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Saying that, she quickly started cleaning, confusing Swayam. She whispered to him, "Understand dear, boyfriend. This will give them some more time together."

Swayam made an understanding 'OH' face and gave her an impressed look and he started washing the plates faster too.

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(This is the same post as on page 1. I'm re-posting here because there is some error on page 1 and I thought some of you might need to refer as it has been a long time since I updated...)


Chapter 5

Kriya and Rey looked at Sharon wide eyed and neither of them wanted to work. It was after a long time that Sharon herself was doing the dishes. They wanted to take pleasure of seeing her work more. Thus, both of them started eating the food as fast as possible.

But Sharon was no less. She knew they'd do something like that. She herself picked up the pace of cleaning. Seeing that, Swayam understood what was going on and he too did his best to keep up with Sharon.

It was now a turned battle to see if Rey and Kriya would finish eating first or Sharon and Swayam would finish the cleaning first. A third person, if present, would have completely had gotten the thrill of a life-time seeing the intense competition. Rey and Kriya felt like laughing at themselves and the other for just stuffing food in their mouth and trying hard to swallow it raw instead of chewing at it.

They were least bothered about their fluffed mouths. They just continued putting one piece of food after another in their mouth. Swayam looked back once to look at Rey and he ended up stifling a laugh seeing his state.

A minute later, Rey and Kriya picked up their plates and rushed inside the kitchen to hand them their plates. But to their horror, Swayam and Sharon were standing at the doorway, hands crossed across their chests and blocking their way to enter. Their hands were completely dry indicating that they were done doing the dishes and so the left over would have to be done by them.

Kriya looked behind them and the cleaned stack on plates and vessels on the drying rack confirmed that Sharon and Swayam were indeed done.

"Oh no." she moaned, much to Sharon and Swayam's pleasure.

Sharon replied, "Oh yes my sister. I'm no fool." She looked at Rey and continued, "Now go on both of you and finish the rest. I'm going to go pick out a movie to watch."

At the same time, Swayam and Sharon moved to the either sides of the door to allow Rey and Kriya to enter the kitchen. Sulkily, both dragged themselves inside the kitchen. Grinning to themselves, Sharon and Swayam left to give them time alone with the excuse of 'picking out a movie to watch' even though all four of them knew what movie they were going to watch.

'Titanic'. Yup, that was the only movie they would ever watch on their get together's. The first time they had done this, they ended up watching Titanic and they had had so much fun! Girls were tearing their eyes away and the boys comforted them, not knowing the reason why the girls had become so emotional.

The second time, it was just a co-incidence as they were all learning about love and confused whether they were in love or not. Indirectly, they had all decided to watch Titanic. Ever since, it had just been like a custom of theirs' to watch Titanic each time they got together. It was a different matter that most of the time, they weren't even watching. They would just get busy talking sweet nothings' to their lovers. 😉

Kriya picked up the scrubber and added some liquid soap to it and started her part. Rey waited for her to get a head start and then started washing the plates. Unknown to them, Sharon and Swayam were back a second later to watch if their plan would succeed.

Sharon realized cleaning just two plates; some bowls and a couple of spoons won't buy enough time for them to spend some time together. Putting her mind at work, her eyes fell on the table where the leftover food was still sitting in the bowls. She elbowed Swayam and once he looked at her, she motioned towards the bowl through eye movements.

After a couple of nudges, Swayam got what she was trying to say without speaking. He nodded at her and went to pick them up. He transferred the left overs in the plastic containers and quietly snuck behind them in the kitchen with bowls in his hand and pushed between both of them seeing a good opportunity.

Both looked bewildered at him. He simply put the bowls inside the sink, under running water and said. "Enjoy!" He again left.

Rey and Kriya watched him go. They felt like strangling them for making their work more. But quietly, having no other choice, Kriya took one of the bowls and started scrubbing it. Rey paused to look at Kriya's angry face and got lost in the beauty for a second.

She looks even cuter and beautiful being mad. He thought to himself. In time, he pulled his thoughts back to line. He couldn't let them distract him from the current work; especially when she was standing just close to him. As he turned to focus his attention at the plate in his hand, his arm brushed her hand, making her conscious of the gaze that turned to her again.

As a result, the scrubber instantly dropped from her hand the second his arm touched hers. His one simple touch had created wonders in her body, sending shrills down her spine. She suddenly stiffened and did all she could to avoid looking back at him. But the dropping of the scrubber had given the fact away that she was trying to ignore the close space between them.

On the other hand, Rey was happy. Yes, he was happy to see the effect he had on her. He thought to himself. With just one touch of mine, her body goes numb. And still she says she needs time' He shook his head with pleasure. One small movement of hers had brought back all the confidence in him. He, then and there, pledged that he would gain her trust back no matter what. He wouldn't be doubtful at all and would do everything in his power to make her believe in him and his love.

Kriya shut her eyes to brush the feelings away and opened them again with strong determination. She sighed inwardly, not making it obvious on the outside and forwarded to pick up the scrub. At the same time, Rey moved his hand forward as well to pick it up for her. As she had moved first, her hand landed on the scrubbed and his ended up on top of hers.

Again, she shivered at the touch. It was so versatile that it seemed to touch her inner soul. She fought back hard and looked into his eyes. One thing she knew for sure; if she avoided him now, the rest of the night would be very heavy hearted for her. He looked back at her, searching for one hint that would tell him what he was waiting to hear for what seemed to be ages now!

Looking into his eyes, she felt as if he could see each and every thing she was going through. As always, she felt as if he could see her inner soul and hear the unspoken. She just expressed through her eyes knowing that he would catch it and understand.

***

On the other side of the house, Sharon and Swayam high-fived each other at success of part one. Next, Sharon pulled Swayam towards the back of the house and stopped when they reached the water line. Swayam was confused again and asked, "What are we doing here?"

"Ofo Swayam! Why are you being slow today?!"

"What?! It's a genuine question. What are we doing here, outside in the dark when we should be inside? Do you have any naughty plans?" he joked taking a step towards her and circling his hands around her waist, pulling her closer in an instant.

He looked at her slyly and she, for a second blushed. She would have stayed that way, if not for the voice shouting at her from the back of her hand. After a few tries, she wriggled out of Swayam's hold and replied back.

"Very funny Swayam. But right now, I need you as a plumber, and not my sweet, cute, lovely boyfriend." She started out demanding and ended the sentence dreamily.

He decided to use the romantic moment later on and finish the work. The faster he was over with what she wanted him to do, the better and more time he can have her to himself. "Plumber? Sharon, what exactly is your plan?"

"I just want you to block the line for a few seconds." She replied confident.

"What?" He stopped knowing that it was another one of her plan and if he tried to understand, he'd go crazy trying to figure out the logic! Thus he decided to just quietly follow her instructions. "Never mind. Do not answer that. Just go get a torch."

She nodded and left. She was back in no time. Swayam had only managed to roll up her sleeves when she came back. He bent down and sat on his knees while she did she same holding the torch for him. Being smart that she was, she had brought the tool box along with her.

He smiled at her and started thinking of a way to block the water just for a few seconds. He did a few things here and there while operating the main water tap. After a bit of difficulty, he made a hole in the pipe to let sufficient air in and sealed it tight again. He got up with confidence in his work.

"There, done." He said while he got up.

Without letting him take a sigh of relief, she pulled him back inside excited. "Let's see if it worked."

He lost his balance at the sudden pull but she was already running while holding her hand. He managed himself and continued to let her lead him inside. A small smile played on his lips. Once inside, both came to a stop at the same hide out place and watched from around the corner.

They saw Rey and Kriya lost in each other's eyes. Seconds later, they moved their eyes away to their lands which lay on top of the other. Kriya became hesitant again and moved her fingers, letting him know what she wanted. Slowly, he moved his hand away and mumbled a low sorry. Normally, no one would have been able to hear it but the close space between them allowed her to hear it. She looked away and so did he.

Not making another eye contact, she picked up the scrub and did all in her might to calm her breathing and the rise of feelings inside of her. Rey, on the contrary, was having his own pleasure seeing her struggle to control herself. His hopes reached a new level, knowing that it was only a matter of few more days till she was ready to give their relationship another chance. He too got back to his washing.

After putting the plate away, he picked up the bowl and the water went out. Both went confused, looked at each other, and back at the water tap. Rey gently tapped the tap, thinking something must have blocked it. When that didn't work, he transferred the line from tap to the sprinkler next to the tap.

(Khushi's note: Guys, don't get confused here. This actually can happen. I have it at my house too. 😆 Just think of it as a small fountain sprinkler. It's usually available just in case the vessel is big and can't be put under tap.)

That didn't work as well. Sharon giggled softly. That was her plan. The water won't come and then, it would come with such force that the water will be all over them. And that is exactly what happened. Rey moved his face closer to the sprinkler to figure out the problem when the water came splashing on her face, making his take a big step backwards immediately.

In the process, he turned the sprinkler around and the water came on Kriya. She gasped and turned her face away from the water that was aimed right as her. It had started coming again with such force that it drenched both of them. Water started to make a puddle on the kitchen floor as well. Trying to look at where the sprinkler was while avoiding the water as well, she moved her hand around in air.

In attempt to do the same, Rey moved his hand around as well. Now call it destiny, fate, co-incidence, filmy, or anything else, both kept their hands over the sprinkler at the same time. The same as before, both lost sense of the world and looked at each other. The little water that was still coming on them didn't bother them anymore. It was just him and her looking at each other in a deep sense and nothing else.

Kriya hand lay on top of Rey's. When the cold started to take over her, their eye lock broke as she sneezed. Her hands, now covering her face. Rey looked away at the sprinkler and turned it off.

Swayam nudged Sharon and she came out of her world. She was feeling as if watching a live movie with the things happening at perfect timings. She came in the kitchen to act surprised and not let them know about their plan at all.

She freaked, "Oh my God! What is all this?! The water's all over the floor guys. Did you guys fall asleep while cleaning just a few plates and bowls?"

Both felt embarrassed. For cleaning just a little amount, they surely were taking a lot of time! They looked down at the floor and she continued. "And both of you are wet as well!" As if on cue, Kriya sneezed again. "See, you're even sneezing now! Go change clothes before it gets worse. You too Rey; Tell Swayam' he might have a pair for you. I'll finish up here."

They both looked at her and stared, not sure if they should leave. She insisted, "Goo! Don't just stand here!" they took a run for it before she changed her mind.

After they were out of sight, Sharon grinned to herself. Another success for the night! Now just a few more to go!! Swayam popped out of around the corner and gave her a 'thumbs up' sign. She replied back to it and he rushed to attend Rey, before he got suspicious. Kriya had rushed to her room to change. She didn't have to worry about not having another pair of clothes to wear after all.

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Continue reading below for the new update!!

Edited by ..first.rain.. - 13 years ago
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Swayam entered the room where Rey was about to enter. He quickly threw aside the shirt he had laying around so that Rey would have nothing to change into. And so, the next part of the plan began.

Rey entered the room as if on cue. He was tapping his shirt as if it would dry off. Once he was inside, he took off his shirt and Swayam immediately acted, "What happened to you?!!"

Rey just looked at the shirt in his hand and replied, "Nothing… just water sprayed on me."

"Ofo. You don't even know how to wash dishes? Shame on you." Swayam replied making a disappointed face. Rey looked at him with a glare and Swayam stole a glance at him from the corner of his eyes. A second later, both burst of laughing and sat down on the bed.

It was really silly. Both of them knew it. But whatever it was, it was fun. Rey stopped after a minute and looked at Swayam. He thought what did I ever do to receive such great friends?

Then another minute later, he spoke up. "Thank you."

Swayam stopping his fits of laughter and looked at him confused. Rey continued, "I know you and Sharon did all that planning of water, dish washing and everything."

Swayam was confused on how he knew. Rey explained putting his arm around his shoulder and taking a walk around the room. "See my friend; such things just don't happen as 'coincidences.' And knowing Sharon, I knew she must have had a plan when she invited me to come for dinner."

Swayam made an understanding face. Of course he would figure it out. He thought to himself. They just knew each so well that they could tell what the next step would be! He replied, "Yeah, Uhm sorry for your shirt."

Rey looked at his shirt and smiled a big grin remembering the moment he had with Kriya. He spoke up minutes later, "Whatever you guys did back there, thank you. Now I know what I have to do next."

"Arey, thank you bolna bandh kar! Dost hu; kuch cheese bina puche kar deni chahiye. Anything for friends you see."

They gave each other satisfying smile. Getting back to their mischievous note, Rey replied, "And that is why, you're going to give me a pair of shirt as well to change into."

Swayam made a serious face and now he put his shoulder around Rey, making them walk two steps back towards the bed. "Look Rey, I'm your friend. I'll do what's best for you only. So…" he made the intensity rise in Rey as he waited for him to continue. "I won't give you my shirt."

"WHAT?" was Rey's first reaction!! He then calmed for a second and continued, "Stabber! You just said 'anything for friends'. What happened to that?"

"OYEE! Let me finish." Swayam replied with a glare. Rey nodded and zipped his lips. "I won't give you my shirt because you'll go out in your vest."

Rey was confused by this. "Why would I walk around the house in my vest stupid?"

Swayam slapped his head. Looking up at Rey, he hit his lightly on his bare upper arm, making him jump at the sting. "Budhu, you're stupid. Not me. Think… you and Kriya… no shirt… all this muscles… imagine the scene yaar! It's the perfect occasion! Mauke pa chauka maar!"

Rey's mind lightened. "Of course! Why didn't I think of that!!" he said, almost as if talking to himself and already imagining how the rest of the night would go.

Swayam pulled him back and continued the tease, "And at one point, I used to get romantic ideas to impress Sharon from you. Someone said right, vaqt badalte der nai lagti."

Rey, friendly-ly, slapped Swayam's head and gave an instant reply. "Chup kar."

"Waise, idea acha hai na?" Swayam asked, instigating him to speak up more.

Rey get a grin on his face and got into a complete boy talk mood. "Haan voh toh hai… Haaye, me and Kriya… movie… night… maza aa jayega. It's time to gain back her trust."

"Go for it. I know you'll do it."

"Thanks yaar. Pata nai, tu nai hota toh ma kya karta."

"I know." Swayam replied, taking full credit and tugging at his collar. Rey laughed and completely enjoyed that. How he missed times like this that they spent in college!

***

Kriya walked out of the bathroom drying her hair for the third time that day! She felt a bit irritated but nevertheless, she was engrossed in the thoughts of Rey and the come-back of feelings in her for him. She couldn't help but realize how his eye's had sparkled up with happiness when their hands had touched a few minutes ago.

She was completely blushing when Sharon pushed open the door to come in her room. There was no denying in her heart that she still loved him. Sharon saw the blush and how it disappeared as soon as her sister saw her. She smirked while walking over to her and exaggerated, "So…."

"So what?" Kriya simply stated, pretending to not know what she was talking about. She went back to patting her hair dry. Sharon was agitated and she turned her towards herself. Lifting her chin, she made her look into her eyes.

"Look straight at me and tell me you don't love him."

Kriya replied instantly without a pinch of hesitation. "I can't."

Sharon smiled and explained softly, "Then what's the problem? Both of you love each other." Sensing the objection Kriya was about to put, she continued sharply, "I know, I know; all the trust issue and all. I understand that Kriya. But the trust isn't going to come back till her give it a chance. DO you understand? I understand what you mean when you say past is past and it can't be forgotten. But it can be changed. Just give it a try and see how it goes! No harm in that na."

Kriya nodded silently. Even she wanted to give it a try. She was tired of being away from him when she very well knew both of their feelings towards the other. But she didn't know where to begin from. She sat down on the side on bed thinking. Sharon again sensed her problem and kept a supporting hand on her shoulder.

Sitting down next to her, she answered, "Like always, we're going to be watching Titanic. Just go down and go along with the flow. Stop holding yourself back. You've been hurt before and I understand your fear of being hurt again. But trust me when I say this, Rey himself has repented a lot. In the years that you had disappeared, each day I've seen him suffering… longing for you just as much as you have. Stop punishing the both of you. Things happen in a relationship. You just have to accept them, fix the mistakes and move on with it. Understand?"

Kriya nodded yet again. This time, she felt a lot better about going on with the flow and giving this aa chance. She looked up at Sharon wondering what good she must have done in her previous life to get a sister and a best friend like her. She gave her a warm hug. "Thank you."

"Anything for my younger sister," Sharon replied chirpily knowing that that would make Kriya want to something back to her.

And that is what happened. "Hey, I am only few minutes younger than you alright?" The fighting nature was back in her.

This is what Sharon wanted to see back in Kriya. She felt happy from inside. "This is the 'you' I want down there when you give it a chance. Don't hold back. Say and do what your heart tells without letting her mind interfere." Kriya nodded and got up to leave when Sharon commented, "By the way…" Kriya stopped, turned to listen. "I'll always be minutes older than you and smarter than you in anything."

Kriya gave her a one-sided look and she burst out laughing. "Kidding; let's go." Sharon got up and pulled her out of the room with her.

***

Both the girls cane down to see the boys already in the living room. Rey was putting the DVD in the player while Swayam stayed back and relaxed on the coach. Kriya's heart skipped a beat seeing him in a simple black vest, built-up muscles clearly visible. She stood there unable to move or distract her eyes from the scene in front of her. She was completely love-struck.

Sharon had to nudge her thrice in order for her to come back to reality. A deep red blush crept up her face as she continued walking down the stairs after being pulled up to the world around. Rey looked up just then. He had no idea about Kriya's staring session. But just seeing her changed in her night clothes had the effect on him.

He smiled and she replied back with a smile. All four of them took their places on the couches. They were already fixed since the beginning. Sharon sat on the couch that was to the right of the living room and Swayam next to her. Kriya and Rey similarly sat on the couch that was in the middle. For now, both of them were on the either sides of the couch, big gap in between.

The movie started and they enjoyed watching all type of scenarios. In the middle, Kriya got up to get them ice-creams and none of them questioned. It was their routine. Rey soon followed like he always does. Kriya got the bowls and turned to crash into Rey's hard-core body.

Fortunately, the glass bowls didn't break. But Kriya was again in a trance seeing him so close and that too only in his vest. Her hands lay on his chest while they still held the bowls firmly. They looked into each other's eyes and blinked the gaze away. Kriya took a step back when Rey removed his hands from around her waist.

Scratching his head cutely, he opened the freezer to remove the ice-cream. When his face was hidden from Kriya due to the open door, she slyly smiled to himself. With the little encounters they would have, he was sure to win her heart again.

He put the box of ice-cream on the counter and Kriya took out the scooper and started filling the four bowls. But the ice-cream was too frozen up for her. It wasn't making it easy on her to dib in the box.

"May I?" Rey spoke up for the first time since they had entered the kitchen. She gave him the scooper without looking up at him and moved aside. Though silently she was stealing glanced at him; thinking that he wasn't noticing. She couldn't move her eyes away from him. She wondered if it was the physical attraction between them or if it was only because his muscles were visible, making her go crazy. It surely had been a long time since they were together and suddenly, she could feel the longing inside of her that was hidden away since years.

Rey wasn't oblivious to her stealing glances. He was well aware. When he was filling up the last bowl, he spoke up again breaking the silence. "It's not like you haven't seen me before without my shirt you know."

Kriya's cheeks turned into deep red shape as she realized she was caught and he had been noticing. She quickly looked away to hide the blush as well as to stop herself from continuously gaping. She hoped he wouldn't figure out her blushing but too late!

Rey stood right behind her; very close at that; and whispered in her ear. "You look all the more beautiful when you blush like that."

With hearing there, she blushed even harder! If that was even possible, she wondered! To escape the situation, she quickly turned the other way to avoid crashing into Rey again and grabbed the two bowls to make a run for it. Rey again grinned to himself seeing the old charm between them coming back. He picked up the other two and putting the box back in the freezer, went back to the living room as well.

***

Soon enough as the night seeped in, the room got colder due to central conditioning system. On top, Kriya was feeling even cold after having the ice-cream. She didn't understand why as it never happened to her before. Sharon passed her blanket for Rey and Kriya to share as Kriya refused to get up and miss a scene. Rey wouldn't enter Kriya's bedroom just like that. And if Kriya was stubborn, so was Sharon. Thus, she simply passed it around and huddled herself with Swayam, who didn't mind at all 😉

Kriya shared the blanket with Rey but still, both remained a bit far from touching each other. When their hands did brush past the other; both of them pretended to ignore at first. Slowly, they started stealing glances at each other more rather than at the movie.

She remembered what Sharon had told her; to not 'hold back'. Thus, she moved herself a bit closer pretending that she was still cold. The truth was that she was cold. She cuddled up in the couch and tried to not shiver but all in vain. He noticed soon enough and just then, the song began playing… And with that, Sharon fell asleep. This is how it always happened. She would fall asleep listening to the song and Swayam would follow.


Open this link in new tab to listen to the mp3. I cannot convert it in flash as my converter has crashed...


http://markets.ucoz.ru/CelineDion-MyHeartWillGoOn.mp3

Every night in my dreams
I see you, I feel you
That is how I know you go on

Both of them looked at each other at the same time… That was exactly their position. They would dream about each other… Feel the person in dreams and in reality, they were far away from that.


Far across the distance
And spaces between us
You have come to show you go on

Kriya was starting to believe if she didn't already. With the distances between them, they still loved each other no matter what. And wasn't there enough to keep them going on?!

Near, far, wherever you are
I believe that the heart does go on
Once more you open the door
And you're here in my heart
And my heart will go on and on


Rey looked to his side to look at her and see what she would do next. She slowly circled her hands around his arm and rested her head lightly against his shoulder. Over-thrilled from seeing this response from her, he simply grinned back and relaxed in the couch, letting it seep in.


Love can touch us one time
and last for a lifetime
and never let go till we're gone

They truly believed that. They fell in love once and no matter what else can to come their way, they knew by now that it would never go away. They can hate each other but that hate will never be as strong as their love for each other. The love will always outweigh the hatred and all the other problems they might face.


Love was when I loved you'
One true time I hold to.
In my life we'll always go on

As Kriya laid her head against his head, she remembered the time when they had confessed their love to each other. The pure moment they had had at that time would never leave her.


Near, far, wherever you are
I believe that the heart does go on
Once more you open the door
and you're here in my heart
and my heart will go on and on

If the memory of their break-up haunted her, than the memory of their confession would always bring her out of that and put her in happy thought. Just like their love was stronger over hatred, the memory of confession outweighed the haunting memory and she knew that now. She was ready to put that behind of her and focus on her future… focus on their future. All she had to do was let him know.


You're here, there's nothing I fear
and I know that my heart will go on.
We'll stay forever this way
you are safe in my heart
and my heart will go on and on

Yes, she wasn't afraid of being hurt again. She knew Rey would never do it again. Something inside of her just told her that. She strengthened her hold around his arms and closed her eyes; no longer thinking about them and their past along with future while pretending to watch the movie. For now, all she wanted to do was fall asleep while holding on to him and his mere touch.

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Precap: New characters!


As said... I will only post a limit.. For this update, I want atleast 80 likes and as many comments as possible! 😳 Enjoy the update!

-Khushi

Edited by ..first.rain.. - 13 years ago
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yaay mera res ho gaya.

Love u dear.

Ab I'll start reading..


Dear All I can say is I can read this part as many times as i want and never ever get bored.

the lines used here each and every word that the guys shared the galks spoke and the song felt was fab,

I'm totally drowned into it as much as I can I guess.

k now let me get back to normal.

And Type comment warna in the stare I'm I think that I would just write a plain word Awesome which I cant do to ur ff after this much of bugging.

First with The convo of the boys.
Loved it.

Truly said Rey must be lucky to have such great friends all way.
Even I wqas shocked when Rey said Thank you to Swayam But now Its obivois they know each other in and out that even tears can be bound in a heavy downpour.
So he guessed it perfect that his friends did all this to0 help them in relation as they knew how much each has suffed without the other.
We can compare the turmonil that each faced as both were equally into it.
Kria nd Sharons talk the way Sharon asked Kria tolook into her and reply was perfect else she would have turned and toldv out something else.


Swayam's planned work.Kria was dumbstuck.And Rey too YTeah tho plan mai kahi nahi tha nah😆.

The movie started and when Kria moved to take the bowl Rey too moved to help her.He has surely built up the confidence.And loved it when he initiated to speak first knowing Kria else wahao tho eye-eye talk hi rahe jata..

And Rey's words when he moved close to Kria and said U look beautiful whwn u blush..
The final act of Sharon of passing a blanket to share and nuzzling into swayam was so sweet.

Finally Kria let go of her guardsand came close to Rey and circled her hand around his arm and slept.

i wonder Y didnt Rey respond to this act..

And the song one of my favs with Lirics that so perfectly matched Kriyaansh.


Wish to see them soon into more lovely drowy moments but guess that wil take more time.

In short a fantabulous Update.❤️
Edited by asmaju - 13 years ago
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Edited above... Will send out PMz in a few minutes...
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Edited my comment on page 523.For the upper part wiledit my comments in Page 3 in a jify..Wil have to re-reada it once again and enjoy the charm😉

Edited comment in page 3.

Edited by asmaju - 13 years ago
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res...i m trying...okay

ya so i m here

lets c Ur update has abt 2674 words (a bit more a bit maybe less) so to make a very very acceptably long cmnt i shud atleast post a comment of 1000 words.

So, the ques is , Write an essay in not less thn 1000 words on Khushi's update.

Let the party begin

Starting wid u, its been so long wait for ur update due o some disturbing reasons tht I was starting to forget wat actually was d story we were talking abt , pichli update padne e baad I got half f mylost memory back , baaki ki memory was returned by this update. And I know u r reading this one after u hav already updated d next chapter so I can say I hav full grasp over d story, atleast as much as possible. The whole wait and anticipation game is something I don't want again so will try my best to get u wat u ask for, phir bhi if I miss it I m sorry.

BTW thnx for continuing the story I don't say wat u hav felt is something I can relate to , but it is something I can totally understand. Like I said before , no one shud be hurt

Now some abt ur update (yaar I don't think will make it to 1000 coz right now its just 235, not very gud progress, lots more to write, whatever lets c wat I can do )

Yaar phirse bhul gaya wat was d update abt u noe confused b/w three parts, haan titanic one right

Oh I so much ove this movie I had actually not seen it till its 3D launch, cool movie

Par how can our foursome watch it ,like everytime they meet , I cant watch a movie more thn twice, too hard for me ''., it becomes so boring tht I can actually repeat thr lines after d second watch ,

Cant do anything abt tht

Loved bro and sis bonding b/w d respective pairs, I always hav luved ReYam bonding they can get very amazing in thr talks so always luv thr bond.

Second chance ?? obviously milega na , ab agar second chance ki baat na hoti to thr wasn't a point to write d whole thing , ofcourse Kriyaansh ka jab tak patch up nahi ho jata tab taj=k we cant really rest in peace (here I miss d show's Kriyaansh , unka pata nahi kya hoga )

Also luved d Krisha bonding , ab kriya kuch bhi kar le Sharon is elder so she is , no one can change tht

So this much is for d frst part 453 words ''.half of d job is already done ''ummm nearly done baaki ke 533 words next shift mein after a break ''''.

upar ka part select it thn read it ...c magic happens


Edited by Saurav_ - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ..first.rain..


It's okay! Nope.. there are few more reserved one's 😆 Glad you loved it K! Haha KR vs. SS. Aur upar se Sharon ka dimaag 🤣 It's fine. Looking forward to a big one on next update 😳



sure 😃

next tym bada waala pakka
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Posted: 13 years ago
oky so am back...

read ur comments after my comment on page 43...

u missh me... awww... u guys are cho sweet...

so here's the long comment... matlab i am writing... pata nhi where it will end.. in 2-3 lines ya fir 10-12 lines... no guarantee from my side okay!!!!

so coming to the update...

it was so sweet yaar!!!!!!!!

just loved it...

the friendship equation is so good... mast hai... and happens when u know a person in nd out...

and i totally agree with rey itne acche wale coicidences ek saath nahi ho sakte... par haan jab situation kharaab ho na... tab saare hi honge u know... sabhi misdeeds ek saath bahar aaegi...
u know similar to the situation when u r standing in a queue that will never move lekin jaise hi u move to shorter queue ur old queue starts moving jaldi se... such are life dearies...

chalo swayam will now get the payback time when rey ne uski itni saari madad ki thi... ab uski chance hai... and u know dost ke liye jaan hazie hai... abhi toh advice hi deni hi...

rey bechaara cannot see such good opportunities... looks like he is hell scared...

koi nhi... aage badhte hain...

so krisha reltionship...

aww loved it... kitne pyaar se usne samjhaya ...

fir they come out... and kriya ogling rey... what more u can ask for??? i wud have liked rey noticing this thing... badi mazaa aati...

fir the routine of the sleepovers... awww... rey complimenting her blushing... loved it...

they sharing the same blanket... mast... accha huya they didn't watch the end.. i don't like it... u know for so many years i had thot that jack didn't know how to swim jabki it was rose... jack died saving her...

awesome timing of sharon to sleep... uske baad picture gets senti u know iceberg approaching... mkes me sad...

toh kriya slowly covered the distance b/w them...

awesome ...

the thots accompanied wth the song.. were so blissful... loved it ... u know went with the song...

lastly the new characters... looks like they'll be like teachers... ek aaega lesson dega chala jaega... and hence relationship gets stronger...

mera toh hai yeh... y don't u use the already given characters... spare mein hain... karan, sonia and rahul... kaam bhi karenge...

chalo koi nhi lao naye characters... i can only sulk... jab tak kriyansh don't come together nd a kiss...

u know rey ko chakka maar dena tha instead of the chauka... i wud have been m ore happy...

chlo but still am VERY happy...

so updte the next chapter aasap... which reminds me y didn't u post the next chapter when u had written and were planning to do so... arrey ek page pe ek post karti and dusre pe dusra.. ya fir woh radio buttons lga deti for playing and stopping... i wanted to read it...

chalo ab update the next part...

hope u had gone a same writing spree for the kriyansh prt of sajda...😳😃

me waiting for that too...

hope didn't disappoint with the comment...
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Posted: 13 years ago
arrey res no pm 😲

fablous update no words


try to update soon


pm nahi kiya 😕
Edited by sujana9 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update...loved it very very much

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