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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hi guys...Ive read loads of fanfics..so today i thought of writing 1 of my own.

My fanfic starts right after the leap.(Prerna is still in jail.)
Here I go..

We see the Bajaj house.Someone is walking up the stairs.We can only see the shoes.He goes into his room and picks up mukti's photo.
Its none other then Prem.
Prem:Kahan Chali gayi tum Mukti mujhe chodke?Tumse juda hone ke 2 saal badh mujhe apni galti ka ehsaas huaaur maine Debonita ki sachayi sabko batadi.Lakin main apni ma ko nahi bacha paya jail jaane se.Plz lot aao Mukti,Plz.I miss you alot.
"Prem!"
Sneha enters the room.She looks the same as she looks now in the show. "Woh..Papa tumhe bula rahe hain."
Prem:Acha,tum chalo..main aato hoon.
Sneha leaves.

In the hall

Prem:Yes Dad?Aapne mujhe bulaya?
Mr Bajaj is wearing a suit.(He looks like Karan from kyunki..)
Bajaj:Haan Prem..Tumhe Singapore jaana hoga hoga.Vahan humare naye client,Mr.Mehra ke saath humari deal fix huyi hai.
Prem:Ok Daddy cool,kab jaana hoga mujhe?
Bajaj:Tumhe aaj shaam ko hi jaana hoga Prem.
Prem:Thik hai,main packing kar leta hoon.

In Prem's room

Prem is packing his clothes when he sees Mukti's photo on the table.He takes it and puts it in his bag.

That's all for now..Tell me if you like it and if i should continue k..

Edited by anu93 - 18 years ago

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Posted: 19 years ago
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plz continue
great job!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thats really gud plz continue soon thanx
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Posted: 19 years ago
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nice.cont soon yaar👏👏👏

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thx for the comments guys..Here's the next part..and I am gonna have ejaz khan in my fanfic too ok..😉

Part 2

At the India Aiport
Prem is leaving,he says his goodbyes to Tushar,Dorris,Kuki and
Sneha,who doent seem to be interested.
Prem:Dont worry Senha,Tumhe jald hi pyar milega.
Sneha just rolls her eyes.Prem leaves.

In the filght
Prem is looking at Mukti's photo and remembering the times he had with her.A small girl of about 5 years was sitting beside him.
The girl:Excuse me uncle,why are you looking at her and crying?Plz dont cry,I don't like it when people cry.
She says it in a very cute voice.Prem just smiles back and pinches her cheeks.Prem falls asleep thinking of Mukti.

At the Singapore Airport
Prem is looking for Mr.Mehra's assnt,when someone taps him.Prem turns around.ITs Mr.Mehra.(Ejaz Khan)
Mehra:Hello Mr.Prem,Im Mr.Mehra.Nice to meet you.
They shake hands.
Prem:Nice to meet you tooMr.Mehra,but how did you recognise me?
Mehra:Mr Bajaj had sent me your photo.
Prem:Oh..I see.
Mehra:And ya..Plz Dont call me Mr.Mehra.Call me Karan.
Prem:Yea..sure Karan..
They leave from the Airport.

At Karan's office/cabin
Prem:Maine toh socha tha ki aapka assnt mujhe aiport par milega.
Karan:Not milega..Milegi.She is not only my assnt but also my fiance.
Prem:Oh,May I know who is that lucky person?
Karan:Of course..Lakin woh abhi yahan nahi hai.Her name is Ms.Deshmukh.
Prem was shocked to hear 'Deshmukh'.
Prem:Deshmukh?
Karan:Ya,Ms Mu..
Just then a lady came in and interrupted.
Lady:Sir,The deal fixed with Mr.Mathur must be finaled today.He just called and wants to talk to you.
Karan:Plz excuse me Mr.Prem.
He leaves.
Prem is left standing there recalling the name Ms Deshmukh.Just then,Prem's cell rings.Its Mr.Bajaj.He picks up.
Prem:Hello Dad,Kaise hain aap?
Bajaj:Main thik hoon Prem.Wahan sab thik toh hai na?
Prem:Yes Dad,Sab think hai.Aap yahan ki phikar mat kijiye,Main hoon na.
Bajaj:Ok,Bye.
Prem:Bye.
Prem leaves from the cabin.He meets Karan outside.
Prem:Sorry Karan,I have to go now,talk more next time ok.Bye see you.
Karan:Ok Prem,It was a pleasure meeting you,Bye.
They shake hands and Prem leaves.

Thats all for now..Plz tell me if you liked it or not..😃

Edited by anu93 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow gr8 plz continue soon i ❤️ ur fan fic so plz be fast 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thankz 4 the comments..Here's part 3..

Part 3

Outside the office
Prem was heading towards his car when he saw Mukti getting out of her car.He was shocked.Mukti was going inside the office.Prem was too shocked to move.Mukti had already gone inside when Prem started running towards her.He went in.

Inside the office
Prem searched everywhere in the office for her.Just then he saw her talking to someone a distance away.He started walking towards her when someone tapped his back from behind.He turned around and saw Karan.
Karan:Prem?Tum abhi tak yahan ho?
Prem:Haan..woh..
He turned around but Mukti wasn't there.
Karan:Kya hua?
Prem turned to face Karan.Thinking it was just his illusion,he said,
Prem:Kuch nahi..Main chalta hoon..
Karan:Haan..Lakin kal subha 8 baje mere cabin mein aa jana.Main tumhe apni fiance se milana chahta hoon.Alrite?Bye.
Prem:Sure..Ill be there,Bye.
Prem leaves.

In the hotel room
Prem is unpacking his bags.He holds Mukti's photo and remembers her.(the song kabhi na sukoon aaya is played.)He puts her photo on the side table.

In Karan's cabin
Karan was siting down and going through some files when Mukti enters.
Mukti:Hi Karan!
Karan:Oh..Mukti,Agar tum thori der pehle aa jati toh main tumhe humare naye client sey mila deta.You know,He's from India!Your hometown!
Mukti:Oh..I cant believe i missed out that golden chance!
Karan:Dont worry,you can meet him tomorrow at 8.am.So plz dont be late.
Mukti:Sure,I'll be here at 8.am sharp.But right now..Ghar nahi jaana hai kya tumhe?
Karan:Haan..Lakin mujhe thori der lagegi.
Mukti:Ok,Main toh jaa rahi hoon..Bye!
She walks towards the door.
Karan:Mukti..
Mukti:Ya Karan,I know..8.am sharp..
Karan:(laughs)Bye!

Thats all..and ya guys..the next part ill be posting something about prerna too..so keep reading and keep posting ur comments!😃

Edited by anu93 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow!its really gud, continue sn!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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great 😃
continue soooon 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thx guys!😊Here's the next part.

Part 4:

Bajaj house
The whole family(except prem)is having breakfast.The doorbell rings.Birju Kaka(working till now..but who else can i put?hehe)goes to open it..and its Prerna!Everyone stands up.They are all shocked.Sneha is still sitting down,too shocked to move.It was as if time had stopped.When finally Bajaj spoke.
Bajaj:Prerna?
Prerna enters the house.Tushar and Dorris go and hug her,followed by Kuki.She walks towards Sneha,who was still sitted.
Prerna:Sneha beta..
Sneha:Huh?..
She stands up.Prerna hugs her.At first Sneha hesitates but later even she hugs her.Prerna walks towards Bajaj.But Bajaj goes up to his room.

In Karan's cabin
Mukti:Karan,kahan hai yaar ye 'naya client'?Its 8.30am!
Karan:Relax,woh aata hi hoga,any minute now..

In Prem's hotel room
Prem is getting up lazily.He yawns.Then realises that he has to go to Karan's office.He checks the time.Its 8.40am.
Prem:Oh shit!
He gets up,takes out a dashing black suit from his cupboard and goes into the washroom.

Back in Karan's cabin
Mukti:That's it,Im not waiting any longer now.Im leaving.
Mukti gets up and walks towards the door.
Karan:Mukti..wait..
She opens the door and before she could take another step,Prem appears in front of her.

To be contd..plz post comments!

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