wateva u think of... i knw it'll be gud... 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
well getting yash & arpita married ??? one day or d other dis has to happen,otherwise d story wont progress.will be waiting 4 d turn of events
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update !! 👏

really the change in yash feelings towards arthi is very a suprise !!! 😍
waiting for the next part !! 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago


wonderful update...

Yash wanted to clear his confusion, his thoughts by asking Arpita because he thinks that Arpita is the person who is nearest to him and knows him inside out and she will definately clear his confusion...but Arpita just ruined his expectations...
Arpita also don't feel anything for Yash...just a mere thought of being getting intimate with him after marriage gave her uneasiness...this shows they don't love each other...they are just friends...

Here getting married to each other will surely help them understand their feelings...and where they have gone wrong...

if suppose Yash understand his feelings now and brake marriage with Arpita to get Aarti in this juncture then he will feel guilty whole life that he cheated Arpita...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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