afwa last time kr os :(

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Posted: 13 years ago
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cholly today m really depressed so i just want to write this . if i hurt anyone then sorry really . main kisi ko hurt nahi karna chahti ... but today i want ki main j likhu ...

its almost one year when kriya left ...everyone move in there life ... now they no more need kriya ... because they have 12th dancer now ... swaron r couple ...
but one day in RH every one rehearsing when rey's cell start ringing ...but he did't pik the call ...but cell again ring ...
sw : rey pik the call yaar ...
sh : ha rey go ...
rey saw its unknown no ...
rey xcuse himself ...
r : hello ...
p : hello ...rey ...
rey was shocked ...kriya tum ...
k : rey listen me please ...
r : what u want from me now ha ...
k : rey i need ...
r : what need ha sab kuj to ley liya tumne ab kya chahti hoo ...
k : please rey i need ur ...
r : stopid kriya muje doobara call mat karna for me ur no more ...
nd rey cut the call ...


after 6 month they all visiting visiting dehradune for a concert ...
they arrive at elite college of talent ...( jha kriya studi karti thii ...)...
in principal cabin : all wel come to elite ...
all lo. : thanks
p : ok to misss nisha apko sara college dikha dege ...
rey : ok sir ...
after showing the college
nisha : ok guys now last place bachi hey ...is college ki sabse jada special place ...is college ka har student us place ko visit karne k baad apna din start kata hey ... hum logo ko jab b koi tension hoti hey to we visit that place ...
rey : asi kon c place hey ...
nisha : lets go ...
as soon as they enter in the room they only utter one word ...kriya ...
nisha : u know her ...
yes is room main sirf kriya ki pics thi ...
swayam : uski itni pics kyu hey jha ...
nisha : kyu ki hum use apne kreeb rakhna chahte hey ...
vish : matlab ... kya hey wo to dehradun main hi hey na ...
nisha : hey nahi thi ... or ab wo kabhi nahi aye gi ...
sharon : what do u mean ?
nish : mera matlab jo log bhagwan k pass chale jate hey wo kabhi wapis nahi ate ...
all : what ...
they all r shocked ... nd had tears also ... but rey body without soul ...
neha : what tum talking kese kab ?
nisha narrate whole story what happen one nd half year ago
nisha : then 6 month ago kriya apne friend ko milne mumbai gyi thi ... nd wha she met with accident ... she call that boy for help but he did't nd ... ... nd nisha run fron there ...

yes that time kriya call rey for help but he ...
but now its too late ...now no use of this all ...rey fell on his knees nd shout KRIYAAA M SORRY mane us din tumhari baat nahi suni ... kassh mane ek baat tumhari baat suni hoti ... nd next sen rey fell on krita pics nd die his last word is ... SORRY KRIYA ... hope my soul meet u in ur heaven . nd i apologize to u ...
nd all shouting con. : rey wake up ...
but he already start a new journey ...





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Posted: 13 years ago
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Res
Unres

I'm crying after reading this

I'm speechless aru

But Rey deserved it

I mean can someone be like this
Thanks for the pm

Sorry can write anymore
Edited by Himaniahir - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Damn aro...

Ye kya tha???

Tune toh menu rula dita yaar...

S***

Seriously can't rite muc...

But really nice cncpt...
Edited by Born2Dance - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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res
unres

😭😭
😭😭😭

😭
I can understand aroma what ur going through...
😭
i totally admire ur work...
though u made me cry like hell...
😭😭
but it is atleast alot better than what we were getting all the way and what we are getting now...😭😊
thnk u for this post...it was somewhere needed...
poor kria payed for loving rey and rey god he got what he deserved...
no more can write...
😭😭😭

Thnx for the pm himu...

Edited by sachiarsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hmmm...

i can understand what ur gng through...

kyun ki kuch din pehle meine bhi aisa hi kuch likha...

isiliye...

loved it...

and i think agar kisikeliye apna dil rukh jaata hai...

then they really love each other...

i can accept kriyansh death but not betraying each other
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Posted: 13 years ago
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res

unres

😭😭😭...😭😭..😭😭😭..😭😭..😭😭😭...😭😭😭..😭😭.😭😭

yeh kya tha aroma tune muje rula diya...

nice rey deserved it...

i dint understand...why every1 in that college visited that place????

thanx for the scrap himani

-kinjal
Edited by --Kinjal-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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rula diya :(

Ab kuch nahi bol sakti..!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing
tune toh mereko rula diya
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing os...
U made me cry...
Acha hua dono ko mar diya atleast that way to dono kriyansh rahenge
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very well written aroma 👏
really touchy OS 😊
rey did'nt even listened wat she was trying to say . . . . 🤔
he was just so angry dat he did'nt felt dat why she could be calling him 😭
but to his utter shock,,, indirectly he was the reason for her demise

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