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...Doctor...

@...Doctor...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#631

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I'm first! 🥳

Will edit it tonight! Bye!

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OMG! This was freaking awesome! Loved it! I'm so excited Rae.

They are finally getting married..like seriously..Yipee!

I loved it to bits!

Ayaan! ughh! Kitni baar samjhana padta hai. I'm repeating once again for you since I love you so much, now listen carefully- No girl, yes no girl can deny your proposal because you are a cute, sweet, adorable, handsome, hot, naughty & ambitious guy, in short you are every girl's dream man. So stop underestimating yourself!

Akshay-Mamu convo was perfect Rae. I always wanted to read something on them. Glad to know that Akshay respects Arnav so much & also considers him as a major part of his life. He is like a father figure to him & I'm glad that he means so much to akshay! Can I just hug Akshay & priyanka. They are adorable!

Bete ki shaadi ho rahi & they are still romancing. Come on guystime to grow old, kab tak teenage lovers ki tarah behave karoge 😆

"Really, Khushi, really? Are you going to act like TV wali saas and...kya tha woh...Sama ka shoshan karogi kyonki usne tumhaara beta chura liya?"

LOL! Trust Arnav to say this. Khushi ke saath rehkar his sense of humor has improvised a lot.

They'll never stop teasing him..will they? But I enjoy their teasing a lot. They are such a cute, nice family. Awww Khushi loves them all. Saas ho toh aisi- Karan says not me 😆

Hayeee! Two hotties together..sigh..I love you both so much! Arnav teasing khushi..hmm..me likey. Arnav teasing Ayaan..again me likey!

Finally! Sama's here! They look awesome & your description was perfect. Their feelings were portrayed beautifully Rae, I loved each & every word. Sama's hesitation, Ayaan's blush, Sama's shyness & Ayaan's irritation on being teased was perfectly written.

And the song 😍 What should I say!

Finally is ending! 😲 No..don't do this! *wipes tear* I'll miss Finally like hell!

P.S.- Mature content *cough* I say YES! 😳

P.P.S- Update soon!

Edited by ...Doctor... - 13 years ago

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#632

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Yep. It's official. You want to kill me. Aye Kaash Ke Hum? Awww...

And what a chapter. Sigh! Sigh! Sigh!!

A little peek into Akshay's conversation with Arnav - Beautifully done. They were similar, weren't they, hardened hearts softened by the woman they love..I love Akshay (and why must I decide,,,I won't.)

And Ayaan and Sama look beautiful.

And the moment where they see each other...Yep. Sigh Sigh!

All the teasing, the nervousness, more teasing, the wait, the annoyance...perfectly captured

And the little moment between Arnav and Khushi - woh kya kehte hain..shoshan..haha! Had me laughing. But the line after about the hurt now more lik faint battle scars...beautiful analogy. That's what it is.

Such a warm and fuzzy update. Mush is highly underrated. It can pick you up like nothing!

I loved it. Perfect for a Friday evening!

Edited by meera30 - 13 years ago

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thebubblespop12

@thebubblespop12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#633

Awww...
Thanks for the update. I love how you added the story about the saas with the bad daughter-in-law from the show in your story. LOL!!
I love all the teasing...I think that's one of the best parts about weddings!!
I loved the brother moment!!

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Harshitha Shankar

@-_-harsh42

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#634

Awww. . . . . .
It was so sweet an update, it gave me diabetes! 😃 😛

Loved the teasing, and revelation of Arnav's "Topmost secret talk", and Ayaan's annoyance. . .

Thanks for the PM, Rae. . . .

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PixieFlame

@PixieFlame

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#635

Wow!

I love weddings, and this was one great chapter! :D

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Rita

@rjhaveri

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#636

Beautiful. I just cannot get over the warmth and love this family shares. Very well written. Looking forward to the next part.

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sur91

@sur91

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#637

I won't be able to write a long comment so would just say I loved it especially what arnav said to akshay and he said to ayaan in turn, it was really deep and meaningful. Im sad that it's ending but glad too that it's ending on a happy note

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farheen75

@farheen75

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#638

What a beautiful and amazing update...u have captured the feelings of a bride and the groom perfectly when they see each other for the first time dressed up for the most important and precious occasion of their lives...what a moment for Khushi and arnav as well,nothing gives more pleasure to parents more than seeing their happy and settled and that's a moment for our and eternal bliss for them.

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ashred12

@ashred12

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#639

awww...
i love how u bring arhi moments in d story...very cute...

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Manitaa

@Manitaa

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#640

that was so wonderful.. left me all fuzzy and warm.. just beautiful.. I wont mind the mature part but dont fret over it.. personally, I love the way you write romance but if you wanna experiment.. i'll be all eyes (to read of course) 😉

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