SwaRon SS |Six Letters| *Ch1 Pg14 Oct26*

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Hello peeps . . . Hows ya all? 😃

So, I'm back with a new SS on SwaRon. It will have maximum 5 parts. 😎

Well, frankly speaking this is my first work on SwaRon so I'm a little sceptical about this one. 😳

Anyways, please go through it before anything else and I'll see ya at the bottom of the page! 😊

P.s ' The credit for the concept goes to Three Letters by Nels Schifano and the movie Bachna Ae Haseeno. Talking about the latter you'll come to know why! 😉



**Six Letters**

A SwaRon SS

Prologue

It was autumn. From where I started to where I am today. The journey has been long and tiring from nothing to something I am today. It's not been an easy journey. Although still afternoon the journey had been spent peering at slowly moving red lights through clouds of condensing exhaust and the intermittent slip-slip of wipers. Now as she turned off the ignition darkness gathered silently around her. She walked head down, hood up, the carrier bag spinning one way then the next as it clipped against her leg. The pavement was thick with the slippery brown mulch of fallen leaves. At her gate she delayed, unwilling to break the stillness with squeaking hinges; not yet teatime and the city were being put to sleep.

The terrace before her hugged the curve of the road tumbling erratically down the hill and into the gloom. Bending around the edges of her vision she was conscious of curtains being swished closed, stone faces bathed by the grey light of televisions, broken roof tiles, satellite dishes, bay windows, the whole higgledy-piggledy collection of guttering and skylights. For a moment her home was a stranger, a simple compartment in this huge connected structure.

She rattled the key into the lock, tilting it to the particular angle that would allow it to catch. She stepped inside, her hand brushing the light switch as she closed the door behind her. The house was pretty much the same as she left it five years back. Everything was covered with white and the only addition was the now visible cobwebs in almost every corner of the room. Seeing the mess, she groaned. It would take her hell lot of time to clean this house up. But it didn't bother her much. She has a lot of time on her plate for the cleaning stuff. What bothered her most were the memories associated with this house which kept on coming back every second. He sighed and turned towards a corner to keep her luggage. That is when her eyes fell on the envelopes kept on the floor.

. . .


Ok, if you Google the story then you'll find the second paragraph to be exactly same. 😳 That's because I know the description of the house couldn't have been better in any other way. 😛 But you can see a complete change in the 1st and the 3rd paragraph and I promise that there will be no same texts as the story proceeds. 😃

So, here's the introduction. Please let me know what you think and if I should continue. If you'd like a PM for this one, then please buddy IceCrystals. up. Thanks for all your support with my other FF's. 🤗 I hope you like this one just as much. Take care and please do comment. : )


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Index


Note: Page 7

Chapter One: Page 14
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome intro sissy...
Loved it...
Beautifully described...
Looking forward 2 it...
N tu likh ri hai to awesome hi hoga...:D
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Originally posted by: puja_arsha

Awesome intro sissy...
Loved it...
Beautifully described...
Looking forward 2 it...
N tu likh ri hai to awesome hi hoga...:D


Thanks a lot di.
I'm glad that you liked it. 😃
Thank you!
Lols, I hope di. Kyunki main bahut baar blunders bhi kar deti hun! 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aquilia_Aditi



Thanks a lot di.
I'm glad that you liked it.😃
Thank you!
Lols, I hope di. Kyunki main bahut baar blunders bhi kar deti hun!🤣



tune kb blunder kia re???
Muje to kbi nai pta chala...
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Originally posted by: puja_arsha



tune kb blunder kia re???
Muje to kbi nai pta chala...


Simple Pleasures par 1st OS padha? 😛
And my SS - So Close, Yet So Far. 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice start. Please do PM me when you continue.
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Originally posted by: Srishti_SwaRon

Nice start. Please do PM me when you continue.


Thanks a lot. Sure, I will. 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome work... 👏

beautifully explained...

loved it

waiting for next part soon

thnx for pm

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