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Posted: 13 years ago
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I hear that famous Parichay poetry was recited by Siddhi yesterday. Well there is nothing wrong in it, but I agree primary objective is Kunal's Parichay. So sure Siddhi can go recite such poetry but Kunal doesn't need to be silent. Considering how the situation is, I thoguth of giving you guys this as what Kunal may say:

Ek talaash mein nikla tha kabhi,

Manzil ka muje pata tha or rah mujhe banana thi;

Chalte chalte ek saath mil gaya,

Laga na door hai manzil na koi rukavat hai aani;

Thoondne nikla hu mein apna Parichay,

bas isi khoj mein hai zindagi bitani;

Lekin yeh kya pal aaya hai mere saamne,

Bas daldal or dnoond hi nazar aata hai;

Ek bhavar mein jaise phasa hu or aandhi aake bachaye mujhe,

Rah to na jaane kaha chuti, manzil phi kya hai pata nahi;

Nikla tha thoondne apna Parichay mein kabhi,

Yeh Parichay hota hai kya, ab mujhe pata nahi?


English translation:

I embarked upon a journey in a pursuit,

I knew my destination and right path would pave itself;

Found a companion on my way,

Neither destination seem far nor appeared any obstacles;

I embarked upon this journey to seek my Paricahy,

Now this search would be my life long journey;

But what does this stand before me,

All I see is fog and morass ahead;

Am in middle of turbillion and a storm may save me,

The path was long gone; I wonder what the destination is;

Had started this journey in hope of gaining my Parichay,

But I no longer know, what Parichay is?


What do you have to say????

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Posted: 13 years ago
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I'll say something if you can translate to english, Jay.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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beautiful piece of writing jay ...it really pains me alot that cvs could have done such a wonderful job with kunal's character , with sinal , with the show as whole ...but insatead they chose to ruin such a good show through their own hands ...
your shayari is soo meaningful and soo apt ...
sach mein nikla tha kunal apna parichay hi dhoonde ...par beech raste mein hi woh kahin bhatak gaya ..ya yun kahun bhatakne pe majboor kar diya gaya ...aur uska parichay us se bichad gaya ...
adhura reh gaya ...jo shayad ab kabhi bhi poora nahin ho sakta hai ...😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very well written, Jay 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Silambu

I'll say something if you can translate to english, Jay.


Ok I have English translation,
Sorry it would not rhyme in Englsih as I orginally planned in hindi.

Hope it is efficient.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: jay_bpm


Ok I have English translation,
Sorry it would not rhyme in Englsih as I orginally planned in hindi.

Hope it is efficient.

Jay, My man, thank you for the translation. Its perfect and very appropriate to the current situation.. I feel kind of sad reading it from Kunal's point of view. He is not the only one who is lost, but everyone is as well. What started with such great potential and great promising story has been tattered and reduced to this pathetic state today by the CVs AND Ekta, who just lost all credibility and intelligence to take the story to what it was promised in the beginning.
Really a shame...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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beautiful shayari Jay ..very well written..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Well written Jay 👏👏. As you said you will stop watching Parichay ... But cannot stop yourself from thinking about Parichay ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: mochas156

Well written Jay 👏👏. As you said you will stop watching Parichay ... But cannot stop yourself from thinking about Parichay ...


yes though I've stopped watching; it'll take me some time to forget about it. I hope it will be possible, but let's see.

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