Manveer FF : Separate Worlds [Chap 16 - pg 84] - Page 38

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: CharmingAngel7

Hey read all the chaps concept is really diff & nice loved it!! loved reading all the chaps enjoyed... manveer in same house alone lookin forward to lotz of manveer scenes😍 & em falling in love😳 also suspense whose behind all this... update soon lookin forward... add me too to the pm list plz😊

glad u loved it 😃...aww glad u like the future updates too 😊 will try my best...yepp dear off course will add u 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetshab

hey anjallika!!

Nice FF
Interesting ...best friends as well as best enemies wow this is gr8..
Cont soon
Add me to ur PM list :)

hey shabii...looks like u again forgot me 😛 😆
thnx dear...glad u like it 😃
will try my best 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
hehe will do tht soon 😛
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Manyata makes some magi for her and uday...

Uday sits near his laptop and goes through some of his files completing his work . He then feels a bit hungry so he goes to the kitchen . He notices manyata making maggi and then goes to help her...

Uday "manyata i'll cut the vegetable and make it...u go and change...Raj just gave them...they are in your wardrobe "

Manyata "okk " she goes and looks at her wardrobe . It was filled with suits , casuals , shorts , tees ...she looks at the wardrobe surprised and then just take a top and shorts , takes a shower , changes and goes down . She reaches the dinning table and sees that uday had already made magi and set it on the table but he was nowhere to be seen . She went to the kitchen but he wasn't there...then she went in his room and saw him talking to someone...

Uday " you saw whom ? but that cant be possible ...no you don't need to we will be safe...yes you keep a watch on him " he cuts the call and then turns to find manyata there .

Uday " manyata u here ?..."

Manyata " actually u weren't there in the dining room and the food was already served so came to find u "

Uday " okk...lets go then " he says hoping that she hadn't heard much of the conversation .

They went to the table and started eating . The room was silent...manyata was worried after hearing the conversation so decided to ask him.

Manyata " uday...is there something wrong ?"

Uday looks at her and sees that she looked a bit scared.

"no manyata . Everything is fine . Why u asking ? "

Manyata " Uday...actually I heard you talking on the phone...so I...I "

Uday "ohhh no there's nothing to worry ...we were just...trapping the person "

Manyata "trapping the person ? Uday only I heard you convo with raj naa...and no one else is in the house...and your study is also in the middle with no windows...then u wanted to trap me ?"

Uday " no...actually...raj thought that he had heard someone..."

Manyata "are you sure uday ?"

Uday "ya "

Manyata "Okk..."...manyata decided to let it go...she knew he was lying but believed him so thought to leave the topic for that time .

As they finished their talks...a sound came from outside...like someone had fallen outside near the window . Manyata looked at the window scared and uday got up from his chair .

Manyata " uday did you hear something ?"

Uday " yes manyata...i'll go look ...you go and stay in my study...and dont come out "

Manyata " but udayy "

Uday " manyata please...promise me you wont come out till i say"

Manyata looks at uday even more scared now .

Uday " manyata... "

Manyata "okk...take care " she goes to the room and shuts the door . She feels scared and tries to calm herself down but tears make their way out from her eyes and she breaks down . She was scared for uday as she didnt want him to get hurt and her heart just knew something wasnt right . She had a kind of feeling that something wasnt right .

Ds again gets a call from the 'yuvraaj'

Ds " hello ? yess ? yes manyata did call me and i know she is all right so you dont need to call me anymore "

Yuvraaj " but DS think once more before cutting the call...i just called to give you an advice.."

DS " i dont need any advice and i trust my granddaughter more than anyone else so no need to call me now "

Yuvraaj " okk but before you keep...i just want to tell you that it would be better if you call your granddaughter tonight "

and he keeps the call saying that...

Manyata cant stay there any longer so she opens the door slowly and comes out " sorry uday ...but i cant stay without you "

She slowly goes to the dining room and finds it empty .

Uday goes near the front door...


Precap - manyata screams in pain "udayyy"


thnx for reading guys . do like and comment if you like it 😊


Chapter 11 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/2991465/manveer-ff-separate-worlds-chap-16-pg-84?pn=55

Edited by Anjalika13 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsum update but tooo short i m waiting 4 next
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice ,awesome and mindblowing please update soon i love your writting
Edited by vampire12345678 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Guys this chapter isn't complete yet 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
do it soon dear...waiting...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: snowdream

do it soon dear...waiting...😊

updated krishna 😊
thnx for waiting 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it. The precap has got me worried though.
Update soon! So much suspense yaar. Lol.

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