DIL DOSTI to DANCE..! KR OS !

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Posted: 13 years ago

ok guyz so here it is my new story hope u ppl like it

its been 6 months since..kriyansh are seperated...kria wid her mom nw lives in dehradun...but wait a second...does she live...??...nah...kria...who was knownn 2 live life to d fullest...has nw become a lifeless soul...who used 2 make oders laugh..has now forgotten all her reasons to laugh...but wait again..has she forgotten her reasons to laugh..nah...how cud she...d nly reasons tht made her laugh wer her dil...her dosti...and her dance...!

all dis made smriti worry...she jus cudnt see her daughter like dis...dis is wen she realised ki jo bhi uske saath hua ws nt becoz of dance and becoz her fate and nw she cant let her daughter suffer...so she decided to permit kria 2 dance...but den she gt 2 late in it...she many tyms tried 2 pursue kria 2 strt her dancing...brought many forms frm d institutes...to wch what kria did is just tear dem...and brought many tickets of shows tht wud happen thinking dat dis wud agn rise d old passion in her..to wch kria gve sum lame excuse everytym and dint go...

days passed like dis...
but 1 day kria just cudnt hold
she jus bursted out...

Kr: bas maa...nhi karna mujhe dance...kitne baar kahu mein aapse yahi baat...aakhir aap chahti kya hai mujhse...jab man chaha dance karne se rok diya...jab man chaha dance karvaliya...aakhir samajh kya rakha hai mujhe...mein bhi to insaan hu...

Sm: beta mein to bas tumhari khushi chahti hu...aur tumhari khushi...

Kr: aur meri khushi dance mein hai??...ha hai meri khushi dance mein...lekin woh tab jab mein apne dil aur dosti ke saath rahun...meri dil aur dosti hi mere dance karne ka karan hai...the..aur rahenge...aur jab wo hi nhi hai..to dance karke mujhe wo khushi nhi milegi jo mujhe milti thi...but dukh hoga...ki maine unhe ditch kiya...!...and she walks out of d crying..!

here smriti breaks down crying...she jus cudnt take dat she was d sole reason of d turmoil her daughter ws goin through...but den she stood up determined (aakhir kria ki maa hai...aise kaise haar manegi??😛)...

Sm: maine tumhare dance karne ka karan tumse door kiya to mein hi inhe tumhare paas wapas lekar aaungi...

smriti knew tht kria wudnt agree 2 get bck 2 mumbai...dew 2 her guilt..so she thought of a plan...

and 1stly she had 2 see whether kria's dil...tht is her rey...ws perfect fr her or nt...

so she made sum business excuse and left fr mumbai...

aur mumbai pahuchte hi lag gyi apne kaam par...

she 1st had 2 confirm if rey ws d correct person fr kria or not??...so she called him 2 a cafe...she dint tell him her identity but jus asked him 2 cum...saying dat she needed help...and rey 1stly thought of nt goin but den he thought abt d help d oder person needed and changed his mind...

and he reaches d cafe and sees her...
nw he jus cudnt control...and burst out...

Re: kya chahti hai aap mujhse...dekhiya agar aapko eh lag rha hai ki mein aur aapki beti ek saath hai to aap galat samjh rhi hai...infact aapki beti to mujhse pyaar bhi nhi karti...and flashes of d prevalentines day came 2 his mind...his chain of thoughts ws cut by smriti...

Sm: dekho beta...pehli baat to ye hai..ki ye bilkul jhoot hai ki meri beti tumse pyaar nhi karti...jitna wo tumse pyaar karti hai shayad hi koi kar paaye...aur ye jabse jo tum use meri beti keh rhe the...nahi rehi ab wo meri beti...meri beti...jo hamesha haste..khelte rehti thi..waisi nhi rhi wo...bahut zyada toot chuki hai...aur jo tumne mujhse poocha tha ki kya chahti hu mein tumse...wo hai ki meri beti mujhe waapis laa do...dis all she said wid tears in her eyes...

rey 1stly comforted her...(aakhir future sasu maa hai wo 😆)

and den she started...

Sm: dekho beta mein maanti hu ki jo maine kiya wo bilkul galat tha...lekin mein bhi kya karti..akeli maa hu...aakhir uske siva hai hi kaun mera is duniya mein..bas use ache se settled dekhna chahti hu...aur use tumse door karne ka mera ek hi karan tha...mujhe laga ki tum bhi aam ladkon ki tarah hoge...lekin aaj mujhe pata chal gya hai ki tum meri beti se sacha pyaar karte ho...aur tumhi hi meri beti ko khush rakh sakte ho...

hearing dis a bleak smile crept on rey's face...

Sm: tum yrhi soch rahego ki kyun wo tumse aise door chali gyi...kyunki...(and smriti says abt d condition...cant type tht much...u all knoe it already na...so cut to d next thing)

all dis made rey feel guilty tht he had not trusted his baatcutter actually he had trusted her false words and let her go..but its tym fr him 2 get d love of his life back 2 him...

he asked smriti wer she ws 2 wch she said him abt her plan and bth agreed...

1stly she called kria mumbai...wid sum of her imp. documents wch she had left and dose were very imp. ...though kria dint want to go...smriti had convinvced her on account of dose imp. papers...!

kria had cum 2 mumbai...she ws very sad..better 2 say broken...being away frm him pricked her heart daily...infact every second..and nw here she ws very near to him yet very far from him...for once she wished she was stone hearted..but alas evn tht wish of hers cudnt b possible..
she was waiting at d airport fr smriti...
as soon as smriti arrived she handed over d papers to her and was abt 2 go back...
Sm: kaha jaa rahi ho??
Kr: vaapas dehradun...
Sm: kya??
Kr: maa aap saari sachai jaanti hai...mumbai se meri itni yaadein judi hai aur mein yaha nhi reh sakti aur agar yaha ruki to unse mile bina to bilkul nahi reh sakti..
and frm behind came a voice..acha to tum mile bina hi chali jaogi...
as she turned back she was shocked or may b surprised or may b happy...d feeling cudnt b expressed !
Kr: swayam..tum yaha
Sw: sharon hum waapas ghar chale jaaye..hum to kisi ko receive karne aaye the..lekin lagta hai usse to mujhse koi matlab hi nhi hai..pehle bhi aise hi chodke chali gyi thi...pain evident in his voice...
Kr: sorry na swayam..she said like a cute baby ready to cry..
he cudnt b angry more..afterall he ws seeing after long tym and more over it wasnt her mistake at all..
he immediately hugged her...showing how much he missed her..and she to responded...
Sh: ahem ahem !
Kr: sharon ! tum yahan??
Sh: haan surprised??
Kr: haan maine tumhe bilkul expect nhi kiya tha..
Sh: i noe..and dey bth hug each oder..
Sw: u noe wat guyz aaj ki date na history mein likhi jayegi..
bth d girls :shut up swayam !!
Sw: ok ok ! abhi ghar chale?
Kr: ok !
and dey reach home...
after settling down..
Kr: guyz wo kya haina muhe ek baat hazam nhi ho rahi hai..
Sh: haan haan mein jaanti hu..yahi na ki mein itne ache se tumhare saath kaise??..ab u noe na kria hum girls kaise hoti hai..tumne entry hi meri opponent ki roop mein ki so we had to move wid d flow...
Kr: nah sharon wo baat nhi hai...tum mere saath theek ho wo to samajh mein aata hai lekin swayam ke saath..?
Sw: umm..wo kria..woo...we bth are together nw..
and guyz so d scene is sumthing like..swaron blushing and kria shocked ready to tease..
Kr: so i guess...yaha na bahut kuch ho chuka hai mere jaane ke baad huh??
Sw: haan kria bahut kuch acha bhi and bahut kuch bura bhi...
Sw: kria dekho mein jaanta hu ki agar hum jisse pyaar karte hai wo hamare saath na ho to kaisa lagta hai..aur mein jaanta hu ki tum aur rey dono ek doosre ke bina nahi reh sakte...aur ek doosre se bahut pyaar karte ho..
Sh: haan kria pls..rey bahut zyada toot chuka hai...he needs u..
Kr: guyz pls ! maine badi mushkil se faisla liya...i jus cant nw..muhe aur weak mat banao...pls ! mein aur rey ek doosre ke nahi ho sakte...shayad yahi hamari destiny hai..
Sw: but kria..u bth luv each oder..
Kr: lekin swayam mom nhi maanegi..
Sm: aur agar tumhari mom man jaye to?
kria totally shocked turned towards her...
Sm: haan beta mein samjh gyi hu ki rey aur tumhare friends..aur tumhara dance tumhari life hai aur mein tumhe unse door nhi reh sakti..i m sorry mein tumhe samjh nhi paayi..
Kr: mom aap ye kaise baat kar rhi ho..
and bth hug each oder...
Sh: waise rey abhi college mein milega..go get ua love back kria..
and den she goes to d college...after searching d whole college..she finds him in deir fav plc..fire exit..
rey she called out..
Re: tum yahan??
silence prevailed fr a few mins as bth wer busy taking in d moment ! pain evident on bth deir face ! hapiness knew no bounds ! but rey had 2 let go d moment ! after all d perfect moment ws yet 2 cum !
he ws abt 2 leave wen she caught his hand...
Kr: rey !
he remain silent ! he had nuthing 2 speak..though his heart spoke volumes ! he knew it wasnt her fault...it ws deir destiny...but now dis ws how it had 2 b done...oder wise kria being kria wud always hav tht guilt of cheating..wch actually she neva did !

he knew she wht sorrow she ws going through..he ws in d same state too and nt able 2 end her sorrows made him regret evn more...
Kr: sorry ! was all tht she said gathering all her strength...
he had 2 b rude..though he dint want too..
he making her grip loose on his hand agn made his move outside wen she agn in dat voice full of guilt said..
Kr: rey pls ! ek baar meri baat to suniye !
Re: look whoeva u r...mera haath chodo i gtg !
Kr: kya aap mujhe nhi jaante..aapki baatcutter ko nhi jaante...chabilal apni ramaira ko kaise bhool sakta hai haan...rey pls ek baar meri baat suniye..maine jo kuch bhi us raat kiya...
she ws cut wen he pushed her to d wall..folding her left hand wid his...
Re: haan kria uss raat tumne jo kuch kiya..uske baad na hi koi baatcutter hai na koi chabilal aur na koi ramaira..
Kr: rey pls ! its hurting ! aap ek baar meri baat to suniye..
Re: hurting huh? to tumhare paas feelings bhi hai..hurt to mein bhi hua tha kria jab tumne wo sab mere saath kiya tha..! tab ye sab kyun nhi socha..ye kyun nhi socha tha ki mein bhi hurt ho rha tha..actually tum kyun sochogi...tum to mujhse pyaar hi nhi karti na..wo to mein tumse pagalon ki tarah pyaar kar baitha and u noe wat kria i hv been paid fr it very nycely and nw no more aur nhi jhel sakta mein !

Kr: rey pls meri baat to suniye..uss raat jo bhi maine kaha tha wo sab sirf ek jhoot tha...jab aapko hurt kiya to aapse zyada chot mujhe pahunchi thi rey ! aur pyaar..pyaar kya hota hai wo to maine aap hi se seekha hai rey..haan ek baat aapne sahi ki..aapne mujhse pyaar kiya...mujhe har baar support kiya..har wish puri ki...aur maine kuch nhi siva aapko dukh pahunchane ke..i m srry rey ! pls ek baar agar aapne kabhi mujhse pyaar kiya tha to meri baat sun lijiye...iss jhoot ke bojh ko mein nhi seh paungi rey pls..uske baad aap jo chahe uske liye mein tayyar hu...and den she moaned...nt fr d pain given by her heart wch ws wid him but d physical pain he ws giving !

bth sat down and she narrated d whole stry to him..
Kr: maine aapko wo sab kuch isiliye kahan taaki aap apni life mein aage bad jao..ab aap jo karna chahe wo aapki marzi hai rey..she got up to go..wen he spoke..
Re: kaise bharosa karun mein tumhara..??kaise maan lu ki jo kuch tumne jab kahan wo sach nhi hai...?? kaise maan lu ki tumne bas mujhe use kiya aur pyaar nhi...hai iss baat ka koi saboot tumhare paas??
Kr: waise to rey sache pyaar ke liye kisi saboot ki zaroorat nhi padti..lekin fir bhi agar aap yahi chahte hai to chaliye mere saath...
and dey go to her house...
she takes him to his house...all d 3 ( swaron and smriti) cud make out frm deir expressions tht everything hadnt becum alright between d 2 ! smriti and sharon moved frward 2 go but swayam stopped dem !
Sw: nahi..abhi ke liye unhe akele rehna dena hi theek hoga...
Sh: but swayam..
Sm: nahi sharon i think he is right..lets jus leave it 2 dem..humein beech mein nhi padna chahiye...
in d room...
Kr: rey yahi par maine aapko sab jhoot kahan tha na..ab yahi par aapko sab kuch sach bataungi...
ye dekhiye rey...hamari ye saari photos jo maine sambhaal kar rakhi hai...
ye dekhiye wo paper jismein aapne mujhe aapki date banne ke liye kahaan tha...
aapko wo party yaad hai rey...pata hai rey jab maine uss party mein unn ladkiyon ke beech dekha to dil kiya ki unn sab ko door hatakar kahun ki aap sirf mere ho...
aur aapki wo teen shartein..waise to wo meri punishment thi lekin mujhe aapke liye wo sab karna bahut acha laga tha..aur hamari butterfly kiss..mein kabhi nhi bhool sakti rey wo sab...kabhi nhi...she said while crying...
ye dekhiye rey wo dress jo aapne mujhe gift ki thi...waise to mein ye dress pehenti hi nhi..lekin sirf aapke liye maine pehni thi..aur abhi bhi mere paas hi hai aur hamesha rahegi..
aur ye aapki coat..aap chahein to isse le sakte hai rey...but rey agar ye mere paas rahi to mujhe bahut acha lagega...lekin rey aap bhi kyun mere baarein mein sochenge...aapko to yahi lagta hai na ki mein aapse nhi pyaar nhi karti..saying dis she broke down on her knees...
evn he cudnt control himself...he went to her..nw ws d perfect moment wen she had vent our all he pain...
he went on his knees...cuppped her face..
Re: itna pyaar karti ho mujhse..he asked crying..
she nodded while crying...
Re: to bataya kyun nhi ki sach kya hai?? kyun chupaya mujhse??
Kr: i m sorry ! she said in her cute baby face...
immediately he hugged her..and bth stayed like dat fr sum tym in each oders embrace..feeling each oders love after long tym..
after moving apart..dey sat like dat only fr sumtym...smiling through deir tears...
Kr: i love you..she said in dat super sweet voice of her wid d cutest expression !
Re: he smiled at her cuteness...i love you too he said...while touching his forehead wid hers !
the end !
so ppl here anoder OS comes to an end...i hope you liked it !
pls hit d like button...tht dosent take a lot of tym or effort..pls !
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Edited by D3_Addictzzz - 12 years ago

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prabhjot ARMA

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Posted: 13 years ago

yeee me first one

wow i love this mera day asha jane wala hey

are yaar agar pages ki dimand hoti to 5 min main complete kar deti but like kese main ek baar hi like kar sakti hoo

but koi na kuj to karna parega

let me think ...

but i love thih

megical kriyaansh

u roke it

kya baat kya baat kya baat

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Posted: 13 years ago

its superb n am glad u posted this on ff forum rather than d3 forum

hats off to u 4 that n ur chapter is awesome...i will surely pm this to true kriyansh fan

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Deetha.

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Posted: 13 years ago

nice!!!!!!!!!11

im loving it...

jaldi update dena

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D3_Addictzzz

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aromakriyaansh
yeee me first one
wow i love this mera day asha jane wala hey
are yaar agar pages ki dimand hoti to 5 min main complete kar deti but like kese main ek baar hi like kar sakti hoo
but koi na kuj to karna parega
let me think ...
but i love thih
megical kriyaansh
u roke it
kya baat kya baat kya baat

mera bhi din na bahut acha jaana wala hai ye comment padh kar...i hope acha hi jaaye...exam ki preparation jo karna hai...😛

and isiliye to likes ki demand di hai...taaki sab ka response mile😉

and itne ache comment ke liye thank u !!😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: crazysky
its superb n am glad u posted this on ff forum rather than d3 forum
hats off to u 4 that n ur chapter is awesome...i will surely pm this to true kriyansh fan

glad tht u liked d concept...and thanx fr d PMs u r gonna send !!