New One Shot for AgNilovers - ijhaar update on pg2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello Guys i m back with my one more imagination ( but inspired from someone else) for AgNi lovers. offcourse of NAVI AND DIMPLE😊. hope u all like it. and this is quite short one shot.

INTRODUCTION :- This is the story of two individuals which already are in love with each other. by occupation these are doctors which are completing their internship but during the internship they meet first time and during the course of time they fell in love with each other. His name is DR. AGAM MALIK AND her is DR. NIMRIT SODHI.
NIMRIT ka hamesha se sapana tha ki wo docter bane aur yahi sapana pura karane ke liye wo yaha aayi thi LIFE CARE hospital jo shahar ka sabse bada aur respected hospital hai. Nimrit bhale hi ek royal family se belong karati thi par is baat ka use zara sa bhi gurur nahi tha. wo bahot sweet, pyaary baatein karanewaali, khushmijaj ladaki thi.
Dusari or AGAM ka docter banane ka koi irrada nahi tha par usake maa ki ye khwahish thi ki usaka beta bada hokar docter hi bane aur apane maa ki is dream ko pura karane ke liye agam docter bana tha. wo thoda sa reserved type ka, thoda angry young man type tha par usaka dil bahot soft, sweet tha. dusaro ki taklif usase dekhi nahi jaati thi.
jab pahali baar AGAM aur NIMRIT ka aamna saamna hua tha to unaki ekdusare se bilcul bhi nahi banati thi. Nmrit ko lagata tha ki Agam bahot hi khadus aur arrogant type ka hai aur Agam ko lagata tha ki NIMRIT bahot bak bak karnewaali, oversmart ladaki hai. par jaise waqt bitata gaya dono ekdusare ko samjhane lage , jaanane lage, pahachanane lge aur tab unme pahale to dosti hui aur wo kab pyaar me badal gayi ye unhe pata hi nahi chala.
kaisa hai introduction jarur bataye?? umeed hai pasand aayega sabko.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice archu, reminds me of yuvi and naina :) nice beginning! but now its confusing me with my story :(
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Confusion for what arrey tumhari story se alag hai i m sure. Don't worry. And yes yuna maine thoda sa inspiration to liya hai but feel Agni ka hai.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anurna

Confusion for what arrey tumhari story se alag hai i m sure. Don't worry. And yes yuna maine thoda sa inspiration to liya hai but feel Agni ka hai.


cause i try to visualize things when i like a story, so if i try to visualize yours, then i get lost about mine. know what i mean?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: hiri_piri


cause i try to visualize things when i like a story, so if i try to visualize yours, then i get lost about mine. know what i mean?

TO EK KAAM KARATE HAI MAI TUMHARI STORY END HONE KE BAAD UPDATE KAR LUNGI. TUM APANI STORY PAHALE PURI KAR LO.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice Introduction archu...
awww both are doctors... being a doctor by profession i am sure I will love this one... šŸ˜›šŸ˜‰šŸ˜†
do continue...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: cjs369

nice Introduction archu...

awww both are doctors... being a doctor by profession i am sure I will love this one... šŸ˜›šŸ˜‰šŸ˜†
do continue...

THANKS charu. ohh i just hope u will like it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Archu nice intro and interesting concept..

So agni will be doctors this time..😊

will wait for first chapter..

well written as usual..šŸ‘

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good Introduction...šŸ‘šŸ¼
You have chosen different backdrop for your nice story of
Dimple & Navi as AgNi...
Loved your new beginning for Our nice couple ( Dimple & Navi)...
Eagerly awaiting for your update...😊


Edited by akshaaya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: saveeta24

Archu nice intro and interesting concept..


So agni will be doctors this time..😊

will wait for first chapter..

well written as usual..šŸ‘

thank u savee. Glad u like it kyunki tum khud itani achhi writer ho. Kal hi update karungi. So keep waiting.

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