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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ekk Friday is here already! thanks for your likes on the poem yesterday and I hope you enjoy today's ;))

Scaffolding, plastering and uplifting
Madhu ne kar diya Trishna per sab shifting

But to no avail, she looks to me just the same
never mind its only a game!

trapped in RK's studio jaal
no escape for Madhu! kiske hai maajaal!

angle angle se dekh lo Trishna ka dance
I am getting cross eyed watching her prance!

baarat is making tamasha on the doorstep
Aayye ka acting pe kar na hai clap clap ;))

what Aayee will not do for money
Mukund poor fool, will never get his honey ;))

Maalik to baan gaya father
wait till they see Ballu, that will put them in a lather ;)

bride stumbles about in the dark
RK thinks all this is a real lark

I am thinking that RK is saving Madhu some long term trouble
Idiot puppy Mukund one day would surely blow her bubble!

For Madhu RK is the man with mettle
one day he will see how lovely is our petal ;))

Monday seems so far away
when Madhu in RK's arms does sway!

his thirst for revenge will see him fall
one day you will see he will be at Madhubala's beck and call

waiting for next weeks promised heat
if you guys don't dish out your TRP's will surely get beat ;))

Thank you for a week of good shows
MB team this Friday you can take your bows ;))

Jane ;))



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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely as usual jane... couldn't watch the episode, will catch later...then will comment.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks guys ;))choo chweet ;)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey jane,do not miss tomorrows maha episode,for the continuation of ure poem,the sagaai fiasco.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Meri mom ne trishna ko dekhke bola
sudhar hogaya iska makeup ,koi difference to nahi lag raha.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely⭐️
All your poems are so cool dear! You're just too good 👏

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks guys ;))

Nitya loved your lines ;)) Poor Trishna we r really trashing her ;)

Nlm I wil try and catch the maha epi today and if not tomm

I have my Maaneet story to finish for tomm's Sundae if I dont get that done ppl will be chasing me down ;))

THanks guys for all your support.

Jane ;)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb ...
👏keep it up.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏 bravo yaar loving your poems and completely agree great week of episodes this week eagerly waiting for ME tonight 😊

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