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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Very cute.. i liked the last part very much!

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Sithara ponnarasseri

@sanny-beautiful

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Very CUTE!!!!!!😊
Loved it...

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zohakhan7

@zohakhan7

Trailblazer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

such a cute os it was
luved it
amazing work 😉

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Avi64

@Avi64

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

as sweet as dairy milk! i was smiling wide all along 😊

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-Grace-

@-Grace-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: OnlyHope
OOOMGGG..
Iqra this was BLISS.
How I'm dying to see something like this between them, but sighhh..that would probably happen when my kids come of my age or something 🤣
Ok 1st off..the way you DESCRIBE things...bring them to life with each word I read is remarkable..I LOVE your vivid descriptions that are subtle at the same time, enough to make me think on my own!
2nd, the scene itself was beautiful...Arnav's anxiousness..Khushi innocence...him noticing every minute detail of her (and of course the way YOU penned it down was beautiful) and then her usual self where she outsmarts him...ahhh..pure bliss!

Keep writing these and continue to make me smile
PS- I smiled all through 😳

THANK YOU!!!!!!

yes yes yes! even im dying tohave such scenes! something more normal that happens b/w a married couple lmao!

hahahah i get that alot my friend always says i describe too much lol! cant help it😆

and thank you thank youuu for such high class compliments lol *HUGS* and now IM smiling hehehe😆

thanks again! <3

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-Grace-

@-Grace-

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

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taniks, debby_11, PollyTrolly, amyrocks, Maddy1270, SobtiObsession, _Nidhi_,

THANK YOU SO MUCHHH! EVERYONEEE <3

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-Grace-

@-Grace-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: AngelTeen
Awwwieee! Sigh.

So peaceful and cute and adorable and lovely! <3

RAEEE<3

thank you so much for reading my OS😆

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naina

@warriorprincess

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

im pretty sure I've read this previously, but just re-read it and had to say its awesome. naina

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Simran

@-HoneyBoo-

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Awh that was soo descent and sweet:)...loved it...and personally even i love dairy milk without nuts...;)...its my fav<3

Awesome os once again:)..loved it...sweet like dairly milk;)<3

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ASRisHOT

@ASRisHOT

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: OnlyHope

OOOMGGG..
Iqra this was BLISS.
How I'm dying to see something like this between them, but sighhh..that would probably happen when my kids come of my age or something 🤣
Ok 1st off..the way you DESCRIBE things...bring them to life with each word I read is remarkable..I LOVE your vivid descriptions that are subtle at the same time, enough to make me think on my own! 
2nd, the scene itself was beautiful...Arnav's anxiousness..Khushi innocence...him noticing every minute detail of her (and of course the way YOU penned it down was beautiful) and then her usual self where she outsmarts him...ahhh..pure bliss! 
Keep writing these and continue to make me smile
PS- I smiled all through 😳

yes... u r so rite, i would luv to read some more : )

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