maaneet ff # 2...CRAZY IN LOVE/LAST PART PAGE 57.. - Page 19

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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update...

me want to know maan plan...ktna wait krna hoga...
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Posted: 13 years ago
what will happen...their wedding in a dramatic way...
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Posted: 13 years ago

hi friends!!!!!!!!!!!! how are u all??????? u know i have a good news for u all me with valli di start a new combo ff on our magical couple maaneet... i request u all plz show same love and support with our new ff too... and sorry i precap is stil not here 😒 plz bear with me... as a sorry i gave a sweet romantic scene😉


PART 35

Next day all were busy with their planning and arrangements, in evening maan went to meet his friends in coffee shop and told them his plan too, its shocking news for them too...they also behave like parents...lolzzz

Dev – maan r u nuts... pagal hain kya?????????

Adi – maan dekh hum kuch aur sochte hain na ye bahut dangerous plan hain...

Maan – yaar mujhse jayada to tum sab dar rahe ho... trust me kuch nahi hoga...

Sam – maan tumne socha hain ki agar uncle ko ye baat pata lagi to kya hoga...

Maan – kuch nahi hoga kyuki dad aur papaji dono ko ye plan pata hain infact they were going to help me..

Unison – what?????????????

Karan – dev adi koi mujhe pinch karo yaar... kya family hain... beta aise plans banta hain aur dad support karte hain... dhany ho aisi family...😆

Maan – yaar mere aas pass kitne melodramatic log hain..

Pinki – o hello Mr.MSK tumhara idea hi aisa hain... sab aise hi react karenge na aur to aur uncles are helping u to tumhe kya lagta hain kya reaction honge tumhari tarah casual...

Adi – 1 min pinki maan agar sanjay uncle aur raj uncle teri side hain to fir problem kya hain wo dono teri help kar sakte hain na ... y u need this plan..

Maan – adi dad and papaji already tried par darji aur beeji nahi mane aur dad aur papaji ko bhi convince kar liye aur agar wo maan bhi gaye to kya guarantee hain wo in future firse HH jaane ki nahi sochenge, geet ko jab se ye baat ka pata laga hain meine uski aanko mein ek daar humesha dekha hain wo khush hoti hain lekin wo khushi uski aankho tak nahi jati kyuki waha daar sama gaya hain.. ki kahi fir koi hum dono ko alag na kar de... tum sab ko kya lagta hain is it fun game for me nahi mein janta hu mein jo karne jaraha hu its not right... aur dadu dadi darji aur beeji bahut naraj bhi ho jaye mujhse par geet ki aankho se wo daar dur karne k liye mein saari duniyan ki narajgi seh sakta hu... aur fir mein janta hu dadu dadi darji aur beeji mujhse jayada der naraj nahi rehnge... mein unhe mana lunga..

Karan (put his hand on maan shoulder) – maan go for it hum sab tumhare sath hain... kyu friends... and all come close for group hug.. after losing hug..

Dev – aacha buddy plan ko kab in action karna hain... i mean...

Maan – dev kal raat ko hi as u know kal kuch to plan kiya hi hoga family walo ne...(maaneet doesn't know about birthday cum engagement party lolzzz) so after that...

Adi – ok dude we all here to help u both in any manner waise bhi dost hote kisliye hain...waise tune geet ko plan batane k bare mein kya socha hain.. u know use bhi to pata hona chahiye ki aakhir uska crazy lover ne kya socha hain to make her saty with him...

Maan (rolled his eyes on adi dramatic lines) – adi first thing geet ko is plan k bare mein kuch bhi pata nahi chalna chahiye, u all know na agar use pata lag gaya to ye KM ki breaking news ban jayegi aur dadu aur darji tak bhi ye khabar pahuch jayegi...aur mein itna bada risk nahi le sakta...

Karan – par maan geet ko to pata lag hi jayega na...

Maan – karan usko kuch pata nahi lagega...and wink on them...


After all discussion maan come back to mansion and had dinner with family and all retired to there bedrooms to sleep... but sleep is far away from our maaneet'e eyes... its first time after 16 year both are together on their birthday...both want to wish each other first but confused how to wish each other in last 16 years they always call each other and remain silent on call...no words only slow music of their breath...


Maan (turning on his bed impatiently and thinking ) – maan soch kaise wish karega tu geet ko... plz babaji give me some idea na... he get up from his bed and stand in front of mirror and start practicing

Maan( smiling idiotically and forward his hand) – wo geet many many happy returns of the day... maan ye kyat ha u looks like a fool... koi aise wish karta hain kya aapni would be ko

Maan ( open his arms and smile shyly )- geet happy birthday to u... nahi aise bhi nahi ye to aisa lag raha hain mein kisi bache ko birthday wish kar raha hu... kya maan u to bada attitude deta hain mein ye hu mein wo hu lekin abhi dekho u didnt even know how to give birthday wishes to ur would be...idea lets google some romatic ways...

Geet also have same condition she also pacing in her room and making night worst for mr.love...lolzzz

Geet – kya mr.love ur good for nothing ya to bas khata rehta hain ya sota rehta hain, ye nahi ki mujhe kuch ideas de... ke maan ko kaise birthday wish karo...

Mr.love lazily put his head between his forehands – bhewww (to mein aur kya karo dadu aur darji ki tarah chess khelo ya mom and mummyji ki tarah kitchen sambhalo aur ya fir maan dad aur papji ki tarah office join karlo...)

Geet – geet puttar kuch soch waise bhi us dust dhanav ka surprise humesha bahut unique hota hain... par i also want to do something for him... idea lets google some romantic ideas...

Both search search and sleep with their laptop on suddenly at 12'o clock their alarm ring and both get alert with alarm... and stand in panic

Maan , geet – shit mein so kaise gaya/gayi...(me dekho bolte bhi ek jaisa hain hehehehehe) and run toward the secrete door and open it at same time and bang collide with each other fall on floor maan on floor and geet on him both shivering because of two reason 1 sudden fall and 2nd their proximity their bodies so close to each other they can feel each other heart beats which is beating heavily... geet eyes were close and maan looking geet with so much passion in his eyes... geet feel his glare even in her close eyes and feel burning sensation she slowly open her eyes only witnessing a a pair of eyes full of passion and desire... she lots in this eyes , maand rise his hand to remove strand of her hair which is blocking his view of his angel face.. maan take his hand in her scalp and make a fist of her hairs and bring her face close to his and touch her soft petals with his perfect M shape lips.. current pass through her spine... maan gently start nibbing her lower lip and massage her scalp geet hold maan collar in her fist very tightly.. he rooled his tongue all over her lips asking for entry he is gentle yet so passionate geet lost her self in his passion and open her lips to gave him entry... his tongue rolled in her mouth and taste her honey sweet... both were lost in passion no one want to come out from their dream world but their passion come to an end when geet heard her bed room door is knocking, and she gasp in fear she immediately come out from kiss which cause a slight cut on maan's lips.. maan feel sharp pain on his lips and gave geet fake angry glare... where on other side family member's knocking geet's bedroom door.. wriggle to get come out from his grip but maan having so other plan's...

Mummyji – geet puttar door open kar...

Geet plead maan through her eyes to leave her but enjoying her plight..

Maan (come close to her and whisper) – one condition..

Geet rise her one eyebrow in questioning manner like

Maan (whisper) – i want one more kiss as my birthday gift...or else i have no problem live like this whole night... and wink on her.. geet already red because of their passionate moments and his shameless comment make her even redder... both were busy when maaneet again heard knock and this time darji ask geet to open door...geet having no choice except agree with him because she knows maan not going to leave her without agree with his wish... he leave her and she get up and try to run but maan again caught her hand geet turn toward him frustratingly and again

Geet (whisper) – now what???????????

Maan (come close to and and give a peck on her lips) – HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO U MISHTY... geet too shock with her own behaviour here she come to wish him and she herself lost in his passion and desire...

Geet (cupped his face in her soft hand and bring her face close to him and gave him peck on lips..)- HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO U TOO MAAN... but a one more knock on door and geet run their leaving maan lost in her love...

Geet open door penting heavily while all llok her suspiciously crossing their arms over their chest...

beeji(seriously making geet threaten a little bit) – geet aap kaha thi itna time lagta hain kya door open karne mein??????????

And our innocent geet blurt out – nahi beeji mein maan k rrom mein nahi thi mein to washroom mein thi bas isliye...( lo geet tumhe to jhoot bolna bhi nahi aata)

Here maan listening their conversation standing other side of the door hit his head on geet reply...

Maan (st) – hey babaji dekha kitni jhali hain ye khud hi sabko bata diya ki wo mere sath thi... haye babji kya karo mein is jhali ka..

In geet room

beeji (streamly)- geet humne to maan ka naam bhi nahi liya fir tum kyu safai de rahi ho... geet bit her tongue what just she say... now she is gone one going to leave her that easily... and today they were all looking in very stream and serious mood...

darji (streamly and little bit loudly)- geet jawab do kaha thi tum????????

Geet eyes get teary because of darji talking her loudly and she start sobbing...hearing geet sobbing maan also come in to her room but before he do something dadu and dadi come forward and take her in their embrace

Dadu (side hug geet) – harjeet kyu meri pyari si bachi ko dara raha hain... dekh aaj k din bhi rola diya isse...he turn toward geet and wipe her tears and puttar ji ismein rone ki kya baat hain ye khota to majak kar raha tha... aur hum sab jante hain tum aur ye badmash (pointing towards maan ) ek sath the... aur kyu na ho aakhir pehli baar wish kar rahe the ek dusare ko in 16 years mein... geet again blush and maan looks down smiling shyly...

Dadu ask maan to come close to him and hug him too from other side and

Dadu – happy birthday to u both, babaji kare duniya ki saari khushiyan tumne mile... both tilldown to touch dadu's feet , dadu bless them and hug both together now they went to darji beeji dadi mom dad papaji mummyji... every one bless them whole heartly...

Them everyone retired to there room to sleep...

Next – depend on ur likes and comments...

I m still not post maan's plan because i m not satisfied with ur likes and comments lolzzz, ok

Dearies i m just joking i really want to give maan's plan in this update but then i thought about this birthday wishes and next update maaneet birthday party and engagement...so plz i m sorry to make u all wait... but its is also u want na...


dearies here is the link of our new combo ff


Insane Lover


thank u so much for ur likes and comments

plz ignore spelling and grammar mistakes

because me lazy bones never check my update twice 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb one...
loved his unique way of wishing her...
Geet s so cute and innocent..
waiting for the plan to reveal..
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow lovely update dear..my maan saying his plan to his friends..maan i wil support in sucess of ur plan always..my maaneet's birthday wow happy birthday maaneet..they kiss, me too blushy blushy..im waiting for my maan's reaction..i love te update so so much..
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Posted: 13 years ago
LOVED THE UPDATE
LOVED THE WAY THEY GOOGLED FOR IDEAS TO WISH EACH OTHER

AND GEET IS A JHALLI
SHE TOLD EVERYONE SHE WAS NOT WITH MAAN WHEN THEY DID NOT EVEN ASK HER
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved it
geet is so cute...
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey gr8 part.. cont.sooon
thanks for pm dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome update nd maan friendship wid his friends is awsome nd loed the way how dey wished each other nd kahi bi tomance shuru.. loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 35
lovely part...
cont soon dear...

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