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Posted: 13 years ago
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time for celebration...

this post will make me complete 1000 posts finally 🥳

m so excited about getting promoted now after alonggg wait in this forum 😃

so m posting here my "the excuse"

this is the first time i wrote something.. hope you all like it.. please do share all your valuable comments and views..
and do like if you want me to continue further with this 😛

hello everyone!!

we saw almost all avatars of kushi. but m writing a ss which is dedicated to her desparate avatar.
hope you will like it..
please do share you views and comment 🤗

I reach for you, hand outstreched,

but I lose my balance and fall instead.

I run towards you, and short of breath,

but you disappear like mist before I touch you.


The excuse!

The story is actually on what actually kushi expects from arnav.

Arnav tries in everyway to bring back kushi's smile but unfortunately he fails in making kushi happy. The days came to an end, the contract marriage is going to end in 2 days. Kushi decides to leave RM for sake of arnav-anjali relation and acts as if she is firm on her decision in front of arnav even though she never really wanted to leave but situation didn't favour her this time like it happens everytime.arnav tries his level best to stop his lady love but kushi acts as if she doesn't give a damn about arnav anymore and tries to avoid him. Kushi was actually dying inside.. she couldn't see her lion having tears in his eyes. But she had no other option other than hiding all her feelings.

Kushi packs up her bag. Arnav tries to communicate with kushi for the last time but fails in all attempts. Each and every imcomplete word of arnav was stabbing her, peircing her and hurting her beaneath.. she never wanted to interept arnav when he is talking to her but she had to do this for the last time.

Hari prakash enters the room

Hp: kushiji! Naniji is waiting for you.

Kushi: ji hpji! Tell naniji that m coming

Hp leaving the room

Arnav is standing back of kushi with a blank expression. This is the first time that arnav singh raizada was confused about how to communicate with his lioness..

Arnav finally makes himself ready to talk to her and try his luck for the last time

Arnav: kk..uusshii *hesitates*

Before arnav could utter the next word out kushi cuts him in between and tells

Kushi:arnavji humme apse se kuch kehna hain! *arnavji!i have totalk to you*

Arnav: haa.. *before he could complete "haan kushi bolo"' he get intrepted again by kushi*

Kushi: look arnav ji *with a firm voice* I want a peceful life from now on atleast. You ruined almost all my life and shattered my dreams.. atleast from now onwards I want a peacefll and happy life like I had before. Hope you understand

Arnav: kushi *with angry voice*

And this time before he could complete his dialouge anjili calls arnav

Anjali: aarrrnnnaaavvv chhoottteee.. tum kahaaannn hooo.. jaldi idhar aaaooo

Arnav looks angrily at kushi for avoiding him.. he leaves the room banging the door hard against the wall and with tears in his eyes..

Kushi walks down the stairs slowly towards naniji who was sitting on dining table..

She falls in deep thought about how she could be so harsh to her lion. But she had to do this so that arnav doesn't visit bua's house to meet her and instead look at his dii till she gets well.

Naniji, payal and nk come to accompany kushi till the door..

This time it was really hard for kushi to control her tears.. her eyes get totally filled with tears.

She steps a step towards door and turns back to look at her sasural for the last time completely..

nk gifts her a bracelet which had beads of letter which stated "nannav ki sanka devi"

she smiles! and thanks nk for the wonderfull gift.

Naniji goes closer to kushi and kisses on her forehead..payal understands kushi's pain and places a reassuring hand on kushi head.. kushi runs to her dii and hugs her hard to control the tears..

In meanwhile, she spots arnav staring at her with moist eyes. Those eyes almost killed her, made her weak, she couldn't look at those eyes anymore.. she wanted to go and drink the deepness of those eyes.. she wanted those eyes to stare at her forever but reality pinches her hard and she comes into sense. She suddenly releases herself from the hug and rushes out of RM.

Coming up: guys! M bringing you the new face of kushi for the first time.

I going to bring a desperate vatar of kushi

"kushi makes bahana's/excuses to talk to arnav". and "why actually anjali called arnav is suspence which will be revealed soon"

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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 2

Let me not to the marriage of true minds

admit impediments. Love is not love

which alters when it alteration finds,

or bends with the remover to remove:

O no! It is an ever-fixed mark

that looks on tempests and is never shaken;

it is the star to every wandering bark,

whose worth's unknown, although his height be taken.

Love's not time's fool, though rosy lips and cheeks

within his bending sickle's compass come:

love alters not with his brief hours and weeks,

but bears it out even to the edge of doom.

If this be error and upon me proved,

I never writ, nor no man ever loved.

-- William Shakespeare

The excuse

Part 2

Kushi reaches lucknow! Buaji and ammaji arrive at the station to receive her. Kushi prepares herself as if everything is fine with her before she faces buaji and amma. She gets down the train and hugs both bua and amma tightly. Amma observes change in kushi's behavior

Kushi: ammmaaa' buaaa.. *shouting loudly and showing a big wide fake smile to conver up her tears*

Kaise hain aap donno?

Buaji: aayyeee sanka devi.. tum akele tapak padi phir se.. *you came alone?*

Kushi: *hesitates* woo.woh sab bahut busy hain buaji..*translation:everyone are busy buaji*

*cuts the topic in middle*

Abb buaji will you make me stand in station and ask everything? Don't you have any plans of taking me back to home? *smiles naughtly*

Amma beats her slowly on head

Amma: tum bhi na kushi.. you started you drama as soon as you came

All three laugh and take a taxi back to home..

On way, kushi sees sheeshmahal. Tears enroll.. she tries to hide her pain hard and then suddenly buaji moves closer to kushi

Buaji:aayeee kushi!! Ye dekho tumhara sheeshmahal aagaya.. *kushi look the sheeshmahal has come*

You meet arnav bitwa here only for the first time na.. who knew that we would get a beautiful handsome, well-behave damaad like arnav bitwa..

Kushi: ha..aann *tries hard to talk but tears cut her voice*

Buaji: aaayyee sanka devi.. now what happened to you.. arnav bitwa ko miss kar rahin ho kya?

Kushi gets shocked about how buaji knew that she was missing arnav.. kushi gets lost in her thoughts!

Before she comes into senses.. the taxi dropped them in their house..

Kushi runs inside and hugs babuji!

Kushi:kaise hain aap babuji!! I missed you a lot.. you know na that your daughter can't live for long without.. did you miss me.

Babuji nodes his head in a positive reply and blesses her..

Amma goes closer to kushi and asks whether she is fine

Kushi : i..iii am fine amma.. *and tries to divert the topic*

Amma! M feeling verrryyy hungry.. I came from so far and you're asking me question instead of doing pooja to my little tummy.. challooo naa.. I want to eat all what you made for me..

Amma smiles and hugs kushi. All have a tummy full of lunch.. kushi rushes to her bedroom soon after lunch and locks herself inside..

She sits in a corner and cries till all her tears get dried and they leave a patch on her face.. she turns pale.. she misses his scent.. his lips.. his hard tight grip.. she misses the smoothness of the coat whenever she hugs him.. she misses each and everything of her lion..

The lioness has become weak.. she gets tired hunting for love.. her heart screams to hear arnav voice..

She looks at her cell..

The screen shows blank

She keeps locking at the cell for every 2 minutes in hope of getting a call from her lion..

Having the whole world around her.. she still feels as if she is missing her soul.. the smile became costly for her.. she couldn't couldn't afford to get back her own smile.

All she wanted is to hear the roar of her lion..

She spends complete two days waiting for an approach from arnav's side.

But all the time she waited goes waste.. and finally an idea pops up in her mind..

She dresses herself and rushes out to the market..

She informs buaji that she is going to get veggetables.. kushi gets an fake sim.

Kushi puts the fake sim in her mobile and texts arnav

Kushi's message: "hello ria! Where the hell are you? Are you atleast alive?

Arnav recieves the message.. he looks at the new no. and ignores. He doesn't even bothers to check what is inside it.

Kushi waits for the reply! She waits till the day turns dark.

The no response irritates the lioness and she decides to text him again for the last time..

After dinner she moves to her rooms and jumps on her bed.. pulls the cells down from the pillow and types another message

Kushi's message:" why do you overact so much? Can't you reply me back?" *she giggles imagning what her lion's expression will be seeing sucha a message from an unknown no.*

"A new message from laad governer" pops up in her mobile screen.

She gives a thousand watt smile and quickly open up the message.

Arnav's reply: what the.

Kushi smiles and slips slowly into her dreams by placing her cell on her heart.. that reply of arnav meant a lot for kushi..

A new sun rises! With new hopes and new dreams.

She wakes up and gets ready rushes to have breakfast. And makes loads and loads of jalebi's for the sweet shop..

Babuji,buaji and amma look surprise at her weird behavior.. this is the first time she was laughing like mad after she came to lucknow.

The sun gets ready to bid bye to everyone.. the moon rises up.. kushi gets excited

An another idea pops up her mind

This time she takes her cell and calls her laad governer

The cell shows: calling laad governor..

She gets no response

Tries an another time

Still no response

This pisses her up

And she keeps on sending him blank messages

Suddenly her cell shows : laad governer(home) calling'

Kushi's presses the answer button hard..

and cover's her mouth with her duppata so that he won't recognise her voice..

the conversation:

kushi: *waits to hear her lion's voice first*
arnav: hel..l'o *she hears his voice and cuts him before he could complete his "hello"*

kushi: heellooo riaaa' *shouting on phone*

sorry.. sorryyy.. soorrryyy'.. *not giving the other person a chance to talk*

I misses you a lot.. how are you? How are everyone in the family doing? Did u miss me too? What are you doing now? *she kept asking all questions she wanted ask her lion like a tv anchor.. not even giving the person on other side to talk*

Arnav was surprised!

Arnav: whaattt thee.. *in his firm tone*

Kushi giggled

Arnav:excuse me! Who the hell are you? And how dare you giggle? Whom do you wanna talk to? And who the @#$% is this ria huh? *totally frustrated*

Kushi laughs out load

Kushi talks to herself "haayeee my laad governor! Look at the way he is talking to other girl.. laad governor will remain laad governor"

Arnav: are you alive? Why ain't you answering me dammit? *angrily*

Kushi *she loves when she irritates arnav so she comes up with another idea*

Kushi: unclejiii!! Aap? Aap kaise hain? Mein bol rahin hoon. Ria hai kya ghar pe?

*translation: uncleee!! You? How are you? It is me who is talking.. is ria at home?*

Arnav: *question mark face and confused*

Excuse me? Uncle? Do I look like uncle to you miss.whatever

Do you know to whom you're talking to?

Kushi:*giggling* no.

Arnav: no? you're talking to arnav singh raizada *in his husky voice*

Kushi: oh! Who is he? *trying to irritate him a bit more?*

And what should I do if your arnav singh raizada? I don't care who you are.

Arnav: what the.. you lady! You have to pay high for this.

Kushi laughs out louder and the dupatta she covered on her mouth falls down and arnav gets to hear kushi giggling..

He gets confused.. he tries to hear the voice carefully

Arnav: kkuuu..

Kushi hears him and suddenly disconnects the call.

Her eyes go wide. she goes in shock and thinks for long time about how her lion recognized her voice so soon.. she gets scared.

Arnav on the other side thinks it just his imagination. And throws the phone on side..

Both go into deep sleep thinking about each other by placing each others photos on their heart!

Next part: the precap is about what happened after kushi left RM! What is that secret which anjili is hiding from arnav? Is she upto something?


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Posted: 13 years ago
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here comes my part 3

Love is always patient and kind; it is never jealous; love is never boastful or conceited; it is never rude or selfish; it does not take offense, and is not resentful. Love takes no pleasure in other people's sins but delights in the truth; it is always ready to excuse, to trust, to hope, and to endure whatever comes.

Love does not come to an end.

--I Corinthians 13: 4-8
Jerusalem Bible

The excuse

Part 3

After kushi left RM;

Nani, nk and payalcome back to the living room and sit down..

Silence engulfed between all of them..

Nani sees payal who was totally upset and crying

Nani goes and sits beside payal and consoles her

Nani:payal bitiya! Trust me everything will be okay soon. Don't worry.

Nk:haan payalji! Don't cry.. please don't sob sob..

How can you foget our plan payal di *winking his eyes and shouting on top of his voice in excitement*

At once payal and nani respond to nk response with a "shhh"

Nk:okay okay!! Sorry pathi hogaya..

Payal and nani again together: palthi nahin galthi

Nk:yeah'. Yeah! Sorry.. palthi,kalthi aur galthi.. I get confused you know.. I meant "mistake"

*biting his tongue*

All three laugh together..

Nani:nk bitwa and payal bitiya' both of you come to my room after having dinner tonight!

I have to talk something very important with you..

Nk and payal nod there head in a positive response like small kids

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Here on the side! As soon as kushi leaves rm.. arnav goes inside and lock himself in room.

He recollects each and every moment he spent with kushi. Their first meeting at sheeshmahal and their journey from lucknow to delhi, from delhi to office, from office to rm, from rm to gh back to lucknow now.

He finds hard to digest the truth that kushi left him forever and ever.

He blames himself for everything he did with kushi.. he feels that he is responsible for whatever happened with him today and whatever happened before between him and kushi.

Then suddenly he gets a wrong text *the one I mentioned in my previous part.. kushi texts him from another no.*

He ignores it and gets into deep thoughts of kushi..

After sometime,

Arnav gets call from aman

Arnav:haan! Aman. What's the matter?

Arnan:sir! The UK clients are arriving to the office with an hour.

Arnav:aman! Cancel the meeting *in a low dull firm voice*

Aman: sir but this is a 5000crore deal. You have waited for an year to sing this deal up and you're the one who fixed this day for the meeting. We already took huge amount of advance from them.we can't cancel the meeting now sir. Our company will go in huge loss if we do so.

Arnav: I don't care aman. Do whatever I tell you to do. Jus..tt just cancel the meeting right now.

Aman: sir! B..uu.t

Arnav hangs the phone up before aman could complete his dialogue and throws the cell in some corner of the room..

Arnav goes and stands infront of the mirror in his room. He involuntarily slips into deeps thoughts of kushi and gets into a dream

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Dream:

Arnav finds himself in a white tuxedo.

The room is decorated with red roses and white candels..kushi suddenly opens the door.. she looked adorable and stunning in a white plain saree with a red chamki and stone studded border and loose hair.

Arnav kept staring at the image of kushi in mirror.. he moves closer to the mirror and exceeds his hand to touch her and suddenly the image disappears..

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Arnav looks around the room and pool side.

Goes back to mirror to get a small sight of his lioness image but the reality slaps him hard on his face..

He shouts : kushiii.. ku.ku.. uu.. kushiii' where are you dammit

*till his voice gets soar*

He hits his hand hard against the mirror and the mirror breaks leaving a dark deep scar on his hand.. tears run down his twinkling eyes..

He goes to the pool side and collapses on the same place where kushi cried after the marriage..

He cries till his tears get dried.

The loneliness hugs him tight and the lion forgets his roar.

Payal and nk assemble in naniji's room as decided in the morning.

Nk:hello naniji! We're here.

Naniji:nk bitwa, payal bitwa come inside and sit beside me.

Both of them go and sit beside naniji.

Payal:naniji! What do you think anjili dii decided?

Naniji: even m thinking of the same thing payal bitiya.. this is the reason why I called you both here.

I didn't get any response from anjili bitiya till now.

Nk stares with glued yes at both payal and nani concerntrating on what they are talking.

Payal: naniji! Shall I go and findout from anjili dii?

Naniji: haa.aa

*before naniji could complete her dialogue "haan" nk cuts her in between*

Nk:nooo.. no no naniji.. I'll go to anjili dii.. mein unhe kinchtha hoon

Nani and payal again laugh out loud and correct him "kinctha nahin poonchtha hoon"

Nk bites his tounge..

Nk correcting his dialogue: i mean I'll go and ask

Before nk prepares himself and ready to leave the room. Someone knock at the room.

Nk opens the door and stays stunned on the spot.

Payal and nani stand up and look at nk's weird statue avatar.

Payal:kya hua nanheji?

Suddenly anjili enters the room and stands infront of naniji.

Anjali: *in herfirm voice* naniji! i came to decision about what even you said me.

Nk, payal and naniji stay shocked on the spot with their eyes wide open.

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precap: what happened btw payal,naniji and anjili? to whom did anjili called and what is anjili's decision.

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edited: this is the parallel story! in my previous part we saw what happened with kushi.. so here i wrote about what happened in rm after she left. 😛


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Posted: 13 years ago
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~ Just once I want someone to look at me right away and think I was beautiful. Not after they get to know me, or after they see inside my soul, just me. I want to walk in a room and light up, not blend.


~ Walking down the hall with her head held high, every hair is in its place, sees a friend and she waves hi, wearing a smile on her perfect face. Friendly, smart, and beautiful, everyone adores this girl. Seemingly content, her head's in a whirl. Inside she's unhappy, and doesn't know why. She lays in her bed at night and cries. She doesn't know what causes the tears; how could this princess have insecurities or fears? She has it all. A pretty smile, many friends, a great guy, the newest trends, her family has money, she gets good grades, has her own car, and her makeup never fades. Always looking happy, every single day, but inside she's feeling a different way. This is wonder girl, she's everyone's dream, but things aren't always what they seem.

The excuse

Part 4

Anjili tells naniji that she has taken a finally decision regarding what naniji told her.

Flash back:

On the early day before kushi left RM.. Naniji and payal go to anjili's room.

Naniji knocks anjili's door which breaks the silence in anjili's room

Nani: anjili bitiya! Have you taken your tablet?

Anjili: haan naniji!

Nani *hesitating* :anjili bitiya.. i.. err.. I

Anjili: what happened naniji? do you want to tell anything to me?

Nani: haan bitiya! Act.. actually. I have to tell you a very important matter b.u..t

Anjili:but what naniji?

Naniji: anjili bitiya! I don't know whether you will believe me or not but I feel it is better to tell the truth to you before it becomes to late.

Anjili: haan naniji! please tell.

Naniji: the day shyam was thrown out of the house, I spoke to arnav bitwa and kushi bitiya.

Arnav bitwa told that he got to know shyam's real face long back during payash wedding itself.

Payal and nani tell the entire truth about kushi's innocence and shyam's dirty tricks.

Anjili gives a blank look to both nani and payal.

Payal tells anjili about how shyam cheated kushi and her entire family in detail.

Anjili: what are you both talking? Naniji I want to live alone for some time. I want to take rest. Can you leave me alone.

Nani: anjili bitiya! We will leave you alone. But i have a request. Please think about everything once again. We all always think about your well-being bitiya. Even for me it was hard to digest the truth. But the truth will always remain truth. Kushi is innocent.. she hide the matter from all of us only because of your well-being. And now also she is leaving delhi and going back to lucknow for sake of your happiness. Kushi always thought about others before thinking about herself. Before it becomes too late.. I want you to go to the core of the matter and I hope you will tell me what you decided as soon as possible.

Payal: yes dii!! Whatever naniji is telling is the ultimate truth and there is another thing you don't know.. kushi is not leaving RM simply. She has a very strong reason behind that and that is arnavji married kushi forcefully on our wedding night! It was not a love marriage dii.. it was just a 6 months contract marriage. Before kushi went to pack up her clothes.. she came near me and told me the entire truth behind the contract marriage.. arnavji blackmailed her by telling that he will break my relation with aakash if kushi doesn't agree to marry him and kushi was made bali ka bakra and today the 6 months contract came to an end. She always paid for the sins she never did. She had to sacrifice her dream of big fat wedding for my dreams. *payal broke down and left the room running*

*naniji left the room behind payal*

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Anjili calls arnav to her room *as mention in the first part*

Anjili: chooottheeyyy.. choootthheeyyy

Arnav enters anjili's room.

Anjili: chottey! Come here.

Arnav goes closer to anjili and sits beside her on the bed.

Arnav: haan dii.. *hiding his tears*
anjili: what happened chottey?

Arnav: dii.. wo.. woh.. kushi is leaving me.. she is leaving rm forever dii..

He collapses on his dii's lap and starts crying..

Anjili runs her fingers through arnav's hair and pats his back.. consoling him.

Anjili: chotteyy!! You should let kushi go away.

Arnav: dii? *his eyes filled with pain and tears*

Anjili: arnav you have to choose one between me and kushi.

If you want me you have to let her go away.

Arnav looks shocked at her dii..

Anjili: why are you silent arnav? You want kushiji right? Fine. I'll leave RM instead of kushi.

Arnav: dii! What are you talking? You are always important to me.

Arnav doesn't understand anything but seeing his dii's condition he feels its better he listens to his dii.

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Arnav leaves anjili room. He locks himself in his room.

Present:

Anjili gets up and goes to naniji's room.

Anjili:naniji! m really sorry. I came to know everything. Everything got ruined because of me but it is me who is going to bring kushiji back. *hugging naniji tightly*

Naniji, nk and payal together: whhhaaattt?? *with theirs eyes wide open*

Anjili: *with a small smile on her face* haan naniji! I'll teach that criminal a leason myself soon but before that we have to get kushiji's happiness back. Kushi had to suffer a lot because of me and my happiness.

Chottey did a very big mistake by hurting kushiji and broke all her marriage dreams. So now m going to fullfill all of them one by one. Will you all be with me in my mission "bringing kushiji back to chottey's life"

*anjili looks at naniji,payal and nk..waiting for her answer*

All three of them go and hug anjili hard and thank her.

Payal: naniji!! this is really a good news right. Just give me 10 mintutes I'll make dii's favorite sweet and come.

*payal leaves the room*

Nk: sweets.. mmm *drooling* now even m feeling hungry.. from morning because of tension I couldn't eat anything.. now I should preg pooja..

Naniji looks at nk with embarresment and coorects him. "pet pooja"

Nk: opps sorry.. I'll be right back naniji and dii..

*he runs out of room towards dinning room catching his tummy. *

Nanjili sees anjili wipping her tears secretly..

Naniji calls anjili closer to her

Naniji: anjili bitiya what wrong? Are you hiding anything from me?

Anjili breakdown on the spot and starts crying.

Nanji gets tensed..

Naniji: what happened anijili bitiya? Anjili bitiya.. look at me.. what happened bitiya?

Tell me.

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Flashback 2: after naniji and payal left the room. Anjili couldn't digest the fact that her own husband who spent so many years with her has cheated her.. she tries to get into the core of the matter.

She searches the entire cupboard to get any clue.. she suddenly finds an old shyam's sim. She puts it up in her mobile and check all messages..

Suddenly she comes acroos a text "rocky! Get a cd of temple bells and train sound within 2 minutes and play it in the place where that arnav is kept and play it"

Anjili gets shocked.. suddenly she remembers about the cd which shyam gave when she asked him to get soft music cd..

To re-confirm she plays it. It is the same cd which shyam was asking rocky to play.

Tears roll out of her eyes.. but this time she chooses to be strong instead breaking down like she does always..

She quickly takes her cell and calls back to the no. from which she got missed call last night.

She changes her accent and imitates kushi's accent.

the phone rings.. the person on other side lifts up the call.

And she is shocked to hear that it is none another than shyam..

Anjili *trying hard to talk in kushi's accent*: hello shyamji. It is me kushi.

Shyam: haan kushiji! I knew you will call me back. What happened? How come you remembered me? No one believed you right? *talking sarcastically*

Hehehe. I knew it kushiji. You will come near me begging to prove your innocence but this time I won't help you. I will never forget your so called husband did to me in front of all raizada's. just keep counting each minute from today onwards within two days you and the entire raizada property will be mine.. with two days I'll make anjili herself bring me back to RM and your husband will fall on my feet and apologize for what he did to me and begg me to come back into his dii's life.. hahaha. Don't worry kushiji! You have another last chance.i still love only you.. rani saiba was just a medium for me to reach near you.. If you choose me you will get to live in full comfort along with me in RM. That day is not far when all raizada's will be living on streets of delhi.. what happened kushiji? Why no answer? Don't take so much time to think.

Anjili hangs the phone up.. she throws it outside in the pool and collapses down..

She hated herself for supporting sucha disgusted cheap man. She felt like killing herself.

All the moments she spent with shyam run like a horror movie in front of her eyes.

She cries hard.. shouting "why shyamji.. whyyy??? Why did u do this to me? Whyyy?? Whyyy?? Whyyy??? "

She breaks all gifts shyam gave her.. she drains the sindoor box in toilet.. she gets closer to jula..

Again the flash back flashed in front of her eyes.. when shyam gifted her the jula..

She pushes the jula hard.. it falls upside down and brakes down near the jula and starts crying leaning on it.. and suddenly something sticks to her hand.. at first she ignores it and tries to walk away but then she gets doubt and looks behind to check it out..

She wipes her tears and gets closer to jula.. she finds a envelope which was sticked at the bottom of the jula with plaster.. she carefully removes the plaster and opens the envelope..

Finds it out to be none another than the will papers kushi was talking about while revealing shyam's truth infront of the whole family.

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Anjili's silence makes nanji get more tensed.

Nanji: anjili bitiya pleaseee.. I tell me what happened? Aapko hamari kasam..

Anjili gets back into her sense.

Anjili tells whatever happened after nanji and payal left the room.. she tell nani about the phone call and shows her the will paper too..

Anjili: naniji! I stopped chottey and let kushiji go away today because.. even kushiji suffered a lot more than me..

Who can understand her pain more than me. That's why I let kushiji go away..

Chottey should regret whatever he did to kushiji till today for my sake.. all men are same. But now I don't want my chottey to do such stupid things again in future..

I want chottey to suffer.. let him understand the importance of kushiji. And then meanwhile we will work on our mission.

Nani hugs anjili tight. Both of them cry for sometime.

Nani: anjili bitiya. You also suffered a lot till today.. m always there for you.. I will be with you no matter what and bring your happiness back too.. I promise.

Nani wipes anjili's tears and suddenly payal, nk come inside with plates full of anjili's favorite dishes.

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precap: anjili forces arnav to take up the 3000crore deal. delhi in lucknow become one 😉


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here i come with something new again 😉

did u ever see anjali doing drama/nautanki wantedly? weird right?
read my new ss to know whats going on 😊

Love is not always the easy way. This is something they don't tell you in the movies. Love sometimes is the winding road. This is something you do not read about in fairy tales. There are moments when you hearts will seem to travel as two ships passing in the night. There are moments when you might ask "who is this stranger in my bed"? Dont look away from love. Look deeply at love, look longly at love, and it will ignite again.


--Anonymous

The excuse!

Part 5

the sun rises high bringing bag of new hopes in both RM and GH.

AT GH:
Kushi welcomes the new early morning biding bye to her dream filled with her love.
she realises that credits of her fake sim got over.. she gets ready quickly with minutes and runs to the recharge shop to get her sim recharged..
buaji calls kushi to have breakfast as soon as kushi reaches home..

kushi was in so hurry to talk to her lion that he started to swallow large piece of the hot hot aloo puri which was served to her..

buaji and amma stare at kushi and the way she was swallowing the food with a "O.o" expression.

buaji:aayeee kushi!! are you okay?? why are you in so hurry?

kushi : ammm. ummm.. mmm haan woo.. ummm umm *trying hard to talk while eating*
she didn't wanted to waste even a single second so continued eating..

buaji: ee sanka devi!! konsi basha mein bathya rahin hoo?

(buaji: in which language are you talking sanka devi?)

amma goes to kushi and hits on her head.. because of that kushi spits out the food

kushi: what amma? 😕

amma: chew.. chew and eat kushi.. are you in that much hurry that you can't even chew and eat food? what is so important?

buaji: haan garima!! as k her like tat? don't know in which world she lives and god knows in which language she keeps talking

kushi gives a blank look to both buaji and amma.

bauji: ayyee sanka devi! *shouting loudly*

kushi: wo.. wooh.. woh *thinking of some excuse*
kuch nahin buaji.. hum teek hain.. you eat aloo puri na.. it is so yummy.. actually m feeling a little weak.. i'll go and take rest in my room..

before bua or amma could tell anything she ran into her room and closed the door.

amma: don't know what is wrong with kushi. from when she came from RM back to lucknow she is going under rapid mood swings..

buaji: haan garima!! daal mein zaroor kuch kala hain. she is hiding something from all of us. we have to find it out at any cost without asking kushi. because sanka devi never talks in a proper manner.. don't know what is sanka devi upto now..

suddenly someone knocks at the door

buaji gets up to open the door

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AT RM:

arnav doesn't sleep the whole night. he still locked himself in his room.
his eyes turn dark and the tears get dried,
he misses the nois polluution kushi used to create when she was there.. he feels as if he s gone deaf forever..

he stares at the stars kushi has left for him before she left RM.. he cries hard holding those stars near his heart forcing the tears to come ot of his eyes..

hp comes up with the coffee for arnav and knocks the door.. no response
he knocks the door once again.. he knocks it twice, thrice but no response from the other side of the door..

hp runs to naniji's room and tells her about the situation..
nani hurry ups to arnav's room and calls him out "chooottteeeyy".. no response.. she keeps calling his name loudly.

payal, nani over hear naniji's voice and gather outside arnav's room near nani

payal: what happened naniji?

nani crying: wo..wooo.. chotteeyy...

tensed anjali: chottey kya naniji?? what happened to chottey?? where is he?? tell me nani what happened?

nani: anjali bitiya! hp knocked chottey's door many times and even i called him out but no response from him.. he is not opening the door.. i'm scared now.. i hope chottey is fine..

*nk enters*
payal consoles nani
anjali: i.. iii.. i'll try nani..

choootteyyy..chhhoooteeeyyy.. open the door chottey.. *she shouts as much loudly as possbile*
arnav i sware on myself if you won't open the door

nk:anjali dii! don't shout so much. it is not good for your health. you don't worry.. i'll break inside..

nk moves 4-5 steps backwards targetting the door..
nk talks to himself: comeon nk dude! you can do this. you're the super man who will save nannav.. comeone.. 3..2..1
and he runs as fast as possible towards the door

suddenly arnav opens the door and nk goes and falls straight upon the recliner

arnav *puzzled*: what the.. *looking at nk.

listening to arnav's favorite signature roar the trio nani, payal and anjali give a sign of relief.

nk: oucchh!! ye darara kisne kola.. my back hurts now awww..
*and he turns back and finds arnav*
nk runs to arnav and hugs him tightly

nk:nannav! mere bhai.. you're fine..

arnav slowly releases himself from nk's cluthes..and tells nk "it darwaza not darara"

anjali goes to arnav and cups his face

anjali: tum teek tho hona chottey?
arnav *in soar voice*: haa.. haan dii!

nani comes and hugs chottey crying..

nani: chottey! where were you? why did u take so long to open the door or respond huh? you scared all of us.. what happened to you?

arnav: m sorry nani.

nk:naniji! relax.. relax.. your chottey is fine na.. so chilll...

*nk winks and anjali gets what nk was thinking of*

anjali: haan naniji! you look at chottey.. he is all fine..
*anjali winks to naniji*

arnav's cell start ringing and doesn't stop at all..

anjali: chottey! i guess you're getting someone's important call.. they are calling you back so many times.

arnav: ignore it dii.. i dont want to attend any calls at the moment.
anjali:what are you talking chottey? what if it is something important from office?

*anjali walks towards the mobile slowly while talking to arnav*

the cell shows "aman calling"

anjali to herself: aman? he works for chottey's company right?
i guess there is something really very important.

anjali: hello?
aman: hello. can i talk to mr.arnav singh raizada?
anjali: he is little busy at the moment. i'm his sister anjali singh raizada! whats the matter mr.aman?

"I'M ANJALI SINGH RAIZADA" makes arnav get confused and makes nk, payal and nani show their 32 teeth.. the trio loved the change in anjali.

aman tells everything about the contract and arnav's decision to anjali

anjali: whaatt??
aman: yes ma'am! now those clients warned us that we have to arrange a very big fashion show for them within a week in one of the best abd biggest places we own. we just have one week time for that ma'am. we should make all arragements with this period for the fashion show.
anjali: mr.aman! i'll talk to chottey and inform you within sometime.
aman: okay ma'am.

*the line is dissconnected*

anjali: chottey! i have to talk something very important to you right now.
arnav:haan dii. tell me.. whats the matter?

anjali: what are you planing to do chottey? how can you cancel sucha big deal.. don't you know that this is the high time for business?

nani:kya hua anjali bitiya?

anjali tells everything to nani

arnav:dii! i dont want to go to office nor sign any damn contract.

anjali *encouraging the acting skills inside her gets ready to do drama* : chottey *in breaking voice* you're behaving like this because of me only na? the decision i took yesterday made you behave like this.. i'm reponsible for all this things.. bwahahaha *she turns towards nani and winks her and starts crying*

nk, payal and nani understand that anjali is acting and thse trio too wake up their acting skills
nani:anjali bitiya.. please don't cry.
anjali:no nani! let me cry till my tears get dried up.. 😭
arnav: nahin dii.. noo.
arnav gets closer to anjali to console her but suddenly payal comes in between and consoles anjali

arnav mentally: what the.
all of them do drama for sometime.
anjali: chottey! i give you an hour to decide. hope you won't dissapoint your dii this time.

nani:bitiya come with me. you need to take rest.

all of them leave the room and confused arnav back.

they all get into anjali's room.

naniji: anjali bitiya! why did u stop me when i was scolding chottey? why did u wink to me?
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At lucknow GH:

kushi locks the door and makes a high jump from the door to the bed..
she removes the fake sim which she hid in the pillow cover and puts it into her cell.
she listens to the conversation which she recorded when she spoke to arnav last time..
she keeps revinding it again and again.
she feels his voice like the best music she ever heard in her lifetime in this world.
her heart starts missing his beat alot.
kushi finally decides to make another prank call to arnav.
she dials his number. .
arnav's cell rings

AT RM :
tringtring... tring tring...

arnav thinks that it is aman who is callling
arnav to himslelf: @#$% this aman! he is over today. don't know what he told dii that she is again upset with me today..
he rushes to his cells and answers the call.
arnav: aman! how dare you talk to my dii about the contract you dumbo? i have already told you that i don't want to do any deal. didn't i? i don't care what happened to me or my company right now okay? i'm not intrested in all these profit-profit game anymore.. i've already suffered a very big loss now*in breaking tone*. i just don't care whether it is 5000 crore deal or $%^&.. you get that?

kushi: eh? *kushi's english is quite poor as we all know.. so bechari! was trying to figure what arnav spoke so quickly*

arnav *on hearing a girls voice from the other side*: what the..

kushi shuts her mouth tightly
and arnav looks the number from which the call came..
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precap:how did kushi continue the further conversation with arnav? arnav comes up with his decision.. who was at buaji's door? why did anjali stop nani? what are they all planing?

Alas, I thought I knew so much
Of love, and yet I know so little!
For I cannot stop myself loving her
From whom I shall never have joy.
My whole heart, and all of me from myself
She has taken, and her own self,
and all the world,
For when she took herself from me,
she left me nothing
But desire and a yearning heart.

--Bernard de Ventadour


hope you all liked this part..
do share your views and suggest me so that i can do better than this..

waiting for all your responses 🤗

-priya <3

ps: part 3 and part 4 are simultaneous story of part 1 and part 2 😛

part 5 is the continuation

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Its awesome...please do pm me!
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Originally posted by: smdosi

Its awesome...please do pm me!


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