Yeh dil hai..aryan os

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hiii all sweet ppl here...am new to this forum...bt was a silent member... after today's epi...i cant control myself to write this down... hope u wil like this one... 🤗



this os starts where todays episode ens..



PLZ leave ur cments...



I wil continue if only u want me to..so plz tell me ur views..



with love~

~~~soumi~~~
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Posted: 13 years ago
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'yash ji..ankhe kholye..kuch nhi hoga apko..mein kuch hone nhi dungi'cried arti..

she touches his face lovingly..'aj to mene apko kho hi dia tha..aj pata chala hai ap kya maine rekhne lage hai meri zindagi me...ab mujhe yakin ho gya yasg ji..k pyar karne lagi hu me apse..khud se bhi zyada..diwani ho gyi hu apki,..she cried with a smile..


she caressed his face...'plz wake up'she whisperes..

suddenly she felt some movement in him..her hapins knew no bound..finly he is waking up..
'uthiye na yash ji..dekhiye sab thik h..u r safe..main hun apke pas..'she sd..

yash slwly opens his eyes.everythng seemd blurd..he tried to gather up..bt found a wrm touch on his face..smthng familiar..smthng...he hugs her ti8..

'whr hv u gone?dnt leav me ever plz.'

'main kahin nhi gayi..main to apke pas hi hun..'she smild in d hug..

'um..i lov u..so much arpita'he d in a tranc..

his mere words ws enough to crash her drem wrld..it ws smthng dat bring her back to d harsh reality..'jj.ji me arti..'she stamred...

cont belw
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Posted: 13 years ago
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good start..!!! continue.. n keep updating!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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this brings yash back from his state..he abruptly broke the hug..

'ji woh..actuly main..wo mujhe laga..woh..am realy sory arti ji..'he closed his eyes frustatngly..

'ji its ok..i undrstand..'she managed to say hiding her tears forcefuly..


'ap yaha?kaise?i mean apko pata kaise chala?'he tried to change d topic..

'ji wo actuly apka mobile trace karke...actuly me..i mean ghar me sab boht pareshan ho rhe ha..ghar chalen?'she said..not wanted to show her vulnerabl state..

'ji..nd thans..for saving my life again'he tried to smile at her.

she smiled back weakly..'chaliye'

'what hapnd to me?hw can i do dis?hw can i think her to b arpita?why her touch feel lik..god?dis ws just wrong..she might hv felt bad..i hav to be careful..'he thoght


arti ws lost in her thought..d confesn..she just made to her hrt..does it hav any value?any mening to any1?she knws he belongs to arpita..nd wil alwys b..den how can she lose her heart..wy?god plyaed dis to her?wy her fate is dis?


how ws it?(fingr crosd)shld i cntnue dis?.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi,I'm also a silent reader,so I finally decided 2 come out,ur story is very nyc bt can u write in english or mayb put subtitles,plz
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Posted: 13 years ago
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artine itni musibat zealne ke bada, yashji ne uski umedo par pani dal diya
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Posted: 13 years ago
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love it please continue but please may the dialogue be in english thanks for your post
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I loved it! Please continue this.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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welcome here...nyc update 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Plz continue dear waiting for it.

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