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Posted: 13 years ago
@Trish , thanks .Glad you liked it . Updating today.
@Jibsi , thanks dear . " Interesting" , finally someone said that word :). Glad you are liking the story. Nikki's Dad will make an entry soon :)
@Mitzi , Errr,actually , I could not relate to the women and I have seen so many different types and maybe that is the reason I found them so superficial and fake . But then it is my opinion . I know women are meaner than men in general . But those three women were such extremes , I found the characterization lazy and hurried . But , that said , I'd watch Pyaar kaa Punchnama 2 if it comes out , just for the guys too. They were great and in every way :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
so why exactly is Nikki angry ...aisa kya kiya abhi ne...?
Prash ... did you notice deebakar banarjee after making 2 comedy movies ,and I dont know what the3rd one was ...made his latest movie a dark movie ...and I realy understood why he did that :)
I think India can forgive pyar ka panchnama for being unidimensional ..cause at least 'mean girls' is not a cliche in our movies /tv
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mitzification

so why exactly is Nikki angry ...aisa kya kiya abhi ne...?

Prash ... did you notice deebakar banarjee after making 2 comedy movies ,and I dont know what the3rd one was ...made his latest movie a dark movie ...and I realy understood why he did that :)
I think India can forgive pyar ka panchnama for being unidimensional ..cause at least 'mean girls' is not a cliche in our movies /tv

Mitzi , she is mainly angry because Abhi fought with her , told her about her father with maybe or may not be intentions to hurt her , simply because she was supporting Sid and not him. And then the next day , he acts like nothing has happened and goes away from her even when she desperately wants him to stay back. And then the memories of her father come back and she feels anger over Abhi not being able to understand her discomfort and unwillingness to do anything with him, which is precisely what he did by mentioning his name . And then the biggest shocker turned out to be when Sid told her that his brother is ready to help him . That is a kind of thing that would disturb anyone a little . Her ego is hurt and she isn't quite sure why Abhi would do all that he did and that causes more anger . It is a tricky situation and before she could even sort out the happenings in her head, Abhi turned up again . Also , she has just realized how she has become so dependent on him and mainly emotionally . And in that context , this hurt and anger takes a different meaning altogether . She inadvertently ends up pushing him away because Abhi again tries to get into the details about her father . Even though he is trying to do it for her own good , Nikki does not want his interference and it is that part that she wants him to understand and thought he had understood when they had that showdown in his house .
@bold part , third movie was LSD . And I hope your understanding is in a good way :) . But Khosla is my favorite DB movie , anytime .
Yes yes , pyaar ka punch... can be forgiven on the whole for at least being different and obviously for Liquid :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
As I said before Like a typical girl she wants Abhi to 'discuss' with her at lenght before helping Sid as she was the one who suggested it in the first place and Abhi like a typicall guy ..he just went ahead and did what needed to be done ..maybe hoping ..atleast guys hope ..to get the emotional drama over with 😆
Accha Acha I know its a sad situation ...but Im laughing at them 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
@Mitzi , for reasons that are best known to me , I'll take your laughter as a compliment :)
@Jyothi , thank you my dear
@ Trish , ariel,ruch, hemvb ,Nikki, Sheena , Muni thanks femmes
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice Part Pra 👏
Abhi is so sweet in this part but m not liking Niki's behavior also want to know the exact reason behind her weird behavior 😕
plz continue soon 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Pra: I was reading through your reply to my comment and then saw your conversation with mitzi about pyaar ka punchnaama.. I am so happy to find someone who didnt like that movie :D I for one didn't enjoy it.. off course there were few moments here and there when i couldn't control my laughter but in all it felt like far stretched and telling same msg again and again i felt kind of offended with it..

Ok back to your comment: Yes we think alike because i am so happy N just doesn't get happy when she sees flowers.. she had so much time and her thinking has put her in a mood that one cannot just forget by seeing the flowers or by seeing A there.. I like how you showed that conversation where N isn't happy because event if A came early and did all that he is throwing that it in her place.. she feels kind of he is being forced by her to do something so he is doing it.. I like how there is that gap in their thought process that results in this argument, disappointment, frustration or whatever this is.. N wants to see A do something for her without her telling him, A thinks he did just that except he tells her that he is leaving his work for that obviously aggravating N's frustration and to add she just had that Epiphany that she is getting too dependent on A :) even though i have told you many many times i will tell you again you have a knack of capturing those emotions in surreal scenes.. And that's what i come here to read..

Oh and i love the portrayal of A too (i am commenting it explicitly because it may not sound so in my comments as i am biased towards N's emotions)
I know where A comes from.. he is the guy who wants things straight .. if you want something, say it, if you did something there is no harm if he says he did it.. according to him it doesn't change the fact that he did it because he wanted to.. So obviously he cant understand how N feels here. I like how he finally gives up and thinks that if N wants, he will leave her alone even though he doesn't want to..

Now that they are again alone, will N gather her thoughts, will she feel better or will A's argument aggravate he frustration and feeling of always being wrong.. Hmm.. you never let me just go away like that hmm.. I will have these thoughts on mind till i read next part :)
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@Jibsi , thank you dear . And I am glad you liked Abhi's calm and nice behavior in this part . And abt N's weird behavior , ah well , yes , it will unfold slowly , but I like I said in my earlier comment , she is just angry and confused and poor Abhi's attempts to understand her mind are only agitating her further . But then we love how A gives her space , as opposed to pressurizing her more . I may seem a little partial to N in this FF but its only because I know Abhi is imperfectly perfect otherwise 😊.
@Pri , that is another lovely comment and I would say your best so far , but then , each one of them is a gem , so I'll crush this basic human tendency of comparison and just acknowledge their loveliness :) . And not meaning to sound cynical and all (though that's precisely what I am :😊) , there are very few things that make me feel good . Your comments definitely are one of them 😃. So , thank you again . I may not have huge quantities of readers , like some of the other FFs out here and I honestly couldn't care less . One quality comment like yours is worth whatever there is to this whole endeavor .
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