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Posted: 13 years ago
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avay aur pia epi s soo funny.. u rude gal.. i lk avau too. u md hm a cartoon😔... wanna maneet's entry soon.. otherwise im gonna kick u... dr.. he he hešŸ˜›
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Posted: 13 years ago
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good going dr.. awsum updt.. though lil bit sad.. bt d poems were beautiful.. superb...
continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Netz

good going dr.. awsum updt.. though lil bit sad.. bt d poems were beautiful.. superb...

continue soon...


Thank You, for your nice Comments...šŸ‘

Maaneet will be there in the next part...šŸ‘šŸ¼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovly update Payel DI.. really feeling sad.. the one incident took so many lives no??


leave it.. loving this stry.. hope u wl escp 4rm real world sun n gnna gv update..


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Netz

avay aur pia epi s soo funny.. u rude gal.. i lk avau too. u md hm a cartoon😔... wanna maneet's entry soon.. otherwise im gonna kick u... dr.. he he hešŸ˜›


I am so very sorry if I've hurt your emotions...šŸ˜”

But, you like "Abhay Raichand" and I wrote "Avay Raichand"...

Be cool his character will turn romantic 😊
Edited by panchaali - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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prologue
wow that was too good...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 1
this one is too different dear...
poor Maan and Geet...
cont soon dear...
and pm me...
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A/N: Hi fellas I am back again, after a long break, hope you people did not forget me totally. I wrote it with high fever and I still have fever though not that high, please forgive if I am not at my best šŸ˜”


Chapter 2

Cold November wind chilled her spine and reminded her again that she is totally alone in this world. Even the grayish bird is also nowhere to be seen. She closed the window and changed her dress, then looked at the deserted house; felt it is to be cleaned. She thought it will keep her mind busy for few hours, thus will change her mood too. But that was not so easy; every corner of this house bears a memory; memory of their happy married life. She cooked food to feel at home, but cannot shallow a bit.

Then, when the black night fell upon Blossom she went to sleep alone, knowing it will not touch her eyes. She rose from the large bed after a few moments and opened the diary which was once presented to her by her husband. She loves writing, but never got time to do it being busy with her happy moments.

Now at this cold night when all of her joy left her, and just remained as a memory, she felt to share her distress with this diary.

...

While holding cured Preeto on his hand, he felt like he has saved Sameera's soul. Immediately he felt relieved. Now that he knows she is resting at peace.

Preeto kissed Maan, on his cheek, and his last drop of tear combined with a smile. He doesn't know how the bird recovered within a moment which was so gravely injured, he is happy that she (Preeto) is fine and any practical explanation is of least importance to him now. He opened the window and raised his hand to make her fly, but she refused and came closer to him. In a moment he felt sorry, it is a cold night and the predator which has attacked her may be destroyed her nests too. He kissed the bird on her head and muttered in a soothing voice, "Come home Birdie".

...

"Dear Diary"

"Knowing the fact clear enough that happiness increases if it is shared, I have never tended to do it with anyone before as obsessed with the fact that my joys, my pleasures are all mine; and wanted it to be remain mine forever. But life shows everything in a balance. While being so happy with him, I never have understood that it was my happiness for lifetime. May be in this life I will never be happy again. I have lived my share of Joy in those five months with him. And here in this dark, cold night, I came to share my grief with you, so that it could be reduced, you must be thinking what kind of selfish girl I am! Yes I am indeed. That is why no joy, smile in this world is left for me."


She knows her tears cannot return back her husband, yet she cannot control it. Tears welled up in her eyes and it fell on her diary like drops of pearl. In her mourn she didn't realize she was not the only mourning one; there was another, the grayish love bird, who too was crying.

She tore the diary page in frustration and threw it on the floor, then lied down on the bed. Just in a moment the love bird's (Lucky) eyes gleamed as if he has remembered something-

"Tears of love

More than elixir..."

Silently he took the thrown diary paper and realized, her tears indeed have a strong magical power. It means she bears a pure heart. Holding the paper Lucky looked for an opened window which he has managed to find and flew in utter happiness. He knows now, nothing in this world can stop him from finding his love.

...

The whole dream world felt relieved. Tears fell from Savitri Devi's eyes.

"Are you crying Savitri?" King Albus Dumbledore inquired.

Before she answered anything the famous fairy Tanushree has come forward, "These are the tears of Happiness, Your Highness." Savitri Devi smiled. The King also smiled and the fairy interrupted again, "Sorry for disturbing again Your Highnesses but the Nightmare Lord mustn't know anything about cured Preeto. Otherwise his hate birds will be crazy and...

Savitri Devi completed the sentence, "And no more attack on my kids, that Vola will never know this."

"The only fear is Mamaji your Highness. he can open his mouth in pride."

"Go and stop him somehow, you are wise enough to do this, my fairy." King Albus looked at her. She bowed and left.

In the gate "the mamji" lecturing the dukhi vampire, " Dekho beta yeh Vola na tum dono ko kabhi ek nahi hone dega." He murmured in Avay's ear, " Abhi vhi time hai, tu apni churel ko leke dream world pe aaja. Hum teri shaadi karayenge. Akhir Vampire vhi toh insaan hai na!"

"Now you are crossing your limit Mr. Empty head."

"Oye pyar mein na koi limit simit nahi hota hai!"

" You are right empty head" Voldemort sneered showing his bared teeth, "Nor in the War".

"Won't it be amazing if I kill you and enter in your sweet dreamy world!"

"Oye Tu kitna niche girega Vola!"

"Then just shut up, no need to ruin my faithful Vampire's brain" Avay was so happy hearing this that he laughed baring his fangs, and at that very moment Tanushree entered with her centaur cameraman. She got so scared looking at Avay's fangs that she closed her eyes, "Oh my God! Please, save me!"

"Jolly good show my fair vampire, you too can create fear!" Voldemort let out a wild laughter.

Avay blushed and smiled, " But, Vola sir, I had no intension to scare this nice young fairy." He looked at "T" apologetically.

In a moment T started her action, "Awwn, such a sweet vampire, pleased to meet you sir."

"I was wrong, Raichand remains the gateman." Voldemort looks double angry.

"But, Mr. raichand, you are the hero of all the fairies of our world! Please smile in front of the camera."

Avay blushed more and his employer got angrier.

T turned at the centaur cameraman, "Dear, centaur we need a huge poster of our vampire hero in the magazines, " The latest Dreams" and "The Rarest Dreams".

"As you wish Miss." The centaur smiled and in the meantime passed the necessary information to Mamji.

"You know, hearing your inspirational love story with your churel, some fairies even thought of becoming churel." T gave dreamy smile.

Seeing that a beautiful fairy is interviewing his gateman instead of him, the Nightmare lord got angrier, so T immediately shifted her attention to him.

"Hello sir, how are you feeling now?"

"You mean, by knowing the fact that I can take dream world just within a moment and still not able to take it!" He spat some mud in the camera screen, T looked scared.

She didn't dare to ask him anymore question and turned in front the camera'..

"Dear, daydreamers and nightmare lovers (she made an"Yuk" sound in her mind while addressing the Nightmarers)

"Do you guys think that nightmare lord can attack Dream world?"

" Please vote for us through your dreams and nightmares. Your votes matter the most." She ended in a dreamy voice and looked at the Voldemort's angry red eyes and left the place as quickly as possible.

...

Maan gave the bird some food and caressed her head. She was eating quietly, but suddenly he saw her eyes so impatient as if she felt someone's presence; she left her food immidiately and roamed here and there in the room. She wanted the window to be opened, so tucked her beak on the window glass. Maan opened it ; and she flew instantly.

In few hours he became so attached to this bird as if it is his daughter. He became very much worried at her weird behavior. Just then he saw the most magical scene of his life.

...

"Finally we broke it!!! Hip hip hurrey!" Vikram jumped on a tree. Nayantara looked serious, but we are on a tree, no lovely love birds here!

"Oh! Dear black beauty, don't be that serious always! We'll find them too, now let me rest at the night" Vikram yawned.

"Not until I get those birds." Nayantara barked (Cawing will be least to describe how she yelled).

"You are a stubborn lady, I don't like you."

"You don't have to like me, hate bird." She screamed.

"Okay, as you wish."

And they started searching, suddenly in front of a house Nayantara jumped in the sky, "Gotcha". Vikram also felt a strong sensation of dream.

"Those birds got to be here".

...

Two love birds kissing each other in his room. One of those birds is his little cute bird, he doesn't recognize the another. But this got to be her mate he thought and smiled. Maan has never thought that he will smile again. Seeing those birds he felt, he had never been in love so much with anyone-not even his own self, and felt that he had never known love in his life. Sameera, will remain in his mind like a beautiful chapter, but about love he thought, "It will be mean if I enclose love just in a small chapter."

Those beautiful birds created an aura of light so powerful that it washed every single trace of darkness from his mind.

Maan Sing Khurana, the man of strict reality finally started to believe in the word called "miracle".


Suddenly a paper fell on his shoulder and then on the ground. He was so amazed, so engrossed in thought that he forgot to notice it was from the grayish bird's left leg. Slowly he took the paper and opened it. Before thinking the fact that -Reading a personal mail is totally an ill manner! He read it and couldn't stop reading it again and again.

His dark eyes which were shining just a few moments ago became dark like cloud again and he felt, he is not the only one, who has lost some dear one. Holding that page he uttered a single sentence, "Someone is still in pain and she doesn't deserve to be in this pain." He caressed the scribble with his hand, as if he can feel the pain hidden beneath those words. He touched those words again and wet page made him realize that the person was crying while writing.

"Oh God, how will I help this girl? Who is she? Where does she live?"... Then he gave a little pause to his thought..."Whoever she is, must be very nice and sweet, like the very word "Misti". A smile crossed his lips unconsciously.

"What am I thinking? How will I know that she is sweet!" Maan Sing Kurana cannot be unconscious more than a second, not even in his deep sleep!

But the next step he took was a mixture of his unconscious, subconscious mind added with some urgency to help a person, who is in grief.

He clutched a pen and started writing something on that very paper and after finishing he left the page at the very place he saw it first.

Maan prayed in his mind closing his eyes (Who has never prayed throughout his life), So that this page could reach to his "Misti Friend".

After opening his eyes, he laughed at himself for acting like silly. How this letter would reach to her! May be the rough Himalayan wind brought it out of nowhere.

But, on that very day he has seen so many miracles, which none can imagine in a lifetime. So the he started imagining and muttered under his breath, "May be this very wind will carry my words to her."

And in the blink of his eyes, the paper was gone, so as the grayish bird. He found out that his cute little bird is looking at him, wanting some more adoration from her new father. Maan rushed towards her and kissed her on temple.

'''''''''

Vikram and Nayantara watched, name of the house is "Dream Villa". Vikram let out another devilish laughter, "Black beauty, you really are wicked. We have landed in the proper place."

Nayantara gave him a faint flirty smile, "All windows are closed."

Vikram smirked," Not anymore my lady." And he opened the window through his magic.

"Thank you wicked head." Nayantara smirked back.

Inside the room they got the sensation that someone is having a very sweet dream.



Then they saw a beautiful girl was sleeping while smiling and uttering, "My dreamy Prince Charming Stefan, I totally love You"



...

Abhy Raichand fans I have nothing against him, I just needed a famous Vampire character for this story, and who could fit better than him!!! And I've changed his name to "Avay".

Precap

Geet will get Maan's letter, they will meet face to face just after one or two chapters...šŸ˜‰

Dear readers I am a lazy writer, if you want me update soon, thus read Maan's healing words to Geet, then please please please make haste and hit the like button, don't forget to leave a comment

With Love

Panchaali Or Payel...call me by any name you wish 😊


Edited by panchaali - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely update...
maan named geet without seeing her
wow!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved the Update
Awesome
continue soon
thankx for pm



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