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Hey buddies, totally enjoying raining season here in India, oh rain speaks so much, it gives happiness, it give strength and what not. So here I am coming with my another piece of imagination, hope you like it and thanks for bearing my work..

~Beautiful Rains~

geet's pov

Ahh!! These rains, speak so much, even in the noise of these cities they gave unknown peace, god know why.!!. it is my favorite season, I wait for it, I don't know what connection I have with these rains, but I just love it, nothing to more to express my feeling towards it. This time the rainy season is in its peak, rain hadn't stop from 3 day , and today is the fourth day. I am happy because it's a Sunday. I can now enjoy the rain, now I can enjoy it in geet handa style. But I don't know this rain seems to special, why I don't know. I called my best friend pinky, to make plan for today, but she told she is dam busy with her work. I was sad but not at all disappointed, you know why?? Because I don't need anyone to be with me to enjoy rain. I have my best companion with me, these tick tick sounds, they never make me feel that I am lonely. So I planned to go to beach side, I know people say its dangerous, but for me my happiness is when I stand on the beachside and scream out loud and play with rain drop. Sounds crazy isn't it?? Many of my friend say this. I went to the beach.

maan's pov

Ohh !!these rains are great help to hide once pain, here I am on the beach side, hating my life, I see people enjoying, laughing playing, but I am totally down, I feel I am not made for this world, I again failed in my last year, I am doing mba, but I was not able to clear it. I hate my life,I lost all my confidence. These rain are evening crying with me. Oh god, why me. I sat on the sand. And thinking how will I face my family. I am maan singh khurana, a loser person.

geet's pov

I reached towards the beach side I saw a young man, sitting. He seemed very disturbed. Why should I bother. I put my feet in water and started screaming in joy and started playing with water. From my childhood I loved it. My father used to bring me here and we used to play. The most wonderful days of my life. Here only my father gave me lesson that you should never lose your confidence and should enjoy the life, every second.


maan's pov

I saw a girl, she was crazy. But she was enjoying her self, I saw unknown bounding of her with rain, I saw her dancing, screaming crazily that even made me smile. But I think it is not for me, I am a loser and loser don't deserve to be chooser.

geet's pov

I saw him, he seemed to be disturbed, I cant help to walk towards him. I reached him, he saw me. But the question was why I came here? I know these rains are playing some game. I said " hi, I am geet and you?"

maan's pov

I saw her coming towards me, I was happy but why I really don't know??. I even don't know her, unknown feeling I felt, when she said something, I replied "I am maan, I am sorry if I made you unfomfortable.actually I was sharing my pain with these this rain?" I thought why I said those thing to her? And that to so comfortably ? who is she? And why the hell I am sharing my problem with her?.

geet's pov

I heard him, I already knew that he was disturbed. I replied "you these rain is your best companion, you should free feel to tell what you felt, I do so". Why I told him what I do, who is he? Why I am feeling unhappy seeing him like this?

maan's pov

I heard her, may be she is right, I told her " do they really hear us? Do they help us to feel light?. She said " yes, they does, you know rain can make sad person happy also?". I said " how".

I heard him ask. I said " just spent 2 hours with me, you love it, I promise". I saw him nodding. I dragged him to the shop I said " bahiya do butta dena?". I saw him smiling.i quickly said " don't laugh, I quiet fun". The seller gave the butta and were enjoying it. I said " come lets eat it in rain". I heard " have you god mad?". I said " nooo, come on, try once, I know you will like it:"

She asked me to drench in rain while eating butta. It sound so so funny. We were eating while getting I rain. I never thought it would be fun. The next thing which I heard made me shell shocked, she said "take out your shoes and feel the water running, you will like you are walking on sea, try, come on". I was shocked and somewhere happy to. I took my shoe out and took the shoe in my hand and I felt cold water running down my feet. It felt so heaven-like feeling, I felt so light, so tension free. I was happy, totally forgot about m result. I heard her "like it na, see I told you!!".

I see him little relaxed, I was feeling happy why?. I really don't know, but his this little smile on his face made me happy. I said "now lets dance". I saw his shocked face. He said " are you got mad, what will they think, actually they will sends us to mental hospital, I will not do it, not all". I said " you know its fun and about people I will say, why should we get affected with their's talk, we should be what we are, not what they want us. They not look after us in out sad time."

I heard her say , she was right , even should not get affected with their talk, whole life I thought, what will they think, I should understand what my hearts desire, she is very true. I will make a fresh start. I said " chalo". I took her hand and put it around my neck and kept my hand on her waist and we started dancing. She felt shy but was enjoying, I saw people around eyeing us, I put down the thought and started dancing with her. I saw her, she has some magic, she is an angle, so simple and beautiful, may be my angel. God has sent her for me. How suprising it is we went just one two hours back, but for me she has become my life, may be this angle will help me to overcome my weakness and get what I desired. I love her, its total new feeling, oh! God I am in love.

I saw him, happy and calm, like he got new life, I was happy. But why was I happy, when her touched me, a shiver ran through my vien. I know he is special, now I get it, that is why this rain seems special, they know today I am going to meet him. Oh god, I know he is different , and this new feeling is love. I love him.

I saw towards he and she towards me, we keep staring each other, we were finding our answer. When we spoke "I love you". We both were shocked. And then we hugged each other. This rain became the eye witness to our love. These are our "love rain", the rain started to flow more, like crying to see their two people to be together.

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beautiful yaar.. aisa rain kash meri life
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as usual lovely n cute os😊
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its beautiful.
such a lovely os.
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Oh...very lovely...thanks for sending it... :)
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aww that was simply beautiful and lovely
wow so they meet and fall in love because of the rain so sweet na
that was wonderful
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Originally posted by: tushti-kiran




BEAUTIFUL...

FANTASTIC...



finally you are back, missed your comment so so much...😃😳
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indeed a magical rain , how two soulmate met with eachother . enjoyed it .
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Shall I cry or shall I give my full battisi smile,dont worry d tears would be of joy & happiness to read your rainy story.Fantastic,loved it.And in future will love d rain all d more hoping dat 1 day even I'll find my maan im dis sought of rainy & dreamy condition.

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