Our love against the world...AR ff

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Our love against the world...


PART1


Our love Against the world...

Part-1

(Dont kill me for this one..)

Hey everyone...

I M KRITI... ( KSK )

hope u all know me then...i m a KSGian and a DMG fan...u can call me kritz

Its my first FF ever...

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Ridhima gupta...the only daughter of Shashank gupta..the well known doctor and one of the the richest person of country...Shashank is a over protective father as she is the only child and she is his world...

he keeps her under high security so that he could be relieved from the tention of loosing her

...

well Ridhima Gupta is very innocent and down to earth girl...she is a doctor...at sanjeevni..one of the hospitals of her father in the country...her father is doctor and sole owner of sanjeevni...

Today is her first day in sanjeevni as an intern...she havnt slept last night thinking how would things goes in sanjeevni...she was thinking as everyone know her very well and his fathers over obsessive love for her so as always people would be very attentive and formal around her and no one would talk to her as friend...everyone ..hospital athorites , doctors , staff and other interns would treat her as the daughter of shashank...

She asked shashank..."dad plz promise me one thing...you wont be around me in hospital or wouldnt tell anyone there to take care of me...i want to talk to other interns and doctors and want them to treat me as there frnd and colleagues...i want to be treated as a normal person there...just ridhima..."

shashank's face fell...he asked.."do you think my love for you is boundation..? anyways i can never ever say no to you so i will tell everyone not to care about me and i will treat u as doctor there...happy.?"

ridhima smiled widely.."hum bohot khush hain papa..you are the best in the would"

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MORNING...9 PM.

ridhima came to the locker room and saw a guy standing near her locker his back facing to the door and ridz...she said.."hey i m ridhima"

He turn around and smiled...flashing cute irresitable dimples..hi ridhima..."u must be Ridhima Gupta...hi miss gupta ...i mean mam..its gud to see you"..he said nevoursly

Her face fell ..."i m just ridhima here..new intern..i joined today...u should call me ridhima..you must be an intern too..we shall be working together here"

she brought her hand forward to introduce herself..."hey i m Armaan Malik...new intern ma..a...i mean miss...i mean ridhima"

Soon other doctors came and gathered there..."hey i m Doctor rahul ""i m anjali""i m nikita""i m atul""i m muskaan""i m sapna""i m amit""HI I M RIDHIMA ...I M DOCTOR RIDHIMA"all..."OHH OMGG...MISS. GUPTA YOU ARE HERE"

"call me ridhima guys i m a new intern"...she said irritating by there way of toking but smiled...

everyone smiled and started puting there things in there locker and took there lab coat and other things and went for briefing...

They were walking in the coridor...towards there destinationRidhima was happy to know so many good people here and was hoping to have a very good tym in his carrer...

in her thoughts she suddenly bumped in to armaan and he hold her by waist just to save her from falling...she closed her eyes and hold him tightly...slowly opening her eyes she saw blue deep eyes and smiled as her heart got a warm and wierd feeling...she was never close to any man in her life till she was 21 now...she got lost in his deep blue eyes and after like ages according to her but in real world it was few seconds she got back to earth and stand away from him smiling nervously...

"I M SORRY miss gupta i was..its my fault i just didnt saw you"..said armaan ..his eyes poping out..

"call me ridhima..and its ok i was just thinking something nd didnt saw you"

"hmm..lets go"

both went to the nurse station increasing pace so that they could reach early..before "doctor mehra" there head reach there...

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SHASHANK usually dont come much to sanjeevni as he hv to keep on roaming to his different hospitals and branches in the country..

but...

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as they gathered near nurse station a heavy and strong voice came ..."i would be asigning you all duties today"...

Everyone turned around and there eyes poped out..."aap yahan...par.."...ridhima said..her expressions suddenly changed..

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Done...:p

i know its worst you must have read but...lol...i just was desperate to write something on AR..

Even i would be happy to be critisisedComment

With love

KSK

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Posted: 13 years ago
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seems interesting..

nice one..

do pm me when update...

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My ff is worst ur is good pm me when u update.
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Nice one loved it <3
Can u please pm me nxt time plzzz :)
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guys i m new to IF you can add me in ur budy list so that i can pm you all..

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PART-2


as they gathered near nurse station a heavy and strong voice came ..."i would be asigning you all duties today"...


Everyone turned around and there eyes poped out..."aap yahan...par.."...ridhima said..her expressions suddenly changed..


"Doctors i was here in sanjeevni today for some surgery so i thought to just give the first briefing to new interns myself"...shashank said smiling looking to ridhima..


ridhima shook her head and smiled fakely...


Shashank looked at everyone and moved towards armaan...

"it would be good if you dress up properly doctor.."...he looked into the list od new interns and the forms and said.."doctor malik...kindly close your shirt butoons...its a hospital where you work"

"Ye..yes sir...sorry sir"..armaan said shoftly in a nervous tone..

"doctor ridhima"..he smiled and continued.."path lab"..."doctor rahul general ward with doctor muskaan"
"doctor anjali you will asist doctor mehra in children ward"
"doctor nikita and doctor sapna OPD"
"Doctor amit you would be handling a case with doctor shubhankar"
"doctor armaan...you would asist doctor abhimanyu"
From now doctor keerti mehra and doctor abhimanyu malik would be your reporting heads"

"join you duties soon after you collect you pagers"

evryone collect there pagers and move to locer room

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Cafeteria..lunch tym..:- 1 pm

Everyone cam nd gathered to have there lunch including abhimanyu and shubhankar..

"hey interns...i m abhimanyu malik...and this is shubhankar mehra"

"Hi bro...i know you" armaan winked and gave hi5 to abhimanyu"..."and hello doctor shubhankar its a pleassure to meet you...heard a lot about you" he continued giving a warm smile..."

"o hero abhimanyu sir teri bhai hain..." muskaan asked armaan surprised...
"yes ye naughty doctor mera bhai hai doctor muskaan" said abhimanyu teasing armaan

"OOO hello doctor ridhima , we are glad you joined us" shubhankar said looking abt ridz
"oo..aa..hun hel.hello sir...nice to be here" ridhima said coming out of her deep thoughts..."

EVERYONE started knowing each other better and soon became comfortable with each other...
after finishing lunch then got back to there work








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"maaa...i m back"...ridhima shouted after getting in gupta mansion in excitment

Padma came out of the kitchen and smiled at her daughter...she patted her back and hugged her saying.."badi khush lag rahi hai ridhima...aaj pehla din kaisa raha"
"very gud mom...i meet lots of colleagues there...they are so nice and cooperative..i enjoyed working as a doctor as well...and you know.." she took a pause and continued.."dad himself gave us the breifing" she said in a monotone...

Padma smiled and hugged her...







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"hey mom..." he pecked on naina malik's cheeks and said..."my day was amazing..it was good to work in such a reputated hospital and you know bhai is my head"...armaan said smiling widely to his mother

he took a pause and continuyed.."mom you know doctor shashank's daughter riddhima is also there with us...new intern"

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"What...? riddhima is doctor...i taught her in xaviers in high school...i never thought she would be a doctor...she was just innocent and very calm student..intelegent as well...i must say she has a protective father..." naina exclaimed...
"and she must remember me..ask her she and i use to have a strong bond"...she said with smile...


"mom i m tierd i must change and go to sleep..i had dinner out with frnds...bye mom"...armaan goes upstairs saying this...



she was beautifull and innocent...attractive girl...armaan thought..."no no no no...what r you thinking armaan...doctor shashank ki beti...u want to be killed" he said hiting his own head...
he swiched the lights off and was soon asleep...





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So thats it...
i know its not so gud but i just tried to mix things around us and dmg...it may turn as a desaster cocktail...lol..
anyways do critisize even if you dnt like it


love
KSK






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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sweeet dreamz or love growing...


Part 3




"Armaan...tum...i want to tell you something"

"bolo ridhima...kya kehna hai..."

"Armaan..."..after a pause she continued..."i think i fell in love with you"
she moved closer to him and touched his cheeks softly..."armaan.."...feeling her so close his heart skipped a beat his breath stopped for a second...
he was about to loose control and was about to kiss her...there lips were inch apart...
"Armaaan...tumne meri beti ko hath kaise lagaya...mein tumhein zinda nahin chodunga"...shashank screamed loudly and slapped armaan tightly to make him almost fall on the floor...



He woke up with a jerk...!!...it was 2:30 pm at night and he was sleeping on his bed...
"i was dreaming...god...!!"
he took a deep breath and speak to himself.."lagta hai armaan ek hi din mein tujhe sanjeevni mein bohot workstress ho gya hai...you are cool dude armaan..girls drool over you...dont see dumb things"...


He kept on tossing and turning but wasnt able to sleep...he sat on this bed and turn on the lights and started reading the new case file as he just loved his
proffession and it always helped him to get away from all the tention and restlesness he have...





it was 6 o clock in the morning and ridhima was ready to go for walk just like everyday...
she moved downstairs and wished her mom and dad..."gud morning mamma...gud morning papa"

"gud morning reedz subha subha ready...my daughter looking beautiful" shashank said smiling at ridhima warmly
"dad i m going for jogging...i will walk..." she said in a hurry..

"ruko ridhima tum akele kaise bahar jaogi beta..ruko mein john (his driver) ko bolta hu tum usike sath jaana" he said worring

"papa come on i m 21 now..i m a big girl...hum apna khayal rakh saktey hain.." she said making face

"koi baat nhi now go otherwise you would be angry with me if u would get late coming back nd i know u dnt like being late to hospital" he said pating her back






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riddhima was jogging rear the park and walk past a basketball court...she said there to tie her shoe laces...



"hey amy come onn you can spend atleast an hour with me...not a big deal right.." a girl said to armaan while playing basketball early morning with armaan and his frnds
"dekho soniya , mere paas time nahin hai isiliye mene tumko kaha tha ki you should meet me early morning at the court" armaan said smiling mischieviously

ridhima heard the voice and soon recognised it...she always get atracted to him husky deep voice ...she turned around nd soon her smile faded..

'armaan kiske sath hai' she thought and little hurt appearing in her eyes she kept on staring at him continuously

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armaan leaned and kissed soniya..."look thats it..u must be happy now..." he winked and turned sideways just to see ridhima with tears in her eyes...

she ran back to her car and sat inside crying badly...'ye mujhe kya ho gaya hai..vo ladka...armaan...mein use theek se jaanti bhi nahin for bhi vo ladki...us ladki ko uske sath dekhke mein..."she sobbed...tears rolling down nd cheeks...:|

"mujhe kyu kisike liye...mein...y i m feeling hurt" she exclaimed to herself




"john come back to the car i m done with my jogging" she called john and asked very rudely to come back soon

"sorry madam...chalein?"..he asked

"uuh...hm...haan haan chalo" she replied coming out of her deep thoughts


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thats it
hows it...
not so gud naa...i m trying to improove
mwaahh

KSK

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Part - 4

"NEW BUILDING IMOTIONS..!!"




9 AM ...locker room sanjeevni

armaan entered the locker room just to see ridhima sitting on the bench lost in her own thoughts that she didnt noticed he came in...
"ahem ahem"...he tried to grab the attention and ridhima looked up to see him...her expressions harden and she looked away and went to her locker to make herself busy with things...

"hi ridhima...gud morning ...muh kyu latka hai tumhara" he inquried
she looked at her and said "nothing" in an expressionless tone
he raised his eyebrows with a confused face and mumered.."uh..ok"...


muskaan and rahul enters the locer room shouting...
"oo khotey...tujhe toh mein btati hu...teri vajah se hitler ne mujhe double duty di" muskaan shouted glaring ar rahul...
"tune hi toh us patient ki report dhang se nhi padhi ismein meri galti kya hai...?..." rahul replied in the same tone..


armaan and ridhima came back from there thoughts when they heard them fighting...

"muski kya kar rahi hai ruk jaa naa.." ridhima held her hand to prevent rahul from the kicks and punches..:p
"armaan aaj mein is ladki ko chodunga nahin.." rahul shouted


"doctors and interns you are required to report to the nurse station, doctor shashank wants to meet you all" anouncement was heared by all and everyone started proceeding towards the nurse station ...

everyone assembeled to the nurse station..ridhima was thinking why suddenly her father started taking so much interest in sanjeevni..is it because she is there in sanjeevni and her dad wants to be around her...she though as always her dad is behaving like an overprotective father..she sighed and continued being host in her own thoughts...

"morning doctors...i m here to inform you about something important for you all.." doctor shashank came nd anounced there..

everyone looked at them and then each other as to guess what made dctor shashank to again come to the hospital and talk to them...
well something important of major must be there..thats what everyone thought except ridhima offcourse...she was the one who was already knowing that this is another excuse of her father to adore her daughter or to protect her from god knows what..!!...anyways she looked up to him to listen what he have to say...


"doctors there is a special award for the intern who would perform the best consistently the whole month...we would call it 'InTeRn Of tHe dAy'."
"it would be also because the top best interns would be given many international opportunities which would be benificial for career in this proffession"
doctor shashank explained the whole long process in detail about the work and the basis of points ...even about the extra points which would be awarded for the descipline and the behaviour with senior doctors and also the impression...

all the doctors went to the respecive duties and anjali went to doctor shashank to know more details as she is hardcore proffessional for her work and even imotionless sometimes when it comes to her outer behaviour with people around her...
offcourse except for shone whome she likes..!!

well "doctor armaan"..yes as always our doctor love was one of them...anjali always adore him...his goodlooks...the ultimate pranks which he use to play on champ..(atul) and even other people and staff in the hospital...









"hey armaan what are you doing?...its lunch time i think u r free too hum chaley...have some coffee" anjali said smiling widely with a look to armaan..
"hey angie...yeah i would love to but mujhe ridhima se kuch baat karni hai...vo subha se itti chup chaap hai..i dont know why..we will surely go tommorw ok.." armaan said in a hurry and peeked on her cheek lightly and ran out of the locker room


"Ridhima Gupta...you..argh..!! " angali clenched her teeth...

"anjali tum yahan..vo mein...soch raha tha...coffee..? peene chale" atul pleeded with a shy smile...
"shut up atul..!! do hell with you and your stupid coffee" she glared and went out out the locker room leaving not so happy atul



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so thats it...
i know its slow and nt soo good but my first try be kind to me...



with love
KSK
Edited by bindaassksg - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey. My KSAJ wala id is gone. Its the new 1 ad this1 in ur pm list
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Omg anji is weird kinda poor atul :( anywayz can u plz write a little long please ;)

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