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Posted: 13 years ago
Just read this FF.
Its really nice.
Want to know about geet.
Waiting for next.
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Posted: 13 years ago
MAAN BURTS OUT ON HIS AUNT WHO BOUGHT HIM UP
WHAT DID SHE DO

AND WHAT HAPPENED IN MIAMI THAT ROSHAN IS SHOCKED AT HIS BEHAVIOUR NOW
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 5
nice part...
cont soon dear...

PS - plz update ur title...
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Posted: 13 years ago
read all of it in one go...its freaking awesome!!!!!!! i'm crying right now...keep me posted abt ur updates...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update a lot...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Feeling a little bit down that I am not getting the desired likes and comments but I guess I have to stop brooding about it. One cannot expect too much from everything. When there are hundreds of writers over here, enthralling the readers with their amazing stories, it is kind of hard for a new comer to make a mark. Anyway, I thank to all the 27 members who liked the story and took time to comment. Thank u so much guys. Will reply to all of your comments for sure when I get time :) In a hurry now :) I hope you like the update. :) :) Do like and comment everyone :)




CHAPTER 6
Beginning of the memory lane…
A few months before…
Somewhere in the beaches of Miami…

Into the murkiness of the unclear water filled with dirt...life has its share of severity in many forms. Some may occur emotionally while the others occur in the form of sheer stupidity and spotty behavior. (The update which tell you more about Maan and his behavioral patterns :D)
It was nothing less than a festival in Miami and the whole town was decked up beautifully with lights, chimers, streamers and the place was swarmed with people enjoying. Roshan stumbled out of the crowd, clutching a vodka bottle in his hand and looking around desperately.
'Now where the hell did he go? How am I supposed to look for him in this mess? Damn!' he muttered and scanned the whole area in search of his brother. They were holidaying in Miami for past one week and they were to head back to India the next day. There was tons left to pack and his brother had gone missing all of a sudden.
'Oh, what the crap! I am here, waiting with the most expensive vodka bottle in my hand and bro has gone off somewhere. If he was planning to go somewhere then why the hell didn't he inform me earlier? I would have had some fun myself!' he grumbled, feeling stupid that people were watching him.
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The lights of the stage dimmed. Silence reined the whole atmosphere which was disturbed only by the rumbling and whooshing of sea waves. The crowd waited in anticipation of what next would they see. A young girl was aimlessly ogling at a corner when she spotted something.
'Hey! Look there!' she shouted alerting all the heads to turn around to the corner she was pointing at and everyone could see a blurred outline of a person behind smoke. The smoke was creating a rippling effect and the flickering lights cast colourful glows at it, making it look sexy. The smoke started quivering and the person started walking towards them taking long strides.
'Hawwwt! I could watch him walk forever and ever and ever' muttered the girl as she saw the most majestic and manly walk she had ever seen in her life.
He emerged, with an electric guitar in hand and an attitude to kill. An embodiment of aggression and sexiness, his eyes were the mirror of his heart, it seemed. Anyone would melt in those infinite depths of his chocolate coloured eyes. A sleeveless black jacket on and denims to complement it, he was dressed casually. Sneakers on his feet and an adventure collection watch in his hand, he looked as though he was a college going student.
The same sense of enjoyment surrounded him as soon as he came out. If there was one thing that caught his attention was a young girl staring at him as though he was a delicious chocolate. Well, he was nothing less than that. 'Oooh! This is going to be fun' he thought, as he tossed his guitar away and broke into a song.
The music started and the atmosphere charged up. All began grooving to the beats as he started melting everybody in his voice.
I know you like me, you know I like you
let's get together girl, you know you want to
I know you like me, you know I like you
let's get together girl, you know you want to
Raat din aate jaate…hoti hai sau mulaquatein
Aage badti hai baatein peeche chhod de…
Raaste mein hai thehre, aur bhi kitne chehre
Aaj phir apni aankhein unse jod lee…
Bold was the word to describe the current position of the love sick girl. She was completely bold over this hot man, with a voice that sent shivers across her spine. Those deep chocolate eyes that invited her to go and indulge in them. Infatuation or love? Who cared!
Kho jaayega lamha yeh kho jaayega
Mudke naa phir aayega raho mein usko roklee…
Ho jaayega…hoga jo ho jaayega
You know you're so hot
You're on fire
1..2..3..4… Go
Milgaye jo chora chori Hui masti thodi thodi
Bas pyaar ka naam na lena I hate luv stories!
Milgaye jo chora chori Hui masti thodi thodi
Bas pyaar ka naam na lena I hate luv stories!
He could see the hyperventilation the girl was going through. Well, not just the girl, but everyone present around him. He cast such a spell around that no one could actually escape from him. A perfect illusion to the innocent souls around, people failed to recognize his true self that was hidden beneath the blankets of innocence and warmth. Not that he was cruel, no! He wasn't cruel but he was, most definitely bad. How bad? Only the girls who had got a chance to "see" him could answer.
I know you like me you know I like you
Let's get together girl You know you want to
Koi aas paas ho Samjhe jo dil ki baat ko
Soche na aaj yaar voh Kal ki baatein
Pal do pal ka saath ho Phir na haaton mein haath ho
Bhule naa yaad aayein Phir beeti raatein
Aankho se kehke yeh Sapnaa gaya hai
Subha ko jaage toh Raasta naya hai
I m the man whose got a plan
Need a girl who'll understand
You could be the one for sure
1..2..3..4… Go
The girl forgot her whole world as she crashed to his chest. He held her waist and pulled her closer making her intoxicated with his scent. She was somewhere else…somewhere very far from this world. In her dream world, she had slipped, enjoying this moment with the most gorgeous man, feeling lucky that she had got a chance to spend time with this beauty.
Mil gaye jo chora chori Hui masti thodi thodi
Bas pyaar ka naam na lena I hate luv stories!
Mil gaye jo chora chori Hui masti thodi thodi
Bas pyaar ka naam na lena I hate luv stories!
Huuhh..
Jo bhi karna yaar kar Duniya ka na khayal kar
Kehti hai jo bhi usko kehne dena Waado se jo baandh kar
Rakhna hai apne paas woh Jaane de phir yeh duniya
Rehna dena Marzi se chalti hai Jaise hawaaein
Waise hi hai meri Saari adaayein
I'll be you'rs and you'll be mine
Love is such a waste of time
You could my girl for sure
1..2..3..4..
They danced around as people were staring at them, particularly at the girl, with scorching looks. Well, who wouldn't be J at the girl when she had got such a golden chance to dance around with the hottest man they had seen. From foreigners to Indians, everyone present was mesmerized by his charm and they waited in extreme anticipation of getting a chance themselves to dance with him.
Mil gaye jo chora chori hui masti thodi thodi
Bas pyaar ka naam na lena I hate love stories
Mil gaye jo chora chori hui masti thodi thodi
Bas pyaar ka naam na lena I hate luv stories
I know you like me, you know i like you
Lets get together girl you know you want to
I know you like me, you know i like you
Lets get together girl you know you want to
Raat din aate jaate hoti hai.. sau mulaquatein
Aage badti hai baatein peeche chhod de
Raaste mein hai thehre aur bhi kitne chehre
Aaj phir apni aankhein unse jod lee…kho jaayega
Lamha yeh kho jaayega mudhe naa phir aayega
Raho mein usko roklee
Ho jaayega hoga jo ho jaayega
You know you're so hot
You're on fire
1..2..3..4… Go
Mil gaye jo chora chori hui masti thodi thodi
Bas pyaar ka naam na lena I hate luv stories!
Mil gaye jo chora chori hui masti thodi thodi
Bas pyaar ka naam na lena I hate luv stories!
And the night dissolved as the girl found herself with her dream man again, who was carrying her in his arms with a dreamy expression on his face…
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Slowly fluttering her eyes open, she looked around as her eyes were misted by tears. A splitting head ache was tearing her apart and she couldn't understand why this head ache was showing up all of a sudden. Then she remembered; it must be because of the beer and whisky she had the night before. She slowly got up from the bed and looked around to get a shock of her life…
Her clothes were strewn around carelessly, tangled with some of the men's garments and there was a man sleeping next to her. Looking down, she saw she was completely naked and vulnerable and didn't take her much time to work out what had happened. She covered herself with the quilt and wailed loudly realizing that she had lost her virginity. But as she saw whom she had slept with, her face wore a small smile. He was the same guy who had her on her toes all the time the previous night. She had a deep crush on him, now she realized that she was hopelessly in love with him. She had surrendered herself to him, so, now there was no turning back. Bending over her new found love, she slowly caressed his face and kissed his forehead.
PRECAP:
What the hell are you still doing here?
What?
Oh, now I get it…a posh suite with a sexy man to satisfy, who wouldn't want it! Just get the hell out of my room now…
What do you mean? After all that we shared yesterday, you are telling me to get out! What the hell do you think you are?
Oh well, okay, how much? I will pay? What is the price for one night? Buck up!

Okay, so this was one hell of a dirty update but there are more to come. It will give you a full blown idea of how Maan was like before. Please dont hit me with sandals because I made Maan a bad ass :P :D

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Posted: 13 years ago



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Posted: 13 years ago
loved his entry...

he definitely mesmerized the crowd...

seems like we will get to c the true maan in the next part as suggested in the precap...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update...
waiting to know the next...
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Posted: 13 years ago

hw maan can do like dis...

awesome n beautiful update...

loved it...

thank u very much fr such lovely update n also fr d pm...


continue nxt prt soon plz...


eagerly waiting...

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