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Virman OS - United...

Hey guys! This is my 2nd time trying to write something and my current SS - partnership forever is still going on, but I really wanted to write this!! It continues from when Maanvi made the decision to go back to Rishikesh after hearing that Virat loves her. Hope you like it!

Without further ado...here is my OS:

Maanvi was sitting on the terrace of the Vadhera House...which she was about to leave as soon as her Jeevika di would be done packing. She was leaving Gigu...chacha...chachi...buaji...Dadaji...vanshika aunty...shlok...and most importantly...virat...her virat whom she was in love with. How would she stay without her partner...her love...her virat?

On the other hand, Virat was depressed to see Maanvi leave...but he had heard her conversation with her Jeevika di. He found out...that the love of his life...loved him too. What could possibly make him happier? But now...he had a mission! Mission: stop maanvi from leaving. He was wondering where Maanvi was...then he realized the terrace. She always loved going there! He quickly went up there.

As soon as virat reached there, he saw maanvi sitting on the bench looking at the stars. He stared at her cute face for quite some time. Then, he thought of a plan...a plan which would make maanvi confess her love for him. As much as he wanted to hug her and say "I'm so glad you love me"...he wasn't gonna let her go so easily. Why didn't she share her feelings before? His plan was to act as if he didn't hear her conversation with her dear Jeevika di and tease her to confess her love. Mission start!

Virat: Partner...
Maanvi: Mujhe tumse baat nahi karne...
She is about to walk away, but Virat holds her hand and says: par mujhe karne hai..please maanvi..mujhe tumse Kuch bohat zaroore baat karne hai...
Maanvi: bolo..kya baat hai?
Virat: Mere shaadi teh hogaye hai (inside his mind, he was laughing so hard...but he had to do this to make her confess)
Maanvi's face was SHOCKED...she yells: kya????? Kab? Kyu? Kaise?
Virat: Tumhe isse itna farak kyu par raha hai?
Maanvi: Kyuke main...Woh..Kyuke..tum mera partner ho aur kisse me mujhe bataya nahi...
Virat: Haan..Woh achanak se shaadi teh hogayi...

Maanvi was so upset...she felt like crying and killing the girl who virat was going to marry.

Virat: Aur maanvi...tumhe pata hai, shaadi next week Hona wali hai..
Maanvi: KYA??? Mere matlap hai...itne jaldi? Saari arrangements hogayi?
Virat: Haan...aur tumhe itna farak kyu par raha hai?
Maanvi: kyuki...Woh...kyuki mujhe beeji..dabbu..chacha..chachi, badi beeji..sab ko batana hai...
Virat: Acha acha...

Maanvi in her mind: kaise main tumhe bataon...ke main tumse kitne pyaar karte hoon...tum srif mera ho...srif mera...
Virat in his mind: yaar..ye to Kuch nahi Bol rahe...main assa kya bolo Jise ye confess karda?

Virat: Maanvi...ek aur baat bataon...mujhe Woh larkee bohat passed hai...bohat ache hai Woh
Maanvi: KYA??? tum aise kaise Bol sakta ho..tum to mujhse pyaar karta ho na...(maanvi blushes)
Virat: Haan...karta tha, par tum to mujhse pyaar nahi kartee..to kya faida?
Maanvi: kya? Tumhe lagta Hain ke main tumse pyaar nahi kartee? Teke..to mere baat achi Tara se Sunna...I LOVE YOU VIRAT! MAIN TUMSE PYAAR KARTI HOON!!!

Virat smirked...he couldn't help himself anymore, so he just laughed.

Maanvi: tum...tum has raha ho?! chep!!!
Virat: kya karo..baat hi Kuch aise hai...main tumhe bavacov bana raha tha..mere koi Shaadi nahi Hona waali...aur mujhe to pata tha ke tum mujhse pyaar kartee ho..main to bas tumhe tease kar raha tha
Maanvi: kya? Tumne..Tumne...Tumne...maanvi chaudhary ko bavacov banaya? Main tumhe chorangee nahi!

Both start running and maanvi chases virat...All of a sudden, maanvi gets dizzy...virat sees her and says: maanvi? Kya hua? Tum theek to ho na?
Maanvi: Haan, Woh... SHE STARTS LAUGHING!!! tumhe kya lakta hai...srif tumhe mazak Karna aata hai?
Virat: maanvi...tum bhi na...aise mazak kabhi nahi Karna...aur abhi Tumne kya Kaha tha...I love...?
Maanvi blushes...her cheeks were bright red.
Maanvi: kya tum bhi??
Virat: bolo na...please...mere liye...
Maanvi: I love you...
Virat: phirse bolo...
Maanvi: I love you...
Virat: phirse bolo...
Maanvi: I love you...
Virat: phirse bolo
Maanvi: I...LOVE...YOU!!!!!! I love you virat!

Maanvi: ab Maine bhi itne baar bolo...to tum bhi bolo!
Virat: to isme kya Bari baat hai...
Virat: I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you! I LOVE YOU MAANVI!!!

Maanvi blushes again...
Virat: Oye hoye..meri sherni sharmatee bhi hai?
Maanvi: virat..tum bhi na.

They both hug each other and then suddenly, maanvi remembers the reason she hid her Love...the thing that might separate her from virat...her cancer.
Maanvi breaks the hug and faces the other direction...

Virat: kya hua maanvi?
Maanvi: nahi...main Tumhare nahi ho sakta...
Virat: liken kyu???
Maanvi: tumhe yaad nahi hai kya? Mujhe..mujhe..ca...can...cancer hai...
Virat: Haan to kya Hua? Nothing is impossible...duniya mein kitna sara insaano ko cancer tha...aur ab Woh Bilcol theek hogaya hai...tum bhi theek ho jao gee...ye mera vaada hai tumse...I Promise...aur jab thak main zinda hoon..tumhe Kuch nahi hoga..Kuch nahi...yaad Hain na..Tumhare bimari ab meri bimari Hain maanvi...Kuch nahi hoga tumhe...
Maanvi: virat...tum kitne acha ho...main sach mein theek ho jaongee naa?
Virat: Haan maanvi..I promise

Maanvi cries...(tears of joy) and hugs virat... I love you virat...I love you...
Virat: I love you too...

They break the hug and virat steps closer to maanvi.
Maanvi: virat... Ye kya kar raha ho? Koi aajaya ga..
Virat: koi nahi aagaya...he comes closer.
Maanvi: virat...koi aajaya ga...
Virat: koi nahi aayaga aur iska bhi solution hai mera paas..he closes the terrace door...teke? Ab to koye nahi aayaga na...
Maanvi: virat...mujhe sharam aa rahee hai...she hides her blushing face and hugs virat.
Virat smiled.

Virat: I love you
Maanvi: I love you too...

They both sealed their love with a kiss. They were now united...as one.

Sooo how was it??? Sorry for any errors. Hope you liked it!!!

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Adenah.NiShal thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks dear!😊glad u like it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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If your writing is sooo good people are bound to like it! :))
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Andreavaz


If your writing is sooo good people are bound to like it! :))


Aww ur so sweet😊God bless u always🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Cute!! I wish we cud hav virman nok jhoks bac in da show too:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: shona_virman

Cute!! I wish we cud hav virman nok jhoks bac in da show too:)


Thanks!!!😊really want Virman nok-jhoks again too😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey!!!! U hav gud writing talent👍🏼 Dont stop writing...By the way amazing story...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: smithapuranikh

Hey!!!! U hav gud writing talent👍🏼 Dont stop writing...By the way amazing story...


Thanks sooo much😊BIG HUG FOR YOU🤗I'm about to start a new Virman FF too...I'll pm u the link..thanks so much again😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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This was great loved it. You are really talented, I could imagine each scene to be the way you have written it. Hats off.
Alishah
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ali_281

This was great loved it. You are really talented, I could imagine each scene to be the way you have written it. Hats off.

Alishah


Thank you sooo much!!😃big hug for you🤗I'll pm u the link to my other writings too😊

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