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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello friends I am new here. I am a big fan of karan kritika and their show KITNI MOHABBAT HAI. I am madly in love with this show bt feel really sad this shw ended soon.I read most of the stories of u people and i also get interest of writing I am sharring with u my first story plz guys leave ur comments and let me know u liked it or not.

HAMARI ADHURI KAHANI



PART 1

Today I am feeling restless nothing is looking good. Everything is looking different. Is this all happening because last night I saw Arjun in my dreams, why don't he leave me alone, whenever I trie to forget him, his memories comes in front of my eyes or time and situation brings him in front of my eyes. Please Arjun leave me alone in my life like u leaved me at that night. I was wrong you are the one who trust me more than anyone can do and you leave me alone Arjun, I hate u Arjun... I just hate you like anything; Arohi started crying loudly and sit on her knees on the floor beside her bed. Her heart fills with pain, her eyes get red she gets up from the floor and stand near the window of her room. She was watching outside the tress and the beautiful chirping of birds everything is looking so beautiful then suddenly wind flow comes and hit the Arohi's face and she heard the beautiful sound of wind chime, which is hanging on the window and which is gifted by Arjun . Her eyes get sad again, she remembered Arjun's words when he gifted her wind chime, and He said to Arohi the soothing sound of wind chime will remind her love of Arjun. Whenever you hear the sound of wind chime just remember I am thinking about you. Arohi was about to through that wind chime than suddenly she heard the voice of her dadu. Arohi wiped her tears, she doesn't want dadu see her in this condition then he will worry about her. Arohi puttar kithe hai tu, she walks towards the door and opened the door and shout dadu aap aagaye (dadu was out of station for some business work) I missed you so much. Dadu put his hand on Arohi's head and gave her blessings and both of them came in Arohi's room. Dadu saw red eyes of Arohi and he understood what happens to her, Arohi was sitting silently her eyes down she understands that dadu understood her silence. Dadu asked Arohi in a worry tone puttar tu thiq toh h na??? Arohi give fake to dadu smile for hiding her pain and said haanji dadu main thiq haan tusi chinta na karo. Dadu knows arohi is lying and he said to her dekh puttar tu bhul ja jo hua tu apni zindagi me aage bad. Arohi's eyes filled with tears, she is feeling lumps in her voice dadu kaise bhul jaun jo usne kiya mere sath kaise dadu. Arohi mujhe pata h us raat kya hua tha pr mujhe yeh b pata hai Arjun tujhe kitna pyaar karta hai or woh tujh pr kabhi shak nai karta per zarur use kisi ne tere khilaf bhadkaya hai(dadu knows the person because of whom they get separated) Maine sirf uski aankhon me tere liye pyaar dekha hai or wo pyaar tujhe koi or nai kar sakta. Arohi burst into tears and hug her dadu and she said wo Agar mujhse pyaar karta toh mujhe chor kr nai jata us raat. I will never forgive him, he is the man with arrogant personality. He is rude, he is selfish,he always do what he wants. Dadu cansole her and say chal puttar yeh sab bhul ja or chal mere sath niche dekh kon aaya hai?

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Posted: 13 years ago
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welcome to the forum
good start - pls continue
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welcome to forum🤗
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Hey,i jst love d startng. Sounds really interesting.
Btw whats ur name? N welcm to forum.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb nice awsomee start aarzooo
meet my friend aarzoo
she start her story from today .plzzz give your comment on feedback to her
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welcome to forum aarzoo
we will get an another awesome story like jayu di's
hope ur regular with updates like di is😆
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welocme to the forum 😊
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hi aarzu :) welcum to kmh family
continue ur work asap
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grt start yar
Contniue soon n plz pm me frthr
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Hey Aaarzu... welcome to the forum 🤗
Nice start... looking forward to the story...

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