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sonu.

@sonu.

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Posted: 13 years ago

A OS on demand of chillar party ufff aish..😆😆

Naksh with duggu go out to eat ice cream.

CAR

akshara driving it and naitik on the side seat with duggu

naitik:akshara ..!!

akshara:hah naitik .?

naitik:(teasing akshara) u knw akshara mujhe appke bina rehne ki addat hogai.may appko utna miss nahi kaarta

akshara:kya ..?? iska matlab abb appko meri zarurat nahi hai..?

naitik:hah akshara.dekhyena abb may appna saara kaam khud kaarle tha hu

akshara:acha theek hai phir may thode dino ka liya maa ka ghar chale jaungi

naitik:hah hah kyu nahi .aaramn say bas duggu ko mera pass chodkar jaayega

akshara:kya..??

naitik:hah akshara may duggu ko bohat miss karunga.aap duggu ko mera pass chodkar chalejaye ga.ishi bahane mujhe aur duggu ko ek dussre ko samaj na ka mauka milega

akshara:(angrly) theek hai .!!

naitik:stop stop..!! dekhye ice cream corner aggaya

akshara:stop the car

naitik:chalo duggu hum icecream lekkar aate hai.

akshara:was going to say sumting but naitik wantedly ignored her n went

naitik:duggu appki mummy ka face dekha kaise chota sa hogaya tha ..

duggu:give a naughty smile

naitik:kya akshara may jaanta nahi aapko konsi icecream chahiya ..

akshara:angrly get down out of car and stand on the either side of the car

naitik:showing akshara icecream start eating thr nly.naitik turn around to pay suddenly he hear a shouttt..!! naitik turn around wht a jerk and find akshara lying on the road

aksharaaa...!!he drop the icecreams thr and with duggu in arm's run for akshara

akshara was sournded with small amount of crowd..

takes akshara in his laps.naitik was shewaring to touch akshara's face bcozz if was cmplitly in blood ..all of a sudden he hugg akshara and shout out aksharaaa loudly ..

duggu cry out for naitik's shout..naitik was blank ..he shout out for help

plzz koi meri madat ki jiya koi ambulance bulaye .koi plzzz meri akshara ko bachali jiya .may nahi jee sakta inka bina .plzz koi toh

stranger:aap fikkar maat kijeya may na ambulance ka liya phone kaardiya

just thn ambulance cum.thr

HOSPITAL

naitik wit duggu in his hand run along with akshara's strecher.seeing akshara's condition she was immidiatly take into ICU

naitik's shirt .hand ,face was in akshara's blood cmplitly.just thn naitik's phone ring out it was from ss

g3:munna kaha ho tum loog aur kitna time laagega.bahu appna phone kyu nahi utha rahe hai

naitik:cryyy out maa,

g3:munna kya hua ..? tu roah kyu raha hai .(listing this everyone in hall stand up and ask g3 kya hua..?/)

naitik:maa woh akshara ..akshara

g3:hah munna kya hua bahu ko..?

naitik:maa akshara ka accident hogaya

g3:bahu ka accident .?phone slips frm her hand

dadaji :take phone and ask kya hua munna ..bol

naitik:dadaji akshara.akshara ka accident hogaya..dadaji please meri akshara ko bacha lijeya may unka bina nahi jee sakta dadaji plzz

dadaji:munna munna shant hoja .konsa hospital may hai tu

naitik:dadaji .dadaji woh city hospital may

dadaji:munna hum sab abhi aaraha hai ..tu himaat rakh lala ka khayal rakh

whole of ms and ss reach hospital.naitik cmplitly in tears ,duggu crying out.naitik was trying to calm him down yet he was nt able to .

everyone dadaji kaha hai bahu .shaurya jaamisa kaha hai akshara naitik point towards ICU

naitik hugg out shuarya n start crying out loudly dadu please dadu meri akshara ko bachalijiya please dadu meri akshara ..(varsha take duggu frm his hand.)

shaurya:hah hah jaimsa kcuh nahi hoga akshara ko

everyone get shocked seeing naitik in blood complitly.

just thn doctor come out

naitik:run to doctor .doctor doctor kya hua kaise hai akshara

doctor:unki situation bohat critical hai .jaab taak woh hosh may nahi aati kuch nahi keh sakte hum

listning this naitik got numb in a second

other were taking to doctor

naitik:suddenly catch out doctor's colar and say aapko meri akshara ko bachana hi hoga ..shuarya and mohit take out naitik out of doctor

naitik again fold his hand infrnt of doctor and say doctor woh meri zindagi hai .please please unha bachale jeya .please doctor.aap paiso ki chinta maat kijiya .bas meri akshara ko bacha lejiya

doctor:keep a caring hand on naitik n say.hum hamare puri koshis kaar rahe hai .hum bhi insaan hai .

hours pass it was getting night .naitik was dying to see akshara..but he was nt allowed to

everyone were like i wll be i wll be ..

naitik:aap sab ghar jaaeya may akshara ka pass rukhtha hu ..aur duggu bhi humare saat rahega

nurse:sorry sir per .itna chota baacha ka hospital rehna acha nahi hoga

varsha:naitik ji aap fikkar maat kijeya ..may duggu saat lejaungi.ghar pa ananya ka saat khel lega ..

naitik:theek hai bhabhi

naitik was trying his best to get into OT per nurses over thr were nt allowing

it was getting nyt..mauka ka fyada uttakar naitik enter's into ICU

just thn doctor enter thr .

doctor :aap yaha ..appko kisine rohka nahi aap ICU may nahi aasakta

naitik:please doctor mujhe meri akshara ka pass rehne de jiya ..may nahi jee sakta inka bin ,please doctor may sirf inka baaju bheta rahunga ..please doctor.

doctor;okay..!!

naitik:catching akshara's hand.akshara yeh kya hogaya akshara aapko

may sirf maazak kaar raha tha ..may nahi jee sakta aapke bin.please akshara aankhe kholiya .please

may aapka naitik appko order deraha hu aankhe kholiya akshara ..akshara

naitik cry out please akshara aankhe kholiya ..dekhya meri halat kaise hogayi hai ..

may ne khaana bhi nahi khaya please aankhe kholiya

akshara chaliya ghar chalenga hamare room may chalenaga uthiya na ..

naitik try try whl nyt and sleep of on chair catchning akshara's hand

MORNING

doctor come on round with nurse

doctor:yeh abhi taak yahi hai

nurse:doctor.yeh inki wife say paaglo ki taraha pyaar kaarte hai ,,shayad abhi aankh laagi inki ..puri raat insa baat kaar rahe tha..doctor aap inki wife ko jaald sa jaald hosh may laadijiya ..yeh sach may inka bina jhee nahi sakta

doctor:hah we r trying out level best

doctor do and other check up .and say she is in very critical postion inha hosh may laana hi hoga .werna kuch bhi hosakta hai .

naitik:shocked..kuch bhi matlab kya doctor ..

doctor:naitik may aapko koi jhuti umeed nahi dena chatha aagar akshara jaald say jaald hosh may nahi aasaki toh hum inha nahi bacha sakte

naitik:cmplitly numb..just lost he was feeling as if he was falling short of his own beats.

doctor:we are trying our level best..aagaye bhagwan ka uppar hai

PRAYER

naitik go near a idol and speak up

may na aapnse aaj taak kuch nahi maanga.ajj pehle aur aakri baar maang raha hu please akshara ko bacha lejiya ..please may unka bina nahi jee skata

aab may aagla neewala akshara ka haat say hi khaunga..may taab taak kuch nahi khaunga jaab taak akshara mujhe khud aapne haat say nahi khelathi.

naitik:Go near akshara.sit beside her catch her hand and say ..akshara abb may aagla neewala aapke haat say hi khaunga ..may jaab kuch nahi khaunga..aab aap soch lejiya aagar aapko aapke naitik ki fikkar hai toh utth jaaeya .

day pass out akshara doctors were checking her all the time,and naitik was loosing all his stamina bcozz he dint have anyting full day ..he was just sitting near akshara by catchng her hand..it was geting nyt..doctor trying out really hard but were nt able to .and naitik was geting weak n weak but ..he was nt able to sense anyting..

doctor:MR naitik ur blood level is really falling down aapko kuch kha lena chahiya

naitik:no doctor may na akshara say promise kiya ki ..may unka haat say hi khaunga.

doctor:per MR naitik

naitik:no doctor ..i wll look over myself bas akshara ko hosh may laadhi jiya aap

it was late nyt naitik adoring akshara and remembering wht she genraly do at this time ,how she cleans bed and sing lorri for duggu ..tears were rolling out.naitik was about to faint .just thn akshara opend her eye's naitik saw akshara opend eyes and fainted on the floor.

akshara:very weak nt even able to get up properly seeing naitik,,just use all her energy and shout out for help

just thn staff come thr and was trying to keep naitik glucose naitik wht some senses nahi mujhe akshara ka pass jaane hai ..may akshara ka haat say hi khaunga .

doctors tried alt per naitik dint allow thm to treat him..helpless doctor got to bring akshara near naitik

akshara:who has no energy..yet when things came upto naitik.akshara was beyond her energy level..

doctor kya hua inha.?

nurse:woh inka blood level kaafi gheer chuka hai

akshara:per kyu..?

nurse;woh inho na kaafi time say kuch nahi khaya .

akshara:kya kaab say .? aur kyu.?

nurse:akshara ,yeh appke pass hi thai..doctor's na insa kaha bhi khaane ka liya per ..yeh kehte rahe .may akshara ka haat say hi khaunga .abhi bhi yeh glucose bhi insert nahi kaarne de raha hai

akshara:got all tears in her eye's just ran to naitik caught his hand .and naitik may aagai hu may yahi hu please.doctors ko appko treat kaarne dijiya..

naitik:got calm down.

naitik was gloucosd and he was very much in senses .and akshara was beside him

akshara:naitik aapna bade woh hai ..aisa haalt may appko meri seva kaarni chahiya yaha dekhya .may aapki seva kaar rahe hu

naksh both had tears in eyes for each othr.akshara titly hugged naitik and naitik hugged her harder and showd his feeling of loosing akshara.

THE END

i hope it came good,n wish u all like it .will look farword for ur valuable coments

Edited by bebo. - 13 years ago

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Adhervika

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Posted: 13 years ago

👏👏
i was...😭
no words at all.really sona bahut acha likha hai..i really loved it...⭐️⭐️

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ammu4u

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Posted: 13 years ago

sonali🤗🤗🤗
i must say ur a very gud writer👏
loved the os to the core😃
naitik ka love for aksh...dono ka pyar...aksh ka hosh main aana...evrytnh just perfect...loved the whole hospital sequencet...well written👍🏼
after reading each line eager to knw ab kya hoga ...😛...this is one of the best emotional n touching os that i ever read ...⭐️⭐️⭐️.👏ur beautifully portryed naiti's emotions👏

thnx 4 the pm

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-Sadiaa-

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Posted: 13 years ago

👏...awsome...

love it...❤️

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agirlhasnoname.

@agirlhasnoname.

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Posted: 13 years ago

omg !! osm wrk shona !! must say kya socha h yaar ...

It was full of emo flow !!

Osm osm osm !!👏 ⭐️ 😃 😳

Edited by upasna_mishti - 13 years ago

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sona_naksh

@sona_naksh

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Posted: 13 years ago

Haay re sonali ...u really made me into tears...awesum os ...luvd it...its just too emotional ...superb...naitik ka luv akshara ke liye awww hw much he luvs his akshara na...
Thnx for d pm...
Do write more...

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nasreen

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Posted: 13 years ago

wow sonali

bahut he emotional tha baba ...😭

kash serial may be asay hotha patha hai meri pari ka accident dekh nahi sakathi...😭 par asay huwa tho naksh ka pyaar aur tadap dekanay ko milayga...😃 😍

anways ur OS was just fab...👏

Thanks for pm...😃

Edited by -Nasreen- - 13 years ago

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..Komal..

@..Komal..

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Posted: 13 years ago

Bebo u r too good at writing emotional parts...once again u made me cry reading ur os.😭 It was very emotional n very nicely written..reflects naksh's deep love for each other.. Thanks aish for ur request for this os..

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Bhootni

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Posted: 13 years ago

bebo awesome os luvd it yaar😭
too gud yaar
i hv no no words

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kumaran

@kumarandils

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Posted: 13 years ago

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sonali awesome os 👏👏

in the hospital scene is so emotional one naitik remember wat aksara do this time is so touching
and when aksara open his eyes naitik sees aksara and then he faint its too awesome one sonali, i cant understood some thing but i understood u r ways , to emotional and tears full os , awesome 👏👏👏

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