Maneet SS- Kaafilaa. PART 10/ Pg 88/ JUN 13 PM L8R - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi friends!! No excuses this time even though me has plenty!!😭

Me really very sorry for the delay inspire of promising you an update!!! As a compensation, me giving you teasers of all three- Aaiynaa, Twisty Deewangi and Kaafilaa…😳

Hope it keeps you gripped!! Me promises to update Aaiynaa max by Monday late night!!!😳

TEASER

He got up and staggered… He could not even take a step and his vision was also blurry due to the effect of excessive alcohol intake…. Still he somehow took shaky steps and reached the door calling out for the driver… He had to go to the Dargah today in any state at any cost… He could feel that he was about to meet HER…

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Now guess wether the next update is emotional or NOT???😉

Edited by ruchs - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WAITING FOR NEXT PART ASAP
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hope they meet at dargah...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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even in drunken state
he only thinks of her
do update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi thanks 4 da note n interesting teaser..update soon n do pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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can't guess it dear as u r a twisty queen...😉 anyway nice tsr dear👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Here's the second part of Kaafilaa!!😳

Am sorry for the super delay!!!😭

Do tell me how's the banner, me made it myself!!😃

Hope you like it dears!!😳

PART - 2

MaanMaan felt some strange force was pulling him towards itself… he felt a sudden craving to go to the Nizamuddin Dargah… he could feel as if something very important or essential was going to take place today in his life…

He got up and staggered… He could not even take a step and his vision was also blurry due to the effect of excessive alcohol intake…. Still he somehow took shaky steps and reached the door calling out for the driver… He had to go to the Dargah today in any state at any cost… He could feel that he was about to meet HER…

NIZAMUDDIN DARGAH, Delhi

The cool breeze that was flowing around added to the aura of the peace and calm surrounding the divine home of god… But still one couldn't ignore the dark clouds and the streaks of lightening illuminating the sky clearly giving an indication of the impeding storm… The same storm that was about to affect many lives, though many in a negative way while some in a positive way…

The Black BMW halted in front of the Dargah and from it descended a lost soul searching for his soul mate… his rooh….

He took shaky and hesitant steps towards his destination but couldn't avoid a small boulder due to his blurry vision… He fell flat on the round… Scraping his knees and getting a small cut on his forehead… But all this couldn't deviate him from his goal today… He got up after failing a number of times and reached the Fence surrounding the Dargah, which was put up to tie threads seeking wishes… Mannat…

He looked at his Bracelet and remembered the time when he first met Geet…

PAST

It was raining cats and dogs and Maan's car had selected this specific place to breakdown… He muttered profanities at his car and of course the driver who selected this particular day to take a leave…. He ran inside the Dargah and took out his mobile to contact someone who could send another car… but due to the massive storm, few mobile towers had failed and thus there was no network…

"DAMN… How the hell will I get to that important meeting now??? Already I got so late due to that stupid servant who spilled the entire coffee on me… Now I will definitely lose that contract worth millions…."

He was highly frustrated but all his anger vanished when his eyes fell on a divine beauty twirling around in the rain and playing with the street kids… He had seen many girls in his life but there was something in this particular girl that captivated his entire attention…

Her perfect features comprising of her Dark brown hazels that had the power to absorb the world, her cute little nose, that was turning red due to cold, her quivering lips and to add to all that her white Anarkali suit that was stuck to her petite figure like a second skin, was enhancing her beauty…

Suddenly the tree behind her caught his attention… There was a branch that was hanging loosely and was about to fall on her any minute… As soon as he saw the branch giving away, he leapt at a cheetah's speed and pulled her away just in the nick of time…

The girl was confused for a while but when her eyes fell on the branch, she understood everything… She was super grateful to this stranger who saved her life…

"Thank You.. Aaj aapne meri zindagi bacha li…"

Maan was mesmerized with her sweet voice and barely managed to give a nod…

"Ummm wo… aapke haath.."

That's when Maan realized that he was still holding her… He got embarrassed and immediately left her…

"Waise aaj aapne meri jaan bachayi hai toh of course I owe you one…. Ekk minute…"

Geet rummaged through her bag that was lying on the ground nearby while Maan was fuming thinking that she was going to tip him off!!! TIP MAAN SINGH KHURANA!!! But was pleasantly surprised when she took out a metal bracelet…

"Yeh mujhe bahut pyaara hai kyunki yeh tabb sey mere saath hai jab sey main do saal ki thi… Aaj yeh main aapko dena chahti hoon…"

"Jee???"

Maan was quite amazed at this… He was unable to understand what was she implying and gave her a quizzical look…

"Arrey abb aaj sey meri zindagi aapki hai na!! So main toh bas aapko ekk bandhan mein baandh rahi hoon…"

Saying this she tied the bracelet on his hand while Maan was hell confused with the turn of events…

"Abb main chalti hoon… Babaji ne chahaa toh hum phir milenge ya phir kya pataa hamara yeh bandhan hi ekk din humein milaa de…"

She vanished from there while Maan was left gaping at her words while of course gazing at the newly added element on his wrist which made him feel very strange…

Maan's reverie was broken when he felt a flicker of light… He was about to ignore it but then his eyes caught the array of flashes casted his way and also some of them surrounding HER…

He at once understood that the reporters had caught their little exchange and due to his celebrity status, the poor girl was being made the scapegoat… He rushed forward to save her integrity…

"Aap yahan par MSK ke saath kya kar rahi hain??"

"Kya aap Mr. Khurana ki woh chhupi hui girlfriend hain???"

"Toh ma'am… Kya aapne aur Mr. Maan Singh Khurana ne shaadi kar li hai???"

"Jee?? Aisa kuchh nahi hai… aap log galat samajh rahe hain…"

"Achchha toh phir aap iss tarah unki baahon mein kya kar rahi thi???"

Maan had had enough… He very well knew where this conversation was heading… So he didn't waste any second and screamed while slipping his hand on her waist…

"Stop irritating my Fiance…"

The look of shock on everyone's faces was worth seeing but the most priceless one was on her face…

"Yes… Meet my Fiance… Miss…"

Maan realized that he didn't even know her name…. He made a baby face at her as now everything was in her hands… She cleared her throat while looking away and said slowly…

"Geet… Geet Handa…."

The rest that followed was history!!!

On that day, that bracelet symbolized the tying up of their souls, their Rooh… That too with the blessings of the god… Who sealed their relationship for their journey of next many life times… their Kaafilaa… Just that both were unaware about it…

PRESENT

Suddenly Maan came out of his thoughts when something or rather someone stumbled over him… His vision was still blurry so he couldn't make out much but soon realized that a dupatta was entangled with his bracelet… He slowly tried to take it out when he heard her feeble voice, the same one which he had been dying to hear from one month…

"Maan…"

He sharply looked up and saw her… After one whole month…. She was looking extremely pale and weak… It seemed that she had not slept or eaten anything since many days… her eyes were full of tears… She held out her hand shakily to touch him, that's when he realized what was he doing… He moved backwards to increase the distance between them…

Geet was extremely happy to see him after so many days… She was dying to get a glimpse of him… To explain herself… Today her legs had carried her on their own accord to this divine place once again and she had finally found HIM… But when he increased the distance between them, her heart shattered into a million pieces… She couldn't hold herself any longer… Everything started spinning and she felt the world fading in front of her eyes…

Maan saw the change of emotions on her face… From happiness to relief to finally helplessness and sadness… He was getting confused seeing so much pain in her eyes but when he saw her fainting, he forgot all his resolve and held her immediately before she could reach the ground…

"Geet…"

"Maan… Ha... Ham… Hamari… M... Man… Mannat…"

Geet murmured while placing his hand on her still flat tummy and fainted, leaving Maan in extreme shock…

PRECAP

Kuchh Sachchaiyan… Kuchh Asliyatein….

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Edited by ruchs - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
awesome dear...just caught it...what a start...waiting for the revelations
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
i think after whole 1 month u r updating dis ss 😔
superb part .. 😊
luv it..

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