ArHi FF!! Event Horizon - Ch 8(A), Sep 11, Pg 25

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violet-amster

@violet-amster

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Hey congratulations for your first ff...

It's very interesting...

Do pm when you update...

Take care...

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CynicalNoob

@CynicalNoob

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

QT, besides the yawn-o-holic plot, the writing is impressive. I particularly like the flow and the language. I hope that the plot turns out to be be more interesting than the characters. Welcome to the world of writing.

PS- Also, I appreciate your age from 9 to 16

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peepli

@peepli

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

ok..so...cynical noob asked me to bash your ff... but its soo bootiphul that i ve decided not to..

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Jina

@Happy-go-lucky

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

@peepli... Really? 😉 And you're openly admitting it on QT's thread...tsk tsk...😆

Edited by Happy-go-lucky - 13 years ago

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Deeksha

@-Dee-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: CynicalNoob
QT, besides the yawn-o-holic plot, the writing is impressive. I particularly like the flow and the language. I hope that the plot turns out to be be more interesting than the characters. Welcome to the world of writing.
CN
PS- Also, I appreciate your age from 9 to 16

Dear CN, I hope you've realised that you mustn't judge people at once. Next, QT might go to a 26 from 16. How about that?

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Jammy-

@Jammy-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

A very interesting start. Khushi is ofcourse Khushi with her odd blabbering! ;)
I love how Arnav and Khushi were talking in questions and yet were making sense!

Arnav is the Arnav from the show, yeah?? I mean you mentioned why did Khushi shift! And the fiasco was because of Arnav right?? and here they are meeting all nicely??

Ah its too interesting! Do continue soon.

Would you please send me a PM when you continue??

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lastdesire

@lastdesire

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

i want more...i lyk dis khushi

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...Penknife...

@...Penknife...

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

very very nice...send me a pm en u update????

pretty pls???

i promise to leave comments... :):)

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cheval

@cheval

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

wooow coool good start plz do continue sooon plz if u dnt mind pm me for nw update thanks :D

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Japonica

@Japonica

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: CynicalNoob

QT, besides the yawn-o-holic plot, the writing is impressive. I particularly
like the flow and the language. I hope that the plot turns out to bebe more interesting than the characters.Welcome to the world of writing.
CN
PS- Also, I appreciate your age from 9 to 16

CN I think it might be worth your while holding back your cynicism for a while. The story has barely begun, how do you know it is an yawn-o-holic plot?
Makes me wonder if you are the author of this story under the guise of Quiet Thoughtful. And your comment is aimed at getting people to defend the story? Now, now that is not very clever is it?

Apologies, some of your cynicism seems to have rubbed off on me.