sorry my love!!!!!!!! (kros)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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it has been a whole year when kriya returned to the college...

she ran to her love...but afsos she didnt get the chance to explain...

rey: wapas kyun aayi kriya just leave...

kriya: rey plzz...ek baar...

rey: nahi ...jao yahan se...

kriya: rey plzz...

rey: ur already dead 4r me kriya so just leave...

kriya? rey????

broke down...

she walked back...

kriya : i never wanna hurt u rey...mai mazboor thi...kaash aap mujhe ek mauka deti...

she turned around and ran away...

her words ran in his ear...

rey: majboor thi?????😕

he ran just not to find her anywhere...

yeah she left...

forever...

...

he slowly made his relation strong with taani...


finally they ended up marrying each other...

but even now always regret for not letting have her chance. to speak...

taani tried her level best to make him busy with her...

he too went on...

but he never knew he is gonna face the very deep feeling of guilt...

finally he had his money after working in his dads office...

he finally decided to move away from the city and establish his own dance academy...

but this was his second big mistake...

he shifted to some small city...(think of any city guys really not in a mood of thinking abt it...dnt know y im feeling too hurt today...)


he finally ended up rented in a appartment...

yeah he is a son of a tycoon but he had his principles of living...

days passed...

suddenly one day while returning he noticed something which he never noticed...

exactly opposite to their flat she lived in the opposite flat making her earning for living running a flower shop/...

he went numb after seeing her...

he just watched her somedays...

she was lyfless...he can say that...

he never saw her smiling even once...

one day after pulling him together he went to the flower shop...but she was not present...a small boy sat there looking after the shop...

rey: aap koun ho??yahan kyun ho???

boy: mai wo flat mei rehta hun...wo kria didi ko maa ne kuch kaam se bulaya ...so mai unki shop ko dekh raha hun...

rey smiled at him...

just examined the shop...found a dairy open...

may be she was writing some thing...

he somehow diverted the boys attention and took it...and rushed back...

he hated doing this but couldnt stop himself...

taani enquired abt where he was...


he just answered that he was very busy and wanna be alone...

she tried to talk but he was serious...she left ...
mumbling something and preparing something for his lunch...


he went to the balcony from which he can see her...just opened the dairy...and looked at her...she was too lost always that she forgot abt the dairy...

his heart cried...

he read each word every time his heart becoming heavy of guilt and his breathing becoming hard...

finally he saw that ...

everyday she writes only one line in her dairy after that day...

u never gave me chance to explain rey...

he cried hard silently but hard...

his eyes fixed on her...

he was responsible for her lifeless life...his heart bleeded...

next second he was on the ground on his face...

she was startled suddenly ...

she looked front...

someone jumped down ...

no one near...

she ran to help...

turned him/...

and literally got paralised...

she was expressionless but tears rolled continuosly...

he opened his eyes...

" sorry my love" he said before touching her cheek and finally taking his last breath...

she shouted at top voice...

" u never gave me a chance to explain rey" never"

she cried...

she cried and cried till she fell unconsious on him and took her last breath in her sleep peacefully in his arms...









i dnt know...i just felt that ...it should be lyk dis...i dnt know wat i wrote...

acha lage toh pado. warna ignore...

cmnt ki bhi zaroorat nahi...

i miss kriyaansh...

hope to see u back ever ...atleast once...

but i think my hope is also gonna die in some days...

i really dnt wanna send pms...

no pms for this one...


i know its too short...

but its wat i felt r8 now


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Res
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I'm speechless di

Poor Kriya Rey never let her speak

I'm 😭
Edited by Himaniahir - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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m speechless and in tears...nothing to say...m sorrry...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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u made me cry deetha
main already crying for update
but right rey ne kriya ko chance nahi diya bolne ka
no more words 😭
Edited by aromakriyaansh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shweta-kriyansh

m speechless and in tears...nothing to say...m sorrry...


even me crying...isiliye aaj update nahi ki...coz saare bohut ache phase mei hai...some on dates some on trips ...some on marriages...all happies...mai apna ek bhi update kharab nahi karna chahti...i have to be satistisfied...but abhi likunhgi toh aisa hi hoga so sorry
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Posted: 13 years ago
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No cmmnts..bohut weird sa OS tha..!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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mere ko rulaya after reading this ... update nahi deni hey to thik hey rulati kyu hoo muje
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: aromakriyaansh

mere ko rulaya after reading this ... update nahi deni hey to thik hey rulati kyu hoo muje


i really feel hurt...cant we ever get to see our kriyaansh again??????
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: deetha


i really feel hurt...cant we ever get to see our kriyaansh again??????


pta nahi but me crying me also want my kriyaansh nd i hate this present rey dumbo khi ka ...😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Deetha speechless.
All i can say is i'll nvr say it made me sad situatyion hi kuch aisa hai ki ab sab bigad gaya hai.

the way u expressed must have surely made hard feelings in u.

Gr8 try

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