Manveer FF : Separate Worlds [Chap 16 - pg 84] - Page 34

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: AKlover-16

hey sorry for the late reply...i read ur FF just now...awesome job sis...continue sooon... :))

no probz ria 😊
thnx...glad u liked it 😳
will update asap 😊
Edited by Anjalika13 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
thnx surya 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Anji update soon .waiting for it
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Jarin04

Anji update soon .waiting for it

ohhh will try yaar...exams gonna start next week...
will try my best 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
will try my best dear 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey everyone...sorry for the short nd late update 😛

Manyata "okk then" she says and hugs him " you, diya and Vicky are the only true friends i ever had .

Uday "Manyata...im sorry "

Manyata " no need to...remember the rule...no sorry and no thank you in friendship "

Uday " yaa i do manyata but i shouldn't..."

Manyata "leave it...lets do something else...wait but what about the coronation ceremony " she asked frightened

Uday " ohh don't worry...its postponed till next year "

Manyata " ohh yaa i remember there were two dates ...that was really weird " she got a bit relaxed then asked him "when is he coming ? "

Uday got a bit serious "he can come anytime manyata...we have to be alert"

Manyata "okkk can i stay in the ground floor room ?"

Uday "yess off course "

Manyata "okk...oye i wanna call my family now..."

Uday " Manyata but what if he comes to know ?"

Manyata " don't worry i'll tell everything only to daadisab . You know she is a master in all these thing "

Uday "yaa...okk but be alert..."

Manyata "yaa..."

Uday goes to his room and manyata follows to take her mobile back...and after taking it she goes to her room ...

Daadisaab is thinking about manyata in her room . She is very scared as she didn't receive any call or information about her . She looks at her mobile which suddenly rings...and looks at the ID...which shows 'unknown number 'She picks it up hoping it to be manyata...

DS "hello "

Person "hello rajmata jii "

DS "aap kon ?"

Person "hummein nahin pehchana ? chalo koi baat nahin...agli baar hi sahi...abhi aap humme yuvraaj keh sakti hain...naam baad main batayenge... hummein aapse manyata ke bare main kuch zaroori baat karni hai..."

DS "what ? about manyata ? what do u want to say ?"

Person " she is in danger...i'll help you if you help me afterwards "

DS "okk i will...now tell me everything"

They talk for some time...

DS " thank you...aapne hummari bohot madad kii...ab hummein rakhna chahiye "

She cuts the call and thinks if the person was really saying the truth...just then the phone rings again and this time...it shows manyatas name so she picks it up quickly...They talk for some time as manyata tells her everything...

As they keep the call...DS looks confused as she dosent know if the person was right or not...

After talking and telling everything to DS manyata goes to the kitchen and makes some maggi for her and uday .


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Edited by Anjalika13 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey dear
atlast u updated
this chapter was short and sweet
now i also want to know the truth
i m really wating for next
keep it up
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Posted: 13 years ago
Update was awesome Anjie bt why so short? Bt waiting for manveer maggi date. update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago



you made us wait for SOO long...
...and then you do a short update...
anjali, you have to please do a long update
c'mon i'm already hungry to read more (well not literally but still)

but anywayz it was a lovely update.
wonder who 'person' is
do update soon
and make sure its longer or else...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jazzthakur

hey dear

atlast u updated
this chapter was short and sweet
now i also want to know the truth
i m really wating for next
keep it up

yep i did
thnxxx 😳
ohhh u'll have to waitt 😉
will try to update soon 😊
thnxxx

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