what after fight for baby?

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confirmation:this is just my pov to solve this baby track with mutual understanding. Nidhi:lagta hai aapko bhi ek bacha chahiye? ashutosh:ha nidhi,meri umer ho gayi hai.tum upna career ke saath saath baby ke baareme soch sakti ho?you just think of it. Nidhi:dr.ashutosh,me pehele career ke baareme serious nahi thi.lekin aap ka doctory ke prati dedication dekhti hoo to sochti hoo,aap ne upne umra ke itne saal upne proff prati wafaadari nibhaneme lagaye,patient ki sewako apna dharm bana liya,issiliye aapko kabhi pyar ka,shaadi ka khayal nahi aaya.ub muze aapki parchhai banana hai,aur aage padhna hai,lekin aap to meri baat samazte nahi hai,chaliye so jaayiye. and athey sleep. ashu was thinking about all this happened,he thought after their meeting what nidhi gained in her life.nidhi falled in love with him and problem created,she fighted for their love,uska tadapana,uska rona,uske aasu,aur apne family ke prati wafaadari.kya use do pal ka sookoon mila?shadi jaldi me hui,aur hunimoon ke waqt humne ek doosere ko thodasa jaana,lekin fir mallika aayi,usne hamaari rishteme daraar daalneki koshish bhi ki,maine nidhi pe bharosa nahi kiya,humare pyaar ki bunikyad ko maine hilte dekaha.aur fir ranganath aur anji ki shaadi.humare paas to din me paas bethneki fursat nahi,kya muze nidhi ko thoda waqt nahi dena chahiye,woh poori tarah se taiyar hone per hi hum bache ke baareme sochenge.aaj se kuchh mahine pehele to maine na shaadi ke baareme,naa bache ke baareme socha tha.nidhi ke aane se yeh sab main soch sakta hoo.pehele nidhi ko khoosh rakhoonga,uski padhai me uski help karoonga aur phir aage sochenge,i can't be selfish. and he thought something and sleeped down. next morning,he wake up and saw nidhi in his arm,with full peace. he waked nidhi with love and got ready for hospital. In hospital,he gat a surprise invitation for the seminar of All India Medical Association,which was held in shrinagar,where he was invited as a guest of owner.some spark come in his eyes.and he came back home. nidhi was surprised to see him back early.he picked nidhi's hand and led her to the chair.he signed her to sit down and listen him he told her:Nidhi,i thought about our relation,we love each other but we don;t got enough time to spend with each other.so we are stopping the baby issue here and let's enjoy our company.i have an invitation to shrinagar and you are coming with so relax and enjoy yourself.maine apni jawaani akele kitaboke sahaare,aur career banane me bitayi,ab main apni jawani tumhare saath jeena chahata hoo,apne woh kimati pal jo maine kho diye woh tumhare sath bitana chhata hoo.tumhare haatome haath daalke khooli sadak pe ghoomna chaahta hoo,barf ki baarish me ek kambal odhe wohbaarish dekhana chhahata hoo,shikare pe tumhe apne baahome leke woh khubsoorati dekhna chhahata hoo.aur un barfily pahaado pe hume iceball banake ek dooserepe fekte dekhan chaahta hoo,aissa nahi hai ke i don't want baby.lekin iss pari ko naaraaj karke nahin,kabhi nahi.so chalo hum apne khoobsoorat yadonko dhoondne chalte hai,aur tume jannat dihata hoo jisne[nidhi] meri zindagi khoobsoorat banayi hai , use khoobsoorat yaden dena chahata hoo.and nidhi became happy,and they hugged each other tightly.and nidhi gave a love kiss to dr.ashutosh. please guys write replies.and happy sunday to all.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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kya baat hai ...iska 10% bhi dikha diya to baat ban gayi...👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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U write really well alka 🤗

Happy Sunday to u and all Forumites ❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Alka: well thought screenplay by you...
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Alka, aapne Dr Ashutosh ko bohot hi understanding banadi...par sachch bolen toh woh bhi apne jage pe galat nahi...toh main aapke post ko thoda aage le jaana chahti hoon...par meri Hindi itni acchi nahi hai...isliye main English main hi likhoongi...hope you don't mind...



It was to be a three day trip to Srinagar. He had complained as usual about how much I was packing. I had told him that we weren't going to a jungle this time. There would certainly be opportunities to dine out and malls to shop at. The poor man didn't have a response to that and quietly slipped away.

"Nidhi...kitni pyaari ho tum...pappi do mujhe.."

Did I just hear that? Was the man fantasizing in broad daylight? And in the presence of Baba? What was wrong with the man?


I rushed out of the room only to stand still at the sight before me!

He held a beautiful six month old baby girl in his arms. He was cuddling her, nuzzling her stomach and making her gurgle.

The Sardarji and his wife beamed with pride as they watched him play with her.

"Sat Sri Akaal...kaise hain aap?"

All of them turned at the sound of my voice.

"Sat Sri Akaal, daktarni saheba...hum toh bade change hain ji...aapse milne aap ke ghar gaye te...toh pata chala aapne doctor saab se shaadi karli...toh bas seedhe yahaan pohonch gaye aapse milne!"

They held out a box of sweets.

"In sab ki kya zaroorat hai?"

" Kyun nahi jhi...hamari bitiya pehli baar unse milne aarahi hai jiski waje se woh aur unki Ma abhi bhi mere saath hai"

I was a little embarrassed by his words but I noticed that there was a gleam of pride in Ashutosh's eyes. When he saw me look at him, he smiled and then proceeded to hand the baby over to the mother.

He came towards me and threw his arm around my shoulder.

''Bilkul sahi kaha aapne, Bhaisaab...bohot hi honhaar doctor hai meri biwi...aur aapne apni bacchi ki naam Nidhi rakhliya...yeh sunkar mujhe aur bhi kushi hui"

I looked at them in surprise and then turned to Ashutosh.

It was the baby he had been talking to then!

"Nidhi, inko kuch offer nahi karoge?"

"Haan haan...kya lenge bhaisaab...lassi shassi?"

"Nahi nahi daktarni saheba...hum thode jaldi mei hain...aaj ki raat ki gaadi se hum apne gaon jaa rahe hain...hamare parivaar wale bohot bechain hain bachchi ko dekhne ke liye"

As they took leave of us, the baby stretched its hands out to Ashutosh.

"Arre...yeh kya...lagta hai hamare Nidhi ko aap bohot pasand aagaye.."

The mother held the baby out to Ashu.

Surprisingly, he did not take the baby although I could see the yearning in his eyes. He just took out his mobile and nodding his head to them, moved away to his study.

I was a little taken aback and did not want them to think of him as rude. I took her instead and kissed her on her little head. There was that unique baby smell emanating from her. Sweeter than any fragrance known to man! I held her close to my bosom before I returned her to her parents. They left after thanking me once more for the miracle that they believed that I had wrought.

Closing the door behind them, I walked towards his study. Did he suddenly remember that he had an important call to make?

I found him sitting at his desk, lost in thought., So lost was he that he did not sense my presence even.


There was a far away look in his eyes. As if he was looking into a distant past, into a place that was not particularly pleasant. There was a sad and forlorn expression on his face.

I walked up to him and ruffled his hair. He seemed to come out his trance with a jolt.

He smiled at me but it did not reach his eyes.

"Hogayi packing...agar kuch aur bhi chahiye toh, I am sure we can shop there...mujhe tumhare saath shopping jaana hai...I want to get you a whole new wardrobe...jewellery...whatever you want...I hear there is a happening disc at the hotel where we will be staying...make sure you pack your dancing shoes...I want to give you the time of your life!"

He got up and hugged me tight.

For the first time, I pushed him away.

He looked at me with surprise.

"Kya hua?"

"Aap ko kya hua?"

"Mujhe kya hua...kuch bhi toh nahi!"

I looked deep into his eyes and asked,

"Aapne woh bacchi ko phir se god mei kyun nahi li?"

"Aisi koi baat nahi...mujhe ek important call karna ta!''

"Jhoot mat boliye"

"Main kyun jhoot boloonga?"

"Wohi main bhi jaanna chahti hoon!"

He moved away and tried to change the topic.

"Chalo...aaj dinner tere favourite Chinese restaurant mei karte hain...jaldi tayyar ho jao!"

"Aapne socha ki mujhe bura lagega, hain na?"

"Kya?"

"Agar main aapko bacchi ko pyar karte hue, uske saath khelte hue dekhoon toh mujhe bura lagega..hain na?"

He was speechless and I knew I had nailed it.

"Aap aisa kyun karte hain...apne dil ke armaan, apne darr aur apne khwaishon ke baare mei mujhse khulke baat kyun nahi karte?"

He tried to shake his head, as if to deny what I was saying.

"Kya aap ko abhi bhi mujhpe vishwaas nahi hai...kya Dr Mallika ke kaand ke baad bhi aapko yeh nahi lagta ki main har haal mei, har sthithi mei aap ka saath doongi...kyun ki aap aur aapki khushi se aage mujhe kuch bhi maine nahi raktha.."

"Haan pata hai...pata hai ki tum mere liye kuch bhi bardasht kar sakti ho...apni saari kushiyaan ki kurbaani de sakti ho...par kya har baar kurbaani tumhe hi dena padega...ek aat baar mujhe bhi toh mauka do na...ki main bhi thoda achche banoon tumhare liye?"

I hugged him tight, unable to stop my tears.

"Yeh kurbaani kahaan se aagayi beech main...pyaar mei kurbaani ke liye jagah hai hi nahi...apne pyaar ke liye kuch karna kurbaani nahi hota...pyaar ka doosra naam dena hai...kya aap yeh nahi samajte?"

"Maine pehli bhi bola na...main is maamle me anaadi hoon!"

I laughed through my tears.

"Abhi kitne mahine baaki hain mere internship khatam hone mei?"

"Bas teen chaar mahine...kyun?"

"Toh mujhe aapse ek tohfa maangni hai...bas teen chaar mahine ke baad"

I looked deep into his eyes.

There was confusion followed by great joy in them.

"Sacchi...par tumhe PG bhi karna chahiye?"

"Kya aapko yaad nahi...dus bacche paida karne mei time lagta hai...agar main apni MD aur specialization tak wait karoongi toh phir toh hogaya...aap toh mard hain...aapko koi problem nahi hogi...par hum auraton ke bacche paida karne ka umar guzarjaati hain...biology yaad hai na aapko...?"

He couldn't stop laughing.

"Sachch mei dus?"

"Kyun...aap se nahi hoga?"

"Abhi bhi shaq hai?"

He swept me off my feet and carried me towards our bedroom.

"Yeh kya kar rahe hain aap?"

"Bas apni zindagi jee raha hoon!"
Edited by Sujatha.rao - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very well written post Alka...👏


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Posted: 13 years ago
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sujata ji marvallous writing and wonderful chap.ashu's understanding and his love always admired me to write to more.but now in serial too nidhi and ashu will handle this topic maturally.sujata ji i just read your heading on another post.i don't want to say nidhi had done sacrifices but only ashu's pov she tried much hard to get ashu back and for that she faced much problems than ashu.bec ashu has nobody who can be against him,but nidhi had whole family and friends too[only rohan was in her favour] and she only done bec she love ashu more than anything,and just wanted her future with him only.
Edited by alkaparmart - 13 years ago

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