-khushi- (Formerly ABOUT LAST NIGHT) Aug01-Sept05

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dearest Sisters:


-About Last Night- resumes today with the August 1st episode at the permanent website below:

http://mayahill.com

[Please note that the name of the serial has been changed to Khushi]


Navigation Tip: Click the KHUSHI button to read the episode. Click the big M to view the ABOUT page.


Please view imperfections with a gentle eye. It will be finessed in the coming days. More features will be activated as well, including facility to 'heart' an episode, to comment, to join the Sisterhood and view an interactive calendar. For now, you may communicate with me via the envelope button at the bottom of the episode, or from the link on the ABOUT page or any other way you prefer. The email address is me@mayahill.com


The previous 108 episodes will also be uploaded at this website in due time; until then, if you wish to read the March11-June28 episodes, you will find them housed on the temporary website at:

http://unserialist.com/


Thank you for your continued interest in my work. And, for your patience during the transition.


How can I tell you, Sisters, how good it feels to be sharing my work with all of you again.

With affection,

Maya


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Posted: 13 years ago
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RES! :D

*Edited

The site is frickin stunning! Had me completely mesmerized! <3

And then the chapter! My AnYa are back and how! Now Yash is making me go all *Blush Blush* with his brazen comments...and Anjali! Wow! What a woman! I am so happy she is leaving the Shyam debacle behind and focussing on her present and her future. Sigh.

And Arnav and Khushi...uff! This man is so infuriating! Why is he so annoying yet so hot! Keeps on doing shitty underhanded things but loves Khushi all the same but as you said they have always been competitors so I guess its a little hard to forget it but I think the last line shows that Arnav realizes that this time, he may have stepped over the line...because she may be his favourite competitor but she is also his wife and this was her moment to shine, something she was truly proud of herself on...and he took that away. He is a successful businessman for all to see but this was Khushi's moment.

Anyway, coming to ALN as a whole and its comeback...Eeeps! <3

It just didnt feel like there had been a break! The same excitement, the same giddiness! YAY! :)

PS - I love the description about Khushi and why you like her in the About page. The spunkiness of her character is what is most endearing and you have captured it well. Also, along with the spunkiness, the young girl with a big heart and desires and love. Great job! Love the new name - -khushi- <3


Edited by AngelTeen - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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The site is absolutely wonderful. The design itself is enthralling, especially the opening page. And i like the about page, a view into the mind of Maya. Glad to have you back :D Now off to read the latest update.

shiz :)
Edited by InvisibleSmile - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOOOHOOO!!!

I am so excited, it's not even funny.

I think my parents have finally come to the conclusion, that I have gone crazy.

Oh well, that doesn't matter. I am so glad you are back! :D :D

MISSED YOU MAYA! :D

Went on the site, and I am actually blown away by how beautifully it's been designed. Makes the whole experiencing of reading so much more pleasurable!
Cannot wait to read the update, but I had to come and complement you on your efforts.

Great work, Maya. Truly amazing! :)

Now onto commenting on the part:


Every wife wants to be the one exception; the one for whom all the other rules cease to apply. In truth, she wanted his respect more than equality, and for him to acknowledge that she was no less a force to be reckoned with than himself.

So true. Every wife wants to be that person who is different from the others, whom her husband also acknowledges the unique quirks and traits, or anything that makes her different. And no doubt Khushi wanted to be the person on whom the rules and obsession of control would not apply or be minimal.

I did feel for her when Arnav manipulated the situation in such a way that even if Khushi changed the time, she still would have got the papers he wanted signed, as the other documents were not legit.
I think this might be a turning point in their relationship?

Wish I could comment longer and go on about how much I enjoyed reading it, but this assignment sitting next to me keeps telling me to stop procrastinating and start working -.-

All in all Maya, that was an amazing update!
I am so glad to have you back! :)

Edited by Krani - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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JUST READ KHUSHI. I DON'T UNDERSTAND WHY YOU ARE SO DIFFIDENT. IT'S ABSOLUTELY FABULOUS.

AND YES I AM EXCLAIMING IN CAPS...😊😊😊😊😊😊


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yippee!!! Maya's here and so is Khushi.

Thanks Maya for bringing Khushi along; I have to say, I like your version of Arnav better too :-)

/S
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Its nice to see you back!
The site looks great and the update was excellent!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved the site!! now off to reading the update 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow what a website! I am in Love with the website. Feel like staring at it :D beautifully designed. I loved the update. Now starts the period of long updates which always seems short ;)
Edited by lazyleaves - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey maya

Welcome back! I was thinking few days back only that aug 1 is fast approaching and it's time to get ur update and finally we did. I'm so happy to get My morning coffee back. I haven't checked out the site yet so will edit this space in sometime now

Edited:
Ok I'm back after reading the update and touring the site and I'm simply blown away. The site is magnificent, it's really beautiful. Good job maya 😊

Now coming to the update:

After a few moments, he had the audacity to say, "does it make you feel better knowing that I missed you? I feel like we've been apart for a month."

This line of arnav is the perfect description of ur readers regarding ur story and I know u put it in there as a reference to the little break u had.

I loved the update. AnYa are really adorable and well more bold than adorable and I really enjoy thier little phone sex. Also, how I missed little khushi, she is one lovely kid and I missed her baby talk.

Even after knowing how shrewd and foresighted arnav is, I'm still shocked at how he tricked khushi and reduced her role to that of a mere pawn but seeing the sparks of Mrs. ASR in khushi, I'm sure she won't let him get away easily.

Also I have two queries related to the update:
1. Are they seriously married for only 29 days or have i got it wrong? I mean I very well know of thier 'night activities' but it's really hard to comprehend that it's just 29 days and khushi is already pregnant. It would have been more believable if it was a few monthes.

2. Why did u change the name to khushi? I loved ALN a lot

Phew!! It was a really long comment. Pardon me of u fall asleep reading it.
Edited by chillygirl - 13 years ago

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