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Posted: 13 years ago

Hello 2 all the members :) No one knows me in this section because I have never pasted anything here. Actually this is the first time I have written an OS. I don't know if anyone will like this or not, but I just wanted to write something in here. So here it is. Suggestions, comments, and criticism is welcome.

Hate...

He sees her by the river, hugging herself. He sees the bruises on her cheeks and the blood on her ripped clothes. He sees her shivering in the wintery night.

A silent rage goes though him. All this because of hate... bloody goddamn hate. She lifts her eyes to his face and he sees all the emotions pass on her face: surprised, confused, happy, and finally, relief.

"You have come for me." Her eyes well up with tears. He had never seen her cry. She had always been strong by his side...never flinching nor groaning when she did all the hard work. "I had given up hope, shinu...all dead, all blasted into pieces..goddamn pieces..everyting melted...I thought...I thought.. you were gone Shinu..blown into pieces...but ..but you came."

His soul shattered seeing her in so much pain. He wished she had not seen anything. He wished she was still a simple, settled woman who had seen her share of hardships in life... but not the death. Death of everyone in front of her face.

He slowly walked the steps that separated them. When he came near her, he bent down and hugged her gently. "Nothing in this world can separate me from you jaan...not death, not any being, not anyone. I would have come for you no matter where I was... because u r my other half. You are all I have.."

He feels her crying... and feels her sobs.

"I am so sorry..so..so..so..sorry... couldn't save anyone...so..soo"

"Shh" he lays her head on his soulder, wishing once again that she had not seen all that she had... Wishing again that she would forget all the people's cries... Forget when the children ran around burning with fire yelling for help..Forget when elders couldn't run from the blasts because their legs gave away...He just wished..that the hate in this world will become inferior one day.

So! here it is. Please tell me how is this...

Dank you. 😃

Edited by Clever.Foxxy - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

awww love it naaz,🤗

love the whole concept...

keep writing more..👍🏼

Edited by prinzylvsKaSh - 13 years ago

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@Leve

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: prinzylvsKaSh
awww love it naaz,🤗
love the whole concept...
keep writing more..👍🏼

danksss 4 liking it 🤗

i will 😃

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@Leve

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ..MissBindaas..
Nice start 😃

i know 🤣

danks 😃

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-.SapnokiRani-.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Nice one naaz! 🤗

Keep writing more! 👍🏼

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Posted: 13 years ago

hey naaz🤗

its really a sweet n a well ended OS

at first i thought that u would finish it off without the reason but then end para ended it well

N lovely writing dear

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Posted: 13 years ago

Great Naaz jee Great👏
main ne kabhe itni dheyan se koi OS pari nahi hai sachi🤣

Love it😳

& thanks likhne keyliye😊

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-Crystal-Clear-

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Posted: 13 years ago

Foxxy yaar superb 👏

Congratulations on your very first OS 🥳

The plot is catchy ⭐️

Please please please continue and update soon 🤗

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@Leve

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Keenal
Nice one naaz! 🤗
Keep writing more! 👍🏼

thanksss 4 liking it 🤗

Originally posted by: niknavyu
hey naaz🤗
its really a sweet n a well ended OS
at first i thought that u would finish it off without the reason but then end para ended it well
N lovely writing dear

dankuuu 🤗

i had no idea what i am writing about 🤣 phir end main koi story ban gayii 😆

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@Leve

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: --devil-mind--
Great Naaz jee Great👏
main ne kabhe itni dheyan se koi OS pari nahi hai sachi🤣

Love it😳

& thanks likhne keyliye😊

hahhaha 🤣🤣

sachi? 🤣

thankss 🤗

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